This turned out brilliantly, and I agree with some changes you've made to help it flow. One thing though, "Beg for mercy, wont make me think twice" is what is being said by the girl to the boy, changing it to, "wont make you think twice", makes it seem like the girl is the one begging the boy for mercy, when she is in fact the one ditching the boy. I should've probably mentioned that in regards to context though. Can't wait to hear the others.
my bad I didn't even realize I read it wrong when I was writing it down from the message lol.....No wonder I was a little bit puzzled by it too but I thought, "Eh, he wrote it lol."
Mallorie Herrera Haha, seems like a case of, "inside of my baby" again, lol. But if I have wrote something at all confusing, just ask me about it and I'll fix it up/explain it.
You did great! I bet it took a while to put it all together. Love this song! I forgot about it and rediscovered it today on hook theory... so that's why I'm almost a decade late lol.
Wow ive been listening to the korean version and i thought it didn't flow but that's just me, I think that if GG sang this in english it would have been great just like how you did this is perfect b/c it made sense
*blushes* You guys! You flatter me too much.. This was my earliest piece of work, I like to think I only improved from here on in, my latest piece was "Happiness". Maybe you should go and flatter me there too.. *shy* Edit: If you're into Girls' Generation Chi, I wrote "Goodbye" a bit further down the line, I'm proud of that one, I just wish I was fast enough to write "Mr. Mr" but Mallorie was all over that before I'd even woke up, that girl sure can move, haha.
Mallorie Herrera Well, you shouldn't let me have all the fun, after all, you like the artists that you pass on to me also. I'm alright with you blazing ahead once in a while like you did with "Mr. Mr.", it'll be a bit of a change for you. What fun would it be if I did ALL GG songs, or ALL f(x) songs, etc. hahaha.
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This turned out brilliantly, and I agree with some changes you've made to help it flow.
One thing though, "Beg for mercy, wont make me think twice" is what is being said by the girl to the boy, changing it to, "wont make you think twice", makes it seem like the girl is the one begging the boy for mercy, when she is in fact the one ditching the boy.
I should've probably mentioned that in regards to context though.
Can't wait to hear the others.
my bad I didn't even realize I read it wrong when I was writing it down from the message lol.....No wonder I was a little bit puzzled by it too but I thought, "Eh, he wrote it lol."
Mallorie Herrera Haha, seems like a case of, "inside of my baby" again, lol.
But if I have wrote something at all confusing, just ask me about it and I'll fix it up/explain it.
oh no nothing confusing just me mixing words up as usual.....to much singing i guess lol
You did great! I bet it took a while to put it all together.
Love this song!
I forgot about it and rediscovered it today on hook theory...
so that's why I'm almost a decade late lol.
lol hey, better late then never....and yes it did take me awhile but I enjoy doing them for everyone so I don't mind
Wow ive been listening to the korean version and i thought it didn't flow but that's just me, I think that if GG sang this in english it would have been great just like how you did this is perfect b/c it made sense
Chi Ly I agree Wes did a great job writing the english lyrics...SM should higher him heehee
*blushes* You guys! You flatter me too much..
This was my earliest piece of work, I like to think I only improved from here on in, my latest piece was "Happiness".
Maybe you should go and flatter me there too.. *shy*
Edit: If you're into Girls' Generation Chi, I wrote "Goodbye" a bit further down the line, I'm proud of that one, I just wish I was fast enough to write "Mr. Mr" but Mallorie was all over that before I'd even woke up, that girl sure can move, haha.
lol now I wait for you Wes....before I was trying to hurry up and be the first one up....now I'm a bit more at a steady pace
Mallorie Herrera
Well, you shouldn't let me have all the fun, after all, you like the artists that you pass on to me also.
I'm alright with you blazing ahead once in a while like you did with "Mr. Mr.", it'll be a bit of a change for you.
What fun would it be if I did ALL GG songs, or ALL f(x) songs, etc. hahaha.
true...but Id rather let you do the ones you like and I do all the other ones since i pretty much like all the groups lol
you look really pretty without glasses!
Jasmine Sun thank you so much love ^_^
Legit. 💗
I love ur vids
Thank you
Not trying to be mean but is Mallorie a boy?
I'm a girl heehee
Oh nevermind
Eres hombre?
Patricio Rozas no I'm a girl