Quiet different to most of the stories here. This is the first time I regularly smiled, grinned and found Instances of reserved laughter at the hilarious witty remarks. Guess written by someone different
I totally agree! The way the tension builds and how real the characters feel really pulls you in. It's like you're right there with them in every scene.
A truly endearing and charming story. A bit long though but worth the time. Rebecca is one of the most charming character that this channel has produced so far. And Damon fits well as her knight in shining armor. Brilliant!
Ok so this one was pretty good and even funny in a lot of places. Though do feel sorry for the poor fish. And again the ending was rushed, but all in all pretty good
Need more on Tammy and Tony. Did they have a family gathering? How about Tony insist on a formal wedding OR ELSE! What other secrets about Kathy, Tammy and the courteous Restaurant floor Manager. In fact have the reunion at that restaurant. Even invite the detective, big time spinoff potential.
Another war and pease. Just dont have teh time in the day for these super long stories. Probably good. Nope its a word fest with pathetic plot twists and not much commen sense.
Two chapters and all that time for a really lousy story. The 3 who complimented it are just the writer and a couple friends trying to influence the results. This story absolutely was horrible.
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Great Story combo, sometimes looking for justice, other times hilarious. Good job.
Love this story 🎉
nice story for a change-just an enjoyable story about possible real people-to the writer KEEP WRITING !
One of the best stories I’ve read to date!!
Quiet different to most of the stories here. This is the first time I regularly smiled, grinned and found Instances of reserved laughter at the hilarious witty remarks. Guess written by someone different
Both parts 1 & 2 were among the best I have read of these stories
I totally agree! The way the tension builds and how real the characters feel really pulls you in. It's like you're right there with them in every scene.
A truly endearing and charming story. A bit long though but worth the time. Rebecca is one of the most charming character that this channel has produced so far. And Damon fits well as her knight in shining armor. Brilliant!
Good story, did Rebeca ever show up to court? The only issue is the commercials every 3-7 minutes you get interrupted with a commercial.
I really enjoyed this story. Rebecca is a bad luck magnet, we used to call the Schleprocks, I think it came from the Flinstones
Ok so this one was pretty good and even funny in a lot of places. Though do feel sorry for the poor fish. And again the ending was rushed, but all in all pretty good
Probably the best one of these stories I've come across so far! 😅
That grocery store scene though-knocking down the cereal display? 😂 At least he saved the day with a kiss!
Stories 1&2 👍
Need more on Tammy and Tony. Did they have a family gathering? How about Tony insist on a formal wedding OR ELSE! What other secrets about Kathy, Tammy and the courteous Restaurant floor Manager. In fact have the reunion at that restaurant. Even invite the detective, big time spinoff potential.
What a great story
Good story
I was hoping that Carl was a Made man
She had been nesting
damn. the mobster that her godmother is mixed up with didn't know who she was? if the goons messed with her the old lady would be ticked off.
Another war and pease. Just dont have teh time in the day for these super long stories. Probably good.
Nope its a word fest with pathetic plot twists and not much commen sense.
Two chapters and all that time for a really lousy story. The 3 who complimented it are just the writer and a couple friends trying to influence the results. This story absolutely was horrible.
You sound like the life of the party