How to Improve Drawing Your First Manga | Manga Challenge Feedback & Results!

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  • Опубликовано: 28 ноя 2024

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  • @aphlearntodrawmanga
    @aphlearntodrawmanga  5 дней назад +3

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  • @grey_dragongaming9501
    @grey_dragongaming9501 5 дней назад +22

    Dear Learn to Draw manga, i started to improve my manga just by learning from y'all!

  • @Moodflare
    @Moodflare 5 дней назад +13

    MAN MY HEART RACED WHEN I SAW THE NOTIFICATIONS, though I didn't make it to be critiqued, I learned from this video, and actually hyped to see another challenge, I would love to join!
    (BAHAHA! ATLEAST I SAW MY YONKOMA AT 0:19) (Drakey)

    • @Saski11-a
      @Saski11-a 5 дней назад +1

      i saw another person from his servers yonkoma there also

    • @ShizukuTheDragoon
      @ShizukuTheDragoon День назад

      mine wasnt even featured lol ;v;
      i wasnt expecting to be anyway. but which one was yours, young drakey?

  • @SadiqAuwaluSani-ds7lb
    @SadiqAuwaluSani-ds7lb 5 дней назад +15

    I already made mine . OH NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! Its to late 😢😢pls make another challenge please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

    • @Pikanyaaaa
      @Pikanyaaaa 5 дней назад +1

      Yeah we need more of this challenges

  • @LonelyGuy-xr3qh
    @LonelyGuy-xr3qh 5 дней назад +10

    NGL i was crushed to find out i didnt get into the 5 but everyone who didnt is.. still good..all of them are digital for some reason

    • @Pooppeelife
      @Pooppeelife 5 дней назад

      i mean it was 300 sumbissons but at least u tried yk dont get discouraged lol

    • @LonelyGuy-xr3qh
      @LonelyGuy-xr3qh 5 дней назад

      @@Pooppeelife Yeah. It was the first challenge i tried anyway

    • @reyleighgoat
      @reyleighgoat 4 дня назад +1

      ​@@LonelyGuy-xr3qhI don't think they choose those 5 based on skill yk, it was randomized

  • @S1mplyConfusing
    @S1mplyConfusing 5 дней назад +13

    THE BEST CHANNEL HAS UPLOADED

  • @MrJakotic
    @MrJakotic 3 дня назад

    Disappointed I didn't make the cut but at the same time, I'm well aware I still have a long way to go when it comes to my art style and drawing technique. Ive been drawing since I was 13 (27 now) but the first time I tried to make a manga a couple years ago it became pretty obvious I wasnt as good as I needed to be nor did I ever take drawing as serious as I should have and needed to practice drawing things I wasn't so comfortable with. This channel has been a really big help for me and I will say, the worst thing anyone could do when they feel like they're not good enough at something they're passionate about is give it up. Sometimes it helps to go back to the basics and rebuild from the ground up. I just wanted to speak some encouragement to the others who submitted a yonkoma but weren't featured in the video. This was a learning experience and a small but significant step for everyone! Also congrats to those who were featured!

  • @LiyuKaruma
    @LiyuKaruma 5 дней назад +4

    Hey Learn To Draw Manga, I just wanted to say, these types of vids help me lot especially because actual drawings are shown along with the advice... which helps us look at the comparisons and understand more... So, I'm looking forward to more of these in the future! Am not 18 yet so sadly I don't know what to do or anything- Really, appreciate these vids. Thank you. ❤

  • @BatKek
    @BatKek 5 дней назад +5

    For submission 2 it would funnier if the character realized he forgot to buy coffee when he was already home and looked at the empty coffee jar

    • @hirek.art_0
      @hirek.art_0 5 дней назад +2

      I was thinking about that because it's how it actually happened, but i feared it would have been to much of a jump between panels. Also I wanted the last panel to be a return to the shop as a conclusion. Result of that would be to much juggle between scenes in just four panels. That's why I moved punch line in front of a shop.

  • @Moodflare
    @Moodflare 5 дней назад +2

    *NYAHAHA!* After these 4-koma Manga Challenge, a new challenge concludes.
    Especially for those who did not get picked for the video and crushed as me.
    The challenge is to *never give up!* Are ya' up for the challenge? >:3

  • @HappinessOlaleye-pw4rg
    @HappinessOlaleye-pw4rg 5 дней назад +4

    I love your channel im planning to make my first one-shot next year thx!!!!

  • @lunarfifthstudios
    @lunarfifthstudios 4 дня назад

    Congrats to all who participated! 🎉
    I was not as prepared as I thought, but for the next challenge I will be ready, thank you for helping to reignite my inner artist flame!
    🔥🎨🙌

  • @Artgalaxystar
    @Artgalaxystar 3 дня назад

    Wow .this was really fun .thx for the challenge🤩✍🏻

  • @mister-canada367
    @mister-canada367 5 дней назад +2

    Aw man, I didn't get picked ;), oh well. Its really cool to see some of the manga's I saw already on Instagram in this video tho.

  • @TheBAWB
    @TheBAWB 5 дней назад +1

    Yall gon make more small challenges like this in the future? Was rlly fun participating even if my yonkoma wasnt featured. Anyways thanks for this challenge atleast :D

  • @hirek.art_0
    @hirek.art_0 5 дней назад

    Thank you so much for feedback! 😊

  • @ragibhasan8099
    @ragibhasan8099 3 дня назад +1

    I want to send my manga 😊😊😊

  • @bladewing-174
    @bladewing-174 5 дней назад +1

    i didnt win but i had fun with my yonkoma . i would like another challenge and this time i'm winning for real

  • @Violet-s4u
    @Violet-s4u 5 дней назад

    Please do more challenges like this!

  • @dailygamer-sp9wx
    @dailygamer-sp9wx 5 дней назад +1

    can we get more of these challenges

  • @ZFREntertainment
    @ZFREntertainment День назад

    I Just straight up missed this whole contest, oh well i'll do one anyway for my consultation

  • @ricksquiggles2473
    @ricksquiggles2473 5 дней назад

    Great video on the break down of the entries. These kind of videos are more helpful then some tutorials out there. I'm certain there are a lot of viewers like myself that would like to see more content like this!

    • @aphlearntodrawmanga
      @aphlearntodrawmanga  4 дня назад

      Thanks for the feedback! What was your biggest takeaway from this?

  • @Mikaact4
    @Mikaact4 4 дня назад

    You should do a livestream covering all of them

  • @alonso4668
    @alonso4668 4 дня назад

    Gg's, i was two steps two late, hoping for a new challenge soon!

  • @tjazzartcomics
    @tjazzartcomics 5 дней назад +2

    Quick question, will there be another yokoma challenge in the future?

  • @AnoobishManga
    @AnoobishManga 4 дня назад

    This was a really fun challenge! It's good practice and I enjoyed the process and the experience, no regrets here 😊
    Also good job to all the participants who made it 👏 😁 ❤

  • @samuraineonstorm4325
    @samuraineonstorm4325 5 дней назад +1

    How is it going 😊😊😊

  • @GamerKing-vl9jp
    @GamerKing-vl9jp 5 дней назад

    this is the best channel ever

  • @Yaz-j4y
    @Yaz-j4y 5 дней назад +1

    This was an awesome video! Can you make a part two please?

    • @aphlearntodrawmanga
      @aphlearntodrawmanga  4 дня назад +2

      Hmm… 🤔
      Part 2 on what topic?

    • @Yaz-j4y
      @Yaz-j4y 4 дня назад +1

      @aphlearntodrawmanga Maybe a continuation of critiques on more yonkoma

  • @AntwaineFerrellJr
    @AntwaineFerrellJr 5 дней назад

    You're one of the greatest.

  • @Gojo-s6s4s
    @Gojo-s6s4s 5 дней назад +3

    I want a new challenge I was late please 🙏🥺

    • @LiyuKaruma
      @LiyuKaruma 5 дней назад +2

      Yes same 😭😭😭

    • @Gojo-s6s4s
      @Gojo-s6s4s 4 дня назад +1

      @@LiyuKaruma let's colab you and me I am starting a manga if you
      -yes. -No

    • @LiyuKaruma
      @LiyuKaruma 4 дня назад

      @Gojo-s6s4s ...wait rlly?? :0 wanna perhaps discuss on insta or discord or wattpad or somewhere?

  • @SAJihan2004
    @SAJihan2004 5 дней назад +2

    A question to you, can I make yonkoma with only pencil and paper for practicing? Because it will take more than a year for me to buy the digital supplies. It's just for practice more than actual drawing. And I don't want to use traditional inking supplies.

    • @3.z68
      @3.z68 5 дней назад

      im sure you can!, in the original challenge video they mentioned the opcion of using digital like if the standard was making it in traditional, i think these yonkomas end up being all in digital only of coincidence.

    • @mister-canada367
      @mister-canada367 5 дней назад +1

      @@3.z68 I saw a lot of people make their yonkoma's in traditional on Instagram, and since manga was originally made with traditional, I don't think there will be any issues doing it that way, altho, it might be a bit harder since if you mess up on something it wont be as easy to fix haha.

  • @richardbishop3818
    @richardbishop3818 5 дней назад

    I have a question about the number of panels on a page.
    Does anyone know if the number of panels on a page, is linked to the speed of what's happening in a particular moment, or is the number of panels used to give more of a cinematic feel to the current story, and the number of panels on the page just happens to be the amount on the page?
    Are more panels suppose to be used when characters are talking or explaining events?
    Are fewer panels used for quick/decisive movements?
    Is it one scene per page?
    It might just be because I have just started, but there doesn't seem to be a rhyme or reason for the number of panels. I wont ask for clarity on why they are the shapes they are. From what I have been seeing, it seems to be the size of the panel is to cinematically fit the angle of what's going on and the number on the page just happens to be the number on the page.
    An answer to the above would be appreciated
    Thank you

  • @STUDIOSAM-f9m
    @STUDIOSAM-f9m 4 дня назад

    Please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 keep another contest like this

  • @krazkaykay2002
    @krazkaykay2002 2 дня назад

    What tech platform are you using to edit these?

  • @birudagreat1427
    @birudagreat1427 5 дней назад +3

    Is ki, sho, ten, ketsu, the same as beginning, middle, climax, and ending? 🤔

    • @LonelyGuy-xr3qh
      @LonelyGuy-xr3qh 5 дней назад

      swap out middle for conflict

    • @birudagreat1427
      @birudagreat1427 5 дней назад

      @LonelyGuy-xr3qh I'm more used to the saying begining middle and ending since the middle means the conflict and the climax of the story

    • @euwon_animation
      @euwon_animation 5 дней назад

      ​@@birudagreat1427beginning, middle and ending is more Western Three-act structure. It's similar, but conflict and climax are separated and have more weight for the story.

    • @euwon_animation
      @euwon_animation 5 дней назад

      So it's not very different, but not exactly the same

    • @birudagreat1427
      @birudagreat1427 5 дней назад

      @@euwon_animation alright

  • @ruka5696
    @ruka5696 4 дня назад

    Maaf saya tidak boleh berbahasa inggeris tapi saya ada soalan. Manakah lebih mudah untuk membuat manga? Melukis manga secara digital atau diatas kertas? (Translate)

  • @Zaxh01
    @Zaxh01 4 дня назад

    I’m extremely sad but I was really hoping mine was good 😭.

  • @RossC-Michaelis
    @RossC-Michaelis 4 дня назад

    My problem was I didn't use something that happened to me. I drew something about one of my OC's. 😂

  • @ShizukuTheDragoon
    @ShizukuTheDragoon День назад

    i entered seven competitions, didnt win for a single one of them ;) i got close though

  • @gokuwrightattorneyatlaw5227
    @gokuwrightattorneyatlaw5227 5 дней назад

    "I hope the seller steps on a lego everyday "😂

  • @Curlyxtail
    @Curlyxtail 5 дней назад +1

    I wish there was a discord server

    • @mister-canada367
      @mister-canada367 5 дней назад +2

      I wish there was one too, but they probably don't want to make one because it would take focus away from their main course. (just a possible reason) plus they are a pain to manage

  • @mustaphafunny6255
    @mustaphafunny6255 2 дня назад

    Hi I’m 12 and do you think my manga is promising it bassicly a mideveal fantasy world where everyone has there own class and mark the world was made by a dragon it was a empty void where the dragon breath fire and the world was made it left a egg the dragon king fast forward there’s a chef boy yagi buki who wants to be the greatest weapon master after a quick fight with a mage haru Draco he runs from the village to beat the king

  • @jenniferm914
    @jenniferm914 5 дней назад

    💖

  • @exploding-creeper
    @exploding-creeper 4 дня назад

    Well congrats to the lucky 5 🫠 I didn't make it but atleast I tried