"I worked as a Nightguard at a Mall, there were RULES TO FOLLOW" Creepypasta

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  • Опубликовано: 22 ноя 2024

Комментарии • 168

  • @matrisgallus6189
    @matrisgallus6189 Месяц назад +54

    Working night shift right now. 1am in a deserted parking lot having a smoke break... listening to this and looking all around... just in case...

    • @acenewgate2813
      @acenewgate2813 4 дня назад

      I always felt safer with a lit cig in my hand when I worked alone at night 😂😂

    • @martinhare6085
      @martinhare6085 День назад

      Me too. It's now 1:56. The timing is just bad 😅

  • @vinaykumarbantu4809
    @vinaykumarbantu4809 9 часов назад +2

    This narration gave me chills… i had goosebumps multiple times. Great story telling!!

  • @GrandCrusader
    @GrandCrusader 2 дня назад +4

    Years ago I was a night shift security supervisor at the second largest shopping mall in the Chicago /Bloomingdale IL area. I can relate to some of your story but one thing that wasn't accurate is that mall security won't have access to the internal stores the internal stores are owned/leased by companies. If I was on patrol and I came across say an American Eagle store and the back door or the front gate was not locked we would have to call that particular stores key holder or manager to drive back into the mall. We would then also contact the Bloomingdale Police Department and when they all arrived we would then with the police and the store employee check the store to make sure that nobody was stealing anything resecure it and then they would clear the scene and we would continue on patrol. But in general not a bad little story. There's many times where I would be on patrol in that dark empty mall at night and I would have similar thoughts to what your story was about.. funny thing was if that happened to me in real life I wouldn't have quit like your protagonist I would have embraced it I would have became friends with the entity lol

  • @jackanarchy99
    @jackanarchy99 Месяц назад +64

    Tell us all about... *whiplash*
    The Janitor: The rules
    The Guard: The rules?
    The Demon: The rules

  • @TwistedBedtime
    @TwistedBedtime Месяц назад +34

    Your voice is perfect for horror. This was so chilling!

  • @jenniferlonnes7420
    @jenniferlonnes7420 Месяц назад +50

    Creepy! My stomach would drop too upon hearing the phrase "What janitor?"

  • @realnumbervoid
    @realnumbervoid Месяц назад +85

    Just in time at 2:30 am while I'm trying to sleep, wowsers!

    • @NightmaresEcho1
      @NightmaresEcho1 Месяц назад +1

      My post is the scariest

    • @CreepyStoriesJR
      @CreepyStoriesJR Месяц назад +1

      Maybe you'll not be able to sleep after this one

    • @vipulpandey2
      @vipulpandey2 Месяц назад +1

      Same here brother

    • @tomc6255
      @tomc6255 Месяц назад +2

      What country?

    • @Jimisjonesen
      @Jimisjonesen Месяц назад +2

      Yoo it’s 2:31 for me😭 we on the same bull shit ay

  • @bartolomeestebanmurillo4459
    @bartolomeestebanmurillo4459 Месяц назад +64

    Great plot twist, seems the Janitor was a guardian angel of sorts.

    • @CreepyStoriesJR
      @CreepyStoriesJR Месяц назад +3

    • @CreepyStoriesJR
      @CreepyStoriesJR Месяц назад +6

      Or maybe he was part of the "game"

    • @wiltmarlonelao
      @wiltmarlonelao 25 дней назад +4

      You need to watch more movies. The “plot twist” was a cliche I could smell from a mile away.

    • @CreepyStoriesJR
      @CreepyStoriesJR 24 дня назад

      @@wiltmarlonelao Well, I didn’t try to hide the fact that the janitor wasn’t really human, it was more of a revelation than a plot twist.

    • @nascentronin1819
      @nascentronin1819 13 дней назад +1

      ​@@CreepyStoriesJR Even though it's more cheesy than scary imo, I like the idea of the mall having good and bad entities instead of just ghosts and stuff

  • @mintchirp4947
    @mintchirp4947 18 дней назад +4

    I listen to these stories a lot and none scare me much anymore but this one had my heart racing

  • @thegreen8172
    @thegreen8172 10 дней назад +6

    "The rule said not to look directly at the sun...I looked directly at the sun. "
    -Every rules protagonist

  • @Mr.Glidehook
    @Mr.Glidehook 26 дней назад +8

    I've worked a lot of jobs on swing and graveyard shifts, including as a security guard. It's a time where a fertile imagination can drive you insane, and fighting that insanity is never easy. But the worst job, although I loved the work and the less crowded I-95, was driving an 18-wheeler. You see things nobody else would see. Sometimes it's beautiful, like a distant skyline, with lights. You know the city is still active in the small hours, but you go through a tunnel and find yourself bypassing the busy part. It's peaceful; even the static of CB channel 19 occasionally giving a blast from nearby truckers, but then you go a bit further. Nothing but darkness. No highway lights. No cars. Nothing but white lines flashing by.
    One night, travelling through Connecticut, I hit a route my directions had me exit onto, and even FM radio signals were mostly static. The lanes of each direction were separated by trees. I began to wish that my dispatcher had let me work local in Baltimore like I usually did, picking up loads at Lever Brothers in Dundalk and dropping them off at our terminal for the over-the-road drivers to pick up.
    I began feeling uneasy, but couldn't figure out any reason for it. Sometimes the feeling comes when there's a bad accident ahead. But again, no CB chatter broke the static, no emergency vehicles passed me. And this feeling wasn't like that anyway. Only a turn east on a route I can't remember (it was 1989: do you remember what that was like?? Neon was everywhere including rubber tubes for guys with spiked hair or mullets to fasten onto their sunglasses, bicycle shorts were a real thing, and music sucked) I began to breathe easier. Years would pass. Then I would learn how close I probably was to Dudleytown, a supposed haunted or cursed former town, claimed by woods. I know I had to have been off-route, but how'd that happen?
    Other creepy and tragic things happened. One night while approaching the Fort McHenry Tunnel from the south, where the interstate is elevated, I had a sickening, doom-like feeling in my gut. I slowed down, geared way down, and sure enough, blue lights were everywhere. I crept up and passed on the far right, and saw this car lying on its driver's side with the roof against the jersey wall. Toll cops were running along the wall, looking over it and down with their flashlights. Even driving a rig, I never thought that the north and south lanes were separate. I thought the concrete walls were what separated them. Not so: there's a big gap, and the driver had climbed out of her car through the passenger side window, climbed down to the wall, and then fallen 60-70 feet to an instant death. I did grow to finally hate night shit, which is responsible for a million horror stories, but none so horrible as real life. You've done a good job, though. I was keen to hear it all. I have no doubt that it has its roots in real life.

    • @gudemik5335
      @gudemik5335 18 часов назад

      Very interesting, thanks for sharing. I couldn't do those kind of shifts because I fall asleep too easily and I always thought that people who have to drive at night for work should be paid more, at least.
      But if we put safety aside, it must be extremely fascinating to see things from such an unusual perspective

  • @neogen4172
    @neogen4172 7 дней назад +4

    I wonder wht happens if he just stayed in the Security room until morning

  • @orustin7280
    @orustin7280 10 дней назад +5

    Apparently all the rules were just “mind ya business and there be no problem.”

  • @fufu5068
    @fufu5068 4 дня назад +2

    As a mall manager myself, my security staff always has creepy stories to tell. I personally have one too.

  • @thedoggoesskrrrt
    @thedoggoesskrrrt 8 дней назад +2

    Imagine being a guard that's been used to all these creepy shit and working in that mall for years like these paranormal activity is just another tuesday, walking down the hallway while sipping a cup of coffee while being followed by mannequins

  • @silviaflorez-ramey6350
    @silviaflorez-ramey6350 Месяц назад +4

    You do such a good job! Even tone, no blasts of sound or volume. Perfect for dozing off to 😊!!! Thank you ☺️!!!
    ♥️♥️♥️😊

  • @5stringking
    @5stringking Месяц назад +12

    I turned, and then I heard it.
    Then I turned and then I saw it then I turned around and there it was then I turned and then I saw it. I ran and then I heard it.
    Then I turned around. And that's when I saw it.
    Suddenly I spun and then I heard what I saw

    • @Verethill18
      @Verethill18 Месяц назад +2

      And then I turned, and then I saw it 😅

    • @KalelKing-xn2uz
      @KalelKing-xn2uz Месяц назад +4

      I saw what I heard and felt what I Knew as fear. My heart thundering in my chest I knew what I felt what I heard was a ghost from what i saw. Spinning around rapidly I heard it. Then I saw, felt and smelled the piss in my pants

  • @Deverik1981
    @Deverik1981 Месяц назад +14

    So.... five nights at Freddy's meets mall cop.

    • @IcarusMundi
      @IcarusMundi 17 дней назад

      I would love to see Five Nights at Freddy’s starring Paul Blart.

  • @arcticflower7223
    @arcticflower7223 21 день назад +4

    That's a convenience store, not a mall.

  • @snoopsnoop7704
    @snoopsnoop7704 Месяц назад +11

    Did anyone else think of weeping angels

  • @chrisfitch4463
    @chrisfitch4463 Месяц назад +3

    Another great story. Thank you for sharing 🙂👍💖

  • @QuantumChic
    @QuantumChic Месяц назад +3

    I love the sound effects. Nice one! 👍

  • @ninami_ph
    @ninami_ph Месяц назад +6

    These creepy rule stories that always happen in night shift is ❤❤❤ because I also usually work night shifts. 😊💀👻

    • @Dr.Wicked_ltd
      @Dr.Wicked_ltd  Месяц назад

      Oh wow!

    • @Verethill18
      @Verethill18 Месяц назад

      What rules have you got?

    • @ninami_ph
      @ninami_ph Месяц назад +2

      @Verethill18 do not sleep at work which I usually break hahahhahaha 😅😆

    • @Bella-id3nb
      @Bella-id3nb 2 минуты назад

      ​@@ninami_ph😂😂😂

  • @Avztyn
    @Avztyn Месяц назад +3

    In all fairness as a security guard; companies will hire anyone with a pulse and always need guards. Some of the smaller ones hire pretty fuckin quickly depending on where it is. AUS you can be in the door at your contract within a week.

    • @339blackdiamond
      @339blackdiamond 12 дней назад

      Fr. Even companies that don't really specialize in security. I was 17, and my sister's friends asked me If I was looking for a job. Her mother ran a small hotel, and needed someone for 2 night shifts. Just hanging at the reception desk, and making sure people didn't try to get in the pool area, if drunk people make noise past 12pm, just call the cops.
      Said yes, her mother called me a few days later. Started the night after my interview. 2 night shift of sitting at the reception desk. Tought I was only getting those 2 shifts, but the boss ended up talking to me at the end of that 2nd shift like she would be trying to find me a spot somewhere. Fast foward a week, i'm now the kitchen dishwasher. Did that for 3 years, ended up becomming a cook. Quit during the pandemic, and now i'm working at an alluminium casting facility. Eyeing a woodmill job next 😂
      But to think that I got my first rope in the job buisness being a "security" night watch is odd in some ways. But it seems like a good job to start up something in this world.

  • @hnjia
    @hnjia 28 дней назад +4

    Great story but what my question is What did the janitor mean by you’ll figure it out or not, because clearly he didn’t figure it out whatever it is,”😭💀

  • @joannabailey2085
    @joannabailey2085 Месяц назад +2

    I loved the Story, Doc U just keep Getting Better All the Time. Thx for the Ride ✌️💙

  • @Sans_Meg
    @Sans_Meg Месяц назад +1

    Im listening to this every night, please keep on posting 😂

  • @CreepyStoriesJR
    @CreepyStoriesJR Месяц назад +11

    This story hits the spot!

    • @TitaniumAlloyz
      @TitaniumAlloyz 4 дня назад

      For sure, you wrote a good story and the narrator did a good job reading it to us. Very nice all around.

  • @Whisperoftwilight-f9i
    @Whisperoftwilight-f9i Месяц назад +1

    Very interesting story, author, keep up the good work!

  • @xVezzo
    @xVezzo Месяц назад +2

    dr. rules to follow stories and absolutely nothing else under absolutely no circumstances whatsoever at any time ever, wicked.

  • @viktoriaribkina3000
    @viktoriaribkina3000 Месяц назад

    The ambient in your videos is the most disturbing I have ever heard through years of binging horror content
    Love it

  • @nicholasesparza2978
    @nicholasesparza2978 Месяц назад +14

    My blood ran cold, my blood ran cold, my blood ran cold

    • @general_prodigy
      @general_prodigy 24 дня назад +2

      Bro's a cold blooded animal, a reptile.

  • @benp5528
    @benp5528 27 дней назад

    Man this one is so good , listened to it while trying to sleep .

  • @papi9196
    @papi9196 26 дней назад +1

    If I was him I would of stayed in the office after my first sweep 🤣

  • @luisanthonychau
    @luisanthonychau 22 часа назад

    I was hoping something would go wrong even after following the rules, like the ghost would slip through the door of the security office.

  • @Nope12173
    @Nope12173 23 дня назад +1

    Who wrote this??? I LOVE stories!!! I'm studying narratology and cultural anthropology, mainly myth, legends and folklore! This is really good, I was just wondering if anyone knows.

  • @JeromeKaz
    @JeromeKaz 4 дня назад

    really enjoyed this video, great storytelling and it kept me on the edge of my seat! but honestly, I don't get why people would want to work as a nightguard in such an eerie place. I feel like it's just asking for trouble, right? like, what’s the draw?

  • @LiYamanashi
    @LiYamanashi 3 дня назад

    this video was really engaging and well-made! i enjoyed the storytelling, but i can't help but wonder if some of the "rules" were a bit exaggerated for dramatic effect. i mean, it's a mall, not a haunted house, right?

  • @melaniehernandez6391
    @melaniehernandez6391 Месяц назад

    First time listener but I will definitely keep listening! 💜✨

  • @techtuslah3983
    @techtuslah3983 5 дней назад +1

    Lmao this guys stomach is somewhere in his feet after all that dropping

  • @botondkovacs8155
    @botondkovacs8155 День назад

    I sent this story to the Fears to Fathom game developer team, hope they make a game from it.

  • @GoodyearSimp
    @GoodyearSimp Месяц назад

    This was so good! Just subscribed🤝

  • @mikeea.15
    @mikeea.15 День назад

    Sounds like Night at The Museum but more sinister 💀👌

  • @huyvlam
    @huyvlam Месяц назад +2

    We need to send RUclips ghost hunters there to record footages

  • @pilotnicholas1422
    @pilotnicholas1422 Месяц назад

    Thank you for scaring the absolute sh*t out of me! I really needed that!

  • @tomberge5078
    @tomberge5078 Месяц назад

    That was good. A little bit of Twilight Zone Mannequin moving.

  • @MrJake8555
    @MrJake8555 Месяц назад +5

    turns out the janitor was just an OOOOPTICAL ILUUUUUSSSION..... wut ?

    • @MrJake8555
      @MrJake8555 Месяц назад

      ruclips.net/video/9TNcvfTPX0g/видео.htmlsi=XXv5qwVHeAgxxYmK

    • @CreepyStoriesJR
      @CreepyStoriesJR Месяц назад

      😅

  • @AlyssaMelfi
    @AlyssaMelfi Месяц назад

    This is really great. I really like it. I just wanted to know how you do it. Like do you have an app or? I’m just curious.

  • @MattyxBobo
    @MattyxBobo 17 дней назад +1

    Wish this story made sense, would have been creepy

  • @bertordez8391
    @bertordez8391 23 дня назад

    From Poland greetings

  • @florathecat1524
    @florathecat1524 Месяц назад

    You have a great voice!

  • @AntonioGarcia-jm3hv
    @AntonioGarcia-jm3hv Месяц назад +4

    why would this mall ever need a night security guard? great story otherwise.

    • @Verethill18
      @Verethill18 Месяц назад

      Kids, robbers, vandals etc.

  • @atlas6355
    @atlas6355 Месяц назад +1

    Wow the audio book spinoff series for fnaf is pretty good eh

  • @LovelessPrince
    @LovelessPrince Месяц назад +1

    I’ll take a job like this.

  • @subhajit_nandi
    @subhajit_nandi 3 дня назад

    boy this was scary

  • @wadewilson-xi1zs
    @wadewilson-xi1zs 27 дней назад +1

    First one was FNAF 😂

  • @Meniscus6
    @Meniscus6 Месяц назад

    Those are some easy rules tbh if you had a timer and a habit of checking watch at certain areas

    • @Meniscus6
      @Meniscus6 Месяц назад

      Oh i forgot to add maybe some headphones for music

  • @ChaKaczu
    @ChaKaczu Месяц назад

    1:48Am working hotel night security about to start the video

  • @SunniMerlot
    @SunniMerlot Месяц назад +1

    So what was the janitor doing while shit was hitting the fan in the halls

  • @NightStories-17
    @NightStories-17 Месяц назад

    Good ❤

  • @CARLIN4737
    @CARLIN4737 Месяц назад +1

    Absolutely terryfying?

  • @NamasW24
    @NamasW24 Месяц назад +1

    Are all your security guard stories linked going by the opening …?

  • @ÜłţřæĐēČøð
    @ÜłţřæĐēČøð Месяц назад +1

    Ah yes, just in time for bed!

    • @NightmaresEcho1
      @NightmaresEcho1 Месяц назад +1

      I have recently narrated a couple of very disturbing true stories

    • @ÜłţřæĐēČøð
      @ÜłţřæĐēČøð Месяц назад

      @@NightmaresEcho1 just gave you a sub, now I get to watch your channel grow 👍

  • @BigJon550
    @BigJon550 Месяц назад +7

    If I hear another Strange rule story again, I'll die a happy man 👍

  • @kinglopez111
    @kinglopez111 Месяц назад +1

    Why this feel like finaf creepy pasta

  • @freyja52._
    @freyja52._ Месяц назад

    Only one awake listening to scary stories. Great times. Just your voice isn't scary 😉😅

  • @oleyeller3256
    @oleyeller3256 2 дня назад

    BEWARE! Dont read further bc stupid spoilers

  • @CarrieSoVery
    @CarrieSoVery 22 дня назад

    I heard this one on another channel

  • @KalelKing-xn2uz
    @KalelKing-xn2uz Месяц назад +1

    Mfs always wanna not just follow the rules and live a long peaceful life

  • @SandyPawz-p2k
    @SandyPawz-p2k Месяц назад +1

    I enjoyed this creepy story!👍 Thanks!

  • @oxnardbadboy
    @oxnardbadboy 20 дней назад

    Five night with Fredward

  • @CleliaEbie
    @CleliaEbie Месяц назад +1

    Don't look at them but if they move gtfo 😅 excuse me? if I see them move that means I was looking. I quit

  • @cheeznarcan901
    @cheeznarcan901 Месяц назад

    This is literally fnaf

  • @josephkaye8154
    @josephkaye8154 Месяц назад

    Cool story and well read. Three double ad breaks though.

  • @jayceec3539
    @jayceec3539 Месяц назад +1

    This story skips rules #2 & #7 ..

    • @GoodOleDFT
      @GoodOleDFT 17 дней назад

      Rune #2 is to not look directly at mannequins after 12AM, and leave immediately if they move.

    • @jayceec3539
      @jayceec3539 17 дней назад

      @GoodOleDFT How do you know it to be rule#2? If it's not in the story at all?

    • @GoodOleDFT
      @GoodOleDFT 16 дней назад

      @jayceec3539 Pay more attention.

  • @fb-joker-xd5476
    @fb-joker-xd5476 Месяц назад +3

    First

  • @muffpopo-br1mc
    @muffpopo-br1mc 16 дней назад

    OPTICAL ILLUSION ? UR GUARDIAN ANGEL HELPED U WT THAT "RULES N PAPER " F IT WERE NOT 4 THAT THEN DUNNO *** IT S ALSO GD THAT U JUST FOLLED THOSE RULES TILL THE REAL PERSON MANAGER KNOCKED ON THE DOOR. U WERE BRAVE ENAF TO DO THOSE ROUNDS AGAIN . DUTY CALLS

  • @burgertime4994
    @burgertime4994 Месяц назад

    Can I give you some critique?

  • @MGS.037
    @MGS.037 Месяц назад +1

    Are these stories true?????

  • @stephenneal23
    @stephenneal23 Месяц назад

    Fun story, shit ad break placement.

  • @NightmaresEcho1
    @NightmaresEcho1 Месяц назад +2

    I had a recent very disturbing scary experience that i just posted to my chnl

  • @drayz9655
    @drayz9655 Час назад

    mall? so why do i stare at this little shit gas station u got here

    • @drayz9655
      @drayz9655 Час назад

      do better and put a fake mall atleast moron

  • @romancenturion1086
    @romancenturion1086 Месяц назад +6

    ENOUGH WITH THE RULES' PASTAS

  • @TheSkreeBat
    @TheSkreeBat Месяц назад

    Why do you add two minutes of nothing at the end on every video? No credits or anything just end it XD

    • @OliviaEnriquez-nf8dl
      @OliviaEnriquez-nf8dl Месяц назад

      But it lowkey helps people get to sleep like it helps me alot bc when the story ends I can tell so then the silence puts me to sleep rather than another ad for a different video

  • @Here_is_Waldo
    @Here_is_Waldo Месяц назад +2

    Where do these writers live that security guards don't need training? You need multiple certificates and months of training to be a guard in Australia.

    • @kevincaruthers5412
      @kevincaruthers5412 Месяц назад +2

      Not in the US.
      ARMED security you need certificates and such.
      But UNARMED security, nope.
      Pretty much need a clean record and a heart beat.
      At least that is the way it was the last time I did a security gig... decades ago.
      :)

    • @CreepyStoriesJR
      @CreepyStoriesJR Месяц назад

      He was already a security guard, but unemployed.

    • @borisruzicic3049
      @borisruzicic3049 Месяц назад +2

      Also, I don't really think they care much about CV, when you're applying to work in "demon" hotel/motel/mall etc...

    • @CreepyStoriesJR
      @CreepyStoriesJR Месяц назад

      @@borisruzicic3049

  • @5stringking
    @5stringking Месяц назад

    You mean to tell me the mall has not one janitor?

  • @earl296
    @earl296 Месяц назад

    I would had made friends with the ghost and the demons

  • @nightingalevoncarstein5694
    @nightingalevoncarstein5694 Месяц назад

    Dude
    That was an easy job, why quit?

  • @BlemishedHorror
    @BlemishedHorror Месяц назад +1

    Bro keep the bass nobody does that bro that’s absurd tired of these light voice freaks 😂

  • @SSS-ScaryStories-p1r
    @SSS-ScaryStories-p1r Месяц назад