"I Was Sent Away to a Young Offenders Camp, Something’s Very Wrong Here" Creepypasta
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- Опубликовано: 25 ноя 2020
- CREEPYPASTA STORY►by leeroyzombi: / i_was_sent_away_to_a_y...
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I’m the author of ‘I Was Sent Away to a Young Offenders Camp ...’ and I just want to say thank you and a massive well done to CreepsMcPasta on the narration. I’m also really glad a lot of you enjoyed it and want more. I’m sure there’s more tales to be told about Camp Stanleyside... 🤘🏻
Can't wait to hear more from you soon!
Cool! I'll also be waiting excitedly. Your descriptions and characters really bring the story to life. It's been a long time since I ran into a story - creepypasta or novel - that was written with such clarity that I could visualize the scenes in my mind. Way to go Lee. I know it isn't easy but you honestly should think of publishing, or self publishing. Any way; I hope Creeps narrates your future work too. Eheh. Well, have a good one!
This story was so great, please add a part 2 to this, I want to know if Broadie will be able to return to society.
It was a great story! ❤️
I was completely hooked...until you got to the giant cobra. That just came out of nowhere and made no sense whatsoever. I mean at least use an alligator or an anaconda is something that's semiaquatic. If you had hinted a bit and added some foreshadowing you might have been able to make the cobra thing work, but as it stands it just came out of left field and messed up the story for me. I give it a 7/10 great first try. Also cobras can't roar, no snake can as only one species of snake on our entire planet even has vocal cords (The north American pine snake) and that is why you do your research. Alligators on the other hand not only have vocal cords (as I can personally attest to having spent over 15 years in fucking Florida. Love the gators hate the mosquitoes, sand and heat) they can roar, bellow and hiss. I hope you understand I mean no offense. I enjoyed your story, I just wished to offer some constructive criticism. I think you're got talent and hope you keep writing.
What really happens at Doctor Phil's ranch
I have actually been to turn about it is worse
It’s worse
Philadelphia Collins??? BAMMMMMM
@@dia-swift6657 Damn, I'm sorry you had to go there, because from what I've heard it is terrible. 😕
Whatever I'm still a Dr Phil fan
This can become a series no joke has a lot of potential if it does i hope the main character try’s to escape
Yesss this story would work perfectly into a series
I know this was a month ago but if you like horror and stories of escape, the promised neverland is a great anime. Totally different but it might work for you and I couldn’t recommend it enough
@@inoue-markov6689 Agreed. I've only seen season 1, but it was awesome, and the last two episodes in particular were off the charts!
This could be a series. Very interesting story and good character development for a 44 minute story.
Damn good story,it felt like it was a story script for an 80s horror film,however it ended at what would be a halfway point it could easily go for another 40+ minutes.Also like how he befriended Luke,felt more natural than anything I heard in a creepypasta in a long time.
exactly my thoughts, the ending was so rushed, this should have been at least an hour longer
No way that was the whole story, seems like we'll get another part down the pipeline.
The author has already done a part 2.
Man the MC was smart. I was afraid he’d get himself eaten with his hot headedness. Glad he thought about his future. Mom’s waiting for you at home. Don’t let her down!
Sounds like something straight out of a Goosebumps book
Because it basically is. Welcome to Camp Nightmare if I believe.
@@ChildoftheCorn666 That was my favorite Goosebumps book! Macabre.
@@ChildoftheCorn666 that's why it sounds familiar! Thank you
that's exactly what i was thinking!
I'm glad no one tries to send us bigfoots away to camps
Wouldn't it be Bigfeet?
Hi again gchq
Hey bigfoot
@@HappyMatt12345 whoa. I want to take bigfoot at their word but this is quite the conundrum here.
Can i have a meme?
‘It’s a beautiful day isn’t it’
Internally “I’m going to commit arson again”
The story could of been so much longer
id honestly love a sequel!
Isnt this camp like that one green lake camp from HOLES by Lewis Satcher or something?
seriously it was great. i need more!
This has some serious book potential
@@thedeadcannotdie it needs to be a book. would make a good horror kids movie too for scifi channel or syfy...however they spell it these days. they change it a lot haha. still would be a great book. there should be a part 2 or atleast a series like the stories with the smiling shadow people in the shadow mass that keep laughing and affects anyone who gets to close and there is always 1 or 2 main surviors in the end.
I have to happily agree that so much more can be made of this, nearly all of the CreepyPastas are basically finished and usually don’t have the desire or steam for a sequel. This one, BEGS for one! Pass around the petition and I’ll gladly sign! Excellent beginning to what could be an amazing series! 👍
The MC's growth is so wholesome to me that I accidentally paid attention to that instead of being scared.
This story has a "Goosebumps" feel to it, which makes me like it more.
LOL it does
Oh my gosh it does, I think there is a goosebumps episode like this i thinks it’s called “the perfect school” part 1 and 2 there’s also “welcome to camp nightmare” part 1 and 2
"I Was Sent Away to a Young Offenders Camp Something's Very Wrong Here"
Of course somethings wrong at a camp full of offenders😂
And Offenderman is running the place
Sequel: I was sent away to an OLD offenders camp, something's very wrong here
...Uncle Dan?
....Uncle Leroy!
Boomers killing each other
Yeah..... I'm gonna need a sequel for this one. BEAUTIFULLY written!
this is basically the movies Midsommar and Holes in one movie
I was thinking more of sleepaway camp with a little bit of crystal lake along with holes
Honestly I was thinking of Holes, but I’m barely finished with the video so idk.
Never trust a camp counselor named Luke.
Luke isn't a counselor.
Okay but consider: it’s a very cute name and I’d trust anyone named Luke instantly
Am I the only one that got the Percy Jackson reference?
@@guilhermehank4938 nope I was thinking the whole time if there’s a counselor named like I’m gonna laugh and boom. Counselor luke
@@guilhermehank4938 can we also talk about Brody’s last name being Jackson? Brody Jackson? Really
This was awesome I hope the author continues the story.
You see this is the problem with a lot of creepypastas. They be very good stories and then end in the middle with no answers. I tend to dislike that.
"Theres something wrong here"
Me as I scroll the internet
Hey guys, so I know people have kept up with this on NoSleep and it’s on a massive cliffhanger with no updates past part four. The reason? I’m in the process of turning the story into a (yet-to-be-titled) book! No official details just yet but watch this space...
Any updates
Meh 😀
None likes books
@@Expansionizationwell one would be able to tell based on your vocabulary here
@@BauerDaTrumpeter aight 🥱
Turkey and creepy pasta a perfect combination
This reminds me of the Outer Limits Episode: The Straight and Narrow.
One thing I learned from That Episode is if the school/camp has No Fence or walls or guards at the Border. There is an unseen Boundary.
Didn't see that coming.......a gaint cobra.....good one!😁
This story was actually a little heartbreaking in the end.
Luke? Brody’s last name being Jackson? On a camp? Reminds me of a certain book series
This was a really good story and I really enjoyed it a lot, awesome job on the narration and video. Love your voice CMP.
I'm glad no one tries to send us bigfoots away to camps
easily one of my favorites now
this has some good potential, i want to see a part 2!!
I love this damn story I can’t wait till another part comes out
On a side note the background photo is really beautiful
Timelapse
If I was Luke or Bart I would’ve knocked him out already😂
or kissed him 👉👈
with the title i was almost hoping it would be some kind of Holes script speedrun
This would be something that would set any juvenile delinquent straight 🤔
Thought this was going to end up a BL story but just ended up traumatic af
Lmao same, might write a book, might not lol
There were actually giant snapping turtles at my summer camp. Ugly bastards, & huge.
this story reminds me of the Goosebumps books i used to read when i was younger, i used to love them so much ☺️
This one kinda reminds me of the Escape From Furnace book series, really great read if anyone is interested
First seat taken.
And Ive taken the first napkin
@Eve hyland well you can't see anything on that seat. 😅
@@MrGrimed 😂🤣💀
First seat is all yours, saves me having to drive 🤷♂️
All yours! Back seat you can watch the audience and if you need to dive.. you are closest to the door.
I love your videos creepsmcpasta! Keep up the good work!
I could have listened to this story for hours! I really wanted more! I skipped nap time to listen and I do not regret that decision one bit! ❤️❤️❤️
i hope there's a part two
I was expecting it to keep going and then a different vid started playing, I was so confused. I was really into this one
I still think there’d be security cameras that could send video to you so even if the school was burnt they’d still probably be able to prove it’s not him. I know innocent people who didn’t commit the crime often get frustrated when falsely accused but if anything he should’ve just played it cool as to not arouse suspicion.
Omg that was a freaking good story i want to hear more about it! Wish it continued❤🔥
still confused on how they were able to publish the story
😳😳🤣😂🤣😂🤣👍
Messenger pigeon
Maybe this was a diary that was found, or he escaped and didn’t mention it
The way it ended was perfect. No trying to explain things which sometimes destroys the magic
Ending it on a cliffhanger like that is the worst way to end ANY story. It ruins the whole structure of proper storytelling, and is a bad habit for writers to fall back on. It's a frowned upon technique that creates poor literature. It's a lazy cop-out for a author who just had a idea but no clear direction or outline. Without a solid structure to build around, the story starts to fall apart. A cliffhanger ending is like taking the wind out of your sails right in the middle of a important Regatta, leaving you dead in the water, hands in the air, and confusion across your face. That's whack.
@@jonathanporter5223 It’s not a cliffhanger, its a natural conclusion to the story.
Stories like these are some of my favorites because they aren't gory and sharp, but rather something dark going on just beneath the surface that you have to try and figure out
Mr. Krabs approved.
YAY
YES
Arggg-yeg-yeg-yeg-yeg-yeg
You probably run the camp don't you
@@somus108 it's not me, SpongeBob did!
I want a sequel where our hero slays the cult leader guy and saves the day or something cheesey like that.
Nah, i wanted a bad ending for this shitty kid
U mean the villains to slay the mirror reglious leader
FBI approved.
You guys probably have a hand in this or is it the CIA's pet monster?
Female Body Inspector?
@@gotohellenwaite6371 no dude that’s weird
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Yo these stories are amazing
this was a very good write I only wish it was longer
Great story...needs another part or 2...1 about why u can't ask about what they done to get there and a great escape from their....
Looks like an easy enemy for doomguy to kill.
It's sometimes best to view a story as a story.Not every tale on the net has to be true or have a logical reason why it got posted.
@@altxogershavelayers5166
What does that have to do with anything
Heck yeah, giant snake!
is there a part two for this basilisk? :D
I hope there'll be a part 2 or more!
This should be a series part two please
There better be a part two after that gigantic mysterious no answers ending.
LOL Dad was in the courtroom with both his arms crossed.... as opposed to crossing one arm? I need a photo LOL
So many questions…
How do they hide the children’s disappearances? Do they stay there forever?
Here!here!
Anybody could be sent away anywhere going to camp would be exciting&fun
I think I'm getting the hang of Creepypasta titles memes.
"My friend roasted me for not letting him in my house.
I didn't have a yee-yee ass haircut."
Maaaan I hope this becomes a series
Grab your popcorn here 🍿
There needs to be a part 2!
Oddly enough, something very similar, and far worse happened to me. I won’t tell the story, but I want you all to know that there are places hidden in plain sight, places you know by name, that house atrocities you could never imagine.
This deff needs a sequel.
I want a sequel to this
I REALLY WANT A PT 2 HOW DO WE ESCAPE
Damn, I just want another one this is the best story yet
There is another on r/nosleep
Please tell me there is a part 2.. and 3, 4, 5, 6 etc. This is a great story and I need to know what happens next!
The main character in the beginning was just begging to get his ass kicked by somebody.
I really want a sequel! I have a slight feeling either the protagonist is going to submit to the cult or he's planning something. I really wanna know...
This is my fourth time trying to finish the story but I keep falling asleep 😴
8 minutes ago? Yeah, I'm down.
So, I really liked this first act. I would like to hear the next 2 acts.
awesome,thank you
Yay early happy thanks giving people.
Now I'm invested in this like it's a show
19:06 story of my fricken life
I already know this will be good. I went to a similar place so its common ground.
oh now this is beautiful
At like 5:00 in the main character makes fun of Bart's name... Boy you're literally named Brody
One of these type of kid
His behaviour tell me that he ain't even trying to be better, that every excuse he have are just lies
This is the person who you need to stay away from before he drags you down.
NOW THIS IS A HORROR MOVIE ID LOVE TO WATCH! IM ONLY 5 MINUETS IN AND I LOVE IT!
Great content though! Keep em coming.
I love this one
Man this got some Goosebumps vibes
only at like 34:30 but
man i'm shipping the hell out of Brody and Bart
I've been working on my own writing skills after being encouraged to do so by my classmates and teachers and I think I've gotten most of the writing skills I have currently from listening to Creepsmcpasta in the background. Well, that and Series of Unfortunate Events books.
I love your narration as per usual, and this story is great. It is very reminiscent of a Twilight Zone.
This is true.. the military school I attended sent problem and awol cadets to camp like this but instead of a monster non-conforming 'campers' walked the plank with hand and ankle shackles weighed down by an 18th century cannonball. Camper who refused to walk were shot in the back of the head with a needler by Master Chief but ONI considered crystalline shard detonation too messy and nerfed his sidearm, swapping in the M6H Magnum.
Obey your parents and do your homework or you'll be sent to the Spartan program too!
Reminds me of my time in rehab, especially how out of place I felt initially. I wouldn't be surprised if the writer had a similar experience in such an environment. Isolated, and feeling like you've gone from a world you don't know how to fit into to one you can't even begin to make sense of. Ideally there's no human sacrifice or water snake deity but still it can be a really scary transition, don't even get me started on the horrifying and infinitely discouraging transition back to the real world. We had a bunch of transfers who traded their 1-3 years in prison for 6 months in therapy only to call it quits and voluntarily serve their full sentences within a couple of weeks or in some cases even a few days.
Tbh...the camp doesn’t sound too bad. Still better than real life prisons. As long as you’re a good guy, there’s no work, no gang violence, no disgusting water and food, and no need to worry about dropping the soap....
But real life troubled youth camps are worse than this. You get beat up and assaulted on a regular basis.
Holy shit that main character is insufferable.