I thought they met for coffee to apologize earlier. Did it happen twice in the last third of the story? Unfortunately, it kind of ruins a good story. Did anyone else notice this?
A beautiful story with great depth about having determination to overcome challenges,having compassion and forgiving those who have wronged and hurt you in the worst way. Iuv it.
A beautifully crafted story, in a very true sense the story of a journey from a cruel act with all its consequences. An unfolding story of courage against adversity that leads us to a beautiful ending, leaving us with a belief that the love between the daughter and her mother will survive all.
Lovey illustration of the strong characters - who's the artist? What a relief notvm to see different faces appearing for the same persons as has happened before.
Yeah, why did they meet a second time? Olivia already apologized once and gave a donation towards Lily’s cause. They met again for Olivia’s guilt or what?? It also doesn’t say why Lily and her mother were dismissed from Olivia’s. Good story overall. Narrator was good too.
I think the repetition is simply due to the back and forth that's common in these stories. The way Olivia threw Lily and her mother out was really inhumane and that's the sad part of the story. If it had been done in a politer way there wouldn't have been a problem since they were not part of her family. Suffering also gives people a surge of energy to do what they need to do. Lily worked much harder than she perhaps might have if she was living a comfortable life. Good story.
IN LIFE EVERYTHING HAPPENS FOR A REASON. NO ONE KNOWS THE FUTURE. IN EVERYTHING WE OUGHT TO GIVE GOD THANKS EVEN IN ADVERSITIES. THE FACT THAT SHE AND HER MUM WERE KICKED OUT WAS THE BEGINNING OF HER JOURNEY TO HER DESTINY FOR PROJECTS HELPING IN SOCIAL JUSTICE AND THE VALUES SHE CULTIVATED. IT ALSO SHOWED THE POWER OF FORGIVENESS DESPITE HER STRUGGLES. IT ALSO HELPED OLIVIA . IT MADE SARAH A STRONG RESILIENT PERSON . GOOD MORALS TO A GOOD STORY.
Dear Story teller. Pictures doesn’t coordinate with the child offering the cup of tea to her mother. The sequence of the storyline is a little confusing. Lily’s job, then her school life, the Librarian whom she met while studying in school, then repetitive parts out of sequence. The shelter to the apartment? When, where, how. Free clinic option. Relief ensued. Acceptance letter repeated couple of times. The concept of the story and Lily’s career as a journalist was welcoming. Two instances of the Cafe meeting with Olivia Harper? Elegant ending to Lily and Mother’s closure & message from Mrs Harper. Thank you.
The reason it’s because her mother was remembering what happened & then first time telling the librarian & then when she was remembering her & her mother’s past. 😊
@@debbiebriscoe293 I understand the repetition reasons. But I don't think the way it's done is appealing. If each "version" had completely different views, it would be helpful. Although there were additional memories each time, there were not enough differences to justify the repetition.
It was a truly inspiring story, however, the errors in the storyline were either lack of editing or poor editing. Really sad it causes you to stop listening. Please make sure you submit a correct story.
She met Olivia twice at the coffee shop, but the time Olivia walk up to her at the award ceremony about her work. So technically she only met up with Olivia 2 times 😊
Did Oliver ever say way she put them on the street? From what I understand all she did was make excuses for what she did. I understand the need for forgienns on lily's part but Oliver's giving money to help lily is really no reason to forgive
Yes to forgive is very hard 😢 but serveing someone for years why did she throw them out they didnt say why ?? I dont know i wouldnt for give her people with money think they can do anything but No they cant so dont let them run over you with money you can do everything butit dont last for ever family and friends do so sad they went threw a lot it sounds shes lonly now why ??
@@janestarr4403We listen because we have an interest in delivery of stories.The repetitions, at times, detract from the flow and sequence. It’s not really a criticism as such because some of us are writers or are interested in writing, therefore, it’s ‘feedback’ as you would have and appreciate as if you were taking ‘Writing Classes’. There’s always give and take that contributes to honing one’s skills. Storytelling is an Art, celebrated by many. Thank you
If you don’t know read the Bible but ask God for the Holy Spirit to understand ! What I am saying though I feel sorry for Trump because his dad was evil Trump was never shown love or campassion and this has made him a narcissist, true and true! He is trying to please the Christians but he know nothing of God and if he did He would not have wanted to hang a Christian man (Mike Pence)! He has done so much against God that it’s scary! He called himself the messiah of the Jews that is blasphemy! He sold bibles with the pledge of allegiance on it. God said what I give freely give it freely and that’s the wisdom in the Bible! As for the pledge of allegiance though I keep and obey the law I pledge allegiance only to God ! For God is for all people around the world that except him ! So much more but I think what bugs me most is that he said his daughter was not his daughter he would date her what parents does that? He should have said my daughter has a good soul and it radiates inside and out God would be proud of her I hope her husband well respect her and love her, but no he sexualized her to the point that any man that heard that from Trump well see her as a sexual object!
Get rid of the rocking of the video - it is distracting and totally unnecessary. The sequencing of narration and scenes is out of order/repeated in several places. What happened is different in the repeated sequences. 👎
We thought she was quite pretty Lily, She came from Somalia Lily, In a boat full of emigrants who all came of their own free to empty the trash in Paris. Pierre Perret On la trouvait plutôt jolie Lily, Elle arrivait des Somalies Lily, dans un wagon plein d'émigrés qui venaient tous de leur plein gré vider les poubelles à Paris. and so....
I thought they met for coffee to apologize earlier. Did it happen twice in the last third of the story? Unfortunately, it kind of ruins a good story. Did anyone else notice this?
Perhaps the writer is on the spectrum and has difficulty tracking.
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A beautiful story about life’s struggles. Thank you for sharing ❤❤❤
Thanks for listening
This is a lesson of life means
If you don't have money u can survive by education n displine
Yourself how to do it thank u
^Thank you.
Never give up!!!!
Great story God is able. ❤❤❤loved is the key used it's for his honor and glory amen.
I think it is good.Repetition of events emphasize their importance.Good story indeed!!❤
A beautiful story with great depth about having determination to overcome challenges,having compassion and forgiving those who have wronged and hurt you in the worst way. Iuv it.
Well said!
God never leave us alone forgiveness is hard but God will give you the strength to do so thanks to God
Beautiful story
A beautifully crafted story, in a very true sense the story of a journey from a cruel act with all its consequences. An unfolding story of courage against adversity that leads us to a beautiful ending, leaving us with a belief that the love between the daughter and her mother will survive all.
Lovey illustration of the strong characters - who's the artist? What a relief notvm to see different faces appearing for the same persons as has happened before.
Yeah, why did they meet a second time? Olivia already apologized once and gave a donation towards Lily’s cause. They met again for Olivia’s guilt or what?? It also doesn’t say why Lily and her mother were dismissed from Olivia’s. Good story overall. Narrator was good too.
Excellent message about forgiveness. So few ask for it and fewer yet give it.
I think the repetition is simply due to the back and forth that's common in these stories.
The way Olivia threw Lily and her mother out was really inhumane and that's the sad part of the story. If it had been done in a politer way there wouldn't have been a problem since they were not part of her family. Suffering also gives people a surge of energy to do what they need to do. Lily worked much harder than she perhaps might have if she was living a comfortable life.
Good story.
Hi this is a very interesting story. I don't see people who criticize the story if you dislike the it don't lessen to it
IN LIFE EVERYTHING HAPPENS FOR A REASON. NO ONE KNOWS THE FUTURE. IN EVERYTHING WE OUGHT TO GIVE GOD THANKS EVEN IN ADVERSITIES. THE FACT THAT SHE AND HER MUM WERE KICKED OUT WAS THE BEGINNING OF HER JOURNEY TO HER DESTINY FOR PROJECTS HELPING IN SOCIAL JUSTICE AND THE VALUES SHE CULTIVATED. IT ALSO SHOWED THE POWER OF FORGIVENESS DESPITE HER STRUGGLES. IT ALSO HELPED OLIVIA . IT MADE SARAH A STRONG RESILIENT PERSON . GOOD MORALS TO A GOOD STORY.
A good story but why repeat the last third of the story
So emotional 🙏🙏
Good story, but it's too much repeating going round and round
New subscriber to the channel. I greatly enjoyed this story. ❤️
Welcome aboard!
Good story. A lot of dejavu moments though🤔
A good story! Waiting for my promotion! Will I ever get it?
Seversl section of repeating messed up was distraction. Good story
The back tracking and repetitiveness of the story detracts immensely from the story.
A very good ztory
My gosh could you please review what you going to read before hand
Great story God is able ❤❤❤❤
Absolutely!!
A lot of these stories repeat themselves so it can be confusing personally I hate it as it spoils the flow
Yes repeatedly
Dear Story teller. Pictures doesn’t coordinate with the child offering the cup of tea to her mother. The sequence of the storyline is a little confusing. Lily’s job, then her school life, the Librarian whom she met while studying in school, then repetitive parts out of sequence. The shelter to the apartment? When, where, how. Free clinic option. Relief ensued. Acceptance letter repeated couple of times. The concept of the story and Lily’s career as a journalist was welcoming. Two instances of the Cafe meeting with Olivia Harper? Elegant ending to Lily and Mother’s closure & message from Mrs Harper. Thank you.
A bit confusing on the first half as it repeated the circumstances of Lily and her mum 3 times.
The reason it’s because her mother was remembering what happened & then first time telling the librarian & then when she was remembering her & her mother’s past. 😊
@@debbiebriscoe293 I understand the repetition reasons. But I don't think the way it's done is appealing. If each "version" had completely different views, it would be helpful. Although there were additional memories each time, there were not enough differences to justify the repetition.
Ty . I’m done listening . I’m tired of redundant story plots
So sad, too much repetition, takes away from the story, confusion just to make the story length, so unessary.
It was a truly inspiring story, however, the errors in the storyline were either lack of editing or poor editing. Really sad it causes you to stop listening. Please make sure you submit a correct story.
I thought that they met for coffee to apologise earlier, or did it happen twice in the last third of they story. Sadly it ruins a good story
She met Olivia twice at the coffee shop, but the time Olivia walk up to her at the award ceremony about her work. So technically she only met up with Olivia 2 times 😊
Really !
Why did you back track. Trying to get a longer vidio.
The music repeats and repeats and repeats and repeats and repeats aaaaaaaaaaah!
Better than the sick rap!
Did Oliver ever say way she put them on the street? From what I understand all she did was make excuses for what she did. I understand the need for forgienns on lily's part but Oliver's giving money to help lily is really no reason to forgive
Yes to forgive is very hard 😢 but serveing someone for years why did she throw them out they didnt say why ?? I dont know i wouldnt for give her people with money think they can do anything but No they cant so dont let them run over you with money you can do everything butit dont last for ever family and friends do so sad they went threw a lot it sounds shes lonly now why ??
Scenes have been repeated.
I AM SICK OF THESE VIDEOS REPEATING THE STORY OVER AND OVER AGAIN JUST FOR MORE VIEWS!
So, why do you keep watching? Isn't there anything better you can do with your time?
@@janestarr4403We listen because we have an interest in delivery of stories.The repetitions, at times, detract from the flow and sequence. It’s not really a criticism as such because some of us are writers or are interested in writing, therefore, it’s ‘feedback’ as you would have and appreciate as if you were taking ‘Writing Classes’. There’s always give and take that contributes to honing one’s skills. Storytelling is an Art, celebrated by many. Thank you
You remind me of a confused teenager how depressing
Correction: republicans!
What are you talking about???
If you don’t know read the Bible but ask God for the Holy Spirit to understand ! What I am saying though I feel sorry for Trump because his dad was evil Trump was never shown love or campassion and this has made him a narcissist, true and true! He is trying to please the Christians but he know nothing of God and if he did He would not have wanted to hang a Christian man (Mike Pence)! He has done so much against God that it’s scary! He called himself the messiah of the Jews that is blasphemy! He sold bibles with the pledge of allegiance on it. God said what I give freely give it freely and that’s the wisdom in the Bible! As for the pledge of allegiance though I keep and obey the law I pledge allegiance only to God ! For God is for all people around the world that except him ! So much more but I think what bugs me most is that he said his daughter was not his daughter he would date her what parents does that? He should have said my daughter has a good soul and it radiates inside and out God would be proud of her I hope her husband well respect her and love her, but no he sexualized her to the point that any man that heard that from Trump well see her as a sexual object!
Sorry I meant to post this on the politics ! As you can tell I am so disappointed in politics right know again sorry!
Get rid of the rocking of the video - it is distracting and totally unnecessary.
The sequencing of narration and scenes is out of order/repeated in several places. What happened is different in the repeated sequences. 👎
We thought she was quite pretty Lily, She came from Somalia Lily, In a boat full of emigrants who all came of their own free to empty the trash in Paris. Pierre Perret On la trouvait plutôt jolie Lily, Elle arrivait des Somalies Lily, dans un wagon plein d'émigrés qui venaient tous de leur plein gré vider les poubelles à Paris. and so....