Fire Emblem: The Blazing Silver V.2 WIP - Aireth Mode - Chapter 1 - Intro Rewrite

UPDATE: The project is now finished under the name "Elysium Ablaze". You can try it out here: feuniverse.us/...
The following is an improved rewrite of the intro by AthenaBaer, giving the opening of Chapter 1 more depth, personality and all the good stuff. The gameplay of the first chapter is seen in the first version: • Fire Emblem: The Blazi...
About the project:
The Blazing Silver is a Fire Emblem PME (Pick my Edits.) Basically many people submit characters to replace the vanilla Fire Emblem 7 cast. While the main replacement is done I will do further gameplay and story changes to make it more of an original game.
feuniverse.us/...
(Includes V.1 and credits of V.1)

[@thegoldenknight6283]

I think this rewrite looks a lot better compared to the first one. This ones doesn’t feel as rushed compared to the other one. Plus this rewrite helps out with the world building and setting a lot more.

[@athenabaer3185]

Thank you 🥰 Super proud of how this one turned out, though I'm kind of embarrassed about the fact that this goes on for nearly seven minutes 😅 Might've gone overboard in a few places ❤‍🩹 But hey, it was fun, so that's all I need :333

[@athenabaer3185]

Hewwo :333 Is me! The lady who wrote this 💖 Thank you to Tritra for setting this up and showing it off. It means a lot to see my writing presented in an official capacity, and I'm excited to see what else is in store for both me as a writer on this hack and the hack itself 💕. Though, like I said when replying to GoldenKnight (or EmeraldKing, whichever you prefer :3), I'm slightly embarrassed by the fact this ended up being seven minutes long, and I definitely may have gone overboard in a few places 😓 But again, I had fun, so that's what matters most ❤
Of course, it'd feel weird to have this much quality in the intro and then have it taper off in the actual chapter itself, wouldn't it? So, expect a rewrite of the rest to make this truly exceptional!

[@tritragames1808]

Don't worry, I totally understand. Especially because this is sorta the main hook of the story, it being extra detailed is sorta important. Like this is the hook of the story, the chapter before that was just a prolouge to both Aireth and Yourself. (And Aurelia who exists being playable.)
But yeah, looking forward to it.
Thank you.