My cats in the background, when I'm throwing my back out, preparing and cleaning their food and stuff. I took in stray cats but nobody ever guessed they're strays. lol.
You watch as the cameras flash, and people scream your name, trying to catch your attention. You give them all a sultry smile, and you slowly strut down the runway, your stilettos clicking against the raised marble floor. You sway your hips, your feet lining up in a straight line. You stare below at the crowd, scrambling for your attention. As you reach the end of the the platform, you turn and blow the crowd a kiss, smiling as they cheer for you. As you walk back down the runway, you think.. "All my hard work has been worth it. I'm right where I need to be." As you walk down the runway one more time, you wink at the next model, who blushes. Your dark dress trails behind you, as you dissapear behind a curtain, leaving your audience in awe. This is my first time writing to a playlist, please let me know what I can improve!
Nice work! My main feedback is to avoid filter words, which create distance between the reader and the POV character (yes, even if they're one and the same through the use of second person). Phrases like "You watch" and "You stare" can be cut entirely, and has the added bonus of fewer sentences starting with the word "You" which happens a lot in the first half. Try varying your sentences so no two in a row begin with the same word or the same few words. Hope this helps!
@@CoraMaria Thank you so much for the advice, I really appreciate it! Instead of using the word "you" what can I use? I think I used "you" a lot so the reader can feel themselves in this situation, but reading it again I do realize its very repititive. TYSM
I didn't see any soo!! *Timestamps* 0:01 - 4:15 Maneater by Nelly Furtado 4:18 - 8:24 Judas by Lady Gaga 8:29 - 12:25 Into you by Ariana Grande 12:29 - 15:58 No by Meghan Trainor 16:04 - 19:28 Slow down by Selena Gomez
POV: Your prepping for the runaway..as according to the title. ____________________________________________________________________ You hear the music on the front stage playing, and various chattering along with rapid clicking cameras. That was a sign that the runaway was starting soon. You stood still while your designer wrapped your waist with a pink translucent dress piece with golden ends. It reminded you of hermoine's dress from Hogwarts, however this was way more frillier and patterened. You slipped your delicate feet into golden sandals, wearing a golden necklace and hoop earrings to match. You look around and see many of your colleagues also rushing about, everyone wearing suits and dresses. The theme for the runaway was non-other than ballroom based, the designer wanting the clothing to not only be defining of your character, but also comfortable. They were good with it, your dress was like wearing a frilly pajamas. But to others it looked like a work of art. Your designer sat you down and neatened your hair into a wavy locks, your blonde hair suiting the dress. She dabbed your face with foundation and added the same shade of pink as your dress on your eyelids, adding a soft blush and finishing your face with a dark red lipstick. Seducing. There was a quick debrief with all your other models before the music started playing, and you see your the first model leave. You took a deep breath, you were the last model to go out, not like that was a problem, but it just meant that you had to be better. Soon the models piled off in a few minutes and you were next. Your designer whispered a few words of goodluck and you nodded, sashaying out. You absorbed yourself to the music, stepping to every beat. (Preferably to the first song.) The cameras were clicking, celebrities were using their smartphones and filming you. Once you reached your posing area, you flipped your hair and swung your dress slightly, before turning to continue walking. After you reached backstage, you heaved a sigh of relief. You wondered if your power pose was good, did the people like it? Did they comment anything nice? Your designer praised you and soon everyone had to go out. You followed your fellow modellers and stood with those you knew (Your friends), posing one more time. As you posed, you could see everyone in the crowd smiling and cheering. Good. It meant you were going to be paid, and you could take it feeling proud that you've done another runaway and satisfied the crowd. Good job girly, keep on slaying. ______________________________________________________________________ "Everything was written by me because the music just made me very interested. I hope you liked the dialogue while listening to the music. I had fun writing this. Do feel free to comment, or point out any parts i can improve on storywriting in. All comments good or bad help me. This is my third time writing. Thanks." -Kai
This is genuinely so freaking amazing and deserves more attention. I wrote a POV after seeing your work and holy shit yours is so much better. U DESERVE MORE ATTENTION!!! Thank you for writing this, you inspired me to write as well!
I listen to this playlist when going home from school, istg it was suppose to be a 10 mins walk but somehow it only takes me about 6 mins lol. Ps. I also get stared a lot tho I don't know why 😩
Your body adapted to the rythm and usually walking that fast with I guess long strides like a model makes you also have a fierce look in your eyes. Which made you look and feel and be a girl boss
I'm a Brazilian model (not at all famous, YET) I confess that it wasn't my dream, but little by little my mind is dealing with it and changing about it. I have a link to a video of me parading.
@@Iambunny-ry2os ive been scouted by a modelling agency but didnt join cause wanna do academic related work and my looks come in the top ten percent. but damn people on the internet are soft pus sies
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Not me model walking around the kitchen while I’m supposed to be cleaning
Woahh samee lol😂
Main character energy fr
SAME
SAMEEEE
My cats in the background, when I'm throwing my back out, preparing and cleaning their food and stuff.
I took in stray cats but nobody ever guessed they're strays. lol.
*cleans room fabulously*
My older sis is a victoria secret model , she is not so famous but this playlist is def her vibe
what is her name?
She's going to be in the VS comeback?
@@melaniebr9974 yes
@@kincsosator3436 her name is Pamelia matters she is not in google but will soon be :)
@@Mairaspeedup_xxwait what’s her name?
You watch as the cameras flash, and people scream your name, trying to catch your attention. You give them all a sultry smile, and you slowly strut down the runway, your stilettos clicking against the raised marble floor. You sway your hips, your feet lining up in a straight line. You stare below at the crowd, scrambling for your attention. As you reach the end of the the platform, you turn and blow the crowd a kiss, smiling as they cheer for you. As you walk back down the runway, you think.. "All my hard work has been worth it. I'm right where I need to be." As you walk down the runway one more time, you wink at the next model, who blushes. Your dark dress trails behind you, as you dissapear behind a curtain, leaving your audience in awe.
This is my first time writing to a playlist, please let me know what I can improve!
3 words: I LOVE IT😌
@@teodorapetrovska5541 Thank you so much!!
you're really great at writing with all these details you have showed. it feels like an actual experience ✨
Nice work! My main feedback is to avoid filter words, which create distance between the reader and the POV character (yes, even if they're one and the same through the use of second person). Phrases like "You watch" and "You stare" can be cut entirely, and has the added bonus of fewer sentences starting with the word "You" which happens a lot in the first half. Try varying your sentences so no two in a row begin with the same word or the same few words. Hope this helps!
@@CoraMaria Thank you so much for the advice, I really appreciate it! Instead of using the word "you" what can I use? I think I used "you" a lot so the reader can feel themselves in this situation, but reading it again I do realize its very repititive. TYSM
Timeline
0:00 maneater
4:18 Judas
8:27 into you
12:29 no
16:00 slow down
I didn't see any soo!!
*Timestamps*
0:01 - 4:15 Maneater by Nelly Furtado
4:18 - 8:24 Judas by Lady Gaga
8:29 - 12:25 Into you by Ariana Grande
12:29 - 15:58 No by Meghan Trainor
16:04 - 19:28 Slow down by Selena Gomez
Slow down by Selena Gomez 👁️👄👁️
@@queen.of.mupets sorry! I didn't know the song and that's what it said under the video :)
@@queen.of.mupetsyup
POV: Your prepping for the runaway..as according to the title.
____________________________________________________________________
You hear the music on the front stage playing, and various chattering along with rapid clicking cameras. That was a sign that the runaway was starting soon. You stood still while your designer wrapped your waist with a pink translucent dress piece with golden ends. It reminded you of hermoine's dress from Hogwarts, however this was way more frillier and patterened. You slipped your delicate feet into golden sandals, wearing a golden necklace and hoop earrings to match. You look around and see many of your colleagues also rushing about, everyone wearing suits and dresses. The theme for the runaway was non-other than ballroom based, the designer wanting the clothing to not only be defining of your character, but also comfortable. They were good with it, your dress was like wearing a frilly pajamas. But to others it looked like a work of art.
Your designer sat you down and neatened your hair into a wavy locks, your blonde hair suiting the dress. She dabbed your face with foundation and added the same shade of pink as your dress on your eyelids, adding a soft blush and finishing your face with a dark red lipstick. Seducing.
There was a quick debrief with all your other models before the music started playing, and you see your the first model leave. You took a deep breath, you were the last model to go out, not like that was a problem, but it just meant that you had to be better. Soon the models piled off in a few minutes and you were next. Your designer whispered a few words of goodluck and you nodded, sashaying out. You absorbed yourself to the music, stepping to every beat. (Preferably to the first song.) The cameras were clicking, celebrities were using their smartphones and filming you. Once you reached your posing area, you flipped your hair and swung your dress slightly, before turning to continue walking.
After you reached backstage, you heaved a sigh of relief. You wondered if your power pose was good, did the people like it? Did they comment anything nice?
Your designer praised you and soon everyone had to go out. You followed your fellow modellers and stood with those you knew (Your friends), posing one more time. As you posed, you could see everyone in the crowd smiling and cheering.
Good. It meant you were going to be paid, and you could take it feeling proud that you've done another runaway and satisfied the crowd. Good job girly, keep on slaying.
______________________________________________________________________
"Everything was written by me because the music just made me very interested. I hope you liked the dialogue while listening to the music. I had fun writing this. Do feel free to comment, or point out any parts i can improve on storywriting in. All comments good or bad help me. This is my third time writing. Thanks."
-Kai
This is genuinely so freaking amazing and deserves more attention. I wrote a POV after seeing your work and holy shit yours is so much better. U DESERVE MORE ATTENTION!!! Thank you for writing this, you inspired me to write as well!
@@luvie2098 Aw, thank you, i really appreciate it, thanks for making me smile, i hope you write greater POVs than mine one day, goodluck.
@@C4ligin0us. thank you! you deserve it bestie, you are a really good writer and i hope one day i'll be able to read a book of yours!
Thank you Kai ❤ reading it just gave me a sense of powerful confidence 🎉
not me energetically dancing to this knowing damn well I'm sick and it'll only me me sicker
Божественный плейлист 🛐
I got it when I was admitted to fashion school...thank u🫶🏽
My mom just threw her crocs at me cus I was catwalking when I was mopping and I was missing corners 😭
This is one of the best playlists. Keep going!
POV: you’re listening to this while walking on a treadmill🩷💅🏼
Wow this music fits the theme really well
this is such a vibe, i love it 💗🖤🖤
This is definitely for the people who couldn't make it to runway modeling.
Time swap 💜✨⤵️
0:00 -> maneater (Nelly Furtado)
4:20 -> Judas (lady Gaga)
8:31 -> Into you (Ariana Grande)
12:30 -> No (Meghan Trainor)
16:00 -> Slow Down (Selena Gomez)
End 💜✨🫶
Thank uuuu
1st one is not manager its called maneater
Ngl this is kind of velvet and veneer vibe
not me after seeing britney manson’s catwalks tutorials 🧍♀️
KATE MOSS A ICON❤
the way this has 37k views and they only have 73 subs.... *subscribes*
so am I! this is a good sign?😂
listened to this while doing my night routine
11/10 would recommend felt like a bad bitch
I listen to this playlist when going home from school, istg it was suppose to be a 10 mins walk but somehow it only takes me about 6 mins lol.
Ps. I also get stared a lot tho I don't know why 😩
it's CoS yOu LoOk LiKe A mOdEl
Cause you spayed that model walk home 💅
Get it girlie 👯♀️🤞💕
Your body adapted to the rythm and usually walking that fast with I guess long strides like a model makes you also have a fierce look in your eyes. Which made you look and feel and be a girl boss
no worries. you're just girl bossing
Love it!
I'm a Brazilian model (not at all famous, YET) I confess that it wasn't my dream, but little by little my mind is dealing with it and changing about it. I have a link to a video of me parading.
💀umm the host is my pet bunny lol
Wearing my heels for thisHAHAHAHA
OMG THIS PLAYLIST...
Go Gisele! 👼
Omg I’m in modeling school and I feel like I’m an actual model😂
2:00
do you have this in a spotify playlist?
Y is every playlist thats titled something similar have nelly furtado in it
you forgot britney spears she should have benn on this playlist
Me encanta❤❤❤🖤🖤🖤🖤😁👏👏👏
Guys help me, I'm acting like I'm in an edit😭
17:01
nice
Like it ❤🥀🫀
i really need to figure out where that photo thumbnails came from, anybody knows?
5:54 تاانا😂
10/10
6:09
3:22 كفاش سناء مكايناش
Heyyy what’s this dress
Anyone know where the pic is from ?
What dress is this?????
My ankles when I try to walk in general: 💥💥
19:27
Wow
totally off topic but those heels look super uncomfortable-
mga delulu
genetics should have been too
so many delusional girlies
Girls wanting to be self confident isn’t delusional. You’re statements just announce ur insecurities, unfortunately for you they are very real.
jealousy is the ugliest look on anyone. Ur personality is hideous. ❤️
@@Iambunny-ry2os ive been scouted by a modelling agency but didnt join cause wanna do academic related work and my looks come in the top ten percent. but damn people on the internet are soft pus sies
It’s a not supermodel music bro ;-;
16:06
19:27