+crownthecrowe I mean if the rake is indeed 4 ft standing Imagine how creepy that would be if it moves fast I mean a spider is like 2 inches wide and scuttles around imagine the rake moving as Fast as a tiny spider but 4ft tall
Such a hidden gem. I always like these mini side stories to famous Creepypastas. Like another account of the same story but from another person with a similar experience,
The point of the story was that the guy succumbed to paranoia and insanity because of the Rake so that's why he decided to murder his parents instead of the Rake. And to all the people who claim they would've killed the Rake, it's easy to become paranoid and insane when a scary-ass creature stalks you and tells you to murder, and I'm pretty sure anyone would become suicidal after all that.
***** Well it is natural for predators going after weak prey, so I can see why the Rake picked the boy instead of anyone else. But he didn't just kill his parents because he was scared, it was because the Rake drove him to the point of insanity.
***** Well I think because the boy lost his sanity he couldn't think logically. He probably thought the only way to go is to blindly follow the Rake. And it is very possible that the Rake hunts humans for fun. It is possible that the Rake was created for just that reason. The Rake's appearance goes into the Uncanny Valley, a mental "valley" that means that something is more creepy when it looks like a human, but something is just off. Like a clown. So whoever created the Rake made it fit into the Uncanny Valley and drive people to insanity for fun.
I don't know why the kid wasn't just like "Oh yeah I'll help you." and he takes his shotgun with him and aims it at his parents and forces them to go somewhere and when the Rake thinks the kid is on his side, the kids pumps the Rake full of lead.
Damn, MrCreepyPasta, I absolutely love your acting. Near the end I was really, really impressed by the near-insane tone in your voice. Just... I'm amazed. XD
I visited my uncle ounce and I woke up 3:46 am when I woke up I heard something... Something weird... I was my Uncle come out of the shower ... NAKED... This was the morning after I heard about The Rake, I saw him and I was like," AHHH!!!! ITS THE FUCKING RAKE! KILL THE BASTARD! HE GONNA KILL US ALL!!!!" Then my Uncle's like," Dude calm the hell down... It's just me..." I realized what had happened... Then I freaked the HELL OUT! "AHHH!! YOUR FREAKIN NAKED!!! EVEN WORST! AHHHH!!! LORD HELP ME!" So now I'm paranoid by The Rake, and My Uncle
All the lights are off in my house and I just turned around from my computer screen and pictured the Rake standing there in my hallway, and literally almost crapped myself.
Lol I had a some what same thing just got my braces I couldn't sleep I sat there and then I heard screams from a near by block I freaked out and then I saw and man all black in darkness I guess the rake I didn't move a muscle for the whole night
+chase Stoddard you think darkness is your friend. I was born in it, molded by it by time I saw sunlight I was already a man by then it was nothing to me but blinding
*getting ready for basketball thinking that the video ended* Me: Uuggghhh, where did that jersey go? *hears deep breathing* Me: What..? Riley..? *checks closet and no one is there* Me: WHO THE HECK IS IN MY ROOM!!!???
MrCreepyPasta damn dude youre good i hope you do voice work professionally you really have a chilling voice really give the feeling of uneasiness great job man
guys I think I found some weird glitch whenever I like the Like button dosnt turn blue it stays gray but when I put the curser over the button it says "Unlike" instead of "I Like This" and it only turns blue when I unlike
Mr. CreepyPasta the ending was really intense, i simply loved how you portraid that the guy was engulfed by the emotions he just felt, and did his thing.... nevertheless a master piece!
Reading the comments and looking at the suggested videos, all from MrCreepyPasta, then I look up and see that monster Im like FUCK SHIT NOPE NOPE NOPE, scrolling back down quickly.
i know how you feel. i was in the comments section, then opened another tab and was scared that if i went back to this one, it might go back to the top of the page O_O
13:22 - I just LOVE this music you use on the background. Even if I don't like the pasta, I still listen to it if this music is there. It's... enchanting.
Guys. what if we read these for are children at night. that would be fucking hilarious.and when we left the room we could make a creepy smile and say "sleep well now"
OKAY WTF, I listen to creepypastas while i play vgames, and when it all ended, i thought it was done but NO, fuck you... scared the shit out of me.... 17:24
I have two monitors and one was using photoshop and the other was playing this creepypasta and one bit scared the shit outta me...I bumped my tablet and I ruined the fucking painting -n- thanks MrCreepypasta
They would only do one of a creepypasta if it has colossal following and popularity to match. I don't think there is a creepypasta that is that well known/popular for people to see it worth while.
nah the movie was called urban legend it was a slasher flick that featured a killer who was killing people in the ways found in urban legends... i think i um didnt rreally see it... yeah mid 90s slasher flicks were... yeah
Ive got to stop playing these before i fall asleep... But i think its the best way to listen to them. Play the video and put your screen on your phone facing down on your bed and close yours eyes and listen.....
Started scrolling through suggested videos without realizing this one was still running after the end of the narration... Breathing scared the shit out of me!
The Rake is four feet tall?
...this is suddenly a lot less frightening.
Punt the fucker for a field goal lmfao!!
when he squats he's 4 feet
+Pokemon Trainer Red No he's four feet sitting down...
OH SHIT
IM LIKE 5'3 AND PEOPLE TALLER THAN 5'5 ARE GIANTS
IMAGINE IF THE RAKE STOOD UP ON TWO LEGS.
+crownthecrowe I mean if the rake is indeed 4 ft standing Imagine how creepy that would be if it moves fast I mean a spider is like 2 inches wide and scuttles around imagine the rake moving as Fast as a tiny spider but 4ft tall
I saw the rake next to the lawnmower and the shovel in my garage
And my dad is a werewolf...... Whatever dude
Kevinbmm McCarthy Im also a Mutant Vampire From Narnia
Brandon Canola hahhahaha good one dude
Brandon Canola That took me far to long to understand that joke
NumbNuts 2000 LOL
I love revisiting all of my old favorites. Glad this hidden gem channel is still around
See man that's why you leave the blinds closed
huhu he said see man. that sounds like semen huhu.
MrCreepyPasta, you should become a actor, seriously. You have such amazing control of your tone, pitch, and just overall emotion of your voice.
he really is amazing isn't he
@@elijahwatt9643
Yeah and he be one of the best picks for new voice actors for movies and shows and videogames.
"Go to hell" I screamed..
I think that's where it's from..
Lmao
+Lily S.K XD
K.
why is it called "the rake"? Looks nothing like a rake.
I don't know it looks like a rake to me if you look close you can see a handle
It has claws that tears apart its victims
the claws tear throuh flesh like a rake throuh leaves.the rake.
he "rakes" his victims
dont ''rake''him mad
How can this dude read all these, and not live his life in fear :L?
Because he is void of fear. Either that or he is the devil.
It is his voice and how he reads that make it far scarier then reading it
Because we wen't insane LONG before we found these documents
Such a hidden gem. I always like these mini side stories to famous Creepypastas. Like another account of the same story but from another person with a similar experience,
Fuck the rake, he can only be killed with a magic rake blessed by a voodoo priestess, then sprinkled with holy water and piss from an evil goat...
***** cant forget that
Anthony Shanaman and the beard of a lady!
Anthony Shanaman God XDD
Anthony Shanaman dont forget leprechaun skin
Silent Kid *falls to the floor* YES LEPRECHAUN
Omg! The breathing at the end really increased the fear!! Well done!!
"As if it was sizing me up"
Rake: Mmh. BOY, you better lay off dem snacks!
If that thing killed my dog, I swear I'd stay up all the next night with my 870, couple knives strapped on me, and some whiskey.
870? Ha I'll just pull out my double barrel stage coach 10 gauge ;) Buck shot haha that'll get the job done
Wow, the voice acting at the end was amazing!
Anyone who knows more "Rake" CP? I love the one's with the rake :)
I guess you've heard "The Rake" Skinwalker, My Experience, August 12, 2009 1:07 AM. Do you know any others?
The point of the story was that the guy succumbed to paranoia and insanity because of the Rake so that's why he decided to murder his parents instead of the Rake. And to all the people who claim they would've killed the Rake, it's easy to become paranoid and insane when a scary-ass creature stalks you and tells you to murder, and I'm pretty sure anyone would become suicidal after all that.
***** Well it is natural for predators going after weak prey, so I can see why the Rake picked the boy instead of anyone else. But he didn't just kill his parents because he was scared, it was because the Rake drove him to the point of insanity.
***** Well I think because the boy lost his sanity he couldn't think logically. He probably thought the only way to go is to blindly follow the Rake. And it is very possible that the Rake hunts humans for fun. It is possible that the Rake was created for just that reason. The Rake's appearance goes into the Uncanny Valley, a mental "valley" that means that something is more creepy when it looks like a human, but something is just off. Like a clown. So whoever created the Rake made it fit into the Uncanny Valley and drive people to insanity for fun.
***** Thank you! I've enjoyed discussing with you as well.
I don't know why the kid wasn't just like "Oh yeah I'll help you." and he takes his shotgun with him and aims it at his parents and forces them to go somewhere and when the Rake thinks the kid is on his side, the kids pumps the Rake full of lead.
I probably would kill myself first. Hurting others for my problems is not right.
if I saw the rake I would throw a chicken nugget at it.
but you spent all your good boy points on those chickie nuggies
Now, why would you waste a perfectly good chicken nugget on that?
Your mad laugh, man... Chills. Love these readings of yours.
i love your videos and and i will listen to the stories for hours and not get bored
I love Listening to theese creepypastas since 2013.
I love this creepypasta ^-^ u create the perfect tension for it, well done!!!! *claps*
Watching these videos before you go to bed certainly is a bad idea, so I think I'm gonna do it anyway! :D
MrCreepyPasta's Acting is On Point
Phenomenal, makes the story SO much scarier
Don't you just love it whenever he gets hysterical
The Rake looks like one of the screecher zombies from Die Rise.
Yes XD true
I thought they were called crawlers since I think they're based from black ops 1 kino Der toten crawlers
zombieslayer581ify
They're called "creepy crawlers" I think.
Daniel romero are you talking about COD zombies?
They're called nova 6 zombies or something
10 years later and this story still gives me the chills!
i don't like most endings, but i actually really liked the ending to this one for some reason.
Nice chilling story, I'm 12 and I just love it!
+Flair Nightmare The Puppeteer Of Darkness Yay i'm not the only 11-12 year old who loves this gory/creepy/messed up stuff.
xD coolio!!!
+Lord Muffinwhore 15 dard
Wow so manly 😂😂
+Lord Muffinwhore Im a pillow that is 900 years old
Damn,
MrCreepyPasta, I absolutely love your acting. Near the end I was really, really impressed by the near-insane tone in your voice.
Just... I'm amazed. XD
*hears a noise OH SHIT ITS THE RAKE
it was my dog fml
I visited my uncle ounce and I woke up 3:46 am when I woke up I heard something... Something weird... I was my Uncle come out of the shower ... NAKED... This was the morning after I heard about The Rake, I saw him and I was like," AHHH!!!! ITS THE FUCKING RAKE! KILL THE BASTARD! HE GONNA KILL US ALL!!!!" Then my Uncle's like," Dude calm the hell down... It's just me..." I realized what had happened... Then I freaked the HELL OUT! "AHHH!! YOUR FREAKIN NAKED!!! EVEN WORST! AHHHH!!! LORD HELP ME!" So now I'm paranoid by The Rake, and My Uncle
Cool story "brah"
You really make these creepy pastas sound creepy
AMAZING!! Great presentation. It gave me chills everywhere
We have this under control.
SCP Agent - Clearance D I love SCP :p
SCP Agent - Clearance D then why did i see the rake in my old 2 garages and is now in my shack......?
I'm a scp agent class 4
+Springtrap Rabbit I don't believe you
Why not
You're really good at doing the "going insane" parts :P
This guy has to do movie trailers
I felt more sorry for the dogs than the people...
Yea..
I saw this when it first came out and I’m watching it again, still love it!
Not the dogs! Noooo, everything but the dogs!
YES THE DOGS!
down with society!
@@peturlorange9458 i wish we could send middle fingers to people using text
3:25
*Inside my head*
noooooo... Don't you dare kill off the dogs... Don't do it! DON'T YOU DARE FUCKING KILL OFF THE DOGS!!!
Kyle FireHeart I think you mean 6:36....
no it did it there as well
They always hurt the damn DOGS!!! At least he died quickly. Hopefully...
Kyle FireHeart Doggo is sad
You have the best storytelling voice for creepypastas
That was AWESOME!!! So dark, just PERFECT the way I like it! Won't sleep tonight but it was so worth it!!!
All the lights are off in my house and I just turned around from my computer screen and pictured the Rake standing there in my hallway, and literally almost crapped myself.
Lol I had a some what same thing just got my braces I couldn't sleep I sat there and then I heard screams from a near by block I freaked out and then I saw and man all black in darkness I guess the rake I didn't move a muscle for the whole night
This was my childhood. Ahh the memories.
"I saw the thing"
The thing the....
The SHREK
XD shrek is love, shrek is like
I read this in his voice 😂😂😂
DONKAY!!!!!!!
i saw the.......
scientist that turned himself into a pickle. scariest shit i've ever seen
I don't know why I love the dark, not scared of it, what is in it or what it could bring.
same man the dark is my friend and the fact you can do ANYTHING in it.
I just like the sencation of quiet the dark bring. Not anything else.
+chase Stoddard you think darkness is your friend. I was born in it, molded by it by time I saw sunlight I was already a man by then it was nothing to me but blinding
I was born in the light, rised in it. I saw the darkness that light people are afraid of and thought it was beautiful.
rimi1998 I dont understand a shit about what you are talking about @.@
jake the dog and finn the human, the fun will never end, it's adventure time
You know... The rake could be an escapee of the Russian sleep experiment, or some variant of it...
Robotic Nerd that would actually be awesome.
This was the first Creepypasta that I just stopped watching because it was so horrible. I came back 2 years later to finish it... And it's even worse.
damn that fcking pick is creepy...wait now what one had the jump scare...i wanna watch it and see if i piss myself
i meant horrible like badly written
...
i knnow but there is one where theres apparently a jump scare
You've got A point
hi
This is my favorite story of all time. RUclips DONT REMOVE THIS SHIT PLEASE I LOVE IT
*getting ready for basketball thinking that the video ended*
Me: Uuggghhh, where did that jersey go?
*hears deep breathing*
Me: What..? Riley..? *checks closet and no one is there*
Me: WHO THE HECK IS IN MY ROOM!!!???
Nice breathing at the end there.. e_e
It scared me
Maroo Cat Right after I read your comment the breathing started.
***** lol
Maroo Cat kinda weird because the same thing happened to me too haha soon as I read your comment the breathing started 🤐
My reaction to it was to make a cross out of my middle fingers to ward it off....
You have the best voice. You need to be a voice actor. You did AMAZING as Jeff the killer by the way. You guys need to make a short film.
I just found this playlist which I'm thrilled about because I've always been intrigued by stories about the Rake. 😊✌👍👀
CreepyPasta's signature smiling monsters
MrCreepyPasta damn dude youre good i hope you do voice work professionally you really have a chilling voice really give the feeling of uneasiness great job man
I thought rakes were for leaves?
Holy shit, that breathing. Lol. You're an amazing story teller, dude. Makes me wanna write one, just to hear you read it XD.
The Rake being someone's friend is just insane.
Rake is Love. Rake is Life.
+Isis Pearce Cupcakes are love. Cupcakes are life.
The rake is also a lawn tool.
No. Jesus is Love, Jesus is life.
*PERV FACE*
bitches are love bitches are life
It's bloody daytime. I'm eating my lunch whilst listening to this and literally shrieked death at 9.27
Damn bro...youre crazy...You just earned a subscriber, good job bro
It's a survivor of the Russian Sleeping Experiment... 0.o
Or it's B.O.B with arms. :P
Karl Arty that would actually be awesome.
guys I think I found some weird glitch whenever I like the Like button dosnt turn blue it stays gray but when I put the curser over the button it says "Unlike" instead of "I Like This" and it only turns blue when I unlike
didnt happen to me...
maybe your going insain :/
Unlike is if you want to leave the video without rate and the gray is because you may holded the click and selected it dummy :D
Mr. CreepyPasta the ending was really intense, i simply loved how you portraid that the guy was engulfed by the emotions he just felt, and did his thing.... nevertheless a master piece!
Reading the comments and looking at the suggested videos, all from MrCreepyPasta, then I look up and see that monster Im like FUCK SHIT NOPE NOPE NOPE, scrolling back down quickly.
i know how you feel. i was in the comments section, then opened another tab and was scared that if i went back to this one, it might go back to the top of the page O_O
R3dJukeGames mr.creepypasta is a good story teller.
yes he is! haha
It reminds me of (I believe) Wolf's mask from the Payday series. ^.^
hahaha im good thanks ;) xD
why do I watch these at night with my ear-buds in...??
Is it weird that I look at pornographic images while listening to these?
Wanna join my Bible Black Club? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I don't even know what that means
Bible black is a hentai -.-
oh cool, nah
yes
13:22 - I just LOVE this music you use on the background. Even if I don't like the pasta, I still listen to it if this music is there. It's... enchanting.
Is it bad I started laughing after it ate his dog?
it certainly raises my eyebrow :o
so ur more of a cat person?
Well it was scary but for some odd reason I laughed.
Jayna Alderson but.... the dog....
he wanted a wait for it.. hot dog! hahaha
Not only is The Rake a murder but he is also a maid to clean up your bloody arm and the blood on the floor ;D
Lol
Great ! Finally a killer who cleans
Ikr
Don't ask why, but I pictured the Rake wearing a maid outfit, blushing and dusting the floor after I read that xD
you're a fantastic story teller man keep it up
13:01 me and the rake are homies now
Lol I see what you mean.
TheSchniblyGamer - It always buys the first round. That Rake such an upstanding creature.
I SWEAR TO FUCKING GOD I COULD FEEL ITS BREATH ON MY EAR!!!
Then why the fuck did you not knock his bitch ass out? =D
i was frozen with fear and then he went away
OgezKingz he cut me
Travis Post He slit my throat. Sadly I died
Travis Post He had sex with me, it was rape, no safe word, he beat me up a little bit
17:51 that door scared the shit out of me
Why does it always look like the pictures are slowley zooming in
Guys. what if we read these for are children at night. that would be fucking hilarious.and when we left the room we could make a creepy smile and say "sleep well now"
You shit! that breathing at the end scared the bawls out of me
Cover me guys, I'm going full screen!
Your funny
YOU MAD MAN
I need a bloody sacrifice, how about my parents not a stranger
+Haiden Cortez "he wants a bloody sacrifice" Ok Mr.rake, if you say so! *begins killing the rake as gruesomely as possible*
I love your insane voice omg I fall asleep to your videos all the time ;o
OKAY WTF, I listen to creepypastas while i play vgames, and when it all ended, i thought it was done but NO, fuck you... scared the shit out of me.... 17:24
I have two monitors and one was using photoshop and the other was playing this creepypasta and one bit scared the shit outta me...I bumped my tablet and I ruined the fucking painting -n- thanks MrCreepypasta
ctrl+z
It couldn't undo it that far -n-
Chloe Melo
if it only back steps once, try ctrl+alt+z
Happy 10 year birthday to this video :D
Pale, bare skin?
Bony limbs?
You mean it's Gollum?
around 4 feet eats raw meat definatley Gollum
pale, bare skin?
boney limbs?
you mean eugenia cooney?
Alexander Barlow does Gollum have long claws resembling a rake?
No, he doesn’t.
Or SCP-096
Well he went insane fast...
I have seen crazier
***** you don't kill right ??????!!
yeh
dylan alter no but I do got prob jk
he was weak
Good job, Mr. Creepypasta.
they made a movie about urban legends y not creepy pastas?
They would only do one of a creepypasta if it has colossal following and popularity to match. I don't think there is a creepypasta that is that well known/popular for people to see it worth while.
Rakanishu00
#SlendermanTheMovie
#JeffthekillerTheMoive
I got no results for either.
nah the movie was called urban legend it was a slasher flick that featured a killer who was killing people in the ways found in urban legends... i think i um didnt rreally see it... yeah mid 90s slasher flicks were... yeah
Wheres my camera I'm goin to make a creepypasta movie myself XD
Why do beings like that want human sacrifices why not kill other things like rabbits and leave humanity alone or just don't kill people :/
Ive got to stop playing these before i fall asleep... But i think its the best way to listen to them. Play the video and put your screen on your phone facing down on your bed and close yours eyes and listen.....
This one isn't bad but the guy reading it is too close to the microphone and just doesn't sound into it.
Then listen to Mr Creepypasta's Horror Reboot II. The second Pasta is Sacrifice, the same one as this.
***** Thanks mate!
He's a lot more into it, in that one.
***** I like him and Ireadcreepypasta or pastas
Your pics are more scarier than most creepypastas
was this a rake story?(i found out my answer after i watched more of the vid so never mind)
Aren't you supposed to be fighting the takagami?
:D course I am
yes he said it was my dear nature's ninja
:D
Started scrolling through suggested videos without realizing this one was still running after the end of the narration... Breathing scared the shit out of me!
i have actulay see this creature and nobody i know will beleve me my 15 year old sisieter beleved me because she was there
nu the thing on here not area 51..
it's the rake if you see it good luck! for you
k
I saw a few weeks ago too. I believe you
thank you atlest somebody belevs me
I've seen something worse.... my sisters face O_O
Gives me nightmares
Justyce prichard XD
What its true
Do you guys remember when we thought jokes like this were really funny?
Snail Doom yeah, that was a different era
God my fav part is when he talks about feeding his parents to the rake its too funny
Some of you need to proof-read your comments. I loose brain cells the more I read.
Lose*
Gore, I saw you at the witch's circle video, where he didn't cast the circle right.
Yeah, he needed to invoke good energies. And NEVER step outside the sacred circle
*bishop bullwinkle* heck naw, to the naw naw naw. Heeeeck to the naw naw
Wat
I get him it's a heck to de naw
Hooba Dooba it’s HELL to the NAH
I was looking for this one, I'm glad I found it. You did the best rake creepypasta, the ending seriously freaked me out.
this are the heirs of Edgar Allen Poe and H.P Lovecraft; but real Gothic Horror is rare todays, it seems