My favorite lines: "I LOVE IT WHEN YOU SCREAM MY NAME" "Its you" "Lets have a chat, shall we daddy?" "Relax papi" "Why do they sound so Australian" The whole entire lunch scene in chapter 19 "Im a good boy" "Hey look im your magic carpet. If you reach behind you'll find a magic lamp in my pants that you can rub to get a wish" The whole coming home interaction between mom, y/n and hawks in chapter 24 My smut scene 😢 "Dear Beyonce" I KNEW IT WAS GONNA BE BEYONCE REI TODOROKI!? "You dont need to scrunch the wishes out out if it" Why you gotta do my boy twice like that "the deadpool knockoff" Nah "McCrispy" is crazy "DECAY-NAY-NAY" TWICE HAS ME DEAD
I am very fortunate to say that I do indeed have a Brian in my life of who I based this character off (IRL friend isn’t named Brian though lol) but if I could share him with everyone I would! He is a fabulous person 🥰
This is like the best chapter ever! My favorite part is when he said “if you look at my pant you will see a magic lamp and you can rub it and you get a wish”
I love the voice acting probably my favorite is when you act out Bryans way of speaking an yn screaming Hawks!! I can tell your committed and it's nice to see I see that you've taken special care to reply to your fans comments I'm glad that there's still content creators like you out there who genuinely care I hope to watch and experience as your channel grows ☺️ Thank you
To be honest I loved doing Bryans voice, I drew on my inner diva to give him all I had 😆 I enjoy reading out all of my stories and I’m just so happy that others are enjoying what I’m bringing to the table 😉 Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I really appreciate you taking the time to listen to my work, and write to me, so the least I can do is reply back! ☺️ Thank you for your support and I look forward to bringing more books for you to listen to in the future 🥰
Hawks: Thanks for the chat *daddy* Dad: Dont call me daddy.. Hawks: Ok, Your daughter calls me *daddy* , not right now she dosent, but she soon will Dad: YOU SLIMY RED WINGED B*STARD IM GONNA-
🥺 thank you so much for the subscribe! I’m really happy you’re enjoying the content! This is part 1 of 2 so there’s a part 2 of this that’s another 6 hrs … all up the complete book is 12hrs 😉
ahhh i have been trying to find this on wattpad recently and found out there’s an audio and other website to visit it. i’m pretty sure this was my first read and my favorite!
I got too scared to finish the second half of Touched and 2 years later, I’m looking back on this - still the best fanfic I have ever read/ listened to
3rd time watching this and I only JUST realized that our dad was using his quirk on us SO.MUCH. I heard in on some of the chapters that he did but I just realized when because I was focusing on the details 😧 Love all your vids ❤️
They say 3rd time is always a charmer 😂😂 don’t worry I completely miss things too even when I’m the one who wrote the story, people will point details out that I’m like WOW I DID NOT EVEN CONSIDER THAT 😂
@@MLB224 it’s really awesome getting a comment from you! This is my first e-book and I love it 🐔❤️ I think you’re a fabulous writer and I hope I can write as beautifully as you one day ^W^
@@AmyCat2505 thank you for choosing my book for your first e-book experience! 🥰 I’m really happy you’re enjoying it ☺️ I have no doubts that you are ALREADY an amazing writer, it’s only up from here 😉
This ASMR has everything! SUSPENSE,DRAMA,HUMOR AND MORE! Your ASMR's never fails to keep people at the edge of their seats or wondering what would be coming next! Love your vids!
IM SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT LOVELY 🥹 Bri Bri totally stole this whole book 😂 he outshone everyone 😂 Thank you for spending 6 hours listening to it! 🥰 not sure if you’ve found the part 2 but there’s another 6 hours to this book 😂 it’s 12hrs all up 🥴 I don’t blame you if you can’t be bothered to listen to the other 6 hours… it’s a LOT of time 😂
I REMEMBER SEEING THIS FROM WATTPAD MONTHS AGO AND IT DISAPPEARED AND IVE SPENT SO LONG LOOKING FOR A PLACE WHERE IT WAS UPLOADED THANK YOU MUCH APPRECIATED
OMG HI WATTPADER!!! 😍 thank you for finding me again 🥰 I’m sorry Wattpad deleted me but I promise RUclips won’t (well I hope not anyway! 😂) I’m really happy you liked my book and I’m stoked you found it again 🥰
I’m so happy your enjoyed part 1! 🥰 that’s 6hrs long so I’m stoked you even bothered to listen to the whole thing ☺️ I dunno about being an amazing person but I do know that YOU are an amazing person for taking the time to listen to my story and write me a message ☺️ thank you for your support 🥰
@Akuma_no_ai Lmao, I lost my phone and got a new one and forgot my acc password- this is the same person from the comment, but you're so close to ruining my record! Jk- im on my 9th watch now!
Thank you so much for watching the whole first part! 🥺 that’s 6 hours of watch time! I’m glad you enjoyed it 😁 I hope you enjoy the second part as well 🥰🥰
@@lucashafternekoenergeticea9829 yes of course 🥰 you guys take the time to write me a message so the least I can do is respond with my thanks ☺️ I’m stoked you’ve saved it! That’s made my day ☺️
I have found it hard to find audiobooks where I can listen to the voice and still have good imagery but you do so well and I love the small moments you break character laughing at yourself. Really well done and if your the author well done on your writing as well
Oh thank you so much Jewel 🥹🫶🏽 I’m really happy you enjoyed the audio book as a whole 🥰 and yes! I am also the author 😆it’s a one woman show here haha I do it all 😆 thank you again 🥰
Omg thank you so much Izzy 🥹 I’m really happy you enjoyed part 1 🥰 (I’m sure you’ve already found part 2 by now 🤭) I honestly don’t think my voice is relaxing but I’m glad you think so 😁 welcome aboard the weirdest channel ever 😆
Omgggg I remember this fic when you still had it on Wattpad and honestly I enjoyed reading your books so much that I lost many hours of sleep because I couldn’t stop reading. Thank you so so much for creating these fics they helped me distract myself from my anxiety and really bad mental health at that time. 🙏🛐
SHOTGUN! 😍 I’m so happy you found my channel 🥰 I’m stoked you enjoyed my work on wattpad and that it helped you though a difficult time 🥹 that’s all I’ve ever wanted for my stories- for them to brighten peoples days even just a little ☺️ I’m even happier that you actually remembered this story! And recognized it when you saw it 🥰
the fact that Hawks just put up his shirt to show the mark was hilarious and i would nose bleed if someone lifts they're shirt up and shows they're abs 🤣
Bro I love this, I LOVE YOUR VIDEO AND STORIES 🙏🙏🙏‼️ THIS IS AMAZING INCREDIBLE JOB IVE BEEN LISTEN YOUR VIDEOS FOR QUITE A WHILE AND IM SO INTERESTED‼️
Ashley! 🥹 thank you so much I’m so stoked you’ve been enjoying my content 🥰 this book itself was a super long book so well done on even getting through this! 😂 thank you for your support of my work I really appreciate it 🥰
Ahaha basically 😂😂 (When I was uploading it chapter by chapter I was doing it in parts but once I completed the book I just did the whole “F the system I’m gonna jam it into one long story so they can binge” 😂😂
Okay I know it’s a little early to comment because I’m only 2 and a half hours into it but when yin was trying to get through the crowds of people and you started reading out the man trying to get everyone out of Yin’s way the whole “oh my god i sounded so Australian just then” had me laugh idk why I found it so funny I just did. Also you write Hawks so well it’s incredible. GO AUSSIE!!
ARE YOU AN AUSSIE?! 😍😍😍 hahaha I hope you enjoy the rest of the story too 🥹 and I’m glad you like how I’ve written Hawks he is one of my favourites to write because he’s such a fun character to work with. The perfect mix of asshole and hotness 😆😆
@@MLB224 Yes I am Aussie and I’m proud to say I am an Aussie, loved the rest of it and went on to listen to part two and loved every second of it, please continue writing because your a so amazing at it, can’t wait to see more of your books 😁😁😁
@@MarshMellow_Sweet AYYYYE welcome mate! Not a lot of us on here 😉 im so stoked you enjoyed the story 🥹❤️ thank you for the encouragement! You’ll be hearing plenty more from me I promise 😜 got a fair number of stories still in the ol’ tin can yet (brain… in my brain 😂)
Hawks: “What’s that boy? She’s in the cupboard!”
Yin: “NOOOOOOOOO”
*Hawks opens the Cupboard*
Hawks: “Hi Yin”
Yin: “😨😭”
Tbh Yin is like Tamaki rn 😩✨
Y/N really is channeling her inner Tamaki 😂😂
@@MLB224 FIGHT ✨
@@Vikki_Kun hahaha *start bell rings*
@@MLB224 *Fighting music comes in* Ah shit… here we go again-
@@Vikki_Kun LOL 😂
The magic carpet joke had me BROKE 💀💀🤣🤣🤣😭😭😭
LOL I’m glad you liked that one 😆
2:28:28
same
NOT THE LAMP 😭
…….I’m…..speechless………
"He's a magic carpet! I rode him!" WATH THE WHAT I LOVE THIS THANK YOU FOR YOUR EFFORTS MLB 🙏❤️
Hahah I’m glad you liked that one 😆
"GIT YO DAMN FEATHERS OFF MY GIRL BEFORE I FACTORY RESET YOU WITH ONE SLAP." 💀💀💀
Iconic 😌😂😂
The fact hawks called that guy “daddy”😂
😂😂 iconic Hawks line
Fr💀
Fr I'm dieing lmao
Hawks played that REAL smooth
@@Raindrops.blep. fr tho
My favorite lines:
"I LOVE IT WHEN YOU SCREAM MY NAME"
"Its you"
"Lets have a chat, shall we daddy?"
"Relax papi"
"Why do they sound so Australian"
The whole entire lunch scene in chapter 19
"Im a good boy"
"Hey look im your magic carpet. If you reach behind you'll find a magic lamp in my pants that you can rub to get a wish"
The whole coming home interaction between mom, y/n and hawks in chapter 24
My smut scene 😢
"Dear Beyonce" I KNEW IT WAS GONNA BE BEYONCE
REI TODOROKI!?
"You dont need to scrunch the wishes out out if it"
Why you gotta do my boy twice like that "the deadpool knockoff"
Nah "McCrispy" is crazy
"DECAY-NAY-NAY" TWICE HAS ME DEAD
I am in love with this list 😂 thank you for reminding me of the highlights 😆
NOT DECAY-NAY-NAY 🤣🤣😭
@@Demi_Sukimata iconic 😂😂
@@MLB224 Let's face it, Twice was one of the mighty iconic queens/kings, standing among Bri-Bri's excellence.
@@Demi_Sukimata oh I completely agree with you on that one 😌
Them: mr ligma
Me: don’t do it don’t do it don’t do it don’t do it
My brain: LIG MA BALL-
🤪😂😂
OMH Perverted jk 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
OMG*
Sameee
Literally me every time MlB said this ❤❤😂😂
And I quote “he’s a magic carpet, I rode him”. OMG I am died. 🤣
And he has a magic lamp to 🤣
@@kangdooshik4261 I think I just died this comment killed me…
mom: wtf-
“STAY OUT OF THIS BRIAN”
Poor brian🥲
Literally everyone rioted when Brian got yelled at 😢
we love brian
Who tf is Brian
I found Brian
@@playdoe_ 💀💀
The irony of him going to make sure that she doesn’t faint just for her to faint the moment he gets their
Lol! Iconic 😂
me: did i listen to this over 20 times? YES.
did i regret it? HELL NAH.
THIS COMMENT SPARKS JOY 🥹
I need someone like Brian in my life :
I am very fortunate to say that I do indeed have a Brian in my life of who I based this character off (IRL friend isn’t named Brian though lol) but if I could share him with everyone I would! He is a fabulous person 🥰
Honey look at my username I’m here👀✨
@@Phantom.Asher. ITS HIM! THE ✨BRIAN✨
Honey if you dont have them your it
FRR
This is like the best chapter ever! My favorite part is when he said “if you look at my pant you will see a magic lamp and you can rub it and you get a wish”
That’s my favorite part too 😂😂 I can totally see him saying something like that 😆 he’s such an adorable asśhole 😜
@@MLB224 he would also flirt with anything that had legs do I could see him saying that
@@honest-wizard-of-violet-to7091 oh 100% 😂
Ikr that was my favorite to
That made me laugh so hard I couldn't breathe
Brain is a MOOD 😂 I love him
Isn’t he amazing 😂 all hail Bri-Bri 😌
@MLB224 I'd totally start a cult for Brian XD
Hawks: Your daughter will call me daddy 😉
Yin: FVCK YEAH I WILL 😍
Ahaha ALL THOSE IN FAVOUR?! 😍😂
@@MLB224 ✋ YEAHHHHH
I love the voice acting probably my favorite is when you act out Bryans way of speaking an yn screaming Hawks!!
I can tell your committed and it's nice to see I see that you've taken special care to reply to your fans comments I'm glad that there's still content creators like you out there who genuinely care I hope to watch and experience as your channel grows ☺️
Thank you
To be honest I loved doing Bryans voice, I drew on my inner diva to give him all I had 😆 I enjoy reading out all of my stories and I’m just so happy that others are enjoying what I’m bringing to the table 😉
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I really appreciate you taking the time to listen to my work, and write to me, so the least I can do is reply back! ☺️ Thank you for your support and I look forward to bringing more books for you to listen to in the future 🥰
“He’s a magic carpet. I rode him”
Iconic 😂😂
5:46:35 Hawks, welcome to ✨anxiety✨
Fax 😌😂
Hawks: Thanks for the chat *daddy*
Dad: Dont call me daddy..
Hawks: Ok, Your daughter calls me *daddy* , not right now she dosent, but she soon will
Dad: YOU SLIMY RED WINGED B*STARD IM GONNA-
Thank you for reminding me of this conversation 😌❤️ we love Hawks 😂
6 hours??? oml you worked so hard! Sooo underrated I literally found you today and immediately love your channel and subscribed
🥺 thank you so much for the subscribe! I’m really happy you’re enjoying the content! This is part 1 of 2 so there’s a part 2 of this that’s another 6 hrs … all up the complete book is 12hrs 😉
It's so unbelievable she did a part 2
Brian is an ICON👌❤👏
Praise be to Brain and his fabulous ways 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
@@MLB224 snaps for Brian, snaps for Brian👌👏😁
@@cathrineolsen2317 mmhmm hunny *snaps boisterously* 😉
@@MLB224 😁🥰👏
Ok I think Brain is officially my favourite character, sorry Keigo XD ✨✨✨
ahhh i have been trying to find this on wattpad recently and found out there’s an audio and other website to visit it. i’m pretty sure this was my first read and my favorite!
I’m so glad you found me again! (Thank you for looking for this story again 🥺) you’re welcome here, or on my website, anytime 🥰
I got too scared to finish the second half of Touched and 2 years later, I’m looking back on this - still the best fanfic I have ever read/ listened to
This is such a sweet message 🥹🥹 I’m really happy you enjoyed it! 🥰
3rd time watching this and I only JUST realized that our dad was using his quirk on us SO.MUCH. I heard in on some of the chapters that he did but I just realized when because I was focusing on the details 😧
Love all your vids ❤️
They say 3rd time is always a charmer 😂😂 don’t worry I completely miss things too even when I’m the one who wrote the story, people will point details out that I’m like WOW I DID NOT EVEN CONSIDER THAT 😂
@@MLB224 Lol, how was your day? I personally think that because your so beautiful no day can be bad 😔💓
@@gachamikaMLB224fan THIS IS SO SWEET MIKA 🥹 but you’re the beautiful one 😉 you bring the sunshine wherever you go 😌💕
@@MLB224 Awh 😢❤
But you never answered my question.
Did the angel on earth have a good day today or not? 🤔🧐
Hawks: what is it chicken?
He asked ‘tender’-ly XDXD
Ahaha you were quick to catch that one 😆
@@MLB224 it’s really awesome getting a comment from you! This is my first e-book and I love it 🐔❤️ I think you’re a fabulous writer and I hope I can write as beautifully as you one day ^W^
@@AmyCat2505 thank you for choosing my book for your first e-book experience! 🥰 I’m really happy you’re enjoying it ☺️
I have no doubts that you are ALREADY an amazing writer, it’s only up from here 😉
“Ooh hOnEy hIs wIg WaS ✨SnAtCheD✨😉” IM DYING 😂
Hahaha I’m glad you liked that one 😂
“If you reach behind you, you’ll find a magic lamp in my pants you can rub to get a wish.”
😂😂😂
Iconic Hawks line 🤣
This ASMR has everything! SUSPENSE,DRAMA,HUMOR AND MORE!
Your ASMR's never fails to keep people at the edge of their seats or wondering what would be coming next! Love your vids!
Omg 🥺❤️ this is the sweetest messages thank you so much I’m so happy you enjoyed listening to it! 🥹❤️
The feather in the shower killed me. I'm dying trying to remember to breath.
😂 I’m sorry for the lack of oxygen, please don’t die 😂
Lol same
@@Walmart_Bag__ hey katsuki
@@bluebewwycl0udz hi
@@Walmart_Bag__ hey Bakugo 🙄
Not Brian being a king I think he dropped this 👑
He totally stole the whole damn book 😂
i love the lgbtq+ representation in some of these stories! they make me so happy for no reason
The story isn’t complete without the blessings of some LGBTQ babes in it 😌❤️
Brian slaaay,
So this was the best six hours of my life,God I want more continue so good like girl you really did well this was amazing
IM SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT LOVELY 🥹 Bri Bri totally stole this whole book 😂 he outshone everyone 😂
Thank you for spending 6 hours listening to it! 🥰 not sure if you’ve found the part 2 but there’s another 6 hours to this book 😂 it’s 12hrs all up 🥴 I don’t blame you if you can’t be bothered to listen to the other 6 hours… it’s a LOT of time 😂
I REMEMBER SEEING THIS FROM WATTPAD MONTHS AGO AND IT DISAPPEARED AND IVE SPENT SO LONG LOOKING FOR A PLACE WHERE IT WAS UPLOADED
THANK YOU MUCH APPRECIATED
OMG HI WATTPADER!!! 😍 thank you for finding me again 🥰 I’m sorry Wattpad deleted me but I promise RUclips won’t (well I hope not anyway! 😂) I’m really happy you liked my book and I’m stoked you found it again 🥰
Why did they do that🤔
LOL I love how you named the bosses "ligma" and "bofa"😂😭⚽️⚾️🏀🏈🏉🎾🎱
Ahaha my humour is broken 😂
This is the best chapter i have ever listened to. I love this
I’m so happy you enjoyed it!! There’s a part 2 (another 6 hours) as well 😉 it will be in the completed books playlist 🥰
Thank you so much, I love how this has some humor mixed in with it, please keep doing these videos.
I’m really happy you’re enjoying my story 🥰 thank you for taking the time to listen and for leaving me such a lovely message 🥰
We just got a letter~ We just got a letter! We just got a letter 😗🙌🏾 wonder who it's from 💃🏾✨
POV: you reading the comments while watching then you have to rewind because you didn’t full hear the sentence
If this isn’t me 😂😂
The time and effort put into these is just- unfathomable 😩✨
Well done. 👍
🥺🥰 thank you Duckie 🥰 you’re so kind 🥰
This is awesome!!!! I liked when you said “one of those hiccup laugh snorts” haha 😂 you seem like an amazing person and I love your voice! :)
I’m so happy your enjoyed part 1! 🥰 that’s 6hrs long so I’m stoked you even bothered to listen to the whole thing ☺️ I dunno about being an amazing person but I do know that YOU are an amazing person for taking the time to listen to my story and write me a message ☺️ thank you for your support 🥰
You ARE an amazing person! Thank you for making this! It’s so cool! :)
@@bucket-hat-vibes you’re so welcome 🥰 it’s my pleasure
Omg this is amazing too!! I can't get enough of your books and audios. They are my absolute favorite. ❤️❤️
You’re so kind Emily 🥹 thank you, I’m glad you enjoy my content 🥰
7th time listening~
Still love Brian more and more everytime I listen to this 😂❤
I feel like you hold the record for the most listens Mika 🥹
@@MLB224 Haha probably!
This is my 4th 😂
@Akuma_no_ai Lmao, I lost my phone and got a new one and forgot my acc password- this is the same person from the comment, but you're so close to ruining my record! Jk- im on my 9th watch now!
Me "you can't watch this all in one time it's 6 hours long."
*Watches it all anyway*
That’s a solid effort right there! 😱❤️
Same
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS this was beautiful!!!! I loved it so much T0T
Thank you so much for watching the whole first part! 🥺 that’s 6 hours of watch time! I’m glad you enjoyed it 😁 I hope you enjoy the second part as well 🥰🥰
Woah, bro you actually responded?! ( o-o)
I listened to it while doing school, very nice! ^^ I 100% will already have it saved to my watch list ( UvU)
@@lucashafternekoenergeticea9829 yes of course 🥰 you guys take the time to write me a message so the least I can do is respond with my thanks ☺️ I’m stoked you’ve saved it! That’s made my day ☺️
I have found it hard to find audiobooks where I can listen to the voice and still have good imagery but you do so well and I love the small moments you break character laughing at yourself. Really well done and if your the author well done on your writing as well
Oh thank you so much Jewel 🥹🫶🏽 I’m really happy you enjoyed the audio book as a whole 🥰 and yes! I am also the author 😆it’s a one woman show here haha I do it all 😆 thank you again 🥰
aw yes the highlight of an introvert. An empty elevator. I can relate. Though I prefer empty buildings but I'll take what I can get.
Every introvert felt that 😝
Brian is everything. He sounds like the most adorable painfully annoying person alive.
All of your comments have been pulled from the fountain of truth, my god 😂
In chapter 33, I HAD FRIKIN GOOSE BUMBS! You did great!! keep going and you will definitely reach the top!!
Thank you so much innocent 🥺💕 I’m really happy I was able to provoke such a strong response with my words ☺️
@@MLB224 Your welcome!! Glad that I could make you happy!!! 😊
@@RenTheBlob you certainly did 🥹💕
I WAS ABOUT TO START CRYNG OUT OF EMBARRASSMENT IN CHAPTER 33
IM SORRY 😭😭😭
I found this at 11 pm and im gonna stay up all night to watch it 👍 👍
Golly I hope it was worth it because it’s a long ass video 😂
@@MLB224 your videos are always worth it
Chapter 22
Hawks: “I’m a good boi.”
Me: Um.. 😵💫🤣
😂😂
Uh let's rewind to work that one day and see what he did
Imagine this
Hawks: **gets scared of something**
Y/n:......
Hawks: **scared sqwacks**
Y/n: eep
Hawks: i- umm sorry
Y/n: yup
😂😂 would be cutely chaotic 😆
@@MLB224 i know right
Omg i laughed out loud when Hawks said
You're Free to call me Daddy😭😭
Bro give me mixed Feelings
He is a walking paradox 😂
Best 6 hours of my life👌 You now have a new subscriber (Also how is your voice so relaxing???)
Omg thank you so much Izzy 🥹 I’m really happy you enjoyed part 1 🥰 (I’m sure you’ve already found part 2 by now 🤭)
I honestly don’t think my voice is relaxing but I’m glad you think so 😁 welcome aboard the weirdest channel ever 😆
@MLB224 I did already find part 2 lol and I'm going to listen to it tmrw cause it's pretty late for me rn. Also ty for the heart😊
@@izzybauer7861 yes! You need sleep after that long binge 😉 I hope you have a good rest and you’re so welcome! Thank you for your support 🥹
When hawks called our dad daddy tho ✋😭🤚
That part really caused a riot 😂
I swear I did watch this last year and I loved it so I’m watching it again❤❤❤😂
This makes me so happy 🥹💕
Sameeee
I do that with a lot of these audio story things
Watching it again 😂😂😂😂❤❤❤
@@laneywilliams8810 lol
Brian is so iconic 😂❤
Isn’t he?? 😂😂
the fact that i had just argued with my family and the moment i heard your Happy voice i was immediately HAPPY WITH YA!
I’m so glad I had a positive effect on your mood 🥰
I love to come back and listen this every couple of months! It’s really one of the best written fics I read/listened to!! ❤
I’m so happy you like coming back to this one to listen 🥹🫶🏽🫶🏽 thank you so much for your support 🥹❤️
@@MLB224 Yes ofc!! 💗💗
Omgggg I remember this fic when you still had it on Wattpad and honestly I enjoyed reading your books so much that I lost many hours of sleep because I couldn’t stop reading.
Thank you so so much for creating these fics they helped me distract myself from my anxiety and really bad mental health at that time. 🙏🛐
SHOTGUN! 😍 I’m so happy you found my channel 🥰 I’m stoked you enjoyed my work on wattpad and that it helped you though a difficult time 🥹 that’s all I’ve ever wanted for my stories- for them to brighten peoples days even just a little ☺️
I’m even happier that you actually remembered this story! And recognized it when you saw it 🥰
Hawks was never a main comfort character of mine. Until now. Thank you MLB, for opening my eyes to the bigger picture. 😌
Oh I’m so glad I was able to sway your thoughts on him 😉 tbh I wasn’t really into him before I wrote this book and then… well… things changed 😆😆
This book is literally my spirit animal😂
IM SO GLAD BRI BRI WOULD APPROVE 😂
“Flying ball of happiness and hotness”
😂 Yes just YES
“Come to me Wifey” Don’t need to say it twice Hawks 🏃🏻♀
Lol 😂 why is this me? 😂
@@MLB224 Don’t we all tho 😩👌 Hawks is just 😩❤✨
@@Vikki_Kun agreed 😌
@@Vikki_Kun*speedruns wormholes for the MHA universe* 🪂
@@Dusty_Crusty09 AYY 😩💅
Brian is a ✨💖QUEEN💖✨
PRASIE HIM YASSS HUNNY 💅🏼
Random: are you listening to this for the 4th time
Me: duh 😌💅🏾✨
🥺🥺❤️ this is my Queen ☝🏽
Uncle Brian is just like my aunt’s girlfriend lol😂 we all need a person in our life like Uncle Brian
AMEN!! 😌❤️❤️
MR LIGMA 🤣🤣🤣I CAN'T BREATHE
As you can see my sense of humor is completely broken. I apologize 😂
MR LIGMA 😂
But Mr. BOFA killed me I can’t breathe 😂😂😂😂
The crackhead energy was coming out strong in those parts 😂😂
I’m sorry but MISTER LIGMA I love the way your brain works 😂
Also, Yn.exe has stopped working
Ahaha I’m glad you like how my weird brain works 😂 Welcome to my world 😂 and yes, Y/N exe has definitely stopped working 😂
@@MLB224😂😂😂
Finally coming back to finish this after 4 whole months,
Also, did not expect Brian to dance to Unholy- 😂😂
I can see Bri dancing to unholy. Like. It would be his theme song, for sure 😂
HAH! FINISHED IN MONTHS, I FINISHED THIS IN THREE DAYS!! :3 ✨Also, Love the pfp!✨
the fact that Hawks just put up his shirt to show the mark was hilarious and i would nose bleed if someone lifts they're shirt up and shows they're abs 🤣
Maybe that’s the reaction he was going for that sly guy 😏😏
Guess whos back- back again. Mikas back. Tell a friend
(Watching this for the like- eleventh time now)
MIKAAAA 😍😍😍😍
@@MLB224 MLBBBB 😍
SAME GIRL LISTENING FOR THE EIGHTH TIME
@@Demi_Sukimata SLAY!
Girllll this was the first video I ever saw from you two years ago. I loved it and it turned me into like a super fan, M! That’s why we’re besties!
Omggg 🥺🥺🥺 I’m glad this video bought you into my life 🥹😉 how have you been?! 🥰
Not me realizing I watched this for 6 hours thinking it was 6 minutes-
Oh! Well thank you for sticking around for the 6 hours 😉💕
What an icon that Brian✨
Amen 😌💕
Me, an empath, sensing Hawks may be feeling bad for what he did just now- 😹🙌🏾✨
😂😂 he probably did feel bad he’s a gentle birdy underneath it all 🥹
Bro I love this, I LOVE YOUR VIDEO AND STORIES 🙏🙏🙏‼️ THIS IS AMAZING INCREDIBLE JOB IVE BEEN LISTEN YOUR VIDEOS FOR QUITE A WHILE AND IM SO INTERESTED‼️
Ashley! 🥹 thank you so much I’m so stoked you’ve been enjoying my content 🥰 this book itself was a super long book so well done on even getting through this! 😂 thank you for your support of my work I really appreciate it 🥰
IM SO DONE “RAY OF GAY SUNSHINE”🤣
4:31:40
You are so underrated…you are amazing!
Tysm Amy 🥺 I’m stoked you’re enjoying my story ☺️
Honestly I’m really happy you replied because most of the time other creators don’t check the comments not trying to talk bad tho
@@amywan343 I try and reply every comment I see ☺️ I appreciate people taking the time to write a nice comment so the least I can do is reply ☺️
2:56:33
*cutely writes an entirely different ending to the situation that’s filled with angst and changes the entire storyline*
I have problems
LOL 😆 welp time to pull out your writing stuff then and get to it 📝 😂
@@MLB224
Already done man ✨✨
So it's fanafiction ²?
@@letmediealready-m1q it is indeed a fanfiction 🥰
3:20:20 I FR HATE GETTING CAUGHT DOIN SUM IM NOT SUPPOSED TO BE DOIN 😥💅🏿💅🏿
LITERALLY SAME I WOULD DIE 😩😩
Live
Laugh
BRIAN ✨✨
AMEN!!! 😌❤️❤️❤️
OMG NO YN DON'T USE YOUR QUIRK ON HIM AHHH!!! 😰
🤭🤭
Yes like I’m internally screaming rn 😢
4:26:50 this statement is for ever going to be reminberd
😂😂 there are a few very memorable lines in this book haha
Omg i knowwww
Lamp in pants thing got me 😂
Ahaha 🤣 unexpected comedy 😜
@@MLB224 yeah🤣
Listening to this all over again because I'm a simp and I love the story🤪😋
🥰 simps are always welcome anytime 😉
I Might too 😋💅
Ah yes my Vintage Inspired Oval- Emerald, Rose Gold Antique Emerald dream ring 😣🤚🏾💍
Aka the one I got you for our wedding? 😜
@@MLB224 yup the one on my ring finger everyday 😌💅🏾✨
@@sleepysaturnsstorytimes2870 I delight I feel rn 😌💜
so far this is my favourite one💖😀
I’m glad this is a fave 😉
Them: Fuck parts I'm gonna make a 6 hour movie
Ahaha basically 😂😂
(When I was uploading it chapter by chapter I was doing it in parts but once I completed the book I just did the whole “F the system I’m gonna jam it into one long story so they can binge” 😂😂
2:28:34 OMG IM DYING!!! 💀 Also this was so food omg!! Thank you so much im subscribed now ❤ Also where can I find the book?
Pls don’t die! No dying allowed in my books 😆😆
@@jadahoward296 thank you Jada! 🥰
Yay thank you guys so much!!
@@evadeeva731 no worries! Enjoy 🥰
Anyone else skip school for this?
AS THE AUTHOR I DIDNT SEE THIS 😆😆😆😆
Yes
I did
I did I skipped summer school
i love the argument at the 4 hour 10 minute mark its so funny!! (not trying to be rude or insult the situation)
Everyone was so offended on behalf of Brian 😂😂
Ngl, the magic carpet makes me laugh, I laughed so hard it started hurting me..and sorry Hawks but I love Brian, he’s my fav.❤😂
Brian totally stole this book 😂😂
I came I listened and I enjoyed! :) now that’s good content I almost died with the hide and seek! 😂 Brian was amazing!
😂😂 everyone was dying at the hide and seek haha you did so well to stick around for 6 whole hours! Thank you for listening 🥰
i LIVE for brian's energy💅💅💅
Isn’t it amazing 🥰🥰
@@MLB224 yessss
Okay I know it’s a little early to comment because I’m only 2 and a half hours into it but when yin was trying to get through the crowds of people and you started reading out the man trying to get everyone out of Yin’s way the whole “oh my god i sounded so Australian just then” had me laugh idk why I found it so funny I just did. Also you write Hawks so well it’s incredible. GO AUSSIE!!
ARE YOU AN AUSSIE?! 😍😍😍 hahaha I hope you enjoy the rest of the story too 🥹 and I’m glad you like how I’ve written Hawks he is one of my favourites to write because he’s such a fun character to work with. The perfect mix of asshole and hotness 😆😆
@@MLB224 Yes I am Aussie and I’m proud to say I am an Aussie, loved the rest of it and went on to listen to part two and loved every second of it, please continue writing because your a so amazing at it, can’t wait to see more of your books 😁😁😁
@@MarshMellow_Sweet AYYYYE welcome mate! Not a lot of us on here 😉 im so stoked you enjoyed the story 🥹❤️ thank you for the encouragement! You’ll be hearing plenty more from me I promise 😜 got a fair number of stories still in the ol’ tin can yet (brain… in my brain 😂)
I STAN BRIAN HONESTLY!!😤😩
He is amazing 🥺
@@MLB224 AWWWW THANK YOU BBSSS
Thank god for Hawks!! Oh- wait. NOOO!!! AHHHH NO NO NO NO NO 😣🤚🏾 WAIT NO NOT REGRET NOW 😭
😂😂 the emotions!
@@MLB224 plz I was going through the ringer 😭🤚🏾
@@sleepysaturnsstorytimes2870 😭 stay strong, stay strong 💪🏽
@@MLB224 I'll try 😣🏋🏾👍🏾
Can we talk about the name of the payroll boss and the street name of the apartment that her and her mom moved to? Very questionable names there lol
Ehehehe😏 we don’t talk about the crackhead names 😂