Try to give individual instrument lines smaller and more different jumps from one another, also mix up the octaves of some notes in some voices or morph the first voice into the seconds and vice versa. This will help you to make it sound more coherent and fluid. In a march, avoiding these ideas might actually be intentional, but I think a little bit of this will help the sound
It’s weird having 15 bar strains but it works out in the end. I really liked the difference between the trio and finale. Honestly, only thing I would’ve added was a euphonium/baritone part.
I think the snare could have grace notes when it plays on the offbeat. Also, you could use repeat measures if the application you're using has them. These are just little details that most percussion parts would have, this composition is really great already and I would love to see what you could do in the future :)
Sounds cool, only thing with repeat it doesn’t sound logical. It’s almost like it just stops and goed again in a random place without finishing a phrase
Try to give individual instrument lines smaller and more different jumps from one another, also mix up the octaves of some notes in some voices or morph the first voice into the seconds and vice versa. This will help you to make it sound more coherent and fluid.
In a march, avoiding these ideas might actually be intentional, but I think a little bit of this will help the sound
It’s weird having 15 bar strains but it works out in the end. I really liked the difference between the trio and finale. Honestly, only thing I would’ve added was a euphonium/baritone part.
@@tabbything Crap! I forgot baritone, I’ll add it in a future update
I think the snare could have grace notes when it plays on the offbeat. Also, you could use repeat measures if the application you're using has them.
These are just little details that most percussion parts would have, this composition is really great already and I would love to see what you could do in the future :)
this was great, as a tuba player i always appreciate a few breaks from the oompa loompa playing during a march :)
Youre really talented man, keep it up!!
Better than me, I say.
Hey that’d be fun to play! Well done!
Sounds cool, only thing with repeat it doesn’t sound logical. It’s almost like it just stops and goed again in a random place without finishing a phrase
That was a challenge with this piece, it used to be really bad, this is something I am working on, thank you tho, I need to know things like this 👍
Thats what i was gonna say
Mate, it's June
I'm about to write a July
how long did it take you to make this?
I started from scratch about 3 weeks ago chipping in a changing parts every day or so, I'd say in total 20 ish hours, maybe more.
@@drewracer777 godspeed
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