Haya’s dialogues are too wordy. Not sure if they’re trying to make her sound like a foreigner with all those “big” words & complicated sentences….but native English speakers don’t talk that way. She made no sense in that rain scene.
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I think the idea was great to produce something different but I feel the dialogues are very superficial lacking depth and the characters are unable to deliver them as if they really feel what they say. Another thing is that the episodes are way too short looks like a trailer and not a single episode makes a proper connection with the next one. The plot is very loose.
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Wtf was that rain scene ! Their lips don't match the lines they're speaking. The actress is clearly struggling to mouth her dialogues in the rain. Could've shot better.
You have to do ADR in shots where ambient noise like rain wind crowds or traffic are too high and the boom or lapels can't grab audio well. It's ok you learn these things when you've actually been on a set.
No one talks like this. Watch english films and dramas. Like someone commented earlier, 'the dialogues are too mouthy.' I can try my hand at some script writing for you guys 😊
This was a fairly nice try tho but honestly speaking, your target audience belong to Pakistan currently I mean it might take a bit longer to get to the foreign public so instead of making the dialogues complicated keeping them clear cut would aid in understandimg the story better.... PLUS too much music makes it impossible to watch without subtitles even hearing the dialogues is difficult sometimes. In a nut shell the production is super cool ngl the story seems different as well ❤️
Honestly, overall i like the drama . But it can be improved. The dialogue delivery just looks forced to me ,its not Natural. Its Too overdone in my opinion.
I initially had no interest in watching this, but when I finally became engaged, the episode ended abruptly after only 8 minutes. I wish it had been longer, at least 35-40 minutes
Basically the dialogues the realistic rhythm coz even in everyday life people especially who talk in English or for that matter natives don’t use fancy jargons.
Tuja q Jalan horahi ha aunty jee 😂😂😂 Jo Pasand ha wahi Deko option zyada ha jaker ankle aunty ka romance wala drama Deko gar ki fighting wagera Deko jaker
@@shakiaba5578 unperh khi ka uncle ko ankle likh rhy ho😂😂 thora prh lyte to aj tmhy likhna to ata hota naw yeh local copy tm jyse log hi psnd kr skty sasty chapriii..
Fahad bin noor man what was that rain scene.they were standing under a shower .khushhal needs to do theatre to improve his dialogue control otherwise he is pretty good
If they have mix little bit of Urdu Dialogue would sounds much much better They have tried best but story could be betterall the way actor khushal nailed it
I like the format, duration, production quality. English sounds a bit strange, don't know if actors try to speak in foreign accent or its just to wordy. Simple Story. Just focus on 2 characters. 8 mins pass by with No stress, No tension. Nice Try. Keep it going.
I tried watching the drama so many times. But it is highly annoying. Language sounds so alien. It’s not even a normal English that anybody speaks anywhere.
Instead of degrading let’s appreciate their efforts,, may be the team is new but atleast doing far away better then behuda Pakistani dramas. And secondly their dialogues are balanced but please increase duration. We appreciate your efforts.
0:45 this dialogue is so "🤓☝🏽" coded. If I said that when I'm trying to confront some1 or agrue , they'd laugh at me (and rightfully so) , the actors are pretty, dialogue delivery is tolerable most of the times, costumes are pretty too, the storyline's also fine but the script writing could've been better. The script seems ai generated because the dialogues are so corny.😭🙏🏽
Well, idk how to put my words to so that its constructive criticism, I'M from indian ngl, I watch pakistani dramas, if your targeted audience is international audience, you need a great story, and everything shall have a standard, i don't understand waht an episode is trying to convey, its so vague nothing is specsified its actually frustrating to watch the actress except burak, cause they can't act...
I was just waiting for a good comment to like But unfortunately there is nothing........ Appreciate their efforts, If you cant at least don't speak negative & don't try to demotivate them please
They’re clearly struggling with the English dialogue and with the added forced accents, it seems as if the actors are fifth graders reading a D-rated English novel out loud. Stick to your native language…oh wait these wannabes think acting like they can’t speak Urdu is a flex
Haya’s dialogues are too wordy. Not sure if they’re trying to make her sound like a foreigner with all those “big” words & complicated sentences….but native English speakers don’t talk that way. She made no sense in that rain scene.
😂😂😂 exactly 💯
It sounds like a play 😂😂
Ai generated dialogues that's why no personal touch.
100 she sounds unhinged an her use of English stilted!🤣
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Man!!! The drama has no connection, like Where it ends and how it starts i just don’t get it with previous and new episode🤦♀️
seems like something straight out of wattpad or som istg🤣🤣
Ikrrr its getting shit day by day
I think the idea was great to produce something different but I feel the dialogues are very superficial lacking depth and the characters are unable to deliver them as if they really feel what they say. Another thing is that the episodes are way too short looks like a trailer and not a single episode makes a proper connection with the next one. The plot is very loose.
Correct
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Haya' s dialogue and action looks funny to me😂😂
Wtf was that rain scene ! Their lips don't match the lines they're speaking. The actress is clearly struggling to mouth her dialogues in the rain. Could've shot better.
I totally agree...itni mehnat karke..English bol raha he...cool vibe aneke liye...O bhi accha hota to samajta😂😂😂...Totally Rubbish..bakwas..useless..
You have to do ADR in shots where ambient noise like rain wind crowds or traffic are too high and the boom or lapels can't grab audio well.
It's ok you learn these things when you've actually been on a set.
Why is Haya talking like she's doing a spoof of a Jane Austen novel?
Nailed it 😭
Exactly!
No one talks like this. Watch english films and dramas. Like someone commented earlier, 'the dialogues are too mouthy.' I can try my hand at some script writing for you guys 😊
Thanks for your input! 🌟 We appreciate your feedback on the dialogue style.
This was a fairly nice try tho but honestly speaking, your target audience belong to Pakistan currently I mean it might take a bit longer to get to the foreign public so instead of making the dialogues complicated keeping them clear cut would aid in understandimg the story better.... PLUS too much music makes it impossible to watch without subtitles even hearing the dialogues is difficult sometimes. In a nut shell the production is super cool ngl the story seems different as well ❤️
Thanks for the feedback! We'll work on clearer dialogues and adjusting the music. Glad you're enjoying the story! 😊
This drama trying to give fifty shade vibe
Actress with that bangs n guy with suit
Imagine hania amir as haya . This girl trying so hard w the accent
Honestly, overall i like the drama . But it can be improved. The dialogue delivery just looks forced to me ,its not Natural. Its Too overdone in my opinion.
This girl don't know how to act at all
Old Pakistani drama is better than it
What is 😢
A joke 😂😂
Thier accents are so bad I want to cry. Neither pakistani accent nor British not American. Khichdi banadi sab accents ki haya ne.
Khushal U'r Charismatic, Highly Captivating Person Indeed, Actually Sound Like A Foreign actor ♥️🫰
He just ate and left no crumbs ❤
Make one more drama. Are you going to post hundreds of videos for one drama only?
OH MY GOD! SUCH A GREAT EPISODE!. HAVE NEVER SEEN THIS MUCH CLARITY IN AUDIO WITH THE RAIN THING GOING
I initially had no interest in watching this, but when I finally became engaged, the episode ended abruptly after only 8 minutes. I wish it had been longer, at least 35-40 minutes
Basically the dialogues the realistic rhythm coz even in everyday life people especially who talk in English or for that matter natives don’t use fancy jargons.
It is starting but his or her English is improving 😂
I don't understand this drama. Koi sir pair he nai hae. Are they making a joke with us.
Such a nice mukalma 😂
What kind of joke is this
Shuru hote hi khatam hogaya
I like it very much but It's too short duration for an episode , it seems such a short clip of serial .
It's a new form of content na! We are so used to 1 hour episodes..
Why so monotonous??!
I like this drama and it’s a good first effort
THIS IS NOT REAL IM GONNA DIEEEE 😂😂😂😂😂😂
Thode dialogue ache likh lo bhai😂
Thankyou for the feedback
im not sure why im cringing and enjoying this drama at the same time /..lmao
It's utter nonsense
It's a a.stupid director and actors chapri local copy of any Turkish drama
Thk bola h bilkul😂
Tuja q Jalan horahi ha aunty jee 😂😂😂 Jo Pasand ha wahi Deko option zyada ha jaker ankle aunty ka romance wala drama Deko gar ki fighting wagera Deko jaker
@@shakiaba5578 unperh khi ka uncle ko ankle likh rhy ho😂😂 thora prh lyte to aj tmhy likhna to ata hota naw yeh local copy tm jyse log hi psnd kr skty sasty chapriii..
Fahad bin noor man what was that rain scene.they were standing under a shower .khushhal needs to do theatre to improve his dialogue control otherwise he is pretty good
If they have mix little bit of Urdu Dialogue would sounds much much better
They have tried best but story could be betterall the way actor khushal nailed it
Im a Pakistani but sorry to say Indian actors speak English better than Pakistani actors.. their accent is also better
I like the format, duration, production quality. English sounds a bit strange, don't know if actors try to speak in foreign accent or its just to wordy. Simple Story. Just focus on 2 characters. 8 mins pass by with No stress, No tension. Nice Try. Keep it going.
I tried watching the drama so many times. But it is highly annoying. Language sounds so alien. It’s not even a normal English that anybody speaks anywhere.
6:25 One of th best scene ❤ Sleep My Love 💯❤💓
The complexity of her english dialogues is giving us second hand embarrassment
Not gonna lie they are just fighting for that reason
Only yeah yeah krhy hn
i can garuntee this chanell is a start up
Yes, very immature.. They have posted hundreds of videos from one short drama
i wrote this it not in a bad sense guys
Amaaazing ❤
It's so nice .
Next episode when?❤❤
Why do u have to speak in English
Draining all the emotions
Worst
Uff Tum logoh ko samj q Nahi arahi ha ya drama Nahi vertical series ha Urdu English har language mein ya available Hoga jub Pura complete Hoga
Great direction!
I don't get this drama every episode is all about flash backs 🙄
The girl is such a bad actress
Im unable to understand the drama
Ye full drama kha milega dkhne
Here on this channel
Instead of degrading let’s appreciate their efforts,, may be the team is new but atleast doing far away better then behuda Pakistani dramas. And secondly their dialogues are balanced but please increase duration. We appreciate your efforts.
Thanks for the feedback! We appreciate your support and will consider your suggestion about the duration.
bruv what is this 9 mins episodes?
And I hate khushal khan now
Ewww what’s that ….mamya is so bad
Khushhal Khan in Crossroads >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Barzakh
This drama isn't for Pakistanis.
They really had a beautiful time together in past🥲🤍
I thought it'll will be interesting but it's so damn boaring
I dont get it . Why they were apart in the past ???
Plz translation Urdu main plz
Na mamya ki actibg na awax
Pilezzzz epi
Every Thursday and Saturday you will be having your drama dose 😊
0:45 this dialogue is so "🤓☝🏽" coded. If I said that when I'm trying to confront some1 or agrue , they'd laugh at me (and rightfully so) , the actors are pretty, dialogue delivery is tolerable most of the times, costumes are pretty too, the storyline's also fine but the script writing could've been better. The script seems ai generated because the dialogues are so corny.😭🙏🏽
Bye bye score allah hafiz sound design
Heroin is not a good actress
Hey her name is Mamya Shajaffar
Haya improves your English, please. It's not look natural 😕
Pilezzzz epi 6 urdu
Here you go ruclips.net/video/Aku9BVuGmaU/видео.htmlsi=cI-EotQ4S1L2e5dY
Dananeer ko rakh lety heroin .... ? Why not Drama hit hota
Well, idk how to put my words to so that its constructive criticism, I'M from indian ngl, I watch pakistani dramas, if your targeted audience is international audience, you need a great story, and everything shall have a standard, i don't understand waht an episode is trying to convey, its so vague nothing is specsified its actually frustrating to watch the actress except burak, cause they can't act...
I was just waiting for a good comment to like
But unfortunately there is nothing........
Appreciate their efforts, If you cant at least don't speak negative & don't try to demotivate them please
😂
Why fake english accents
Bakwass..useless..Rubbish..drama.iss actor or actress kaha se lekar aya vai😂😂😂...No natural acting..no dialogue.. Just good for nothing..😂😂😂
Plz don't forget Pakistani islamic culture.be in limits plz
The female actor is very annoying..
Damn even the english is cringe.. i mean nobody speaks that way like wtf
the female lead has no self respect at all. shes too weak
Didnt like this change, its purely faked. Her dialogues are not matching and plus its useless drama in full 2/10
What is going on this drama man
They’re clearly struggling with the English dialogue and with the added forced accents, it seems as if the actors are fifth graders reading a D-rated English novel out loud. Stick to your native language…oh wait these wannabes think acting like they can’t speak Urdu is a flex
Fake accent ...unwanted expressions ....weird
ফাউল নাটক কাহিনী ও নাই 😠
Sorry to hear you’re not enjoying the drama! 🌟 We’d love to understand more about what didn’t meet your expectations.
So forced and unnatural dialogues
Awful acting