Depending on where you live, like in "semi-rural" you get used to such noises such as animals acting like assholes, people doing gun practice, various mechanical or constructive noises (trucks, chainsaws, steel storage units.)
TheLibran1 yes, there are some bridges around here that no one might notice be taken out in the middle of the night. Many bridges are built in such a way that they aren’t too difficult to remove (expansion joints, metal beams, etc). Certainly much easier to remove than to build if you have a special crane. At least we would be in a much better situation if we were cut off as so many people here have boats
@@missingallmymarbles7670 Yeah, I also wondered why the people in thta village had no boats. Not that it would matter if the army lines the shore, but still I'd have mentioned some reason for people not having any.
Actually vore is not the same thing it is a fetish where one lives in the stomach they want to be digested for a kick, being eaten is more violent vore is usually you swallow someone whole.
I dunno, the story was interesting but the monster just seemed like an afterthought and the military was the primary threat, I probably lost track but the creature has a staggeringly low body count compared to the humans with guns
I kinda like that outcome. The threat from the monster was more "will it infect me?" whilst the army was the one shooting first and maybe asking questions.
The real conflict is the military and government containment methods. The monster is more or less a catalyst. Replace the monster with a new strain of flu or rare, infectious disease and the story won't change that much.
@@mmarino033089 Not really. The G-virus turns a host infected through injection, AKA "primary infection" into a "G", while the things bursting out of host are just the result of the host being genetically incompatible with the creature's progeny, and therefore incapable of assimilating it. This failed attempt at what is referred to as "secondary infection" results in it being rejected and never becoming a proper "G" itself. What I'm saying is; the G-virus does not behave like the monster of this story, as it can be assumed that a compatible G-embryo implantation would make the host some kind of super-being, rather than becoming another version of the "parent". We have yet to witness a completed assimilation, but the virus was supposed to make a host biologically perfect through optimisation, and the so far only canonical host was mortally wounded at the time of injection, and thus it was forced to go into overdrive just to ensure survival before getting the time to properly integrate with the host. We have no idea what would have happened if it was allowed to integrate with a host that is not in critical condition, nor what would happen to the only known compatible host of the secondary infection method if it was allowed to run its course undisturbed, but even a partial assimilation made her incredibly resilient. This makes sense to me, but it's all just based on my own interpretation of the subject and lore, so I wouldn't ecourage anyone to take it all too seriously.
Wait he ordered something, to be delivered to a locked down Island. "Can I go past?" "This whole area is on lockdown. Who are you?" "Amazon delivery" "Oh yeah that's fine"
you unleash a monster putting the whole village into a lockdown as they are slowly hunted down by a unknown creature killing anyone who gets to close to the wall as if your a German from berlin?
Bundeswehr: "You have lost bridge privilege" Also most unrealistic part is the water of any major German river being safe to drink after simply boiling it xD
I am off German decent but I know nothing really about Germany or my ancestry so it's kinda cool to hear any mythology or legends of Germany and good to know you can't trust the water as safe to drink in case I ever get to go there I will not be drinking from Rivers unless iodine tabs and boiling works
@@ITCHINGTOSCRATCH864 To be fair the government is doing a lot to clean up the rivers. I would even vlaim that the Rhine and Elbe are cleaner than the Seine for example. Still wouldn't drink from them though ^^ If you come to Germany just drink tap water. It's 100% safe to drink wherever you are :)
@@Arkaelis how about Danube ? Cause it goes through my country as well and it's not safe to drink and no amount of boiling will suffice for it to be safe to drink
Thank you! Don't care what army goes door to door looking for people they are going to check everywhere, and I mean everywhere, in a house. Top to bottom, especially attics and basements WILL be searched thoroughly, furniture will be moved to check for hidey holes, and at least two soldiers watching how the people react as their house is searched. I was a Combat Medic and got to see quite a few Iraqis get so nervous that they would tell us where stuff was. Plus, how in the Hell did he keep that dog from barking its ass off. For the grammar Nazis who might read this, that was the proper use of its vs it's. Its is possessive and it's is a contraction. Eight freaking years of college and only God knows how many papers I had to write, I learned the difference a long time ago! BTW, I see what you did there. Poor Anne Frank and her family but true nonetheless.
yeah most gun guys dont give a shit if you call it a clip or a mag, personally i use the correct term because my rifle takes strips so its worth differentiating. Theres honestly no point correcting people though, even when you directly compare strips and mags boomers will just go back to calling their mags clips.
Hey Mr Creeps, just a question for you ? I’ve been contemplating narrating Creepypasta stories myself as I’ve noticed an abundance of American/Canadian, English narrators but very few Australian narrators ? So I guess my question is what would I need to kickstart myself into getting into this (editing programs, equipment ect) Not trying to steal your thunder by any means but you kind of inspired me to throw my hat in the ring to give it a go
I know this question was directed at Creeps, but I'd like to throw my opinion in. By far the most important thing for you to get is a decent microphone. Nothing will make your audience click off your video like an Xbox 360-tier microphone, so get something that sounds good / fits your style. Software isn't really important unless you want videos to accompany your narration; Audacity - which is free - will be more than sufficient for starters, and give you a great introduction to audio engineering. I have noticed that thumbnails are one of the most important aspects of drawing attention to your videos, so a decent image manipulation software can only help. Assuming you don't immediately want to shell out cash for Photoshop, GIMP is an... alright alternative. It's got a bit of a learning curve, and I wouldn't consider it used friendly, but any issues you have with it can be solved with a few minutes of Google searching. Stylistically speaking, you have a lot of freedom to make the narration your own, which indeed you should. While oversaturated is an exaggeration, there's a lot of similar narration channels on YT, so do something that'll make you unique. Pretty vague, right? But seriously, it might not be too important when you're first starting, but it's what will define your channel later on. For example, not a lot of narrators utilize sound effects, or do so sparingly and somewhat annoyingly. As you get more experience with audio engineering, maybe you'll figure out a way to add more immersion to your videos through something similar. Anyway, best of luck. I hope to see your narrations someday!
4 day incubation period. So basically, evacuating and putting in quarantine for a week. Done, solved. It’s even super obvious when they are affected, as they get delirious. If the French could kill it in 1920, the army can do so easily. Overall, story feels super lacking and not well thought out.
I know right and we have things like X-Rays and CT scans that could VERY easily detect something like this and those scans only take a few minutes to hours to perform and can be performed remotely.
Rose's are red I'm a allergic to curry Based on his comment The farmers son is a furry Edit: Rose's are red I'm 77 What if I so much wanted to go to heaven But I say something that makes you screech like old rusty bikes By dear god please forgive me But thanks for the likes :)
nah much cooler to let it continue reproducing with every compatible human in the village, the offspring to assumedly escape into the river never to be found again. that's how to keep it from spreading! let's also respond to some species that only breeds every 100 years like it's gonna spread super fast and wipe out a whole continent of people.
@@nivision I'll be honest. I like this story, but more so as a guilty pleasure. The monster idea is appealing, especially because I like the design of the monster, but I know that it's not technically a good story.
I admit I enjoyed it despite the huge plot holes. I'm wondering if some of the issues would be fixable if they trimmed up the way they stretched out the timeline. I get that they were looking to build suspense with it, but hm. alternatively, maybe hold back the info of the full details on the monster from both sides till later, to make it harder for the military to theoretically plan how to handle this threat they've been tracking. shift the focus a little from military=evil to military=humans and how panicked humans (on both sides) who feel out of control due to limited info can be capable of horrible things. I'm spitballing as a writer, I just feel like the concept is salvageable.
Because you don't hunt fish with a tank just like you don't fish deer with a battle ship. A submarine probably would have been the best tool for the job had the fish been in open waters instead of a river. And Navy Seals probably could have taken care of it in a day but likely have bigger fish to fry.
@@pennsylvaniaball9137 who said we can? Oh wait, you wrote europoors. Because we Germans can afford... but nobody said anything about "actual working" tanks.
@@requiemlul3140 Jupp. Die meisten Soldaten würden sowas nicht machen bzw. Nicht machen können. Zumal auf den einzigen großen Flüssen, wo solche Inseln existieren könnten, ein solcher Schiffsverkehr herrscht, selbst RTL Zuschauer würden merken: hier stimmt was nicht.
"No power" - No mention of car batteries, petrol, consumer (think AA, AAA, 9 Volt, etc) batteries, jump starter kits, lawn mowers, weed whackers and other such sources of fuel/power - What happened to his personal solar array? "No food" - Hunting small animals? (EG: Squirrels, rabbits, etc) - Foraging (Not much but still something) "Corpse pile" Why the fuck did you NOT burn it?
Vert343 his personal solar array burnt Down with the barn and I doubt that anyone on a small island could know how to make electricity from shit like those, also they probably didn't have and weapons to hunt or just no animals since it's a small island
@@burgermuncher8985 His personal solar array was ON HIS HOUSE not on the barn, also, small animals like rats and squirrels live EVERYWHERE... I would know, trust me... As for the fuel they only drained cars (I'll assume vans and whatnot went too, but still no mention of smaller fuel sources at all)
I do not understand the actions of the bundeswher. By keeping the people alive but trapped with the monster it seems as if they are trying to get the monster to reproduce. But the end of the story makes it seem like they were hoping to kill everyone because they were worried about secret baby monster infected people. So why did they bother with keeping the town captive and lightly terrorizing them for a while? Why didn't they just kill everyone at the start? If they are so scared of the monster (which apparently can't even break into a single house) why don't they just kill it? They seem to have enough manpower and supplies. Why even let another village form in the same location after the incident 100 years ago? So many questions. Anyway fun story. Fantastic narration.
yup they could have just capture the people and put them in cells to examine whether they are infected or not and since the if everything look to be normal they can just give them new place to live so that way the village will have no host for the creature to infect
One of the best storys ever. I really love how things are being kept realistic and scary. I was kind of watching a movie about this in my head while listening
Despite some minor inconsistencies, i really enjoyed this story. Seemed simpler for the German Army to wait for the creature to come up at night then kill it than to starve out the city and risk more being infected but yea.
Great story, but I have a question. Doesn't the "fish" sound a lot like the monster from the movie The Host? Big mouth Large head Body thins and gets smaller as you move away towards the tail Two legged Differences Colorful Fishlike tail Claws Very toothy Parasitic
23:24 IT NEEDS HUMANS TO REPRODUCE, SO LET'S LOCK HIM IN A VILLAGE FULL OF PEOPLE LOL "YEAH THAT MAKES PERFECT SINCE"...... BECAUSE GETTING EVERYONE OUT AND TRAPPING IT INSIDE IS CLEARLY DUMB🤨
@Orion They knew that it will get to the village before it even came out of the water. This way, they could help the villagers before the possibility of someone getting infected.
the question i have on this is why they didnt just wipe out the village right away and set up like a 50 mile radius where construction is not allowed (make it a park or something) and station guards around a fence a few miles around the water. idk just thinking about it from an scp perspective. (gotta kill the village unfortunately cause no amnesiacs)
Maybe to learn more about the monster. Also wouldn’t it be possible if the monster has no humans left to infect at its current location, that it would just move on to the next place with enough humans. I feel like that town was very purposefully placed there, like a human sacrifice
when i accidentally trigger a raid in a minecraft village but i have no armour and only the iron sword i stole from the blacksmith to defend myself so i just run for the hills and let them all burn and die
I really dig the artwork on your cover pages. Thank you tons for the stories, no offense but you are definitely#2 on my story board. I don't have to search for you anymore, you just pop up, pop, pop,pop,... I love them all...
"Alright, took me a while, but here's your pizza!" A few minutes later and the pizza delivery person reaches the bridge, and it gets cut off just as he's so close to it. "F--- this job!"
If there’s a fish monster the size of a car inhabiting the river you live next to I think it’d be safe to assume that you wouldn’t drink the water no matter how much ya boil it lol
The creepiest part of this, for me, is that my father has this really old and yellowed drawing of a city in Germany that mirrors how this village is. Right in the water.
27:55 the only problem I have with this creepypasta is a recurring one- the fact that diesel is NOT highly flammable/volatile. It takes immense pressure or a sustained flame to ignite diesel, which is why you can leave a diesel engine running while refueling- theres basically no chance that it’s going to accidentally ignite. Gasoline, on the other hand, is highly volatile and will explode at a small heat/flame source. My dad taught me this since he drives a diesel truck. Theres also always a chance that this author is using diesel incorrectly as a synonym for gasoline, though there is a significant difference between the two.
Thumbs up for any one that found this upload and pieced together the other story from 2018. "The segment of the bridge/highway" "The government told us to stay in our cars"
Nah but they’re referencing the highway they were all confined on and the villigers bridge being taken away and the similarity in narrative I.e hostility between Govt soldiers and civilians ect
Did they try putting up a "Monster free zone" sign? No way that couldnt solve the problem, after all no monster, human or otherwise would disobey a sign for any reason.
dark web delivery service. They deliver any where, any time... even at odd hours. No shipping address required, they just trace your ip, dox you and then know exactly when and where to deliver your package.
Only major flaw in the story is diesel doesn't burn or explode in that way! Diesel has a low octane of 20-25 , where gasoline is 80-100 ; diesel needs high temp and pressure to burn. But if you want to burn diesel at atmospheric pressure (14.7 psi) you really have to generate great temperatures to burn it at all. Other than that a good Lovecraftian , anti-"Deep-one" breeding program story.
"The army shot at us, we thought that was pretty weird. Anyways, we decided to go visit grandma" Aaah yes, I'm just so immersed. Got me invested fella, on the edge of my boots.
"Puma tank" thats an IFV. The Marder is also an IFV. the fennec is a scout car. the Fuchs is an APC. This guy tried to flex his military knowledge, but literally none of these are tanks.
I just found your channel last week, I've binged listened to just about all of your videos lol. You always seem to have stories that are so unique and keep me intrigued. Loved this one and can't wait to hear the next uploads.
Puma = IFV Marder = IFV Fennek = Scout car Fuchs ("Which can be considered a tank") = APC None of these vehicles are tanks, IFVs are tracked, but they are infantry carriers. They carry and support infantry, and have smaller armaments than tanks. Scout cars, are well, armored vehicles made for scouting. APCs are like IFVs, but, usually have an even smaller armament, or even have no armament at all. They are purely cargo and infantry transport vehicles. I know this may seem annoying, but I had to point this out.
I don't mean to be overly critical but I'm almost certain that a can of diesel would not explode. I could see it melting and then the diesel subsequently starting a large fire, but explode not gonna happen.
I dont wanna be a critic or grammar Nazi, but the narrator should clarify who he is. I mean I read the time machine and the guy as a third person clarified "Im not the scientist Im his friend"
A few things that are unrealistic, even for a monster story: German villagers having guns, German police/army reacting quickly, the government in threat of collapse due to these kind of information (its always on the verge of collapse but even evidence of pedophilia isnt enough to tip it over), the monster not being found after the government toiled to straighten the rivers in the past 100 years.
Damn those villagers were some heavy sleepers. A whole bridge was removed over night & they just slept right through it 😴😴
Depending on where you live, like in "semi-rural" you get used to such noises such as animals acting like assholes, people doing gun practice, various mechanical or constructive noises (trucks, chainsaws, steel storage units.)
TheLibran1 yes, there are some bridges around here that no one might notice be taken out in the middle of the night. Many bridges are built in such a way that they aren’t too difficult to remove (expansion joints, metal beams, etc). Certainly much easier to remove than to build if you have a special crane. At least we would be in a much better situation if we were cut off as so many people here have boats
Ops directive could have sprayed the entire town with some kinda nerve sleep gas ont know ....
@@missingallmymarbles7670 Yeah, I also wondered why the people in thta village had no boats. Not that it would matter if the army lines the shore, but still I'd have mentioned some reason for people not having any.
Juniper S they’re chuggin the melatonin
20:15 “trust me, you would not want to get eaten by that” well shit that’s a first. Usually I always want to get eaten alive by the monster
Vore.
Stefan Leca Do you even know what r/woooosh means?
@Stefan Leca sometimes, it means a joke went over your head, I understood the sarcasm perfectly.
@Stefan Leca vore means the same thing as being eaten alive dum dum
Actually vore is not the same thing it is a fetish where one lives in the stomach they want to be digested for a kick, being eaten is more violent vore is usually you swallow someone whole.
I dunno, the story was interesting but the monster just seemed like an afterthought and the military was the primary threat, I probably lost track but the creature has a staggeringly low body count compared to the humans with guns
Just like The Walking Dead!
I kinda like that outcome. The threat from the monster was more "will it infect me?" whilst the army was the one shooting first and maybe asking questions.
The real conflict is the military and government containment methods. The monster is more or less a catalyst. Replace the monster with a new strain of flu or rare, infectious disease and the story won't change that much.
@@leonnewkirk1713 well guess what happens if coronavirus mutates ..
@@podlodialgilap3490 Yep....martial law
Somebody needs to make a survival horror game on this story
Not exactly the same but try Darkwood by Acid Wizard Studios
Drew 007 YES
Drew 007 resident evil 2 g virus does the same exact thing as this monster
@@mmarino033089
Not really.
The G-virus turns a host infected through injection, AKA "primary infection" into a "G", while the things bursting out of host are just the result of the host being genetically incompatible with the creature's progeny, and therefore incapable of assimilating it.
This failed attempt at what is referred to as "secondary infection" results in it being rejected and never becoming a proper "G" itself.
What I'm saying is; the G-virus does not behave like the monster of this story, as it can be assumed that a compatible G-embryo implantation would make the host some kind of super-being, rather than becoming another version of the "parent".
We have yet to witness a completed assimilation, but the virus was supposed to make a host biologically perfect through optimisation, and the so far only canonical host was mortally wounded at the time of injection, and thus it was forced to go into overdrive just to ensure survival before getting the time to properly integrate with the host.
We have no idea what would have happened if it was allowed to integrate with a host that is not in critical condition, nor what would happen to the only known compatible host of the secondary infection method if it was allowed to run its course undisturbed, but even a partial assimilation made her incredibly resilient.
This makes sense to me, but it's all just based on my own interpretation of the subject and lore, so I wouldn't ecourage anyone to take it all too seriously.
Perfect for the plot of a horror game
"We call our new tanks warthogs."
"The tanks look more like a big cat."
"What, you mean like a Puma?"
"That's the one."
A man of culture
You, your breathtaking
yeah man, there you go
Wasent that the jeep
Rvb
"trust me, you do not want to be eaten by it"...to be fair, I don't want to be eaten by anything.
Right? I stopped to think how being eaten by a monster with sharp teeth was so worse than being eaten by any creature at all
Unless you a girl. Then your boy gotta eat you. (I know, horrible attempt at a joke but I had to.)
Maybe it's so terrible that even those attracted to being eaten. Wouldn't want to get eaten by it.
@ Catherine Ervin I said exactly the same thing😆
Glad I’m not the only one who thought this. 😂😂
Level 1: Fish
Level 100: Fritz
Level 100 nazi? What?
You had 68now you have 69
Osval Jurado thank you for your service, bud. Best number since the number of the beast
Noice
Level 101 The Get Fucked Monster
Wait he ordered something, to be delivered to a locked down Island.
"Can I go past?"
"This whole area is on lockdown. Who are you?"
"Amazon delivery"
"Oh yeah that's fine"
Yeah it's full of inconsistencies like that lol kinda jarring but still a cool story
Shooting down an Amazon delivery drone would trigger a world war. We all know how well Germany has done in those.
Omg I didn’t even pick up on that lol.
Nothing can stop Amazon!!
Kai Mitchell plotwist the entire creepy pasta was just an elaborate amazon plug
@@r.r.n8998 LMAO yes
Me when my villagers in Minecraft don’t do they’re jobs
you unleash a monster putting the whole village into a lockdown as they are slowly hunted down by a unknown creature killing anyone who gets to close to the wall as if your a German from berlin?
@@StevyJoe i do that
Judah Overstreet yea
@@StevyJoe Ever heard of Zombies in Minecraft?
@@agoogleuser8945 fair
Bundeswehr: "You have lost bridge privilege"
Also most unrealistic part is the water of any major German river being safe to drink after simply boiling it xD
Right?
I am off German decent but I know nothing really about Germany or my ancestry so it's kinda cool to hear any mythology or legends of Germany and good to know you can't trust the water as safe to drink in case I ever get to go there I will not be drinking from Rivers unless iodine tabs and boiling works
@@ITCHINGTOSCRATCH864 To be fair the government is doing a lot to clean up the rivers. I would even vlaim that the Rhine and Elbe are cleaner than the Seine for example. Still wouldn't drink from them though ^^ If you come to Germany just drink tap water. It's 100% safe to drink wherever you are :)
Arkaelis some of America’s tap water is starting to become unsafe because of corroding pipes so that’s nice...
@@Arkaelis how about Danube ? Cause it goes through my country as well and it's not safe to drink and no amount of boiling will suffice for it to be safe to drink
Only time a person was able to hid from German soldiers in the attic
Mnof S nice
Holy shit dude
Thank you! Don't care what army goes door to door looking for people they are going to check everywhere, and I mean everywhere, in a house. Top to bottom, especially attics and basements WILL be searched thoroughly, furniture will be moved to check for hidey holes, and at least two soldiers watching how the people react as their house is searched. I was a Combat Medic and got to see quite a few Iraqis get so nervous that they would tell us where stuff was. Plus, how in the Hell did he keep that dog from barking its ass off.
For the grammar Nazis who might read this, that was the proper use of its vs it's. Its is possessive and it's is a contraction. Eight freaking years of college and only God knows how many papers I had to write, I learned the difference a long time ago!
BTW, I see what you did there. Poor Anne Frank and her family but true nonetheless.
X Wilson Huh ok that was an info dump. Would you mind telling me your social security, and credit card info while your at it.
I did nazi that coming, ann frankly, I laughed a little
[using the term Magazine instead of clip]
Instant like.
It kinda irks me when people mix those up
So many stories are ruined by the misuse of clip . A clip is what you reload a magazine with . Aghhhhh!
Jesus, thank you for saying it. Instantly ruins the story for me, everytime.
yeah most gun guys dont give a shit if you call it a clip or a mag, personally i use the correct term because my rifle takes strips so its worth differentiating. Theres honestly no point correcting people though, even when you directly compare strips and mags boomers will just go back to calling their mags clips.
@@shir0290 for me its if a character is believable. For example a character is ex military or the ilk .
Hey Mr Creeps, just a question for you ?
I’ve been contemplating narrating Creepypasta stories myself as I’ve noticed an abundance of American/Canadian, English narrators but very few Australian narrators ?
So I guess my question is what would I need to kickstart myself into getting into this (editing programs, equipment ect)
Not trying to steal your thunder by any means but you kind of inspired me to throw my hat in the ring to give it a go
I know this question was directed at Creeps, but I'd like to throw my opinion in. By far the most important thing for you to get is a decent microphone. Nothing will make your audience click off your video like an Xbox 360-tier microphone, so get something that sounds good / fits your style.
Software isn't really important unless you want videos to accompany your narration; Audacity - which is free - will be more than sufficient for starters, and give you a great introduction to audio engineering.
I have noticed that thumbnails are one of the most important aspects of drawing attention to your videos, so a decent image manipulation software can only help. Assuming you don't immediately want to shell out cash for Photoshop, GIMP is an... alright alternative. It's got a bit of a learning curve, and I wouldn't consider it used friendly, but any issues you have with it can be solved with a few minutes of Google searching.
Stylistically speaking, you have a lot of freedom to make the narration your own, which indeed you should. While oversaturated is an exaggeration, there's a lot of similar narration channels on YT, so do something that'll make you unique. Pretty vague, right? But seriously, it might not be too important when you're first starting, but it's what will define your channel later on. For example, not a lot of narrators utilize sound effects, or do so sparingly and somewhat annoyingly. As you get more experience with audio engineering, maybe you'll figure out a way to add more immersion to your videos through something similar. Anyway, best of luck. I hope to see your narrations someday!
I'd be good to see an aussie narrator. 👍👍
You would have to compete with Ozzy man reviews... But it would be cool👍
Jaydo Warren-Hewes if you would want some scary art for your stories I would be happy to make some for your channel
Most of the narrators/content creators I listen to are brits and Australian. Maybe you haven't clicked their vids yet.
4 day incubation period. So basically, evacuating and putting in quarantine for a week. Done, solved. It’s even super obvious when they are affected, as they get delirious.
If the French could kill it in 1920, the army can do so easily.
Overall, story feels super lacking and not well thought out.
I know right and we have things like X-Rays and CT scans that could VERY easily detect something like this and those scans only take a few minutes to hours to perform and can be performed remotely.
Rose's are red
I'm a allergic to curry
Based on his comment
The farmers son is a furry
Edit:
Rose's are red
I'm 77
What if I so much wanted to go to heaven
But I say something that makes you screech like old rusty bikes
By dear god please forgive me
But thanks for the likes :)
Roses are red
Army is mad
I just tried fishing
Got shot five times
@@zaneblack9239 a man of true articulance
@@jonathank3415 Roses are Red
Silk comes from China
Just tryna relax
This boy just made my day
@@zaneblack9239
Rose's are red
Blue like the sea
It's my pleasure
Making days is why I'm here
Your comment made me think of Derrick Rose and Steph Curry
If they can send all of these tanks to restrain the village, why can't they send even more to subdue or even kill the fish?
nah much cooler to let it continue reproducing with every compatible human in the village, the offspring to assumedly escape into the river never to be found again. that's how to keep it from spreading!
let's also respond to some species that only breeds every 100 years like it's gonna spread super fast and wipe out a whole continent of people.
@@nivision
I'll be honest. I like this story, but more so as a guilty pleasure. The monster idea is appealing, especially because I like the design of the monster, but I know that it's not technically a good story.
I admit I enjoyed it despite the huge plot holes. I'm wondering if some of the issues would be fixable if they trimmed up the way they stretched out the timeline. I get that they were looking to build suspense with it, but hm.
alternatively, maybe hold back the info of the full details on the monster from both sides till later, to make it harder for the military to theoretically plan how to handle this threat they've been tracking. shift the focus a little from military=evil to military=humans and how panicked humans (on both sides) who feel out of control due to limited info can be capable of horrible things.
I'm spitballing as a writer, I just feel like the concept is salvageable.
@@nivision
When I face these things, I like to roleplay them as done better. It gives me satisfaction.
Because you don't hunt fish with a tank just like you don't fish deer with a battle ship.
A submarine probably would have been the best tool for the job had the fish been in open waters instead of a river. And Navy Seals probably could have taken care of it in a day but likely have bigger fish to fry.
The army have tanks and soldiers
Use them!
on their own people. great idea
@@poptartmallshart5323 To kill the creature. Just wait until it comes up, spot it with thermal vision and blow it up.
@@utzius8003 yes finally someone agrees with me.
Thank you for helping me exsplain this to him
@@poptartmallshart5323 are you insane no.
Use them on the moster
Kommandant Blauluchs but the people could be infected and it can spread further
I'm more concerned it was removed by the army than it just being 1 bridge.
I am surprised that our Bundeswehr Got vehicles that can Do this.
I'm just shocked that europoors could even afford tanks.
@@pennsylvaniaball9137 who said we can?
Oh wait, you wrote europoors.
Because we Germans can afford... but nobody said anything about "actual working" tanks.
Thomas Stahl
Ich bin überrascht dass die Bundeswehr so reagiert.
Das ist ziemlich unrealistisch.
@@requiemlul3140 Jupp. Die meisten Soldaten würden sowas nicht machen bzw. Nicht machen können.
Zumal auf den einzigen großen Flüssen, wo solche Inseln existieren könnten, ein solcher Schiffsverkehr herrscht, selbst RTL Zuschauer würden merken: hier stimmt was nicht.
next story: if your neighbors are in their house run!
Nice
"No power"
- No mention of car batteries, petrol, consumer (think AA, AAA, 9 Volt, etc) batteries, jump starter kits, lawn mowers, weed whackers and other such sources of fuel/power
- What happened to his personal solar array?
"No food"
- Hunting small animals? (EG: Squirrels, rabbits, etc)
- Foraging (Not much but still something)
"Corpse pile"
Why the fuck did you NOT burn it?
Why you're so busy with finding mistakes while you could enjoy the story???
@@no_mercy4183 Because glaring issues of characters stupidity annoy me
Vert343 his personal solar array burnt Down with the barn and I doubt that anyone on a small island could know how to make electricity from shit like those, also they probably didn't have and weapons to hunt or just no animals since it's a small island
Vert343 and also all their fuel blew up too and they probs didn't feel the need to mention the cremation
@@burgermuncher8985 His personal solar array was ON HIS HOUSE not on the barn, also, small animals like rats and squirrels live EVERYWHERE... I would know, trust me... As for the fuel they only drained cars (I'll assume vans and whatnot went too, but still no mention of smaller fuel sources at all)
Yay, Finally a r/nosleep set in Germany
*BOONDESWEHR*
More like stupideswer
It’s Bundeswehr
Two things
1. This is from R/nosleep?
2. what does "bundeswehr" mean and how do you say it?
Der Wolf Gaming
1. Yes
2. en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bundeswehr
@@darthzayexeet3653 thanks. I'll be reading that later tonight.
That moment when the government was the real monster.
Error 404 bridge not found
Bruh
Just gotta copy and paste a new one. Can be trusted, have done before.
too bad that diesel doesnt burn unless its atomized
thank you. why cant authors do some fkn research before they write these cringey wattpad pastas
I do not understand the actions of the bundeswher. By keeping the people alive but trapped with the monster it seems as if they are trying to get the monster to reproduce. But the end of the story makes it seem like they were hoping to kill everyone because they were worried about secret baby monster infected people. So why did they bother with keeping the town captive and lightly terrorizing them for a while? Why didn't they just kill everyone at the start? If they are so scared of the monster (which apparently can't even break into a single house) why don't they just kill it? They seem to have enough manpower and supplies. Why even let another village form in the same location after the incident 100 years ago?
So many questions. Anyway fun story. Fantastic narration.
yup they could have just capture the people and put them in cells to examine whether they are infected or not and since the if everything look to be normal they can just give them new place to live so that way the village will have no host for the creature to infect
Because it's a very badly written creepypasta with an even sillier premise.
@@nickkorkodylas5005 yeah im leaving 20 minutes in
@@nickkorkodylas5005 so much stuff makes zero sense
*Mom I'm scared come pick me up*
Cant bridge is out.
FIRST NAME LAST NAME just put the foot down, you’ll make it.
splo1nger Sweetie im gonna die
Pick you up with what a Huey?
Subscribe if Joe momma Gay aight I’m coming sweetie
One of the best storys ever. I really love how things are being kept realistic and scary. I was kind of watching a movie about this in my head while listening
Despite some minor inconsistencies, i really enjoyed this story. Seemed simpler for the German Army to wait for the creature to come up at night then kill it than to starve out the city and risk more being infected but yea.
Yeah… maybe though they probably were too scared that there were already people infected
I see a notification from Mr. Creeps, I click, I enjoy. Love ya, man, keep up the great work
Great story, but I have a question.
Doesn't the "fish" sound a lot like the monster from the movie The Host?
Big mouth
Large head
Body thins and gets smaller as you move away towards the tail
Two legged
Differences
Colorful
Fishlike tail
Claws
Very toothy
Parasitic
I can't believe someone else still remembers that movie
omg someone who remembers that movie
yup it sure did
I love that movie.
Alternatively, that fish boss from Resident Evil 8.
I just realized that they won’t let the people leave even though they can easily do it
23:24 IT NEEDS HUMANS TO REPRODUCE, SO LET'S LOCK HIM IN A VILLAGE FULL OF PEOPLE LOL "YEAH THAT MAKES PERFECT SINCE"...... BECAUSE GETTING EVERYONE OUT AND TRAPPING IT INSIDE IS CLEARLY DUMB🤨
I know rightt.. What the heck
@Orion They knew that it will get to the village before it even came out of the water. This way, they could help the villagers before the possibility of someone getting infected.
@Orion SHUT THE FUCK UP, WHO THE FUCK GIVES YOU THE RIGHT TO GAMBLE WITH OTHER PEOPLE FUCKING LIFES
the question i have on this is why they didnt just wipe out the village right away and set up like a 50 mile radius where construction is not allowed (make it a park or something) and station guards around a fence a few miles around the water.
idk just thinking about it from an scp perspective. (gotta kill the village unfortunately cause no amnesiacs)
Maybe to learn more about the monster. Also wouldn’t it be possible if the monster has no humans left to infect at its current location, that it would just move on to the next place with enough humans. I feel like that town was very purposefully placed there, like a human sacrifice
@@claracatlady9844 definitely plausible
when i accidentally trigger a raid in a minecraft village but i have no armour and only the iron sword i stole from the blacksmith to defend myself so i just run for the hills and let them all burn and die
Amry:*takes out the only bridge* wendingo:Ladys and gentlemen this is the moment you've been waiting for!!!!
I really dig the artwork on your cover pages. Thank you tons for the stories, no offense but you are definitely#2 on my story board.
I don't have to search for you anymore, you just pop up, pop, pop,pop,...
I love them all...
"Alright, took me a while, but here's your pizza!"
A few minutes later and the pizza delivery person reaches the bridge, and it gets cut off just as he's so close to it.
"F--- this job!"
Holy this was a good story! Thank you for uploading this! Keep up the good work and I hope this does not stop for a lonngggggg time
If there’s a fish monster the size of a car inhabiting the river you live next to I think it’d be safe to assume that you wouldn’t drink the water no matter how much ya boil it lol
God I look forward to your video every night! It's so great when I see a video longer then 30 minutes, thank you!
The creepiest part of this, for me, is that my father has this really old and yellowed drawing of a city in Germany that mirrors how this village is. Right in the water.
Wow that is creepy
Yeah that's eerie.
He escaped.....
Wie heißt der Freund Ihres Vaters?
1:28 I've never heard my country in a horror story. I love this already!
How is there not a single schiße
(If anybody speaks German I probably misspelled it don’t get mad)
Love the voice. Your narration started good and has gotten great. Thanks for the stories.
27:55 the only problem I have with this creepypasta is a recurring one- the fact that diesel is NOT highly flammable/volatile. It takes immense pressure or a sustained flame to ignite diesel, which is why you can leave a diesel engine running while refueling- theres basically no chance that it’s going to accidentally ignite. Gasoline, on the other hand, is highly volatile and will explode at a small heat/flame source. My dad taught me this since he drives a diesel truck. Theres also always a chance that this author is using diesel incorrectly as a synonym for gasoline, though there is a significant difference between the two.
Imagine how often the media has lied about things like this in real life...
*SCP Foundation intensifies*
Mr Creeps just hit 500,000 just as I started watching this.
I wonder what the toll on the bridge was before they tore it down 💲
"'A furry picture site.' We all burst out in laughter." Until the awkwardness set in that they all knew what that was.
Then they realized they had to burn the furry because even the fish thing is afraid of it
@@bloxracer3627
Wouldn't that be a good thing?
Then again, it might be inhumane to force it to risk its innocence just to be able to hunt them...
There's a LOT of german furries for whatever reason
Thumbs up for any one that found this upload and pieced together the other story from 2018.
"The segment of the bridge/highway"
"The government told us to stay in our cars"
Wait I need answer wtf
I had a hunch there may have been a connection ?
Is "the segment of the bridge/highway" a creepypasta?
Nah but they’re referencing the highway they were all confined on and the villigers bridge being taken away and the similarity in narrative I.e hostility between Govt soldiers and civilians ect
can you just post the stories so we can find them?
Did they try putting up a "Monster free zone" sign? No way that couldnt solve the problem, after all no monster, human or otherwise would disobey a sign for any reason.
See this is what happens when you don't let everybody own a nuclear warhead
SHALL NOT
YEEET
I know it was one year ago but this is still probably my favorite story and I listen to it over and over again
His voice is so relaxing I am literally falling asleep while listening. This could be a magnificent Asmr video IMO
....huhhh...I was just dreaming about a bridge.
I was dreaming of owning a plastics factory on a hill, the coincidence is too much.
@@splo1nger909 hahahahaaaah!! ,wonderful👍👍👍
How did some guy order stuff when they have no bridge out of their village????
One ordered there's before the event ,and told the outside friend to buy one
dark web delivery service. They deliver any where, any time... even at odd hours. No shipping address required, they just trace your ip, dox you and then know exactly when and where to deliver your package.
Tell me I’m not the only one who here’s the “ehh” at the end of every word this guy speaks😂😂
Love your voicing and videos!!!! Keep going!!!!
This would be a kick ass movie
This title reminds me of the guy on Instagram that eats raw eggs and can’t get salmonella
martin?
lil nugget?
Bet his farts are worse than salmonella
@kyle yes martin
Is that a creepypasta?
Only major flaw in the story is diesel doesn't burn or explode in that way! Diesel has a low octane of 20-25 , where gasoline is 80-100 ; diesel needs high temp and pressure to burn. But if you want to burn diesel at atmospheric pressure (14.7 psi) you really have to generate great temperatures to burn it at all. Other than that a good Lovecraftian , anti-"Deep-one" breeding program story.
Its like saying german tanks and showing soviet ones.
Dig your feet into the ground, Tense your arms, Grit your teeth, AND EAT THAT HORSE!
Someone should animate these stories. I think that would be cool
A terrifying monster whom has killed multiple people give it a scary name like
FISH
Wow terrifying
Actually, it was called "Fisch". The Deutsch word for Fish.
"The army shot at us, we thought that was pretty weird. Anyways, we decided to go visit grandma"
Aaah yes, I'm just so immersed. Got me invested fella, on the edge of my boots.
The smart thing was to secure the city and try to kill the creature with there supreme weapon
Would love to see this turn into a movie.
"A furry picture site" I am deceased.
Great long creepypasta and another fantastic narration, Mr. Creeps! Thank you! 🙂✌️👍
Nice while I'm sick I'll listen to this
Are you got corona oh shit dude rip man
No pint if its corona hes going to die just get hight and count your seconds away buddy
@Cole The moldier thank you
@@josephl5467 if you arent joking you are dumb.
Dude i always love your Readings. Ppl think youre voice is bad but i like it and listen to you while smoking a blunt.
"Puma tank" thats an IFV. The Marder is also an IFV. the fennec is a scout car. the Fuchs is an APC. This guy tried to flex his military knowledge, but literally none of these are tanks.
And your all knowing, No one is perfect get over it Google hero.
Also he isn't flexing his knowledge he is reading the story's that other people put on reddit dumbass 😂😂😂
@@bladerunner9258 I'm talking about the writer numbnuts.
@@himedo1512 🤣 seriously, right??
The puma a couple of variations like the short 75 mm the scout car 50mm and the the Pak puma
If something like this happens it's terrifying to think
Thank you.. I love this channel.. I wish you and corpse husband would do a collab... either way stay spooky
Last Minutes: 28 Days Later Soundtrack - nice 😁
Thank goodness !
I just found your channel last week, I've binged listened to just about all of your videos lol. You always seem to have stories that are so unique and keep me intrigued. Loved this one and can't wait to hear the next uploads.
I guess the name of the village was "Ram Ranch"
RAM RANCH UNDER SIEGE?
These creepypasta titles are like bad clickbait
"Man finds monster using one weird trick you WONT BELIEVE. Click HERE to see how."
Hello hello! Just started watching and I already know this video is going to be good! Have a good day everyone!
Well thank you
Thx, you too.
Don't you tell me what to do.
@@justsomemincedgarlic 🤣🤣 you rebel you!
The titles are hilarious, one example I saw of someone making fun of this was "I drank a 5 hr energy 6 hrs later I still have energy"
It's like no way smth is happening???
Just call pizza hut nobody out pizzas the hut
This sounds like the plot of a Steven King book
Damn. Glad the protagonist was recognized in the end.
su tart
Puma = IFV
Marder = IFV
Fennek = Scout car
Fuchs ("Which can be considered a tank") = APC
None of these vehicles are tanks, IFVs are tracked, but they are infantry carriers. They carry and support infantry, and have smaller armaments than tanks.
Scout cars, are well, armored vehicles made for scouting.
APCs are like IFVs, but, usually have an even smaller armament, or even have no armament at all. They are purely cargo and infantry transport vehicles.
I know this may seem annoying, but I had to point this out.
The only thing happening in ma house is puffing some old school blue cheese weed 💯 stoned happy sunday 🍁
Nummers. 🍁
Joseph Lockhart back at ya.
When it comes to blue cheese! Im a Hoarder!
Creamy berry delights
Sameee
Some of these creepy pastas would make really good horror movies
I don't mean to be overly critical but I'm almost certain that a can of diesel would not explode. I could see it melting and then the diesel subsequently starting a large fire, but explode not gonna happen.
Diesel (if mixed with Nitrate fertilizer) can be explosive...
correct. the author doesn't know basic chemistry
@@DrTheda735 why would anyone do that to ALL the diesel they had? even if they did, it would still have to be hella hot af to ignite and combust
lieutenant is pronounced as "left-tenant"
ikr, no one in my english class believed our teacher but I searched for it up and she's right..
as a German is painfull how "Bundeswehr" is pronounced in English....
Viele Leute wissen nicht, wie man das "W" oder das" R" am Ende eines Wortes ausspricht.
This channel gave me nightmares but i still watch bc im addicted to it lol keep up the great work
SOMETHING IN THE MIST!
OldManDan good movie
It sounds like a gamer like it's hates light and only come out at the night
Anyone else hear what sounds like laptop fans in the background?
So Im confused, the villager is an undercover agent or or the guy in the ending his friend?
I believe that the narrator of the story was one of the spies mentioned tho I’m not sure
I dont wanna be a critic or grammar Nazi, but the narrator should clarify who he is. I mean I read the time machine and the guy as a third person clarified "Im not the scientist Im his friend"
P Guerra wrong place for nazi
Loved the ending 10min especially, awesome story. Rip Doggo
The first time I hear someone in the stories is from Finland.
Niinpä
Torilla ei tavata :-(
I’m German and it took me some time to understand they were saying “Bundeswehr”
A baby monster the first thing I thought it was a stomach burster from alien
Chest burster
A few things that are unrealistic, even for a monster story: German villagers having guns, German police/army reacting quickly, the government in threat of collapse due to these kind of information (its always on the verge of collapse but even evidence of pedophilia isnt enough to tip it over), the monster not being found after the government toiled to straighten the rivers in the past 100 years.