Crush Your Joke Writing Using Compare & Contrast Structure

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  • @oniciamuller
    @oniciamuller Год назад +11

    For those on the fence, I want you to know that "Breaking Comedy's DNA" is worth it. It totally elevated my humor column (syndicated + won an award) and increased funny greeting card sales to American Greetings and Papyrus.

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  Год назад

      Hi Onicia! Thanks for the testimonial!

    • @DaFunnyPages57
      @DaFunnyPages57 6 дней назад

      Is it a book or a computer program?

  • @ShyamkrishnanNair
    @ShyamkrishnanNair 12 дней назад

    I love how compare and contrast elevates jokes! Using two dissimilar ideas to highlight their stark differences works wonders. Like Gaffigan’s sunburn bit, it’s funny on its own but becomes a knockout with the "either/or" comparison. It’s all about leading the audience down one path, then surprising them with a twist! Humor like this is what makes the Habit10x Sense of Humor Improvement program so fun-it helps you craft punchlines that hit just right. Keep honing your craft!

  • @danielbrockerttravel
    @danielbrockerttravel 11 месяцев назад +3

    Thanks! This is one of my favorite joke writing structures!

  • @topnotchcontent
    @topnotchcontent 9 месяцев назад +1

    Huge value! Thanks for the tips

  • @PicklesPresents
    @PicklesPresents Год назад +3

    Great content as always. Thanks Jerry.

  • @flinggolfwithdennis
    @flinggolfwithdennis Год назад

    Got the book, seems like it will be fun to try! Thanks.

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  Год назад

      I think you’ll have a lot of fun with it. Hit me up if you have any questions. 😃

    • @flinggolfwithdennis
      @flinggolfwithdennis Год назад

      Will Do. Thanks for responding.
      @@JerryCorley

  • @mirosgerg
    @mirosgerg Год назад

    Great book men

  • @RenanHutap
    @RenanHutap Год назад

    Hey Jerry, I'm from Brazil and I love your vídeos. The last one about open mics really helped me make my jokes better. I'd love to see you doing a vídeo about Bill Hicks. Thanks for the content.

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  Год назад +2

      Bill Hicks is awesome! I will do that!

  • @iamjackrain
    @iamjackrain Год назад

    I hear it just fine. Great video!

  • @frankbarber601
    @frankbarber601 Год назад

    Great content in this video !!! Thank you

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  Год назад

      Thanks Frank. I appreciate you taking a moment to comment! 😃

  • @pumpkling9014
    @pumpkling9014 Год назад +1

    Hey Mr. Corley. What differs compare and contrast from paired phrases? I tend to get them confused a lot.

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  Год назад

      Great question. And totally justified. Just as with music theory or acting theory, there is some crossover with certain techniques. The mirrored phrase (a version of the paired phrases) is a side by side comparison so that’s where a crossover could occur. I would need more space and time to provide examples. But I wouldn’t go down a rabbit hole with the nuance between the two, just know that there will sometimes be a crossover.

  • @linaalvaa
    @linaalvaa Год назад

    Awesome as usual

  • @Ant_1776
    @Ant_1776 Год назад

    Great video Jerry , one video I would love to see you do is you watching someone do standup while you call out the structures! That would be really interesting !

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  Год назад

      Thanks Ant! Did you see the Jim Gaffigan breakdown? Check it out here: Deconstructing Jim Gaffigan's First Tight Five
      ruclips.net/video/_XzucHdqC_Y/видео.html

    • @Ant_1776
      @Ant_1776 Год назад

      @@JerryCorley will watch it now! Thanks Jerry!

    • @Ant_1776
      @Ant_1776 Год назад +1

      @@JerryCorley just watched it , boy that was incredibly helpful! Thank you again , loved the deconstruction , so cool to see the triggers being pulled in real time!

  • @herseem
    @herseem Год назад

    yes it did, thanks

  • @michaeljaye4787
    @michaeljaye4787 9 месяцев назад +1

    I have a friend who is a professional runner. He trains by running 40 miles a week.
    I have trouble walking to the refrigerator.

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  9 месяцев назад

      Nice! Precisely what I’m talking about. In this case, we also recognize that behavior in ourselves.

  • @TroyBastianComedy
    @TroyBastianComedy Год назад

    Hey Jerry I’m brand new to comedy! I’m planning to do my first open mic next weekend! I was wondering if you would look at one of my jokes and give me some pointers? I Acutely I wrote it using the principles and techniques I learned watching your videos. Just let me know thank you!

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  Год назад

      Hey Troy, sure. What’s the joke?

  • @missmeikecomedy
    @missmeikecomedy Год назад

    What’s your opinion on using ‘I look like ___’ or ‘I know what you’re thinking’ phrases in jokes? Lots of industry people and comedy teachers say to not use it but I keep seeing lots of big name comics use those phrases. Just like in your video.

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  Год назад +3

      When you’re saying “I know what you’re thinking, I think you should say, I know what you MIGHT be thinking. Because there’s no way you could know… just like in Gaffigan’s video, he says ‘might be thinking or probably thinking.”

  • @mrb3748
    @mrb3748 Год назад +2

    This might be an outsider type of comments but
    I wanted to know if understaning the laughter principles and internalize them could just make you a funnier person in every day life,and not just in prepared shows
    I don’t wanna be a commedian (nothing against) i just wanna be funnier in general,is that possible (i’m already a funny guy,i just wanna be more like that)

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  Год назад +1

      Yessir! There is no doubt about it. Today’s stand-up comedy is more of a conversation anyway. So yeah.

  • @Korbinian123
    @Korbinian123 Год назад +1

    There's no sound, mate

    • @JerryCorley
      @JerryCorley  Год назад +4

      It might be your settings. I just checked it on 3 devices.

    • @Korbinian123
      @Korbinian123 Год назад

      ​@@JerryCorleyyou were right.
      Thanks for the vid ❤ and greetings from Germany