How to write an Essay.

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  • Опубликовано: 20 окт 2024

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  • @jayfleming2209
    @jayfleming2209 7 месяцев назад +20

    Someone plz give this guy his flowers, he deserves it shame,so grateful

  • @NqobileNgcobo-i3v
    @NqobileNgcobo-i3v 11 месяцев назад +17

    -Thank you so much sir tomorrow I am writing my final paper 1 grade 12 you are a life saver 😊

  • @le_vron5714
    @le_vron5714 11 месяцев назад +12

    im really happy i Found your channel, I used to score around 120/150, but after i found your channel i literally scored 142/150 in my prelims for both papers ( i was never really good in answering SB questions) 😭, tomorrow im definitely fighting for my 100%, you made me believe that im capable of scoring 100%, thank you for that🙏

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  11 месяцев назад +1

      It’s yours for the taking. Thank you for believing!!! You are amazing and deserve all great things coming your way 😭🙌🏾✨

  • @anamanhisa4624
    @anamanhisa4624 28 дней назад +2

    You the best sir❤

  • @thobeshabalala5874
    @thobeshabalala5874 Год назад +4

    Thank you ,you are a life saver bro i’m tomorrow and you helped me

  • @christymaya948
    @christymaya948 11 месяцев назад +6

    Today was our last ever history paper👐and I think I just bagged my second distinction
    And honestly it's thanks to your help
    I'm really grateful thank you ☺

  • @exotic_677
    @exotic_677 11 месяцев назад +1

    Great tips 🎉‼️

  • @nkazimuloncube3134
    @nkazimuloncube3134 5 месяцев назад +5

    Wow sir you really helped me because tomorrow I am writing a test

  • @tshegoemma6592
    @tshegoemma6592 7 месяцев назад +19

    Sir am struggling with essay
    I wrote this..
    Essay Introduction: Explain to what extent various role players were successful in using Black power Philosophy to end discrimination against African Americans in 1960
    And I wrote.
    To a greater extent that the various role players were successful in using Black power Philosophy to end discrimination against African Americans in the United States of America, because they believed that the use of power was justified.The purpose of the essay will give more further information about the achieveness independence and revolution against oppression

  • @DominicBorbordy
    @DominicBorbordy 3 месяца назад +1

    Thank you very much sir, keep it up, you are the best I have learned now how to write an essay ✍👏

  • @abigailditle
    @abigailditle 8 месяцев назад +15

    sir come back please we still need you 😢😭

  • @SebenzileKhumalo-eu3dd
    @SebenzileKhumalo-eu3dd 11 месяцев назад +1

    Thank u sir tomorrow I am writing❤❤

  • @Neo_Pontso02
    @Neo_Pontso02 Год назад +9

    Thanks Meneer tomorrow we are writing paper 1 as Grade 12s. I think you forgot to remind us about Background information after the Introduction. Overall your job is impressive 👏👏

    • @JessicaRiba-qz1rm
      @JessicaRiba-qz1rm 4 месяца назад

      Exactly, he just forgot about the background information ❤

  • @AmahleKhumalo-p1e
    @AmahleKhumalo-p1e 7 месяцев назад +2

    May you please do more videos like this 😭🙏🏾

  • @sinenhlanhlatgmqadi2573
    @sinenhlanhlatgmqadi2573 7 месяцев назад +2

    Thank you very much sir😢

  • @coolergames7915
    @coolergames7915 8 месяцев назад +2

    Trust me sir, this is the best tutorial I've ever understood, I'm looking forward on walking my 2024 journey with you, I'll be back with another comment on how I managed to pass my term 1 hopefully I will deliver and prove that your tutorials really do WORK ❤️🔥👌😊

  • @Toobrazy5975
    @Toobrazy5975 11 месяцев назад +6

    Pray for us writing History tomorrow

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  11 месяцев назад +1

      I’m stressed just as much as you are 😅. But I believe you’ll do great 🤸🏽✨

    • @nomondezenande1404
      @nomondezenande1404 4 месяца назад

      I'm really struggling with history 😢

  • @TshepoTshegofatso-y3r
    @TshepoTshegofatso-y3r Год назад +4

    Thanks for the advice plus am writing paper 1 on Wednesday

  • @mveledzotshililo2921
    @mveledzotshililo2921 11 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you bro✔️

  • @godfreymsomi7673
    @godfreymsomi7673 6 месяцев назад +2

    Hi bru,
    Please may you post a video explaining about how to write the extended writing. Thank you

  • @DzunaniBrightness
    @DzunaniBrightness 10 дней назад +1

    Can you help us with'comment to the amplied...' an reliable question

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  4 дня назад

      Thanks for asking the question. The word “implied or imply or implication” simply means “what are they trying to say” OR “what is the meaning of…”
      For Reliability I’m currently working on a new video. I will post soon. Please subscribe to get notification when it’s ready.💫

  • @ndabamajila8166
    @ndabamajila8166 8 дней назад +1

    I think you forgot a background information

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  4 дня назад

      Hey. Great observation. The Background information paragraph can be very helpful but unfortunately does not count for marks. It helps you tell your story better. I encourage you to write it but do not write more than ONE PARAGRAPH. Otherwise it’s a waste of time in the exam…
      Thanks for bringing this up💫

  • @lolasango9406
    @lolasango9406 3 месяца назад

    Not sure if you a CAPS or IEB teacher but how to effectively write and extented writing for ieb students😭

  • @DimphoKgoadi
    @DimphoKgoadi 2 месяца назад

    We really need you help use to improve our performance ❤

  • @LeePeters-xb3vi
    @LeePeters-xb3vi 5 месяцев назад

    hey sir ,can you please do a video based on the Vietnam essay!

  • @TshegofatsoMohlamonyane-bf1ex
    @TshegofatsoMohlamonyane-bf1ex 3 месяца назад

    Sir when providing evidence, are we allowed to quote what was in the content? As in the content of t
    Road to democracy?

  • @nkosazanamaqungo8461
    @nkosazanamaqungo8461 Год назад

    Thanks a lot sir can you perhaps illustrate with one essay question ,when you have time I am writing in November

  • @celiwekhoali3830
    @celiwekhoali3830 4 месяца назад

    Thank you❤

  • @molotobetty60
    @molotobetty60 11 месяцев назад +2

    Hi meneer... I wanted to ask u this question..
    We all know that history has only 3 questions they ask when writting an essay. E. G to what extent, Do u agree or disagree and critically discuss....
    My question is that how do u take a stance when writting ur introduction when they ask that u critically discuss maybe about how the BCM empowered school students to challenge the apartheid regime.....can you plz answer me here on the comment section itx very very urgent... Writting next week❤️

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  11 месяцев назад +5

      Hi. It’s really not easy to put this on text but I’ll do my best.
      A critically discuss question requires you to answer by discussing all facts of the topic. Try your best not to take a side. However you need to have one major point in your discussion. This is mostly your own opinion or a general view of the topic.
      Like in BCM Your major point can be “That Black consciousness was a powerful philosophy that changed the resistance to apartheid” or in the case of Vietnam if they ask you to critically discuss your main point could be “The Vietnamese were small group that defeated a mighty military force by outsmarting them”
      It all depends on the question. Remember an essay is basically a long answer to a question. When they give you the question try answering it in your own words and in a short sentence. That could be your stance

    • @molotobetty60
      @molotobetty60 11 месяцев назад +1

      @@theplatformSA tnx sir did as u said... Really helped ❤️

  • @XiluvaNduli
    @XiluvaNduli 5 месяцев назад

    Sir when are you going to get into the content

  • @malwandemaduma9817
    @malwandemaduma9817 11 месяцев назад +2

    Hey sir , in a critical discuss essay do you take a stance?

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  11 месяцев назад

      Hi. Please check out the latest comment. I’ve tried answering the question there.

  • @NolihleTshabane-k7u
    @NolihleTshabane-k7u 8 месяцев назад +1

    Hi Sir can you please help me on essay I write on May I'm confused on essays most and please I need topics for exams please 😊

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  8 месяцев назад

      Hey. I’m working on it. Thanks for watching. Subscribe to the channel to get updates when I upload 😊

  • @NickLoyiso
    @NickLoyiso 2 месяца назад

    Can you explain more please

  • @user-Awelani-netshipqle07
    @user-Awelani-netshipqle07 2 дня назад

    Can i use first person like" I"🙋

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  10 часов назад

      We advised that you speak in third person narrative. But you will not be punished for using “I”.

  • @JessicaRiba-qz1rm
    @JessicaRiba-qz1rm 4 месяца назад

    Your mistake I think you didn't mention the background information after the introduction before you write your points (peel paragraphs)

  • @Montelego
    @Montelego Год назад +1

    Your voice is too low bro 😢
    But good job 💪💪

  • @EazyBroz-2065
    @EazyBroz-2065 6 месяцев назад

    Is it compulsory to add background paragraph after the introduction

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  6 месяцев назад

      Not really. The background helps you to tell the story better. This is where you explain things like definitions or what happened before, who is who and why it is all happening.
      You can get away with not writing it. Just start answering the question.

  • @briantshepo9467
    @briantshepo9467 3 месяца назад

    But sir how do i revise it when i have only two days before writing?

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  2 месяца назад +2

      While it is not advised to do that here are a few steps I’d take to revise.
      1. Select the 3 topics you will write in the exam and STICK TO THEM.
      2. Revisit Notes you’ve taken before. If you don’t have ask a friend to share.
      3. Practice with previous questions papers. This will give you the real experience that you will get during an exam. Only answer questions like Reliability, Usefulness, limitation of the source and Paragraph as well as essay questions
      4. For Essay questions
      4.1 Create A summary or Notes that cover the whole topic
      4.2 try writing 3 introductions for different questions on the same topic.
      Hope this helps. Should I turn this into a video?

    • @mpshoxxsquare_pants7278
      @mpshoxxsquare_pants7278 Месяц назад

      ​@theplatformSA yessss please

    • @briantshepo9467
      @briantshepo9467 Месяц назад

      @@theplatformSA YESS please do

  • @Dimakatso-x7x
    @Dimakatso-x7x Месяц назад +1

    Can i get help our teacher is teaching us a PEEL method and as she says it's not full ❤

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  10 часов назад

      Please practice what I have taught you here.

  • @TshegofatsoMohlamonyane-bf1ex
    @TshegofatsoMohlamonyane-bf1ex 3 месяца назад

    Is it also possible for you to teach us content, because I've been reading but i still don't understand some point
    Grade 12 content
    Vietnam war
    Black power
    Black consciousness
    Road to democracy

  • @tumelokoloko7409
    @tumelokoloko7409 11 месяцев назад +1

    The background

  • @humanitymushwana4947
    @humanitymushwana4947 Год назад +2

    please dont tell me this is your last video we writing next week 😢 you forgot something on your first video

    • @theplatformSA
      @theplatformSA  Год назад +2

      Hi. We’re working on more videos. I would appreciate more suggestions on what I can help with. I’ll create a video on limitations of a source very soon.

  • @MantoMaake
    @MantoMaake 4 месяца назад

    Hi guys I'm asking 2 essay the extension of the cold War-Vietnam
    And civil rights protest (the black power movement)

  • @abigailditle
    @abigailditle 5 месяцев назад

    sir come back please 😭😭we'll subscribe

  • @cliftonwillis9372
    @cliftonwillis9372 11 месяцев назад

    P R O M O S M