1:22 - 1:54 sounds a bit off to me. I get the sense that you were trying to make ot sound like something was being processed by some machine, which for that matter was successful if correct, however you could improve that part in a way to make it sound more melodic. Besides that I appreciate your creativity and hope you will continue making music as long as it pleases you.
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1:22 - 1:54 sounds a bit off to me.
I get the sense that you were trying to make ot sound like something was being processed by some machine, which for that matter was successful if correct, however you could improve that part in a way to make it sound more melodic.
Besides that I appreciate your creativity and hope you will continue making music as long as it pleases you.