Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line behind it I also like the character development I like how you deviated all in all it was still a good story I do wish it was a lot longer I hope to come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
Part 2 please!!! I love the divergences from cannon.
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line behind it I also like the character development I like how you deviated all in all it was still a good story I do wish it was a lot longer I hope to come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
Part 2 please and thank you vary much
part 2 plz
real tital: what if Naruto was banished and he gets a little sister
Part 2 please
Part 2 please