This was interesting to hear! When Celestia initially spoke that line in the episode, it always left me deeply bothered. One of the worst feelings in the world is shattering the trust shared between you and someone that you look up to.
Wow...I guess they didn't get to Cadance in time in this one...or they got her out of the caves but she was too weak from hunger and thirst. Poor Cadance.
thank you for this Scribbler. and thank you ChronicLurker for writing this story. this completely fixed my issues with the Canterlot Wedding episode. I always hated how the ponies just abandoned Twilight rubbing it off as jealousy, I especially hated Celestia for not trusting her own student. this reading however finally shows Celestia's regrets for her actions and makes her more pony than goddess well as she was seen as before this episode. The only problem I have with is Cadence being dead. I'm not sure about it but I think that Choice was made because you didn't like the character or the ending. or maybe it was to reflect on your own loss of your beloved pet (I also am sorry for your loss). I personally didn't have a problem with Candence or the ending, my only complates were on how Twilight's friends just acted toward her, but other than this was good story
The "what if" fallout of this would be interesting, the crystal empire even if still saved would need a ruler, if not Luna then Twilight when she ascends IF she still does, and even then if she does and is tasked with running the empire what of her Freinds would they move there to to stay with her?
Chris Scott From what I was able to gather is that Cadence and Twilight weren’t able to get out of the caverns themselves, eventually succumbing to exhaustion. Cadence had it the worst because she had been down there for a much longer time. I only think this because the story referenced Luna’s quick thinking in regards to finding someone or something.
@@Alpha121198 If Cadence had been in those caves for days, she'd probably die from thirst, hunger or even exhaustion. I know alicorns are immortal, but I don't think even they can survive these situations.
They trusted someone they knew for a day, over someone they knew for (presumably) a year. And after all was said and done, no one came to her and apologized. It still baffles me to this day how she found it within herself to forgive them.
Oof. Even now people take issue with how canterlot wedding part 1 ended. I can't blame those fans though. I heard that season 2 was to showcase Twilight's flaws, but judging by how the bronies reacted to the canon part 1 ending it was a major misstep.
If this au were to continue, I think Twilight would have major trust issues with her friends but not as much for Celestia, but would probably try to study under Luna. Shining Armor would most likely quit the guards. The Crystal Empire events would play out similarly with Celestia asking Shining and Twilight to go. I would Have Shining go to prevent another Tragedy like the wedding. Luna would most likely go to help keep the shield up with Shining. The entire time, there would probably be the time for Twilight and her friends to regain each other's trust and beat Sombra in the same way with probaly Shining throwing Luna at the crystal heart and not Cadence. After that, it would be hard to say
Honestly this is a smart concept. Time would tell whether twilight wants to forgive em too. I also really wanted the mane six AND celestia to fully apologize to her but we couldn't get that cuz it's a kids show..
I bet if this gets a sequel Cadence will appear as a ghost comforting Twilight and telling her what happened was not her fault and no matter what happens Cadence will tell Twilight she will always love her
One idea I have for this is after Twi hears that Cadence is dead, she cries her HEART ❤️ out and almost considers ending it all....but then she realizes there is still something she can do. She can give up her magic to Cadence so that she’ll live again and Twi will have done something selfless in the end for her foal sitter to live with her magic as well as her own. “Cadence? I....I’m gonna give you something as a gift 🎁 from me....i-it’s my magic....I know that it will...kill me.........but that’s okay.....I want you to live, I cannot bear the shame and devastation that has been brought upon us all here today.....this will make everything better I promise, tell everypony I’m sorry”.
I’ll confess that the episodes left such a bad taste in my mouth that I really began to dislike the show. And the same issues I had with Canterlot Wedding continue throughout the series. So, yeah, this two-parter kinda ruined the series for me. I’d been on the record and giving end of a similar situation, and people that will drop you like that aren’t worth keeping around.
My Little Pony: Canterlot Wedding - Fanfic Chapter 1: Twilight’s Despair The night was heavy with sorrow as Twilight Sparkle fled Canterlot, tears streaming down her face. Shining Armor had cast her out during the wedding rehearsal after she accused Cadence-who was actually the changeling queen Chrysalis in disguise-of being evil. Heartbroken and feeling utterly alone, Twilight disappeared into the night, her friends and family’s betrayal weighing heavily on her. Chapter 2: The Aftermath The next day, the changelings were vanquished, thanks to the real Cadence and Shining Armor. But the victory was hollow. Twilight was missing, and Cadence refused to marry Shining Armor, angered by his readiness to put her above his sister. Everypony was furious with Shining Armor and the Mane 5 for abandoning Twilight when she needed them most, including his parents, who were deeply disappointed in him. Chapter 3: Shining Armor’s Resolve Determined to make things right, Shining Armor decided to leave Canterlot and find Twilight, vowing not to return until she was safe. The Royal Judge Minister, a sly and power-hungry pony, saw an opportunity. He sent two of his large but dimwitted henchmen to follow Shining Armor, ensuring he failed in his quest. That night, Cadence wandered the halls of the palace, hoping Shining Armor would find Twilight and bring her back. She encountered the Minister dining alone. Inviting her to join him, he confessed his desire to marry her and become king. Cadence, loyal to Shining Armor, refused. Enraged, the Minister used a hypnotic spell to force Cadence to marry him. Chapter 4: The Search Begins The following day, Shining Armor ran into Twilight’s friends, who were also searching for her. They were soon captured by the Minister’s bumbling guards. Meanwhile, Celestia, unaware of Cadence’s hypnosis, asked if she truly wanted to marry the Minister. Under the spell, Cadence agreed to marry him immediately. Chapter 5: A Sister’s Return As Shining Armor and the Mane 5 languished in their cell, a familiar figure appeared to rescue them: Twilight Sparkle. Reunited, they embraced, expressing deep apologies and explaining the Minister’s evil plan. One of the idiotic guards, feeling remorse, revealed the Minister’s scheme. Twilight, Shining Armor, and their friends rushed back to Canterlot to stop the wedding. Chapter 6: Showdown at the Wedding Celestia was about to pronounce Cadence and the Minister husband and wife when Shining Armor, Twilight, and the others burst into the hall. Shining Armor exposed the Minister’s treachery, revealing his plot to marry Cadence only to become king. The Minister demanded proof, but his two henchmen arrived late and inadvertently confessed everything in front of everypony. A fierce battle erupted between Shining Armor and the Minister. Despite being nearly defeated, Shining Armor’s anger flared when the Minister threatened Twilight. With a surge of strength, he pushed the Minister off the platform, sending him into the water below, where royal guards quickly surrounded and arrested him and his henchmen. Chapter 7: Harmony Restored With the Minister defeated and Twilight safe, Canterlot rejoiced. Everypony apologized to Twilight for not believing her. Shining Armor and Cadence, their love stronger than ever, were finally married in a heartfelt ceremony with Twilight proudly standing as the best mare. Harmony was restored to Canterlot. Friendship and family bonds were renewed, ensuring a brighter and more united future for all.
I have canterlot wedding story idea after the changlings are away twilight is mad at everypony for abandon her she run away and cry cadence found out about everything why twilight so upset and will not marry shining armor and look for twilight everypony worried that twilight will never forgive for what they done meanwhile away from canterlot cadence found twilight near a river and twilight fell in the river cadence fly fast as she can to save twilight but the river too fast and pull twilight away from cadence twilight trying to keep her head up the mane 5 came to save twilight and they better hurry because twilight is heading to a waterfall then shining armor dive in and save his sister he got hot her twilight hold shining on his shoulder he caught a rope from applejack to pull out the river for safety everypony glad twilights okay and they are truly sorry for what they done to her but shining mostly sorry for how he treated her cadence thought what shining armor did was very brave to save his sister back at the canterlot celestia ran and hug twilight for truly how sorry she is and thought to herself she never forgive herself for losing her faithful student twilight forgive everypony and wedding continues
I don't like the episode canterlot wedding I don't anypony treat twilight mean they never say they were sorry except apple jack the only pony that apologize to twilight
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When it said In Memory Of Suki Sleep Tight Baby Girl it almost made me sob. I am sorry for your loss scribbler.
1987 Derpy tem que
This was interesting to hear!
When Celestia initially spoke that line in the episode, it always left me deeply bothered. One of the worst feelings in the world is shattering the trust shared between you and someone that you look up to.
Agree 🥺
Wow...I guess they didn't get to Cadance in time in this one...or they got her out of the caves but she was too weak from hunger and thirst. Poor Cadance.
She died in that cave
a well written story about a sad fate , which thankfully never happened in the show , but its always nice to listen to such readings . very well done
You know exactly how to hit someone in the feels spot.
Trixie Is Best they do
I HATE U TRIXIE
In the end it seems that Celestia was the one that had a lot to think about, not Twilight.
R.I.P.
Princess cadence. 😭😭😭
* plays TAPS in my world war 2 navy sailor uniform *
Rob Scott 🇺🇸🇺🇸🇺🇸🇺🇸 she be laid in Washington DC at Arlington national cemetery
So does the "M" in Gina M stand for motherly? Cause her Celestia *always* gives off a air of motherly kindness.
Molestia
thank you for this Scribbler. and thank you ChronicLurker for writing this story. this completely fixed my issues with the Canterlot Wedding episode. I always hated how the ponies just abandoned Twilight rubbing it off as jealousy, I especially hated Celestia for not trusting her own student. this reading however finally shows Celestia's regrets for her actions and makes her more pony than goddess well as she was seen as before this episode. The only problem I have with is Cadence being dead. I'm not sure about it but I think that Choice was made because you didn't like the character or the ending. or maybe it was to reflect on your own loss of your beloved pet (I also am sorry for your loss). I personally didn't have a problem with Candence or the ending, my only complates were on how Twilight's friends just acted toward her, but other than this was good story
The "what if" fallout of this would be interesting, the crystal empire even if still saved would need a ruler, if not Luna then Twilight when she ascends IF she still does, and even then if she does and is tasked with running the empire what of her Freinds would they move there to to stay with her?
Probably shining armor would take over
This is so sad I can't think of Twi in the hospital.why didn't cadence make is she the one who saved Twi and the others
Chris Scott
From what I was able to gather is that Cadence and Twilight weren’t able to get out of the caverns themselves, eventually succumbing to exhaustion. Cadence had it the worst because she had been down there for a much longer time.
I only think this because the story referenced Luna’s quick thinking in regards to finding someone or something.
Chris Scott tttydyb
@@Alpha121198 If Cadence had been in those caves for days, she'd probably die from thirst, hunger or even exhaustion. I know alicorns are immortal, but I don't think even they can survive these situations.
Thankfully, it didn't happen in the actual show. It's simply a depressing but creative story taking place in an alternate universe. :)
This could alternately lead to the grimdark fanfic Twilight's Dollhouse.
Blueheart the furry possibly
As much as I love Celestia I love her being wrong and wallowing in it more. Especially if she's the bad guy.
If I were in Twilight’s shoes, I’d have some major trust issues after all that.
They trusted someone they knew for a day, over someone they knew for (presumably) a year. And after all was said and done, no one came to her and apologized. It still baffles me to this day how she found it within herself to forgive them.
@@kingcamelot1395 I know right, I would’ve been fuming.
Honestly, that’s be a deal breaker for me. I wouldn’t be able to trust any of them again, let alone would want to be friends with them.
Plus, I’d never trust Celestia again as she’s proven herself to be incompetent and willing to overlook a potential threat to put on a wedding.
Oof. Even now people take issue with how canterlot wedding part 1 ended.
I can't blame those fans though. I heard that season 2 was to showcase Twilight's flaws, but judging by how the bronies reacted to the canon part 1 ending it was a major misstep.
R.I.P welp, off to the regeneration station. They shall be back soon people. Just need the bodies and 24 days. Lol
In the end, it was Celestia who had a lot to think about...
I am sorry for your loss Scribbler. I know how that feels people and animals alike.
when I saw this pop up in my feed I was confused why the title felt familiar. then I realized I'd read this story 3 years ago.😄
I was playing super smash bros ultimate and when I heard *cadence didn't make it* I literally stopped playing, my eyes went wide and my jaw dropped
I’m sorry for your loss suki was a good dog and he’s happy now I hope you see that she isn’t really gone as long as your remember him❤️
oh gosh the details are DA BEST
Oh my God. That wham line at the end... I didn't expect that.
scribbler that was well read and sad and i loved it
Glad I woke up for this.
Octavia Hutchens k X'( 😢😢😢😭😭😭😭😭
Not Fair !!! Cadence & Twilight are alicorns !!! Aren't they inmortal ???????????
Cadence died of hunger and thirst and twilight wasent an alicorn in the wedding episode
Scribbler had a pet die? That's sad! I cried my eyes out for two days when my cat Hershey died! Much love from Amarillo TX!
There you go again," Playing with my Heart" Scribbler. :)
and isn't today mothers day?
If this au were to continue, I think Twilight would have major trust issues with her friends but not as much for Celestia, but would probably try to study under Luna. Shining Armor would most likely quit the guards. The Crystal Empire events would play out similarly with Celestia asking Shining and Twilight to go. I would Have Shining go to prevent another Tragedy like the wedding. Luna would most likely go to help keep the shield up with Shining. The entire time, there would probably be the time for Twilight and her friends to regain each other's trust and beat Sombra in the same way with probaly Shining throwing Luna at the crystal heart and not Cadence. After that, it would be hard to say
Honestly this is a smart concept. Time would tell whether twilight wants to forgive em too. I also really wanted the mane six AND celestia to fully apologize to her but we couldn't get that cuz it's a kids show..
NOOO CADANCE SHE TRIED EVERYTHING BUT DIED😢
Princess Celestia has more then a lot to think about
cadence is DEAD cadence is one of my fav ponies
Tiffany Murray R.I.P.
Tiffany Murray ........ *howls in pain for cadence's death*
NOOOOOOOOOO CANDANCE
I bet if this gets a sequel Cadence will appear as a ghost comforting Twilight and telling her what happened was not her fault and no matter what happens Cadence will tell Twilight she will always love her
Katelyn Bodiford Yeah...and 11,000 years later she comes back as Jaken💖Universe, who makes everything like it used to be.
Still Waiting On A Comic Called Pony Tails
Another Great Video Though
Shadow Angel Gaming wa!
Nice, Celestia knows she was a jerk
stupid sun but
That really hit the feels...
Poor shining imagine what he must feel about cadie being dead
shit.......this is truly sad
One idea I have for this is after Twi hears that Cadence is dead, she cries her HEART ❤️ out and almost considers ending it all....but then she realizes there is still something she can do. She can give up her magic to Cadence so that she’ll live again and Twi will have done something selfless in the end for her foal sitter to live with her magic as well as her own. “Cadence? I....I’m gonna give you something as a gift 🎁 from me....i-it’s my magic....I know that it will...kill me.........but that’s okay.....I want you to live, I cannot bear the shame and devastation that has been brought upon us all here today.....this will make everything better I promise, tell everypony I’m sorry”.
I cried..😢😢😢😢😭😭😭😭
God that last part from Celestia hurts.
I’ll confess that the episodes left such a bad taste in my mouth that I really began to dislike the show. And the same issues I had with Canterlot Wedding continue throughout the series. So, yeah, this two-parter kinda ruined the series for me.
I’d been on the record and giving end of a similar situation, and people that will drop you like that aren’t worth keeping around.
i am hear while at work
Well that was... heavy
The1Ryu IT SAYS YOU COMMENTED 6 DAYS AGO WTF!?!?!?!!???
Patrons get everything at least a week early.
+Scribbler Productions jesus christ...
i call it hax lol
You have a lot to think about celestia
In my tears I ask what happened in this alternate reality and where Cadinc died (sorry for my bad spelling of names)
I NEED ANSWERS!!!
Peter G 6
Andrea Fairchild 6? What does that mean???
Rest In Peace Cadence :'(
Maximus W At least Twilight Sparkle didn't die because she's my favorite
Katelyn Bodiford true
My Little Pony: Canterlot Wedding - Fanfic
Chapter 1: Twilight’s Despair
The night was heavy with sorrow as Twilight Sparkle fled Canterlot, tears streaming down her face. Shining Armor had cast her out during the wedding rehearsal after she accused Cadence-who was actually the changeling queen Chrysalis in disguise-of being evil. Heartbroken and feeling utterly alone, Twilight disappeared into the night, her friends and family’s betrayal weighing heavily on her.
Chapter 2: The Aftermath
The next day, the changelings were vanquished, thanks to the real Cadence and Shining Armor. But the victory was hollow. Twilight was missing, and Cadence refused to marry Shining Armor, angered by his readiness to put her above his sister. Everypony was furious with Shining Armor and the Mane 5 for abandoning Twilight when she needed them most, including his parents, who were deeply disappointed in him.
Chapter 3: Shining Armor’s Resolve
Determined to make things right, Shining Armor decided to leave Canterlot and find Twilight, vowing not to return until she was safe. The Royal Judge Minister, a sly and power-hungry pony, saw an opportunity. He sent two of his large but dimwitted henchmen to follow Shining Armor, ensuring he failed in his quest.
That night, Cadence wandered the halls of the palace, hoping Shining Armor would find Twilight and bring her back. She encountered the Minister dining alone. Inviting her to join him, he confessed his desire to marry her and become king. Cadence, loyal to Shining Armor, refused. Enraged, the Minister used a hypnotic spell to force Cadence to marry him.
Chapter 4: The Search Begins
The following day, Shining Armor ran into Twilight’s friends, who were also searching for her. They were soon captured by the Minister’s bumbling guards. Meanwhile, Celestia, unaware of Cadence’s hypnosis, asked if she truly wanted to marry the Minister. Under the spell, Cadence agreed to marry him immediately.
Chapter 5: A Sister’s Return
As Shining Armor and the Mane 5 languished in their cell, a familiar figure appeared to rescue them: Twilight Sparkle. Reunited, they embraced, expressing deep apologies and explaining the Minister’s evil plan. One of the idiotic guards, feeling remorse, revealed the Minister’s scheme. Twilight, Shining Armor, and their friends rushed back to Canterlot to stop the wedding.
Chapter 6: Showdown at the Wedding
Celestia was about to pronounce Cadence and the Minister husband and wife when Shining Armor, Twilight, and the others burst into the hall. Shining Armor exposed the Minister’s treachery, revealing his plot to marry Cadence only to become king. The Minister demanded proof, but his two henchmen arrived late and inadvertently confessed everything in front of everypony.
A fierce battle erupted between Shining Armor and the Minister. Despite being nearly defeated, Shining Armor’s anger flared when the Minister threatened Twilight. With a surge of strength, he pushed the Minister off the platform, sending him into the water below, where royal guards quickly surrounded and arrested him and his henchmen.
Chapter 7: Harmony Restored
With the Minister defeated and Twilight safe, Canterlot rejoiced. Everypony apologized to Twilight for not believing her. Shining Armor and Cadence, their love stronger than ever, were finally married in a heartfelt ceremony with Twilight proudly standing as the best mare.
Harmony was restored to Canterlot. Friendship and family bonds were renewed, ensuring a brighter and more united future for all.
that's a tragedy endding.
I love all of your videos :3
Please do a reading of hands.
Right in the feels
I'm crying from inside
GOD NO my tearducts are so dry right now
Darn onions, that was very good and sad😓😟
I have canterlot wedding story idea after the changlings are away twilight is mad at everypony for abandon her she run away and cry cadence found out about everything why twilight so upset and will not marry shining armor and look for twilight everypony worried that twilight will never forgive for what they done meanwhile away from canterlot cadence found twilight near a river and twilight fell in the river cadence fly fast as she can to save twilight but the river too fast and pull twilight away from cadence twilight trying to keep her head up the mane 5 came to save twilight and they better hurry because twilight is heading to a waterfall then shining armor dive in and save his sister he got hot her twilight hold shining on his shoulder he caught a rope from applejack to pull out the river for safety everypony glad twilights okay and they are truly sorry for what they done to her but shining mostly sorry for how he treated her cadence thought what shining armor did was very brave to save his sister back at the canterlot celestia ran and hug twilight for truly how sorry she is and thought to herself she never forgive herself for losing her faithful student twilight forgive everypony and wedding continues
Henry Medina Great story idea i’m sure scribbler will make a story about that and it will be interesting!!
I love these kind of stories!!
AWSOME
I nearly fell off the treadmill. Nuuuuuu Cadance!
Not everything can ending with a happy ending
Rip twilight 😔
u had 2 make me cry!! didn't u!?!?
I came soon as I heard poor twilight
Early squad were u at?!?
Melissa Ward here
Melissa Ward i do believe I am considered early, am I not?
Tsukiko Akasuna yeah
I subscribe to the “At least I got here before the heat death of the universe” squad.
Rip twilight
Ooh, that's a good one.
Super depressing, Scribbler. This is probably your saddest one yet.
Truly sad.
I subscribe
You let Twilight LIve but NOT CADENCE!?!?
;-; NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
So you're rather have Twi dead?
@@jakeb526 royalty or a common unicorn?
@@Johia_Mapping_2 common unicorn
Twilight is awake I Rush to twilight side
So beautiful
Uhh. I'm lost what's the name of the first one?
This fanfic makes me cry i never watch sad fanfics :(
Read it. I cried on the inside
ok seriously went did she get a coma and fainted? and why the princess of the sun is say sorry ? ¡ |
so sad
What heppend to twilight
I smacked her over the head with an iron bar.
Me gusto mucho y el momento muy triste de las dos como su ultimo momento juntas
I'm so sorry for your loss
Qual sera a doenca que atacou a Princesa Twilight.
Coma...
What's AU stand for
Alternate Universe. It's a slightly different version of events. In this universe,Cadence died instead of being found and getting married.
I like it
Pobre twilight espero que melhore
OHHHH ME EARLY
but i dont get it
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Is cadance dead
I don't like the episode canterlot wedding I don't anypony treat twilight mean they never say they were sorry except apple jack the only pony that apologize to twilight
Only Applejack? I thought Fluttershy would have done the same thing since she feels sympathy for others
good fic
That's so sad!!!
If only this was relabel to i though I thought i let you know
I love it pls make more sad mlp pls pls
Whoa.... :'(
rip cadance D:
I gess my Little pony is both anime and cartoon oh jezz
I love celestia and twilight
MY HEART!
NOT THE PINK ONE CHRYSALIS.
Eh. I don't care much for Cadence.
AHAHAHHA
This is so sad why
this is so sad
What dose au mean?
Alternate universe