You’re the second reader who didn’t like the start but was won over by the end. Appreciate you taking the time to read. Oh I would not separate the characters for long, don’t doubt. What’s the point of an adventure if your friends aren’t there with you?
I agree 100% about having friends along for the adventure. I guess Dragon Wing's schizophrenic POV kind of traumatized me (but, like, in a comedic way, where I'm just really painfully aware of it when I read now). The first three chapters were very good (Ragoth was a really interesting, compelling character from the start) except that they made me worry that you were going to keep them separate. Thankfully, you dispelled that fear quickly, and the rest of the book is excellent. Looking forward to Lionheart. Just give that glossary a little more thought if you decide to add it. One thing I'll note here that I forgot to mention in the video: the Factions/Ages glossaries were fine. It's just most of the other vocab seemed way too obvious, or it was something that should just be explained in the story's context.
You’re the second reader who didn’t like the start but was won over by the end. Appreciate you taking the time to read.
Oh I would not separate the characters for long, don’t doubt. What’s the point of an adventure if your friends aren’t there with you?
I agree 100% about having friends along for the adventure. I guess Dragon Wing's schizophrenic POV kind of traumatized me (but, like, in a comedic way, where I'm just really painfully aware of it when I read now).
The first three chapters were very good (Ragoth was a really interesting, compelling character from the start) except that they made me worry that you were going to keep them separate. Thankfully, you dispelled that fear quickly, and the rest of the book is excellent.
Looking forward to Lionheart. Just give that glossary a little more thought if you decide to add it. One thing I'll note here that I forgot to mention in the video: the Factions/Ages glossaries were fine. It's just most of the other vocab seemed way too obvious, or it was something that should just be explained in the story's context.