Very appreciative of your feedback and suggestions, I hope the rest of the story is enjoyable if you decide to read the rest! Would love to include more details on what's going on inside of Mary's head in the rewrites (plus it's an opportunity to apply Mary's practice of bhakti yoga beyond simple prayers and ritualistic actions), play-by-play was fine when drafting but I expected the later incarnation of Alexandria to trim that before releasing... can't fault her for not following through on my incompetance lol. Hopefully the revised release will fall more in line with the standards I hold for myself and hope to uphold in my other Works.
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Very appreciative of your feedback and suggestions, I hope the rest of the story is enjoyable if you decide to read the rest! Would love to include more details on what's going on inside of Mary's head in the rewrites (plus it's an opportunity to apply Mary's practice of bhakti yoga beyond simple prayers and ritualistic actions), play-by-play was fine when drafting but I expected the later incarnation of Alexandria to trim that before releasing... can't fault her for not following through on my incompetance lol. Hopefully the revised release will fall more in line with the standards I hold for myself and hope to uphold in my other Works.