Same. I'm 28 but I already feel like I can't live without such melodies... The reason resides in the fact that somehow they make me feel connected to my true self and my true nature (and this reveals itself more and more urgent as time goes on and I'm aware of the "plastic" reality we're unfortunately living in each passing day)
I'm listening with noise cancelling headphones, bass turned way up, in the total darkness of night. I feel like this is what the deepest, farthest, oldest regions of our Cosmos would sound like if humans had ears to detect it. The Primordial melody that wove Creation into being, that lovingly greeted us at our beginning, and will gently beckon us to return at our end. Such an unfamiliar sense of peace this is.
I'm very grateful that people can feel this way when listening to my music and I deeply appreciate your comment and support on this channel. Thank you very much and wishing you all the best! You are always welcome on this channel🖤
Finally, it has come, non sense to write but i need to do it, that finally has come...after an endless amount of suffering, i realised that simply it has come: My time to change. Update to the haters: I finished my exams, i am almost back in shape, many weeks without scrolling and porn and that's just the beginning, i was not joking neither having trips as nobody does when they want to change, stay hard guys.
I believe in you. I am two months into changing everything and i already feel so different. Right now I'm throwing everything away that i had hoarded in my bedroom. Replacing every worry with a demand for better things from life. I'm a good person. You are, and i know that because only good people want to change themselves. We can do this.
This kind of music allows me to remember many moments that I have experienced in the past. Thank you very much, author, you allowed me to let go of the past and finally quit smoking cigarettes.
2.5 minutes into this and had to pause..i believe this is we hear as we transition from this realm into the next. I feel the need to buckle up for the ride over the next hour, but realize my ethereal body has no seat, no buckle and is floating at the speed of light through the universe... the blur of stars, galaxies, asteroid belts and planets flashing past my soul. I'm excited!!! Now hitting Play.......see everyone in eternity!!!
I sever my right hand and offer it to your altar as the blood pools into drains on the side. "Renumeration and supplication, please, One Whose Name is Gone..."
This is absolutely amazing. I love the otherworldly chants. Feels like discovering ancient forgotten ruins. Thank you for your work, your music has been a constant source of meditation and bliss for me.
Music has the feeling like you're discovering something eerie, ancient and forgotten, that was burried in history perhaps meant to be forgotten but is then accidentally rediscovered... and then the plot thickens.
When I hear this I get mixed vibes of the movie Prometheus when they search the ancient alien tomb of the creators and an opening scene of Indiana Jones in the jungle where he's looking for the golden idol. Essentially, as you said, the discovery of ancient, buried gods or civilizations that should have stayed like that(I'm sorry idk what my mind is 😅)
Я слушаю это уже 6 день подряд, кажется я вспомнила свою прошлую жизнь, это прекрасная мелодия дает мне невероятную силу и энергию ❤ благодарю вас за нее 🙏🏻
Its because its not quite time to travel there yet! You still dont believe in the forgotten gods and the right dimensional paths! You must learn to not fear This darkness!
Wished all of us was together . I see we all are on the same page and I feel we would be stronger together . We’d take the world , even though we don’t want it . Such a magnificent hive mind .
This is so beautiful! I always loved ominous yet dreamy tunes like this, it makes me feel like I'm Cleopatra and I'm sitting on a black throne with sharp spires and the whole world is bowing down at my feet 💃😁
@damianjblack that is wishing for power to grant change. Sufi once said, "Yesterday, I was clever, so i wanted to change the world. Today, I am wise, so I am changing myself." (Paraphrase) True, lasting and immortal power only comes from the kingdom of heaven of the Temple from within. Do not seek it without.
Realizing this heartbreak is how it will be. Eternal not wanting anyone else, accepting they don’t have any feelings for me. This was it the last try. Now we move into a mentality where I can’t be hurt again like this for this wound while still open will be my biggest scar. A reminder to leave my heart closed and guarded.
✨I can totally feel the mystical and mythical vibe... the entrancing echoes from the Ancient Times...✨ Curious thing - three days ago I rewatched the movie Clash of Titans 2, which plot focus on this very theme... Coincidence? I don't think so... 🏛
@@scottgust9709 sorry bro, the correct spelling was “Oneiric” (changed it👌🏽). The term “Oneiric” is an adjective that basically describes things related with dreams.
Charles: "Our duty has always been to protect this kingdom we’ve built together, stone by stone, blood by blood, sweat by sweat. And to see it now, surrounded by flames… Sir, Alex Richt, is this truly the end? Has our order, created to protect, finally failed?" Alex: "No, Charles. We must hold to the vow we made - to our king, to our people. We will fight to the bitter end. We are the shield, and if a shield is not used to protect what we hold dear, then what purpose does it serve? Let the Iron Will of Ladreas guide us, let it burn as fiercely as these flames. We. Will. Not. Fall. This city will not fall. Far too much has been sacrificed, too much endured. Not now."
Demons, dreams, passions, vain imaginings, the groping of blindness, the hell of longing, incoherency and malice masquerading as mysteries, existential murmurings pantomime wisdom... a dying, dead world without hope of crawling out of itself or ever transcending nature. Old "gods," dreaming gods, gods of nature... false gods.
Каждый раз переслушивая это благодарю рекомендации Ютуба за то, что выдало мне это в рекомендациях. Большое спасибо за Ваш труд, это звучание невероятно, глубоко, таинственно и красиво, одним словом - завораживающе. Желаю и в дальнейшем Вам больше вдохновения для создания таких шедевров. С уважением, Ваш новый подписчик
Я глубоко ценю ваш комментарий. Большое спасибо за то, что слушаете мою музыку, и спасибо за все прекрасные слова. Желаю вам всего наилучшего и надеюсь, что вы найдете больше музыки для прослушивания на моем канале, вы всегда желанны здесь и всегда ценимы!
Just wanted to say thank you, been listening to this for a few days now. It feels cold, calm, like you just want to sit down and stay there. It feels like home, so thank you..
This is the perfect kind of music for studying! It's so calm, eerie, and touches my heart. It makes me feel so relaxed and at home and ok with everything in the present. I love that this video exists, and I'm excited to listen to your other creations 💖
Diffused sunlight poured through the tiny breach the archaeological team had created in the arched ceiling of the forgotten temple. How long had its marble walls, floors and statuary remained undetected beneath the hustle and bustle of the living world above. As the first of the scientists descended on ropes into this strange new world, the light of their headlamps caught the features of a sculpted face on the wall, the Platonic visage set against a backdrop of cracked stone and the dust of centuries. Who was this strange figure and why had he been venerated by so many, so long ago?
It would be amazing if you upload your work in other platforms like spotify. Your work it's sublime, it transports me into some ethereal plane that i've never experienced before, keep it going
This music grows by day by the day.. I'm not feeling hatred, only misunderstaning and bitterness.. There's a small diffrence betweeen those emotions... But for today, i get myself relaxed and feel comfortable :). Everything good 4u guys, love ya!. I won from that behaviour
"Yo admiro su pureza, es un superviviente al que no le afecta la conciencia, los remordimientos ni las fantasías de moralidad. Aún no habéis comprendido a qué os enfrentáis. Un organismo perfecto. Su perfección estructural sólo está igualada por su hostilidad"
Forgotten Lord forgotten Father Help me trod through troubled water. Help me dodge the demon's slaughter, Help me find a noble daughter. May the groom find his bride May the tomb be set aside That many years of peace may reign In this world of toil and pain. Forgotten Lord forgotten father Remembered now and ever after.
@temple_of_serenity thank you. Here is the revised version. These poems are directly inspired by your work. You provide the prompts and the direction. When listening I feel suspended in a realm of creativity where ideas flow like a fountain. Forgotten Lord forgotten Father Help me trod through troubled water. Help me dodge the demon's slaughter, Help me find a noble daughter. May the groom find his bride May the tomb be set aside That many years of peace may reign In this world of toil and pain. Forgotten Father forgotten Lord Help me find my shield and sword. Help me cleave unto thy word And keep my ship to heaven moored.
@@thewealthofnations4827 This is beautiful, your words flow with such depth and strength. I’m honored that the music inspires this realm of creativity for you. Your poem feels timeless. Thank you for sharing this 🙏
The older I get, the more I appreciate music like this...
Same. I'm 28 but I already feel like I can't live without such melodies... The reason resides in the fact that somehow they make me feel connected to my true self and my true nature (and this reveals itself more and more urgent as time goes on and I'm aware of the "plastic" reality we're unfortunately living in each passing day)
This comment thread is my home!
I guess I was born old then :
same I'm 8
since i have tinnitus I love music like this...
I'm listening with noise cancelling headphones, bass turned way up, in the total darkness of night. I feel like this is what the deepest, farthest, oldest regions of our Cosmos would sound like if humans had ears to detect it. The Primordial melody that wove Creation into being, that lovingly greeted us at our beginning, and will gently beckon us to return at our end. Such an unfamiliar sense of peace this is.
I'm very grateful that people can feel this way when listening to my music and I deeply appreciate your comment and support on this channel. Thank you very much and wishing you all the best! You are always welcome on this channel🖤
@@temple_of_serenity wow did you produce this???
@@MaleeshaHuththo Yes, I did.
I hope someday i can listen to this in darkness
The Music of the Ainur!
This ambiance made me think about my ancestors, their lives, their wars...
This days have been the most productive days in my life since I work with this video
That’s amazing to hear! Glad the music’s boosting your productivity.
Keep it going!
Finally, it has come, non sense to write but i need to do it, that finally has come...after an endless amount of suffering, i realised that simply it has come: My time to change.
Update to the haters: I finished my exams, i am almost back in shape, many weeks without scrolling and porn and that's just the beginning, i was not joking neither having trips as nobody does when they want to change, stay hard guys.
I wish you all the best, I believe in you.
do what you have always done...and be where you have always been
I believe in you. I am two months into changing everything and i already feel so different. Right now I'm throwing everything away that i had hoarded in my bedroom. Replacing every worry with a demand for better things from life. I'm a good person. You are, and i know that because only good people want to change themselves. We can do this.
Don't know who you are but thank you, you made me feel deeply comprehended. We'll make it.@@mistsister
I like turtles
This is making me feel calm and focused.
Glad it resonates with you!
This is like wandering onto some deep forest ruins, although pre-medieval there is an advanced civilization aura permeating throughout.
This kind of music allows me to remember many moments that I have experienced in the past. Thank you very much, author, you allowed me to let go of the past and finally quit smoking cigarettes.
I'm so happy to read positive comments like this one.
Thank you so much for listening, I wish you all the best!
"..And so, we find ourselves in the long forgotten depths beneath the forest temple, where the darkness sings..."
What a woe and what a cry, no oblation, offering or sacrifice. Forgotten is that which once was sought and under a forest robed of light.
2.5 minutes into this and had to pause..i believe this is we hear as we transition from this realm into the next. I feel the need to buckle up for the ride over the next hour, but realize my ethereal body has no seat, no buckle and is floating at the speed of light through the universe... the blur of stars, galaxies, asteroid belts and planets flashing past my soul.
I'm excited!!! Now hitting Play.......see everyone in eternity!!!
Love this. I get that feeling of "oh this is too much, I have to be prepared" with music all the time, I feel it so deeply.
lol can I get some of what ur on (I have cash) 👍
Makes my soul feel… like I’ve known this music before. Makes me feel like.. I Am The Forgotten Deity
Wagh'naghl r'lyeh f'taghn
I sever my right hand and offer it to your altar as the blood pools into drains on the side.
"Renumeration and supplication, please, One Whose Name is Gone..."
This is absolutely amazing. I love the otherworldly chants. Feels like discovering ancient forgotten ruins. Thank you for your work, your music has been a constant source of meditation and bliss for me.
Much appreciated!
Thank you for listening.
Listening to this while starring at the stars is true bliss
That's amazing.
Music has the feeling like you're discovering something eerie, ancient and forgotten, that was burried in history perhaps meant to be forgotten but is then accidentally rediscovered... and then the plot thickens.
That's exactly what I want people to feel when they listen to my music.
Our mind and body are an endless temple, ready to be explored.
When I hear this I get mixed vibes of the movie Prometheus when they search the ancient alien tomb of the creators and an opening scene of Indiana Jones in the jungle where he's looking for the golden idol.
Essentially, as you said, the discovery of ancient, buried gods or civilizations that should have stayed like that(I'm sorry idk what my mind is 😅)
Focus is obtained. Thank you.
Thank you for listening!
Я слушаю это уже 6 день подряд, кажется я вспомнила свою прошлую жизнь, это прекрасная мелодия дает мне невероятную силу и энергию ❤ благодарю вас за нее 🙏🏻
Спасибо за внимание!🖤
Magnificent I never heard anything like this before it catches the soul and takes it to another realm❤✨✨✨🌠🌠🌠✝️❤
Many many thanks!
I find this healing to my spirit and heart helps me feel closer to something i can not find
That's exactly how I felt when I was creating this soundtrack.
Its because its not quite time to travel there yet! You still dont believe in the forgotten gods and the right dimensional paths! You must learn to not fear This darkness!
It's cold, dark and quiet outside as the snow begins, blended with this music is the perfect mood that I need.
I'm glad to hear that, thank you for listening!
This music makes me feel nostalgic but also hopeful and confident!
I’m so glad it brings out those feelings! Nostalgia mixed with hope is a beautiful place to be.
I can't stop listening, it's wonderful.
Thanks to the author for this masterpiece❤🔥❤🔥❤🔥
Means a lot, thank you for listening!🖤
Очень люблю ваши эмбиенты, прекрасно помогают погружаться в другие реальности. Большое спасибо за постоянный контент!
Я ценю ваш комментарий, большое спасибо за внимание!
great music, i hope mine will be as good some day
Definitely will be, just keep working hard and do not give up.
Bellísimo, sutil y gótico ... gracias ! 🌙🖤
¡Gracias por escuchar!🖤
Thank you for providing us with amazing ambience and music.
Thanks for listening!
Writing a psycho thriller...hearing this in loop... this music breaking me new visuals and scenes.
Thank you! You might want to check out my other videos as well.
Wishing you all the best with your writing.
Will you release it somewhere?
So dark and beautiful 🖤🖤🖤👍👍👍
Thank you!🖤
Wished all of us was together . I see we all are on the same page and I feel we would be stronger together . We’d take the world , even though we don’t want it . Such a magnificent hive mind .
Wow. The most touching music I ever heard. Hard to explain, but its beyond... goes straight to your soul
I appreciate this so much, thank you!
This is so beautiful! I always loved ominous yet dreamy tunes like this, it makes me feel like I'm Cleopatra and I'm sitting on a black throne with sharp spires and the whole world is bowing down at my feet 💃😁
Only those who wish not for power or for others to bow are truthfully worthy of said rule and power.
Stop smoking that broccoli
@@bryansears6470 what of those who wish not for power as an end in itself, but as a means to effect great change?
@damianjblack that is wishing for power to grant change.
Sufi once said, "Yesterday, I was clever, so i wanted to change the world. Today, I am wise, so I am changing myself." (Paraphrase)
True, lasting and immortal power only comes from the kingdom of heaven of the Temple from within. Do not seek it without.
The most beyond sacred chantings to ever exists, this is the higher Gods making their voice to be heard and known…
Thank you!
BRO ITS ONLY ONE GOD ITS ALLAH
Absolutely gorgeous... Inanna, Kaly, Pirena...
Thanks!
Just woke up. It's perfect for sleep))
I'm glad to hear this.
Much appreciated!
Good night creator of this video. Great music, remembered the last times.
I hope you had a great rest listening to this music, thanks for listening!
Realizing this heartbreak is how it will be. Eternal not wanting anyone else, accepting they don’t have any feelings for me. This was it the last try. Now we move into a mentality where I can’t be hurt again like this for this wound while still open will be my biggest scar. A reminder to leave my heart closed and guarded.
Stumbled into this. I'm awestruck. I love every single minute of it
This is treasure and no one can tell me otherwise
subbed
I appreciate your comment a lot!
Thank you very much.
@@temple_of_serenitywhere are you from?
@@temple_of_serenity this music is pretty fckn good.its forsure something that takes you with it.
Шедеврально!❤
Спасибо!🖤
I did not know I needed this. But I needed this. let me figure out how to put it on repeat lol
Thanks!
This audio, is just. MWA, I listen to it every time im writing dark biblical themed stories and it helps perfectly 🙏🏻🙏🏻
Thank you for listening!
Utter bliss..
Fantastic 👏🏼 Thank you my friend ❤
Much appreciated!
Thank you for listening🖤
✨I can totally feel the mystical and mythical vibe... the entrancing echoes from the Ancient Times...✨
Curious thing - three days ago I rewatched the movie Clash of Titans 2, which plot focus on this very theme... Coincidence? I don't think so... 🏛
Everything connects.
ive been listening to this for like the past 5 nights
I'm so glad to hear this. I hope you find my other videos interesting as well.
With the universe in your mind, You learn trial of strength through perception.
Keep up with these type of tracks! The chantings are so oneiric👌
Thank you! Many more to come.
What does ‘oniric’ mean?
@@scottgust9709 sorry bro, the correct spelling was “Oneiric” (changed it👌🏽). The term “Oneiric” is an adjective that basically describes things related with dreams.
Super Music!
Thank you!
Charles: "Our duty has always been to protect this kingdom we’ve built together, stone by stone, blood by blood, sweat by sweat. And to see it now, surrounded by flames… Sir, Alex Richt, is this truly the end? Has our order, created to protect, finally failed?"
Alex: "No, Charles. We must hold to the vow we made - to our king, to our people. We will fight to the bitter end. We are the shield, and if a shield is not used to protect what we hold dear, then what purpose does it serve? Let the Iron Will of Ladreas guide us, let it burn as fiercely as these flames. We. Will. Not. Fall. This city will not fall. Far too much has been sacrificed, too much endured. Not now."
Epic lines! Love the passion and resolve you've captured here, perfectly fitting for the music.
этот эмбиент заставляет струны моей разрушенной души дрогнуть... и слезы бегут по щекам...
Очень трогательно… Рад, что музыка смогла найти отклик в вашей душе. Пусть она приносит утешение и помогает пережить сложные моменты 🙏
Demons, dreams, passions, vain imaginings, the groping of blindness, the hell of longing, incoherency and malice masquerading as mysteries, existential murmurings pantomime wisdom... a dying, dead world without hope of crawling out of itself or ever transcending nature. Old "gods," dreaming gods, gods of nature... false gods.
I really love this piece💚💚💚
Thank you so much!🖤
This is amazing ❤ perfect to read before sleep. Thanks for your work!
Glad you enjoy it!
Thank you for listening🖤
Божественная музыка. Я влюблён и загипнотизирован.❤😍
Спасибо за то, что вы слушали!🖤
Каждый раз переслушивая это благодарю рекомендации Ютуба за то, что выдало мне это в рекомендациях. Большое спасибо за Ваш труд, это звучание невероятно, глубоко, таинственно и красиво, одним словом - завораживающе. Желаю и в дальнейшем Вам больше вдохновения для создания таких шедевров.
С уважением, Ваш новый подписчик
Я глубоко ценю ваш комментарий. Большое спасибо за то, что слушаете мою музыку, и спасибо за все прекрасные слова. Желаю вам всего наилучшего и надеюсь, что вы найдете больше музыки для прослушивания на моем канале, вы всегда желанны здесь и всегда ценимы!
Just wanted to say thank you, been listening to this for a few days now. It feels cold, calm, like you just want to sit down and stay there. It feels like home, so thank you..
I appreciate your comment!
Thank you for listening.
ETHEREAL,
thanks for this beautiful piece of music
Glad you enjoy it! Thank you for listening.
Knowing for sure what dawn, what death, what doom, awaited consciousness beyond the tomb. 🖤
Eternal mystery🖤
Awesome track, accompanies my otherwise dry-monotonous spreadsheet processing tasks
I'm glad you found it useful, thank you for listening!
Good track for meditation, cause the forgotten deity is within.
Thanks!
Очень напоминает Lily theme из Гарри Поттера, аж мурашки. В сохраненки добавила! 💓💓💓
Спасибо за то, что вы слушали!🖤
i feel relaxed as if all my stress. fear doubt anaxity and worry have melted out of me alowing my mind and body the peace and rest i needed
Means a lot to hear that my music is making a positive impact on listeners.
Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, I wish you all the best.
No thank you for making theses beautiful pieces of work
This is the perfect kind of music for studying! It's so calm, eerie, and touches my heart. It makes me feel so relaxed and at home and ok with everything in the present. I love that this video exists, and I'm excited to listen to your other creations 💖
I'm so glad you enjoy it!
Thank you very much for listening, I really appreciate your comment🖤
Great ambiance! I fell asleep to this last night
Thank you!
I'm glad my music helps you fall asleep.
The song of a mermaid...a calling to the vastness of the cold sea and the darkness of the depths...a journey beyond time and matter...
Just the perfect muss i need at this time and place.
So glad it’s just what you need right now. Enjoy the moment!
This is so beautiful it’s Mystic and it’s so deep and it has a story a history and it wants to be found and unlock.
Exactly how I feel when I'm creating and I was sure that many people will resonate with these feelings.
Thank you for listening!
Beautiful 👍👍
Many thanks!
This is wonderful!
You are wonderful!
@le_Bitume_De_La_Caravanelle🖤
This is one of those rare ambient tracks that captures the profound feeling of peace and dread simultaneously.
Thank you!
@@temple_of_serenity I should be thanking you! New Sub right here you have some perfect meditation tracks :)
@@corinbryantI really appreciate your comment and I'm glad you like my music. You are always welcome on this channel🙂
Thank You 💜
🖤
wonderful, thank you.
Thank you for listening!
Thank you for this! I needed to focus on writing, and this was perfect!
I'm glad you find this video helpful, thank you for listening!
Maravilloso!😻😻👏👏👏👏👏👏👏me encanta!🙏😻👏👏👏👏👏
¡Muchas gracias!🖤
Valeu!
Thank you!
Mysterious and ethereal, wow...very nice.
Glad you liked it!
Thank You I'm definitely into this 🏆
Much appreciated!
so deep
Dammmmmm😮 I love the Dark side👽🕳🌚🖤😯😱😱😱love IT🌻🌻🌻
🖤
Using this ambience while writing my fanfic story about Harmund ''The Handsome'' Hoare and the tragic end of the king's reign.
Sounds like a perfect combo!
Thank you for listening.
Love this, this music helped me today.
I'm glad you find my music helpful. Thank you for listening.
Awesome ambience music, keep up the great work!
Many many thanks!
Diffused sunlight poured through the tiny breach the archaeological team had created in the arched ceiling of the forgotten temple. How long had its marble walls, floors and statuary remained undetected beneath the hustle and bustle of the living world above. As the first of the scientists descended on ropes into this strange new world, the light of their headlamps caught the features of a sculpted face on the wall, the Platonic visage set against a backdrop of cracked stone and the dust of centuries. Who was this strange figure and why had he been venerated by so many, so long ago?
Nice work!👌
Thank you!
It would be amazing if you upload your work in other platforms like spotify. Your work it's sublime, it transports me into some ethereal plane that i've never experienced before, keep it going
Thank you for listening!
I will definitely think about uploading my music to other platforms as well.
This is going to boost my study time
100%
Tbh i cannot find that deep dark ambience anywhere on the youtube. thank you so much
I'm so glad to hear this, thank you very much for listening! You might want to check out my other videos as well🙂
This inspired me , thought provoking music
Thank you for listening!
This music grows by day by the day.. I'm not feeling hatred, only misunderstaning and bitterness.. There's a small diffrence betweeen those emotions... But for today, i get myself relaxed and feel comfortable :). Everything good 4u guys, love ya!. I won from that behaviour
Absolutely brilliant masterpiece !!!
Many many thanks!
wow, exactly what I envisioned to find.. speachless... best way to turn off the world for an hour.
Thank you so much, I'm glad you feel that way about my music.
"Yo admiro su pureza, es un superviviente al que no le afecta la conciencia, los remordimientos ni las fantasías de moralidad. Aún no habéis comprendido a qué os enfrentáis. Un organismo perfecto. Su perfección estructural sólo está igualada por su hostilidad"
Love this one. Thank you
Thank you for listening!
Это просто что то с чем то!♥️
В неизведанном можно найти много прекрасного🖤
and then the darkness consumed him. Transforming him into something unreal.
A powerful transformation, embracing the unknown can lead to something beyond imagination. Sounds like the perfect setting for this music! 🌑
ive...... been waiting.. for this.. thank you
And thank you for listening!
Тысяча Лайков от меня❤
И тысяча благодарностей от меня🖤
Great music. Thank you 😊
Thanks for listening.
This is so relaxing and soothing
Thank you!
GREAT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice one👍
Thanks!
Forgotten Lord forgotten Father
Help me trod through troubled water.
Help me dodge the demon's slaughter,
Help me find a noble daughter.
May the groom find his bride
May the tomb be set aside
That many years of peace may reign
In this world of toil and pain.
Forgotten Lord forgotten father
Remembered now and ever after.
Beautiful and powerful words, thank you for sharing this.
May peace and strength guide your path. 🙏
@temple_of_serenity thank you. Here is the revised version. These poems are directly inspired by your work. You provide the prompts and the direction. When listening I feel suspended in a realm of creativity where ideas flow like a fountain.
Forgotten Lord forgotten Father
Help me trod through troubled water.
Help me dodge the demon's slaughter,
Help me find a noble daughter.
May the groom find his bride
May the tomb be set aside
That many years of peace may reign
In this world of toil and pain.
Forgotten Father forgotten Lord
Help me find my shield and sword.
Help me cleave unto thy word
And keep my ship to heaven moored.
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This is beautiful, your words flow with such depth and strength. I’m honored that the music inspires this realm of creativity for you. Your poem feels timeless. Thank you for sharing this 🙏
@temple_of_serenity you're welcome and thanks for your feedback. It means a lot to me.