The galaxy doesn't work that way. Those two couldn't get a meeting with a local bank manager. Build a reason or give some authority to one of them. Obviously, the corporation would go to extreme lengths to stop them from reaching the council. OMG! Anyone would go relax, get a bite and some refreshment before going on their way! The plot outline that you give is ok. Now put in some meat.
Well, humbug! I thought that this was going to be acted out, like some of the other SF short films I've seen on YT, not some story narrated by Lurch's cousin. Very disappointing!
Hello everyone my name is Steven Maite from South Africa I like to say thank you very much guy's by resqeu the elien girl that is the right thing do also thanks for the love you have I have a dream about the eliens one day we gonna be family with them we gonna be able to visit the galaxy n have the families there I evin create music about the planets on RUclips Steve M red planet is my song I love them God bless
I’m still at somewhat of a loss, I thought this was a sort of first contact situation. No one has mentioned whether she was surveying for her government or a private company in which case why didn’t the other company that sabotaged her simply make a claim on the system or sent their own surveyors to do the same thing first? Also, the story is pretty much being told from the perspective of a narrator (3rd person?) and those telling are very un-immersive. I have no particular interest in the characters and whether or not they survive. This particular style of narrative is for the story of empires and massive epics, not a couple of people surviving sabotage and the subsequent investigation. It just seems like a lazy way to do things.
I'm just stopping in to give every video that the title starts with "Wounded and Abandoned, Until the..." a thumbs down. How lazy can you be? Come up with a new title would ya?
Part 2,3,4,and 5 please!
The galaxy doesn't work that way. Those two couldn't get a meeting with a local bank manager. Build a reason or give some authority to one of them. Obviously, the corporation would go to extreme lengths to stop them from reaching the council. OMG! Anyone would go relax, get a bite and some refreshment before going on their way! The plot outline that you give is ok. Now put in some meat.
I call this stuff SciFi-porn. Same lack of character depth, same instant gratification same unrealistic expectations and outcome.
very nice story well conceved
Hold a corporation responsible? Talk about sci-fi!!😂😂😂
Except for the usual AI generated repeating of words it was a decent story.
2h ago on another channel: _"Wounded and Abandoned, Until the Human Found Her | HFY Full Story"_
Which channel?
I was hoping he was going to put her through her paces.
So, did he hit that or what?
The cover graphic is not necessarily what she looked like. Her body might not be at all compatible with human biology.
she has scales, pointing to an reptilian origin...perhaps he did. lol
He 100% pulled a Captain Kirk. 😂
The thumbnail never conveys the correct appearance
She has green, scaly, skin - nothing like the thumbnail.
A corpse is a dead body. Corps is pronounced core.
It's AI, good luck.
hope they meet again. How sad
Neat.
Well, humbug!
I thought that this was going to be acted out, like some of the other SF short films I've seen on YT, not some story narrated by Lurch's cousin.
Very disappointing!
need more photos to match what being read.
Wo und wie kann ich die Texte zu den Geschichten nachlesen? (Where and how can I read the texts for the stories?)
😂
Hello everyone my name is Steven Maite from South Africa I like to say thank you very much guy's by resqeu the elien girl that is the right thing do also thanks for the love you have I have a dream about the eliens one day we gonna be family with them we gonna be able to visit the galaxy n have the families there I evin create music about the planets on RUclips Steve M red planet is my song I love them God bless
Nobody in your world eats.
I’m still at somewhat of a loss, I thought this was a sort of first contact situation. No one has mentioned whether she was surveying for her government or a private company in which case why didn’t the other company that sabotaged her simply make a claim on the system or sent their own surveyors to do the same thing first?
Also, the story is pretty much being told from the perspective of a narrator (3rd person?) and those telling are very un-immersive. I have no particular interest in the characters and whether or not they survive. This particular style of narrative is for the story of empires and massive epics, not a couple of people surviving sabotage and the subsequent investigation. It just seems like a lazy way to do things.
Too many convenient events and circumstances for my taste. At best the story is more suitable for young teens.
No sex.....
A.I. grammar is piss poor !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm just stopping in to give every video that the title starts with "Wounded and Abandoned, Until the..." a thumbs down.
How lazy can you be? Come up with a new title would ya?