Toilet-bound Hanako-kun animatic || If I could tell her - Dear Evan Hansen

Hello! welcome to my first animatic video! I really love this song and It's been in my head for weeks! I'm actually quite embarrassed about the outcome because I still can't deliver the animatic the way I wanted, but I know that I need to start somewhere and learn from my mistakes :D
About this animatic and the choice of song, I know that the real song meant to be evan telling the story of Connor's POV about how much he loves his sister. But please imagine in this animatic it's about Hanako-kun wanted to tell Yashiro how much he loves her.
Please tell me what you think about the story in this animatic in the coment section! Thank you for coming and enjoy watching!