Wow, I love how you’ve created such a vivid contrast between Kristen’s determined professional life and her heartfelt compassion for James. The eerie atmosphere around Ric’s mansion adds a layer of mystery that keeps me hooked-can’t wait to see where this goes
I love the voice of the narrator... it's very soothing and good ASMR to relax and go to sleep. Although... the story is too interesting and thrilling to be a 'bedtime' story :D 1. His admittance of being a werewolf is a bit.. sudden? No build up to it... I had to rewind as I thought it was a dream she was having after seeing that 'creature'. That would be a little more logical.. then build up on her suspicions. However, I am just up to 20 minutes into it.. it may come up later :) As it seems this is your story.. then I will comment more as it goes on... so far I am enjoying it :D 2. Very good story line... maybe you can expand it to be longer one day, it has good potential for a longer story. Overall I really enjoyed it... it's hard to put it in a short version as you did, because the story has the twists and turns that leaves readers hanging when in short format... which actually tells you the story is well worth the longer version! Thank you for sharing!!!
The listener’s know that ivory told the first lie to turn her against james In the first place! Of course Kristen would think ivory turned traitor again! The writer should keep such small things in mind .
I enjoyed this story more than some others on RUclips, but I feel like the drama could be more logical. It’s frustrating that the female lead sometimes comes across as overly emotional. I wish she were portrayed as smarter-it would make the story more engaging and less irritating at times. Women can be emotional, but not to this extent. I agree that at 1:33:20 doesn't make sense at all.
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Then you should write a story that makes sense !
Wow, I love how you’ve created such a vivid contrast between Kristen’s determined professional life and her heartfelt compassion for James. The eerie atmosphere around Ric’s mansion adds a layer of mystery that keeps me hooked-can’t wait to see where this goes
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I listened to the end, don't really know what to think, seriously made no sense, but to other it might. Thanks for sharing.
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I think she was a little drunk... 😅
This book should be called, "The Friend Zone Fights Back"
It made no sense, but it was still fun and intriguing.
I love the voice of the narrator... it's very soothing and good ASMR to relax and go to sleep. Although... the story is too interesting and thrilling to be a 'bedtime' story :D
1. His admittance of being a werewolf is a bit.. sudden? No build up to it... I had to rewind as I thought it was a dream she was having after seeing that 'creature'. That would be a little more logical.. then build up on her suspicions. However, I am just up to 20 minutes into it.. it may come up later :)
As it seems this is your story.. then I will comment more as it goes on... so far I am enjoying it :D
2. Very good story line... maybe you can expand it to be longer one day, it has good potential for a longer story.
Overall I really enjoyed it... it's hard to put it in a short version as you did, because the story has the twists and turns that leaves readers hanging when in short format... which actually tells you the story is well worth the longer version!
Thank you for sharing!!!
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Very enjoyable story filled with betrayal forgiveness and love..thank you❤❤
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❤❤❤ aww I'm so glad they found their happiness
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The listener’s know that ivory told the first lie to turn her against james In the first place! Of course Kristen would think ivory turned traitor again! The writer should keep such small things in mind .
Noted , I’ll keep in mind
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Good story Narrator. Thanks for sharing.
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Did Relic not already tell her that he was a werewolf, she knew all this already, her friend did not tell her anything new in her letter.
This turned out to be a story 😊.
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Interesting, how Relic said he would never hurt her but what is he doing. She is not eating. She is being hurt by his actions.
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Okay, enough with the "sea green eyes" already! If I took a shot every time I heard it, I'd be drunk.😊
Okay I was frustrated thinking it was going to end badly for Kristen. 😅
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is this a lobe story?
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I enjoyed this story more than some others on RUclips, but I feel like the drama could be more logical. It’s frustrating that the female lead sometimes comes across as overly emotional. I wish she were portrayed as smarter-it would make the story more engaging and less irritating at times. Women can be emotional, but not to this extent. I agree that at 1:33:20 doesn't make sense at all.
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28:40 - What the heck? Some friend...
1:33:20 makes no sense
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so confused. the story started with being rejection to new characters
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Is his name Relic or Rolic ?😮
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Lacked character development. Very choppy writing but I liked the voice of the narrator.
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