One of the best stories by far. Balanced characters having strengths and weaknesses, relatable situations, short but not so simple story that leaves you curious as to how it will end. Not bad for an AI.
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Even her grandpa refused her relationship with that douche because he knew how their family was. She still didn't want to see it. The fact she lasted as long as she did is that's to her ex husband and her grandfathers foresight.
It feels like the reason of their breakup was rush, as if the writer wanted to see them apart but couldn't find a good reason. This story is bad, it doesn't make a lot of sense.
The Lu Moo thing came up while her grandfather was still alive but the grandfather knew the reputation of the Lu family and how they use other families to climb the ladder. So he adamantly refused the marriage between the families and hooked her up with James instead. She always saw it as James getting a free ride when in fact it was to protect her from circling vultures trying to take away her family wealth. Neither James nor Camilla new the real reason they were forced to marry but I suspect James had figured it out at some point and the Grandfather I'm sure knew how easily manipulated she was. James was given control of the Moo business because of that reason. I highly doubt the Lu family were the only ones, in her stable of men I bet there were more than a few that were there just for benefits. So the long and short of it is she shot herself in the foot by getting with the exact family her grandfather freed her from.
I had a strange thought. With his one, instead of the final "give me another chance" scene at the grandfather's grave, have the humbled FL acknowledge that there was no chance of romance ever again, but then offer what she could in the business department, especially to spite a mutual enemy like the Liu family. That way, the ML still wins, there's the required loser (Ethan), but someone actually learns a lesson from the series of mistakes and somehow manages a turn around.
I would imagine Camilla knelt down on her Grandfather grave and beg Forgiveness since her family company name was now off cause she wasnt a talented leader Jame was the hand pick that Camillas grandfather ever chose and the right decision James knew this as well when he learned from her Grandfather well Camilla better do hardwork before choosing a successor or find someone to carry on her bloodline yet abortes her own child which was meant to secure her line and make her grandfather proud
Well unexpected her Grandfather shouldve have told her that Ethan's family were that kind of family to take wealth and discard and replace with James he knew this situation from her Grandfather well if he really wanted to save his wealth and family business he would've disown her daughter or let be on her own to decide her life without her family support and have James to be heir and successor
Hot take but I really do think Camilla loved James. she clearly didn't even want the divorce. Some who meant to hurt you wouldn't cry after hitting you with a cup. People may say oh she got with Ethan no James left her with Ethan who I guarantee was constantly in her face. Camilla felt betrayed when he went to work for her sworn enemy so she leashed out and the wrost way and it cost her not only there baby but she could never have children again. Point I'm making is yes Camilla was wrong but she didn't do anything with Ethan till James asked for the divorce and we don't know if she was going to do anything because he was so quick to ask for the divorce me personally no man who's been gone for years going come back and take my wife and unborn child without a fight. James gave up to quick maybe he'd still have his child they'd still be together if he let it play out a little.
I'm sorry did we just listen to the same story??? She already wasn't treating him properly. Going out, seeing other men even said it to his face that he wasn't her husband. And even if she was changing near the end..to me it was too little too late. She was lucky he was still willing to touch her to give her a child for her future. If she loved him why would he have to fight at all. She would make it known without any word from him that she belonged to James. No ambiguity at all. But no, all Ethan had to do was show-up say a few things and she's throwing cups at his head. Already siding with the wrong team. Apology my foot.
@TeresaRosser-ov8zd I'm not denying it was but Camilla was getting better like I said we don't know what she would of done when Ethan came back she must likely locked the door that night cause she was already emotional and didn't want to argument I willing bet Ethan didn't give her the full story he probably painted James out to be a mad man who just punched when she throw the cup she really thought he'd dodge she could handled the situation better but at the same time James was to quick ask for that divorce. He literally said he was already giving up when Ethan came back and Camilla didn't even do anything with him yet and we really don't know if she was going to. He didn't even wait to see
@@lcDer2 I have nothing but respect for you. And I honestly mean that. I would never allow someone to mistreat and disrespect me for as long as she did (let's be real, she did it for years) and then all of the sudden, when I have decided that I have had enough, GOODBYE, now you want to say you love me???!!! No, apology accepted, yes but you will never get the chance to hurt me again. Trust is gone. May your life be good from here on out. But I will not be in it.
This story sucks. He was a doormat for 12 years. He left with no assets and didn't get any revenge. The female lead did get her karma but it could have been more explosive.
What a lovely little boy. So what do you want him to do? Beat up Ethan, murder Camilla, or ransack the Moo group? What should he have done to make the revenge more explosive? This story is not even a revenge story. Its a be careful what you wish for story. All James did was grant Camilla's wish and everything else happened the way James predicted it would happen.
One of the best stories by far. Balanced characters having strengths and weaknesses, relatable situations, short but not so simple story that leaves you curious as to how it will end. Not bad for an AI.
I have insomnia but your stories help me sleep especially the male narrator which tablets also couldn't...thank you so much for regular updates....they are my lifeline now❤❤❤❤❤
Stop lying we know her name is willow and her old crush name is Ita Makoto!
And her new love is sereena
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Serves her right
When loving someone becomes a Sin. After 12 years he finally given up.
Stupid woman her stupidity and entitlement mixed with her arrogance caused her downfall..no one feel sorry for her.
Even her grandpa refused her relationship with that douche because he knew how their family was. She still didn't want to see it. The fact she lasted as long as she did is that's to her ex husband and her grandfathers foresight.
I fully believe that the Moo patriach will not find fault with James and even apologize to him. As for Camilla, well nothing more than sweet Karma
Inability to conceive is the main karma
It feels like the reason of their breakup was rush, as if the writer wanted to see them apart but couldn't find a good reason. This story is bad, it doesn't make a lot of sense.
Her pettiness cause her to can't have any children anymore.
Servers her right!
The Lu Moo thing came up while her grandfather was still alive but the grandfather knew the reputation of the Lu family and how they use other families to climb the ladder. So he adamantly refused the marriage between the families and hooked her up with James instead. She always saw it as James getting a free ride when in fact it was to protect her from circling vultures trying to take away her family wealth. Neither James nor Camilla new the real reason they were forced to marry but I suspect James had figured it out at some point and the Grandfather I'm sure knew how easily manipulated she was. James was given control of the Moo business because of that reason. I highly doubt the Lu family were the only ones, in her stable of men I bet there were more than a few that were there just for benefits. So the long and short of it is she shot herself in the foot by getting with the exact family her grandfather freed her from.
I had a strange thought. With his one, instead of the final "give me another chance" scene at the grandfather's grave, have the humbled FL acknowledge that there was no chance of romance ever again, but then offer what she could in the business department, especially to spite a mutual enemy like the Liu family. That way, the ML still wins, there's the required loser (Ethan), but someone actually learns a lesson from the series of mistakes and somehow manages a turn around.
What a little witch
I would imagine Camilla knelt down on her Grandfather grave and beg Forgiveness since her family company name was now off cause she wasnt a talented leader Jame was the hand pick that Camillas grandfather ever chose and the right decision James knew this as well when he learned from her Grandfather well Camilla better do hardwork before choosing a successor or find someone to carry on her bloodline yet abortes her own child which was meant to secure her line and make her grandfather proud
Well unexpected her Grandfather shouldve have told her that Ethan's family were that kind of family to take wealth and discard and replace with James he knew this situation from her Grandfather well if he really wanted to save his wealth and family business he would've disown her daughter or let be on her own to decide her life without her family support and have James to be heir and successor
Nice.
website i can read this novel?
19:27 😢😢😢 disgusting
another first love who came back to the country😂
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They have a club of 1st love they come 1by1 😂😂😂😂
Pathetic she was enjoying with other mens for 12 year and he still was with her what a simp
Yet he was loyal oh wait if you aren't a redpill knucklehead your a simp
That stopped after the first couple years
@@NeoCreo1 ptsd bruh
Hot take but I really do think Camilla loved James. she clearly didn't even want the divorce. Some who meant to hurt you wouldn't cry after hitting you with a cup. People may say oh she got with Ethan no James left her with Ethan who I guarantee was constantly in her face. Camilla felt betrayed when he went to work for her sworn enemy so she leashed out and the wrost way and it cost her not only there baby but she could never have children again. Point I'm making is yes Camilla was wrong but she didn't do anything with Ethan till James asked for the divorce and we don't know if she was going to do anything because he was so quick to ask for the divorce me personally no man who's been gone for years going come back and take my wife and unborn child without a fight. James gave up to quick maybe he'd still have his child they'd still be together if he let it play out a little.
I'm sorry did we just listen to the same story??? She already wasn't treating him properly. Going out, seeing other men even said it to his face that he wasn't her husband. And even if she was changing near the end..to me it was too little too late. She was lucky he was still willing to touch her to give her a child for her future. If she loved him why would he have to fight at all. She would make it known without any word from him that she belonged to James. No ambiguity at all. But no, all Ethan had to do was show-up say a few things and she's throwing cups at his head. Already siding with the wrong team. Apology my foot.
@TeresaRosser-ov8zd I'm not denying it was but Camilla was getting better like I said we don't know what she would of done when Ethan came back she must likely locked the door that night cause she was already emotional and didn't want to argument I willing bet Ethan didn't give her the full story he probably painted James out to be a mad man who just punched when she throw the cup she really thought he'd dodge she could handled the situation better but at the same time James was to quick ask for that divorce. He literally said he was already giving up when Ethan came back and Camilla didn't even do anything with him yet and we really don't know if she was going to. He didn't even wait to see
@@lcDer2 I have nothing but respect for you. And I honestly mean that. I would never allow someone to mistreat and disrespect me for as long as she did (let's be real, she did it for years) and then all of the sudden, when I have decided that I have had enough, GOODBYE, now you want to say you love me???!!! No, apology accepted, yes but you will never get the chance to hurt me again. Trust is gone. May your life be good from here on out. But I will not be in it.
Bro reupload again and again
Bruh not another weird ah story
What does bro expect?
This story sucks. He was a doormat for 12 years. He left with no assets and didn't get any revenge. The female lead did get her karma but it could have been more explosive.
He has Given up.., he doesn't want to waste any more time on her.
What a lovely little boy.
So what do you want him to do? Beat up Ethan, murder Camilla, or ransack the Moo group? What should he have done to make the revenge more explosive?
This story is not even a revenge story. Its a be careful what you wish for story. All James did was grant Camilla's wish and everything else happened the way James predicted it would happen.
The best revenge is living well.
Loo bruh it's best to just leave everything which harms You and live well
@@socipathicgaming5914 One day you will understand .
Erm first
Erm stoppign kids frim saying first i am such a alpha sigma mega omega awoo awoo 🐺🐺
Ok, man. Congrats. You have won this time.