roseshards actually there is a reference to the lion king in this bc raggedpelt killed his own father out of rage and jealousy and scar killed his own brother out of rage and jealousy just like raggedpelt
Cats: (Just for those of you wondering): Tabby with the red collar: Hal (Raggedpelt's father) Brown tabby with green eyes: Featherstorm (Raggedpelt's mother) Tabby without a collar: Raggedpelt Dark gray she-cat with amber eyes: Yellowfang (Raggedpelt's mate)
Fair enough, but Raggedstar spent his entire life wondering about his dad and feeling a some sort of sense that something was missing without him. He was upset about it literally all the time and it was really affecting him and his behavior. And many other cats in the clan were making rumors about him and his father. Eventually he sneaks out and after a lot of confrontation he meets Hal, who lies and claims he isn't his father. Maybe he doesn't entirely DESERVE to be killed, but after finally meeting his dad and having him taunt him and make fun of him over what he has been picked on and whispered about for his entire life and discovering he was a lying douchebag, I can definitely see why Raggedstar acted out in the moment. Raggedstar was kinda shook by his own actions afterwards but it also enabled him to feel a sense of freedom, without feeling like some sort of outcast within his own clan
Omgomgomgomgomgomg y e s y o u d O. Yellowfangs secret is one of the first super editions I read, and I love it, it really gives you insight that she's not just a "Grumpy old she" And her life was quite dark, and difficult. Anyways I freaking love yellowfang 👌👌👌✌
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Raggedstar reaped what he sowed. The same way he killed his father over so little, Brokenstar killed him. Raggedstar becoming leader was one of the root causes of Shadowclan's problems
Klik'ssi Ikub'ra Eh, Raggedstar wasn't really a bad leader. He was just too good of a father. He quite literally would have given the world to Brokenstar. He saw too late the type of cat his son truly was.
If you are unable to instill values in your son and let him run wild while spoiling him, then he's not a good father. Even when he saw full well how Brokenpaw was disobeying Nightcloud, Raggedstar didn't come in there to give him a different mentor or to enforce Nightcloud's rules. He let Brokenpaw and Brokentail get away with everything instead of just telling him "no" at one point, and that is part of being a parent: instilling common decency and respect. Brokenstar grew up thinking that he deserves the world on a platter thanks to Raggedstar, and that attitude was probably the most harmful to him, even worse than the bullying from his siblings. Raggedstar was far from being a wise leader when he showed so much bias.
Klik'ssi Ikub'ra Raggedstar really wasn't a bad leader. Out of Shadowclan's dark history, he and Blackstar are some of the better leaders. No he isn't the best father in the world. Even if he didn't mean to, I know he ruined his son. Perhaps he was trying to avoid what Hal did to him, I don't know.
Raggedstar was all too willing to ignore Brokentail's excesses and look the other way even when he was doing all kinds of horrible things without so much as a word against him. Around the point that Brokentail started asking apprentices to hang themselves by their jaws to a tree and causing them physical harm, any good leader would have intervened, but Raggedstar doesn't lift so much as a whisker at it. That's what separates him from Blackstar. When Blackstar finds bad cats in his clan, he brings down the hammer and does punish them. Raggedstar was willing to let his clan suffer because he didn't want to discipline his kid. Raggedstar was an okay leader at best, but definitely a weak one who was too easily swayed by his own personal baggage and is basically the direct reason that Shadowclan becomes the mess it does for generations onward. Though arguably you could blame Cedarstar for the mess, seeing how he promoted Raggedpaw even after his disastrous plan with the rats.
Klik'ssi Ikub'ra Yes, he was a weak leader. His fatal flaw. Seems that's the problem with Shadowclan either their leaders are too strong(Brokenstar) or too weak(Nightstar).
Yellow: "But... he was your father!" Ragged: "He was nothing but a useless kittypet." Actually, he was also a voluntary absentee father and more than a bit of a dickweed, so you may be understating him a bit with your analysis there, Raggy.
Yellowfang’s Secret Page; 197 Read along if you would like. - Suddenly new cat scents washed over Yellowfang. Rounding a fallen tree, she skidded to a halt as she saw Raggedpelt, Featherstorm, and Hal facing one another. All three cats were panting and wild-eyed, a terrible tension singing among them. “Tell me this cat isn’t my father,” Raggedpelt growled at Featherstorm. His mother flicked her tail. “He gave up the right to be called that a long time ago. It was his decision.” Raggedpelt’s eyes widened as he stared at Hal. “You knew all along? But when I found you, you didn’t say anything!” Hal shrugged. “You want nothing to do with Twolegplace cats. I want nothing to do with the Clans.” “You have no idea what it was like, growing up without a father.” Raggedpelt’s words sounded as if he we’re being choked. “And now I found out that my father is a kittypet! Everything my Clanmates taunted me with is true!” Yellowfang felt her heart tear with sympathy for Raggedpelt, more painful than any wound. She took a pace toward him. “That doesn’t matter!” She told him. “Every cat knows that you are a Shadowclan warrior.” Raggedpelt bounded on her, his teeth bared. “Stay out of this,” He snarled. As Yellowfang gazed at him, unable to leave but not knowing what else she could say, the sounds of fighting drifted through the trees, screeches and the crackling of paws through undergrowth growling steadily nearer. “You should have never come here,” Featherstorm snapped at Hal, then bounded away toward the noise of battle. Raggedpelt turned to his father, stiff-legged with fury, his neck fur bristling and his tail brushed out to twice its size. “Leave now,” He ordered. “And never come back.” Hal gave his chest fur a slow, deliberate lick. “You can’t tell me what to do, son.” He drawled. “I am not your son!” Raggedpelt growled, taking a threatening step forward. “I am a Shadowclan warrior!” “A warrior with kittypet blood in his veins,” Hal taunted him. “Will your so-called clanmates ever forget that?” With a roar of fury Raggedpelt sprang at him; His claws slashed across Hal’s throat. Yellowfang felt agony flash across her neck and through all her body, and for a heartbeat the snow-covered forest turned black in her eyes. When she recovered, panting and blinking, she saw Hal’s body lying limp on the ground with a great gush of scarlet blood flowing from his throat, staining the snow. “You killed him!” She gasped, staring in horror. “He should have left when he had the chance.” Raggedpelt snarled. “But he was your father!” Yellowfang protested. Raggedpelt turned to face her. Yellowfang could see her own horror reflected in his eyes, but his voice was cold. “He was nothing but a useless kittypet.” Before Yellowfang could say more, new cat scent drifted over her. ~This took forever omfg~
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Carl Wheezer The credits had lion king, during thr first half of the video its Sweeny Todd it said it in the credits if you watched the full video, thr part where Raggedpelt attacks Hal is when the lion king song comes on
What he didn't realize is that he caused some twolegs a lot of grief. Edit: After some time, even though Raggedstar's father was a pretty bad father and basically a jerk I can't help but feel sorry for his twolegs who probably loved their cat only for him to go missing for a bit and then find him dead or he never returned.
The twolegs came out from the house, it was late than usual for Hal to not come back. They tried shouting his name, even tried ringing his favourite toy, but he didn't come back, so the Tom twoleg went out and tried to search for Hal, but the the She-Twoleg followed as well. Thye searched and searched, they called and called. Nothing answered. After many hours of searching, they stood upon fur, it look like Hals, but wait, his collar bell and name tag fell, with blood on the snow and fur. When the tom checked the name, he gasped with grief, devastated, he told his mate, and, tears swelling up, they huggedeachother, sitting on the snow, grieving for their dead cat.
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I know I’m a little late, but this scene is spot on! All the lines are right, the designs are correct according to the books, and the animation is lovely! Great job!
MACI BOZEMAN Hal didn’t really deserve to die. Yes, he was a bit of an a-hole, but does that really mean he has to lose his life for it? Dustpaw/pelt was often rude to Fireheart/star, and no one ever says he deserves to die.
I just thought of a completely irrelevant theory; What if Marmalade was Jake's brother? O.o I mean the timeline fits accurately. Pinepaw (Pinestar) met Jake's mother (I forgot her name) and she also had a few other kits. Jake at the time of Ragged pelt and Yellowpaw meeting Marmalade was probably off fathering Scourge (Tiny) at this time. So he wasn't at all mentioned. Marmalade is ginger and well muscled as described in the book, and so was Jake. Idk I was just reading Yellowfang's Secret and I thought of this, and honestly I believe Marmalade is Firestar's uncle.
Marmalade isn’t Jake’s brother, because Jake is her father Jake is everyone’s father Jake is your father (Actually it’d be pretty cool if Marmalade and Jake were siblings)
*We must finish this quickly!* Suddenly, new scents washed over Yellowfang. Rounding a fallen tree, she skidded to a halt as she saw Raggedpelt, Featherstorm and Hal facing one another. All three cats were panting and wide-eyed, a terrible tension singing among them. “Tell me this cat isnt my father,” Raggedpelt growled at Featherstorm. His mother flicked her tail. “He gave up the right to be called that a long time go. It was his decision.” Raggedpelt’s eyes widened as he stared at Hal. “You knew all along? But when I found you, you didn’t say anything!” Hal shrugged. “You want nothing to do with Twolegplace cats. I want nothing to do with the clans.” “You have no idea what it was like, growing up without a father.” Raggedpelt’s words sounded as if he was being choked. “And now I find out that my father was a *kittypet*! Everything my clanmates taunted me with is true!” Yellowfang felt her heart tear with sympathy for Raggedpelt, more painful than any wound. She took a pace toward him. “That doesnt matter!” She told him. “Every cat knows you are a ShadowClan warrior.” Raggedpelt rounded on her, his teeth bared. “Stay out of this,” he snarled. As Yellowfang gazed at him, unable to leave but not knowing what else she could say, the sounds of fighting drifted through the trees, screeches and the crackling of pas through the undergrowth growing steadily nearer. “You should never have come here,” Featherstorm snapped at Hal, then bounded away toward the noise of battle. Raggedpelt turned to his father, stiff-legged with fury, his neck fur bristling and his tail bushed out to twice its size. “Leave now,” he ordered. “And never come back.” Hal gave his chest dur a slow, deliberate lick. “You cant tell me what to do, *son*,” he drawled. “I am not your son!” Raggedpelt growled, taking a threatening step forward. “I am a ShadowClan warrior!” “A warrior with kittypet blood in his veins,” Hal taunted him. “Will your so-called clanmates ever forget that?” With a roar of fury, Raggedpelt sprang at him; his claws slashed across Hal’s throat. Yellowfang felt agony flash across her neck and through her body, and for a heartbeat the snow-covered forest turned black in her eyes. When she recovered, panting and blinking, she saw Hal’s body lying limp on the ground with a great gush of scarlet blood flowing from his throat, staining the snow. “You killed him!” she gasped, staring in horror. “He should have left when he had the chance,” Raggedpelt snarled. “But he was your father!” Yellowfang protested. Raggedpelt turned to face her. Yellowfang could see her own horror reflected in his eyes, but his voice was cold. “He was nothing but a useless kittypet.”
Omg i hate Raggedstar and Hal so much... but this animation is super well done, good job ! and also i love your version of Yellowfang (evryone draw her fat, she's not fat lmao)
I am not trying to sound rude, but the Yellowfang voice actor remind me of pinkbunnygirl43's Yellowfang voice actor! I feel like your Yellowfang and her Yellowfang voice actors match Yellowfang's character so much! Plus, you animation is really smooth and really brings out the emotion carries within the scene!
oh my gosh!! this is amazing! The emotions are shown through the animation, making the viewer understand them better than ever... dude. this is really good.
This is amazing!!,I do see 1 flaw tho. Only 1!! He bit down and blood went on his mouth and around etc. But he stood up, and in between killing him and leaning upwards he somehow cleaned his mouth XD
Yeaaaaaah I noticed a while ago and debated fixing it but figured that the still image of Hal gave him enough time to wipe his mouth in between I guess lmao.
The same arrogance Hal had that got him killed was clearly passed onto Raggedstar which is why he died. If Ragged hadn't stuck his nose in the air and listened to Yellowfang maaaaybe he would not have been slaughtered... hard to say
Raggedpelt: hal, u are ded. No big suprise Hal: *deds* Brokentail: Raggedstar, u are ded. No big surprise RaggedStar: *deds* Yellowfang: Brokenstar, you are ded. No big surprise Brokenstar: *deds*
IM GLAD SOMEONE LOVES WARRIOR CATS!! OMGOMGOMG YOURE MY SEEEENPAAAAAI XD its so cool how did you animate the mouths,the details are masterpiece! And the animation of blood is BEAUTIFUL.Although the animation is AWESOME!
(Comments 10 days later) AHHHH this is even more magical now with all the extra sounds added in! Well done Rose~ Glad I was able to provide the voice for Raggedpelt for this lovely animation!!
Rereading Warriors when you’re older makes you realize how dark it really is, the kits getting killed near the end though- I cried like 5 times reading Yellowfang’s Secret.
![Warrior Cats || All Clan Leaders (In Order) [SPOILER WARNING]](/img/1.gif)
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Hi
I loved it but it made me cry!
roseshards actually there is a reference to the lion king in this bc raggedpelt killed his own father out of rage and jealousy and scar killed his own brother out of rage and jealousy just like raggedpelt
Wow! Your animation is so good! 🤩 I love it.👍🏻❤️
Ėqůinøx yeah I’ve read Mapleshade’s vengeance
Raggedstar: Kills his father
Brokenstar: Also kills his father
Well, I guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree
Yellowfang: Kills her son
You know the Erins are gonna add a cat that's Brokentail's secret son or grandson
a
YellowFang: kills son
*Like father, like son*
Raggedpelt... *I AM YOUR FATHER*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Mocha Chip XD
Mocha Chip Lol I just watched all the star wars movies XDDDDDDDDDD
//claps
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Fortnight
Brokentail:CaLl Me SoN oNe MoRe TiMe!!!!1!!!
Baka Nugget Raptor jesus and i kno da wae hhahahah i feel bad for raggedpelt in this vid he was so mad he killed hal he deserved that anyway
Hal was a asshole
Baka Nugget Raptor jesus and i kno da wae Go home Alexander. That's a order from your commander.
Hal deserved to get killed my raggedpelt
Was that a... *_hAmiLtoN rEfeRenCe?!_*
When Yellowfang went to Starclan:
Wow Raggedstar, you really set a good roll model for our son, Brokenstar.
WHEEEEEZZEEEEEE!
Yoy know she would totally say that too!
Yellowfang: and now brokenstar totally isn't pouring ketchup all over the forest..
I bet that was the first thing she said to him too 💀
XD
sorry to destroy your hopes and dreams but there are no Lion King references other than the music ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Ok y'all wanna know what if there are Lion King references blame the Erins because all the lines are taken directly from the book
roseshards which book?
macaron world Warriors: Yellowfang's Secret
Omg I knew it
I FRICKEN KNEW THAT WAS WHERE THE MUSIC WAS FROM 😂
Cats: (Just for those of you wondering):
Tabby with the red collar: Hal (Raggedpelt's father)
Brown tabby with green eyes: Featherstorm (Raggedpelt's mother)
Tabby without a collar: Raggedpelt
Dark gray she-cat with amber eyes: Yellowfang (Raggedpelt's mate)
Feather Tea thanks
ღ kawaiiicatt ღ no problem ^^
Feather Tea
Thanks! Now if you’ll excuse me I must find latestar
But I thought Raggedpelt was the dad!
Oh nvm it said Raggedpelt's father not the father of brokenstar
MUSIC
owo what’s this
is this music
The Lion King
instrumental song Shadow Land from the lion king on broadway
‘King Of Pride Rock’ From Disney: The Lion King
M U F A S A
"Son"
*_DON'T CALL ME SON_*
*_THIS WAR IS HARD ENOUGH WITHOUT INFIGHTING_*
*Lee called you out. We called his bluff*
*You solve nothing, you aggravate our allies to the south, you're absolutely right, John should have shot him in the mouth, that would've shut him up
SON
I’M NOT YA SON
watch your tone. I am not a maiden in need of defending-
Raggedpelts father is just like:
"Yeah, I aint yo dad"
but then hes like
"nope u cant tell meh what to do SON"
*dammit choose a side*
THE SOUND EFFECTS AND MUSIC OHHHH MAN.....THEYRE SO GOOD!!!!! Again I’m glad I got to voice Yellowfang!!
Thank you!
I love your yellowfang voice too! Its amazing!
Thank you so much!!
AHHH Your voice is amazing. It's so well fitted for yellowfang. You did a amazing job. ❤
Thank you so much!! :’D
Awww Raggedstar looks soo fluffy!!
He will scratch your face If you do that
mercury the peaceful kitten the fluffier you are the more evil you are
floofer
Aw look Raggedpelt is killing Hal in cold blood, how cute
No offense, but he wouldn't be too happy if you said that to his face.
I feel like I'm the only one who thinks Hal deserved to be killed
I do he was meen
Nightyarrow :3 just because featherstorm loved hal means she was a hoe?
Fair enough, but Raggedstar spent his entire life wondering about his dad and feeling a some sort of sense that something was missing without him. He was upset about it literally all the time and it was really affecting him and his behavior. And many other cats in the clan were making rumors about him and his father. Eventually he sneaks out and after a lot of confrontation he meets Hal, who lies and claims he isn't his father. Maybe he doesn't entirely DESERVE to be killed, but after finally meeting his dad and having him taunt him and make fun of him over what he has been picked on and whispered about for his entire life and discovering he was a lying douchebag, I can definitely see why Raggedstar acted out in the moment. Raggedstar was kinda shook by his own actions afterwards but it also enabled him to feel a sense of freedom, without feeling like some sort of outcast within his own clan
Yeah.
roseshards ya he was a idiot :T
I need to read this book
Animal Parade lol same
Lol i read it like two years ago so i hardly remember anything including this XD
I barely just finished it
Omgomgomgomgomgomg y e s y o u d O. Yellowfangs secret is one of the first super editions I read, and I love it, it really gives you insight that she's not just a "Grumpy old she" And her life was quite dark, and difficult. Anyways I freaking love yellowfang 👌👌👌✌
I finished it a long time ago but it's a really interesting book ^^
0:58
Run away Scar, run away and never return...
WAit. Wrong one
It’s the music it’s from the Lion King.
Oh hell yeah that sweeney music !!
Aaa this is so good the lip sync and voice acting is so impressive !
the music is battle of priderock from the lion king
@@frostlion5694 and also the cattle scene when Scar killed Mufasa, though I could be mistaken on that.
Damn like!! I'm honestly so surprised you guys like this so much haha. Like.... I had to make this in like 6 weeks outside of school?? But like??? I'm just,,, I'm so glad you guys all like it and are leaving such positive comments it means a lot to me, thank you ;_;
roseshards This is a really nice animation, the book is amazing!
roseshards np ^3^ you deserve the nice comments
I saw Harry Potter in your comment somehow what what whatt
roseshards good for you. Your following your dreams.
Gaah!! I love this art style so much! The cats are so fluffy
Hal: _"Raggedpelt, I am your father."_
Raggedpelt: _"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"_
-cough Star Wars reference-
Lol
And then Raggedstar gets killed by Brokenstar x3
Karma is a bitch.
Great video :D i love it!
Then Brokenstar gets killed by Yellowfang (These guys need to stop with their fam murders)
Errr, no. Yellowfang kills Brokenstar twice
Yellowfang kills Brokenstar twice (x2)
Manulfacture
And it all comes back to Yellowfang. Witnessed murder, gave birth to a murderer, and committed murder.
Like father, like son.
Raggedstar: *kills father*
Brokenstar: *later kills Raggedstar his father*
Me: Well I see where that trait comes from...
If I'd just found out that my father was a kittypet I would have killed him too, especially if he said stuff like Hal just did
Raggedstar reaped what he sowed. The same way he killed his father over so little, Brokenstar killed him. Raggedstar becoming leader was one of the root causes of Shadowclan's problems
Klik'ssi Ikub'ra
Eh, Raggedstar wasn't really a bad leader. He was just too good of a father. He quite literally would have given the world to Brokenstar. He saw too late the type of cat his son truly was.
If you are unable to instill values in your son and let him run wild while spoiling him, then he's not a good father. Even when he saw full well how Brokenpaw was disobeying Nightcloud, Raggedstar didn't come in there to give him a different mentor or to enforce Nightcloud's rules. He let Brokenpaw and Brokentail get away with everything instead of just telling him "no" at one point, and that is part of being a parent: instilling common decency and respect.
Brokenstar grew up thinking that he deserves the world on a platter thanks to Raggedstar, and that attitude was probably the most harmful to him, even worse than the bullying from his siblings. Raggedstar was far from being a wise leader when he showed so much bias.
Klik'ssi Ikub'ra
Raggedstar really wasn't a bad leader. Out of Shadowclan's dark history, he and Blackstar are some of the better leaders. No he isn't the best father in the world. Even if he didn't mean to, I know he ruined his son. Perhaps he was trying to avoid what Hal did to him, I don't know.
Raggedstar was all too willing to ignore Brokentail's excesses and look the other way even when he was doing all kinds of horrible things without so much as a word against him. Around the point that Brokentail started asking apprentices to hang themselves by their jaws to a tree and causing them physical harm, any good leader would have intervened, but Raggedstar doesn't lift so much as a whisker at it.
That's what separates him from Blackstar. When Blackstar finds bad cats in his clan, he brings down the hammer and does punish them. Raggedstar was willing to let his clan suffer because he didn't want to discipline his kid. Raggedstar was an okay leader at best, but definitely a weak one who was too easily swayed by his own personal baggage and is basically the direct reason that Shadowclan becomes the mess it does for generations onward. Though arguably you could blame Cedarstar for the mess, seeing how he promoted Raggedpaw even after his disastrous plan with the rats.
Klik'ssi Ikub'ra
Yes, he was a weak leader. His fatal flaw. Seems that's the problem with Shadowclan either their leaders are too strong(Brokenstar) or too weak(Nightstar).
Yellow: "But... he was your father!"
Ragged: "He was nothing but a useless kittypet."
Actually, he was also a voluntary absentee father and more than a bit of a dickweed, so you may be understating him a bit with your analysis there, Raggy.
1:06
THAT IS THE LIFE OF ME
I LOVE THAT PART AAAA
Believer The Dog son
Believer The Dog you cant twll me what to do.
S o n
I love the way he puts so much stress XD
Michelle Sibichen ikr!
Raggedstar be like “CALL ME SON ONE MORE TIME!”
I love that part SON
What’s up with this family killing each other? Raggedpelt killed Hal
Brokentail killed Raggedstar
Yellowfang killed Brokenstar...
Holy macaroni!
good question 🐱🐈
These Family members like to kill eachother huh
I got Yellowfangs Secret for Christmas 👍
Same here.
Same
Yellowfang’s Secret
Page; 197
Read along if you would like.
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Suddenly new cat scents washed over Yellowfang. Rounding a fallen tree, she skidded to a halt as she saw Raggedpelt, Featherstorm, and Hal facing one another. All three cats were panting and wild-eyed, a terrible tension singing among them. “Tell me this cat isn’t my father,” Raggedpelt growled at Featherstorm. His mother flicked her tail. “He gave up the right to be called that a long time ago. It was his decision.” Raggedpelt’s eyes widened as he stared at Hal. “You knew all along? But when I found you, you didn’t say anything!” Hal shrugged. “You want nothing to do with Twolegplace cats. I want nothing to do with the Clans.”
“You have no idea what it was like, growing up without a father.” Raggedpelt’s words sounded as if he we’re being choked. “And now I found out that my father is a kittypet! Everything my Clanmates taunted me with is true!” Yellowfang felt her heart tear with sympathy for Raggedpelt, more painful than any wound. She took a pace toward him. “That doesn’t matter!” She told him. “Every cat knows that you are a Shadowclan warrior.” Raggedpelt bounded on her, his teeth bared. “Stay out of this,” He snarled. As Yellowfang gazed at him, unable to leave but not knowing what else she could say, the sounds of fighting drifted through the trees, screeches and the crackling of paws through undergrowth growling steadily nearer. “You should have never come here,” Featherstorm snapped at Hal, then bounded away toward the noise of battle. Raggedpelt turned to his father, stiff-legged with fury, his neck fur bristling and his tail brushed out to twice its size. “Leave now,” He ordered. “And never come back.” Hal gave his chest fur a slow, deliberate lick. “You can’t tell me what to do, son.” He drawled. “I am not your son!” Raggedpelt growled, taking a threatening step forward. “I am a Shadowclan warrior!”
“A warrior with kittypet blood in his veins,” Hal taunted him. “Will your so-called clanmates ever forget that?” With a roar of fury Raggedpelt sprang at him; His claws slashed across Hal’s throat. Yellowfang felt agony flash across her neck and through all her body, and for a heartbeat the snow-covered forest turned black in her eyes. When she recovered, panting and blinking, she saw Hal’s body lying limp on the ground with a great gush of scarlet blood flowing from his throat, staining the snow. “You killed him!” She gasped, staring in horror. “He should have left when he had the chance.” Raggedpelt snarled. “But he was your father!” Yellowfang protested. Raggedpelt turned to face her. Yellowfang could see her own horror reflected in his eyes, but his voice was cold. “He was nothing but a useless kittypet.” Before Yellowfang could say more, new cat scent drifted over her.
~This took forever omfg~
thank you!!
Much appreciated
Hey, a little MORE self-advertisement...
But it's confirmed that I'm gonna be making another one of these in the near future! In fact, I've even contacted someone on RUclips and gotten a price quote for how much an original soundtrack for it would be! And I'm hoping to hire my voice actors very soon.
However, there's just ONE small problem... I don't have the funds to keep making these big projects in the future!
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I just wanted to say I rlly love these projects and how creative you are in fact a lot better than me alone so I hope you :
-take your time-
-put 100 present into everything u do-
- have fun while making these-
-continue what U AND ONLY U like doing in these-
- don’t lisin to the people who bully you and continue on-
Hope u have I good time and I hope u continue the good work
Big fan , goodbye this is Demi
Out :3
Oh and srry about the ones with crosses across them u can read those if you would like to tho
I would make a video about that :D
roseshards I think you should do Red's reaction to Hal's violent death.
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The lion king music made it sound amazing I love it!
Cinderheart Warrior VA and Covers the lion king music was only at the credits, the scene had music from Sweeny Todd.
Bouldertail 76
No, there was Lion King Music during the final scene.
Carl Wheezer The credits had lion king, during thr first half of the video its Sweeny Todd it said it in the credits if you watched the full video, thr part where Raggedpelt attacks Hal is when the lion king song comes on
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I know that's what I was meaning by the final scene.
What he didn't realize is that he caused some twolegs a lot of grief.
Edit: After some time, even though Raggedstar's father was a pretty bad father and basically a jerk I can't help but feel sorry for his twolegs who probably loved their cat only for him to go missing for a bit and then find him dead or he never returned.
The twolegs came out from the house, it was late than usual for Hal to not come back. They tried shouting his name, even tried ringing his favourite toy, but he didn't come back, so the Tom twoleg went out and tried to search for Hal, but the the She-Twoleg followed as well. Thye searched and searched, they called and called. Nothing answered. After many hours of searching, they stood upon fur, it look like Hals, but wait, his collar bell and name tag fell, with blood on the snow and fur. When the tom checked the name, he gasped with grief, devastated, he told his mate, and, tears swelling up, they huggedeachother, sitting on the snow, grieving for their dead cat.
@@kitsuneWC Omg my heart!
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roseshards can i dub this video to another languaue please?I will put ur link in h
The description and support you
Go ahead!
Thx ^w^
Ok, so um, I forgot who the characters are, oops can someone tell me please?
I'm proud of these Hamilton based comments.
Hal: You can't tell me what to do.
Hal: Son
Raggedpelt: *I'm not your son.*
His poor owner must be devastated that he never came back home T~T
I know I’m a little late, but this scene is spot on! All the lines are right, the designs are correct according to the books, and the animation is lovely! Great job!
Raggedpelt : kills his father
The Lion King music in the background : -
*intense sadness*
"He's still your father you should respect him!"
*I'll start respecting him when he starts treating me like his child*
the paws crunching the snow sounded like spongebob and im crying because that’s all i can think about help
is it just me or does yellowfang look adorable
This gives off so much Star Wars vibes: no ragged’pelt I am your father
"You have no idea what it was like, Growing up without a father.."
Me: *Bruh*
Everyone: (talks about the scene)
Me: LION KING MUSIC?!
Hal is an ultimate troll and Raggedstar got what he deserved for this.
Elise Leon not really.
MACI BOZEMAN
Hal didn’t really deserve to die. Yes, he was a bit of an a-hole, but does that really mean he has to lose his life for it? Dustpaw/pelt was often rude to Fireheart/star, and no one ever says he deserves to die.
@@jewelsthecat5331 Sandpaw too
@@jewelsthecat5331 Well Raggedstar to be abusive So
@@jewelsthecat5331 while I agree, he was a complete idiot for egging Raggedpelt on
Hal’s death was literally the “You can’t tell me what to do” meme from the asdf movies.
EVRYTHING IN THIS ANIMATION IS BEAUTIFUL! THE EXPRESSION, THE VOICE ACTING, AND THE LIP SYNC! GREAT JOB MY DUDE!
I was thinking of reading Yellowfangs secret, but wasnt sure. After I watched this i was like. "yep im reading this."
Raggedpelt: Daddy?
*DO I LOOK LIKE YO DAD?*
I’m seeing this years later but OH MY GOD THIS IS INCREDIBLE
I AM SO GLAD I FOUND THIS! IT'S INCREDIBLE! 0O0
The way how you draw Yellowfang, Tigerstar or Raggedpelt is amazing! Somehow meets the way how I imagine them in the books
is this the soundtrack from the lion king? anyways this looks suuuuper good! nice job :)
edit: o wait it says that at the end haha
Marija Miletic its actually from a Musical called Sweeny Todd
@@bouldertail7614 no
THIS IS UNDERRATED 👏it’s Sooo SMOOTH ROSESHARDS KEEP IT UP!!!
I just thought of a completely irrelevant theory; What if Marmalade was Jake's brother? O.o I mean the timeline fits accurately. Pinepaw (Pinestar) met Jake's mother (I forgot her name) and she also had a few other kits. Jake at the time of Ragged pelt and Yellowpaw meeting Marmalade was probably off fathering Scourge (Tiny) at this time. So he wasn't at all mentioned. Marmalade is ginger and well muscled as described in the book, and so was Jake.
Idk I was just reading Yellowfang's Secret and I thought of this, and honestly I believe Marmalade is Firestar's uncle.
Diana Potosme jakes mom is a white and ginger she cat with blue eyes and a pink collar named Crystal
Marmalade isn’t Jake’s brother, because Jake is her father
Jake is everyone’s father
Jake is your father
(Actually it’d be pretty cool if Marmalade and Jake were siblings)
Jake's mother was Crystal, and his siblings were Ferris and Whiskers. His kids were...
*everyone.*
*Lion King Music plays in the background*
That suits this book so well XD
This is freaking amazingggg!
Oml Roseshards, you’ve improved so much I love your journey through animation so much! I hope one day to be as great as you!
Holy crimbles this is so well conveyed!!!!!!!! Love it!!!!
I swear the end music sounds like LionKing, just me? This art is amazing btw!
This is so nice!
The background Sweeney Todd music is what gets me :,)
*We must finish this quickly!*
Suddenly, new scents washed over Yellowfang. Rounding a fallen tree, she skidded to a halt as she saw Raggedpelt, Featherstorm and Hal facing one another. All three cats were panting and wide-eyed, a terrible tension singing among them.
“Tell me this cat isnt my father,” Raggedpelt growled at Featherstorm.
His mother flicked her tail. “He gave up the right to be called that a long time go. It was his decision.”
Raggedpelt’s eyes widened as he stared at Hal. “You knew all along? But when I found you, you didn’t say anything!”
Hal shrugged. “You want nothing to do with Twolegplace cats. I want nothing to do with the clans.”
“You have no idea what it was like, growing up without a father.” Raggedpelt’s words sounded as if he was being choked. “And now I find out that my father was a *kittypet*! Everything my clanmates taunted me with is true!”
Yellowfang felt her heart tear with sympathy for Raggedpelt, more painful than any wound. She took a pace toward him. “That doesnt matter!” She told him. “Every cat knows you are a ShadowClan warrior.”
Raggedpelt rounded on her, his teeth bared. “Stay out of this,” he snarled.
As Yellowfang gazed at him, unable to leave but not knowing what else she could say, the sounds of fighting drifted through the trees, screeches and the crackling of pas through the undergrowth growing steadily nearer.
“You should never have come here,” Featherstorm snapped at Hal, then bounded away toward the noise of battle.
Raggedpelt turned to his father, stiff-legged with fury, his neck fur bristling and his tail bushed out to twice its size. “Leave now,” he ordered. “And never come back.”
Hal gave his chest dur a slow, deliberate lick. “You cant tell me what to do, *son*,” he drawled.
“I am not your son!” Raggedpelt growled, taking a threatening step forward. “I am a ShadowClan warrior!”
“A warrior with kittypet blood in his veins,” Hal taunted him. “Will your so-called clanmates ever forget that?”
With a roar of fury, Raggedpelt sprang at him; his claws slashed across Hal’s throat. Yellowfang felt agony flash across her neck and through her body, and for a heartbeat the snow-covered forest turned black in her eyes.
When she recovered, panting and blinking, she saw Hal’s body lying limp on the ground with a great gush of scarlet blood flowing from his throat, staining the snow. “You killed him!” she gasped, staring in horror.
“He should have left when he had the chance,” Raggedpelt snarled.
“But he was your father!” Yellowfang protested.
Raggedpelt turned to face her. Yellowfang could see her own horror reflected in his eyes, but his voice was cold. “He was nothing but a useless kittypet.”
Yellowfang looks so pretty :0
“You.... KILLED HIM”
i havent read yellowfangs secret in so long i completely forgot about this
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!! I'M IN AWE!!
Omg! This is so cool! Great animation! Thus was such a shocking scene for me in the book!
Happy birthday!!
Sorry for the late response but thank you sooo much!
I just now read this scene, and knew that I had to come and rewatch this video! It’s a job well done 👏
OMG THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
This needs to be the cannon Yellowfang voice
Omg i hate Raggedstar and Hal so much... but this animation is super well done, good job ! and also i love your version of Yellowfang (evryone draw her fat, she's not fat lmao)
Just read this part in the book and you animated it BEAUTIFULLY this is exactly how I imagined this sene.💚 Great job!
I am not trying to sound rude, but the Yellowfang voice actor remind me of pinkbunnygirl43's Yellowfang voice actor! I feel like your Yellowfang and her Yellowfang voice actors match Yellowfang's character so much! Plus, you animation is really smooth and really brings out the emotion carries within the scene!
MACI BOZEMAN
they did well actually, maybe just not having as good of a mic as the others
I love pinkbunnygirl43
It’s 4 years later and your art style hasn’t changed much!
*Raggedstar Kills Father*
*Brokenstar Kills Father*
The Apple Doesnt Fall Far From The Tree
Oh, how original
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oh my gosh!! this is amazing! The emotions are shown through the animation, making the viewer understand them better than ever... dude. this is really good.
This is amazing!!,I do see 1 flaw tho. Only 1!! He bit down and blood went on his mouth and around etc. But he stood up, and in between killing him and leaning upwards he somehow cleaned his mouth XD
Yeaaaaaah I noticed a while ago and debated fixing it but figured that the still image of Hal gave him enough time to wipe his mouth in between I guess lmao.
The same arrogance Hal had that got him killed was clearly passed onto Raggedstar which is why he died. If Ragged hadn't stuck his nose in the air and listened to Yellowfang maaaaybe he would not have been slaughtered... hard to say
Raggedpelt: hal, u are ded. No big suprise
Hal: *deds*
Brokentail: Raggedstar, u are ded. No big surprise
RaggedStar: *deds*
Yellowfang: Brokenstar, you are ded. No big surprise
Brokenstar: *deds*
I can’t stop watching this beautiful animation. The art, the animation, the expressions, the voice acting..! It’s all done so amazingly! KEEP IT UP!!!
IM GLAD SOMEONE LOVES WARRIOR CATS!! OMGOMGOMG YOURE MY SEEEENPAAAAAI XD its so cool how did you animate the mouths,the details are masterpiece! And the animation of blood is BEAUTIFUL.Although the animation is AWESOME!
I love the Sweeney Todd melody in the background! Nice touch! That was my favorite movie!
cool! you added background music! ^^
Toxic The Cat what does that have to do with her comment?
(Comments 10 days later) AHHHH this is even more magical now with all the extra sounds added in! Well done Rose~ Glad I was able to provide the voice for Raggedpelt for this lovely animation!!
Ow this is pretty good
Ah! I love the voice acting and lip sync! It’s awesome!
Ragged star: kills his father
Broken star: kills his father
Like father like son 😂
Yellowfang's voice acting was amazing!! I loved that raspy but still young voice!
Thank you so much!!!
Rereading Warriors when you’re older makes you realize how dark it really is, the kits getting killed near the end though- I cried like 5 times reading Yellowfang’s Secret.
YOOOO this is fantastic!! An amazing job, I love the expressions and the direction, and the voices were amazing too!!
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I was following along
Congrats on 100k Rose! 🥳
Ok ok the thing i don’t like about warriors is cats can’t break skin so easily with teeth
I just realized that some villains I remember most are brown tabbies-
One Eye (i think, not sure)
Tigerstar/claw
Brokenstar
DonT CAlL mE sON
Mr.Trashcan (HamiltOn)
Good thing Firestar(formerly know as rusty) came along and provide Yellowfang the company she need, even though they were on a rocky start.
What is with all the son kills father stuff in this series?
“A warrior with kittypet blood in it’s veins.”
-I don’t know their name, but whoever it was, Longtail stole their line in Into the Wild
Hal
Brokentail: *Hey*
Raggedstar: *Hey*
Brokentail: **Kills his own dad**
Raggedstar:
*WHAT*
God, the expressions, the animation, storyboard, voice acting (I really like Yellowfang's raspy voice ^^) it's sooo damn good :O
Wait wait- HOW DIDNT RAGGED STAR GO TO THE DARKFOREST? BROKENSTAR DID
@@RIPPEDEYEZ one of those is true because like- HELL EVEN ASHFUR HE BETTER BE IN THE DARK FOREST
Raggedstar was pretty bad, but the authors are weird with how they choose some cats to go to different afterlifes
@@hivecicle they think abusive cats ate good lol
@@Mustachemuttt yeahh they're not the best at writing honestly ^^'
BrokenStar :You have no idea what it’s like.. growing up without a father
Me:No but I do
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