You are a wonderful narrator. You really portray a mood that is truly chilling. I love it. This has to be my favourite story of yours so far. Keep up the good work.
this video (and the Russian experiment) has earned you a subscriber (if it is not to much to ask please could you narrate more story's like the Russian sleep experiment) these videos are magnificent and a great fun to listen too
I thought I was finally a man because I could walk miles in the dark alone on empty streets with only minor fear, turns out I just hadn't heard a good story in a while, damnit.
At the end when it showed the window, I looked away to look at the window behind me. When I looked back at the screen the face was in the window and I literally jumped out of my chair.
12:52 oh, pls no, ah! Sht! Don't zoom in like that. Scared the shit out of me even thou I red the comments that it was gonna happen. That one got me...
ok the bridge pic at 7:30 scard me because I was watching another thing and then look back at my laptop and BAM the first thing I saw was that thing on the bridge
Part 1 was awesome part 2 bored me a little til the end which it was getting pretty rad. Keep doing what u doing man and do you write this on your own?
I didn't like the editing much in this video, and your story had a lot of subjective expressions which detracted from the story, such as "worse than ever" a half a dozen times. These are all friendly critiques though. I enjoy your channel, especially the Russian sleep experiment. You should do more like that one. I'm staying subscribed.
Your critique is refreshing! Alas, my editing was admittedly sloppy. As for the writing, this is not my story! I DO usually pre-edit these stories before i read them, but I didn't this time due to the shear size... Thank you, please stay tuned for better content :)
+IReadCreepyPastas your autopilot video is the one that has stuck with me the most, i fall asleep to your stories/voice trying to induce nightmares because i can't remember dreams at all. autopilot has injected itself into my daydreams at work and soforth but my nightmares and dreams still don't matter enough to my name to be remembered. scare the fuck out of me please.
you do have a good voice for reading stuff like this, but i think you need to slow down just a tiny bit. it would add to the feel of the story other than that good job!
Oh wow at the end I saw his face. Dident jump dident do anything just thought. I wana meet you. If you met me in real life I am way more creepy. PREPARE MAN OF THE SHADOWS
If you like this kind of stuff go to google and search nosleep podcast, very good narrators there and some very good content. I think you need to pay for the recent podcasts but the old ones are all free, try it out!
Why did i read the discription there were a shadow on my window moving i ran out of my room tho i found out the it was just the tree i just Never looked out my window at night
Anybody else check the comments to see if there's unexpected jump scares lol great video
Me in the day time:
"This is so lame. This video isn't even that scary"
Me at night time:
"WELL. NO SLEEP FOR ME!"
me at twilight: WOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAH WAGG WAFAGAGWAGDAWD
LOL nice
ITS HUNTING TIME
Oh goodness
Millermacs You get the crowbar and i'll get the booze!
You are a wonderful narrator. You really portray a mood that is truly chilling. I love it. This has to be my favourite story of yours so far. Keep up the good work.
my phone vibrated when it zoomed in on his face at the end... i think i need to change my pants...
i laughed at your comment when i started the video..... same shit happened to me afterwards -.-
I find listening to your videos strangely relaxing lol
Watched this at night, when the face apeared my dog barked and I lost my sides screaming and laughing.
this video (and the Russian experiment) has earned you a subscriber (if it is not to much to ask please could you narrate more story's like the Russian sleep experiment) these videos are magnificent and a great fun to listen too
My hearth kind of stopped for a sec when I saw the face at the ending .
that face at the end scared the hell out of me
I watched 2 last night and now I'm debating lying in my bed and watching the rest in the dark dampness of my room.
guy in the background of the picture of the bridge
I FREAKING OUT RIGHT NOW MAN, I JUST SAW WHAT THE CRAP MAN!!!!!!!!
haha. Bad time to be photobombing, hiker-guy.
I thought I was finally a man because I could walk miles in the dark alone on empty streets with only minor fear, turns out I just hadn't heard a good story in a while, damnit.
Damn. You got me sacred. Twice I jumped from the bridge picture with the person, then the window picture with the creepy face.
Sees pure black eyes at night... Seems legit.
That last pic got me it looks fairly similar to my room you know its not like i need sleep
At the end when it showed the window, I looked away to look at the window behind me. When I looked back at the screen the face was in the window and I literally jumped out of my chair.
Did anyone else notice he said August 17 but on the newspaper it said August 7.
Also, your channel is awesome!!! Definitely subscribing
Thanks for no jump scares
I hardly ever look at the screen i just listen to the stories
Glad i didn't get the chance to watch this one when i was at the hospital a hour ago
that final picture scared the shit out of me
Still a good story love your vids!
Looking at my window FUCK THE RULES
Dude you're awesome :D
*turns off light and hides under the covers* let the terror begin
I literally fell asleep while watching this
When I saw that last bit all I could hear in my head was megusa
Make a podcast of these or something. If you already have one please link it. They are really good
haha at like 3:48 you like suddenly give tom a slight british accent or something, thought it was funny
Did anyone else reckon the description of the monster kinda sounds like SCP-106?
what's SCP-106?
www.scp-wiki.net/scp-106
The9174cooldude Damnit Radical Larry...
*shudder*
Dark Titan gotta get ideas somewhere
As soon as I read this description I looked out my window
i love how in part 1 it said after they saw him and shit they went back to bed like what
haha right?! i'd be like SO MOM & DAD MOVE THE FUCK OVER
12:41 WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY!!!!?!?!?!????? HOLLY CRAP. JUST. OMG. I POOHED MEH PANTS!
listening in the dark, alone, gettin heebiejeebies
looks like there is no sleep for me tonight
Jeez when that face popped up I almost yelled
12:52 oh, pls no, ah! Sht! Don't zoom in like that. Scared the shit out of me even thou I red the comments that it was gonna happen. That one got me...
No homo but ur voice is soothing
I'm just waiting for a creepy pasta that has a jump scare in there somewhere.
Fucking cat was sitting on my window sill behind the curtain... the terror... T-T
You will be safe in the comment section everyone
7:25 that guy under the bridge in the woods...
ok the bridge pic at 7:30 scard me because I was watching another thing and then look back at my laptop and BAM the first thing I saw was that thing on the bridge
OH GOD!!! When he was talking about Paul and the window was empty I looked away for two seconds an d BOOM I SEE RHE DEVIL!!!
I know! It scared me I fell of my chair.
Love this keep it on I'm sub to u
i love these!!
This story is kinda like The Vigil!
y am i still watching this its so bitter sweet
OMG those pics where the thing just pops up just suprise me because am doing something diffrent at the time
Oh man the russian sleep thing is bothering me...Keep up the pastas!
Me too.. I'm scared to GO TO SLEEP NOW!
I don't like it when it zooms in, it makes me think the mans going to come back in the window D: I need a cuddle ;A;
wow solomon. SOLOMON GRUNDY> OOOOOOOOOH SPOOKY -_-
IRCP, are you Game of Thrones fan? I couldn't help but notice the child in the newspaper article was called Joffrey...
I am not scared of this, I would be If I wouldn't live on the FOURTH FLOOR.
Part 1 was awesome part 2 bored me a little til the end which it was getting pretty rad. Keep doing what u doing man and do you write this on your own?
I didn't like the editing much in this video, and your story had a lot of subjective expressions which detracted from the story, such as "worse than ever" a half a dozen times. These are all friendly critiques though. I enjoy your channel, especially the Russian sleep experiment. You should do more like that one. I'm staying subscribed.
Your critique is refreshing! Alas, my editing was admittedly sloppy. As for the writing, this is not my story! I DO usually pre-edit these stories before i read them, but I didn't this time due to the shear size... Thank you, please stay tuned for better content :)
+IReadCreepyPastas your autopilot video is the one that has stuck with me the most, i fall asleep to your stories/voice trying to induce nightmares because i can't remember dreams at all. autopilot has injected itself into my daydreams at work and soforth but my nightmares and dreams still don't matter enough to my name to be remembered. scare the fuck out of me please.
Lol. I looked at the window and then I saw my brother walking towards my door, and I fucking shit myself, then I realised it was my brother, lol.
This story is exactly like IT by Stephan king
Well going to watch part 2 tomorrow night don't want to freak my self out today
Heh... Who needs sleep? Yeah?
you do have a good voice for reading stuff like this, but i think you need to slow down just a tiny bit. it would add to the feel of the story other than that good job!
Where did you get this story?
Shouldn't of watched this at 2:30 in the morning!!!
I should buy a cross and put on my window
Oh wow at the end I saw his face. Dident jump dident do anything just thought. I wana meet you. If you met me in real life I am way more creepy. PREPARE MAN OF THE SHADOWS
i shit myself
Conks Sampson
how did you manage to shit yourself looking at a drawing...
haha the face popped out
It actually said August 7, 1958 on the newspaper. Not "August 17th."
What happened to alex what happen to Tom? ? Lol I got confused till the end
am I the only one that noticed that people are randomly effete British snobs in this story??
I have noticed that as well
4:55 Slenderman standing next to tree?
7:52, That paper is August 7th, not 17th :P
Dude, you need some sound consistency. Granted, the sound on this laptop sucks, but some of your videos are really low. Love your stuff, though.
Is it me or the bad Audio quality makes this pasta seem more realistic
F**K! Iv left my window open! D': ahhhhh!...
Always the eyes
Fair enough
There was a man in a blue shirt under the bridge
well... im not slepping
God I hate dial tones. They're so creepy.
5:40 there's that forest with the bridge there's a human
the newspaper says august 7th (story says 17th, haha, that's my birthday !!)
If you like this kind of stuff go to google and search nosleep podcast, very good narrators there and some very good content. I think you need to pay for the recent podcasts but the old ones are all free, try it out!
Deh clif hangr tho!
I was looking at my cousin and when I looked back at the screen His face was there, I nearly shouted but I was able to hold it in.
7:54 17th? It says 7th on the image :P
plot hole: it says august 7th on the newspaper but he says august 17th
Holy shit dude
august 17th? or 7th
Shit... I have a window behind my moniter....
I;m fucked!
Same my window is my backyard XD
Part 2?
I only just noticed you have a slight lisp.
still not scared.....
please omg no head phones in a dark room
Creepy
HOLY SHIT CRAP.
he looks cute lol
I find them relaxing too
No homo jk buy seriously
4:12 Slenderman!?
Why did i read the discription there were a shadow on my window moving i ran out of my room tho i found out the it was just the tree i just Never looked out my window at night