s&as | jerboa pmv wip
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- Опубликовано: 29 авг 2021
- this sure is taking a while huh
edit: thank you so much everybody who's seen this! this is very much still a WIP, i still need to finish a lot of backgrounds and will probably change more of the backgrounds that i wasn't very happy with originally. but i really appreciate all the positive feedback!
since this was uploaded i've had a rough few months, so i haven't made much progress since. i definitely plan to start working on this again soon now that it's gotten attention. thank you again to everybody who's enjoyed this, it means a lot :)
in the meantime, you can follow me on twitter for more semi-frequent content! i don't post a lot of Wings of Fire content but i may post WIPs. / tyqtyii 
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your expressions are very subtle and it makes them so much more believable, good job this is great
Ayo bella 😎 And yeah, I really like the art style, it’s unique. And the anatomy! *chef’s kiss*
thank you so much!!!! i can't believe this video blew up, it's totally still unfinished and i took a break because of burnout. i'll definitely finish it now that it's gotten so much attention!
Dude, honestly jerboa is one of the most compelling characters we have seen. I honestly wish we stayed in her pov longer. I want to see her discover herself after a lifetime of animus mind games. Out of all the animus dragons I think she is ironically the one least tempted by its power because of her negative experience.
This pmv is absolutely amazing. It's shocking how these two only get really like 2 chapters in the whole series to really dive deeply into their characters and yet SO much of their lives is left to the imagination (in both the cruelity and the looping aspect of Boa's character and all the dragons she knew but was forced to forget or leave.
The angles, the anatomy, the detail, the story telling. This is by far the best Jerboa pmv i've seen yet.
thank you so much!
@@tyqtyii2441 np!
It’s not finished it’s a WIP
@@BotanRice ik but its still awesome
I both hate yet respect Boas decisions. Its sad animus magic is gone, because of all the good that can be done, but all the bad that could be done is also gone. I feel like Tui used a cheep escape to get rid of the mary sue power, but tbh it must be so hard to write this power. Like an animus could just delete everything if they wanted, so jerboa deleted it first before anyone else could commit more atrocities.
Not sure if im reading too much into it but i think boa said that the animus magic would only stop working for the current animus dragons alive today so maybe there is still a chance for the future generations to have animus magic again?
@@nervouspangolin still she ruined the chance for turtle to get across to pantala way easier.
@@nervouspangolinno b4cause she erased all future animus spells from being performed so they would still be born with it but never be able to use spells
@@Twilightwolf34820specifically she said no animus dragons, past, present or future could undo the spell, but she only said all animus dragons alive today can never use magic again. So technically magic still exists it just can’t be used to give this specific generation their powers back.
Remember darkstalkers scroll? Kinkajou would still have plenty left. And we never heard what happened to it after. If they could replicate it, it’s not any new enchantments, it’s still the scroll.
Thats it, you have convinced me. I completely understand why Jerboa got rid of animus magic for good, I mean, imagine just constantly being re-enchanted and having those memories all those years ago back in *Darkstalker's time* even?!
I mean, tbh- Darkstalker Legends had brutal animus everywhere. So, to remind us that she has *memories* of those events has made me understand the reasoning behind it.
Poor Boa.
Boa (2nd Jerboa) was one of my favorite characters in wof. She didn't deserve to go through all that she did. I wonder if she even knows that she only came to life because of her mother's enchantments.
When I read her backstory I was completely traumatized I’m cryingg
Your storytelling is so strong & your style fits super well with the music! My fav part was when she walks with “please stop complaining,” everything about her stance is incredibly expressionate
thank you! that was one of my favorite parts to draw :)
this is uttely phenomenal, and really hits hard. you perfectly captured how the original Jerboa is a horrifying, abusive, narcissistic mother. it really gave me chills. but the ending was so peaceful and it shows perfectly why our favorite Jerboa put an end to animus magic.
it also really hits home that abuse of animus magic was the reason why Glacier died, and Glacier might have been the only dragon in countless years who genuinely treated Boa like she was her own dragon.
I'm upset RUclips is only showing me this now, but I love this PMV so far!! The song fits the story so well, and you did an amazing job portraying it! Can't wait to see it complete :D
I think Freedom and Jerboa are the two dragons who suffered the most in the whole series. Both of their fates made me cry a lot. Thanks for this PMV.
And clearsight
Love the little Moonbli bit at the end. Moon and Qibli were probably the only dragons other than Glacier to not demand anything from Jerboa. And they're really cute together.
63rd reply also at 100 I’m going to say very wise words
This. I can't be certain as to exactly why but THIS is by far my favorite Wings of Fire pmv.
Most people will not understand this connection but-
These two remind me of (Ex)Queen Elara and (King)Prince Maven. It was stated in the book how she tainted his mind, changing what she didn’t like, by the time she was finished he was barely even himself anymore but rather her .
Sounds quite like Jerboa and boa’s relationship .
DUDE I LOVE THIS!! ur cinematography, angling and all around art style is chef kiss perfect my guy! do NOT let 46 views get you down you are doing amazing just the way you are!
thank you so much! 46 was way more than i ever expected to get, i just uploaded this so i could show my friend my progress haha! it really blew up
Thank you! No one has been talking about the whole jerboa thing at the end of the dangerous gift, glad to see something about it!
I really sympathize for Boa, I really like this character and this pmv only makes me like her more, this is wonderful. Loved it alot!
wow, this rules! The compositions, the pacing, and what a great song choice!!! It even had an interlude that you used for Boa!!! So amazing!!!
This rules! I also really love your character design- each character is unique, but not too busy, and the designs are faithful to the og art, but not so much that each frame would take ten days (seriously- sooo many scales on those guys!) 10/10 in my book!
This song fits them so well!
OH MY GOSH- I seriously can’t even begin to describe how PERFECT everything is in this pmv.. the scenes are beautiful, and your style is so cool!! All the scenes match the song so well!!
This is amazing!!
thank you so much!! that means a lot coming from you, i'm a big fan of your work!
holy jebus, this mixes two of my favorite things together: tally hall, and wings of fire
Jerboa expected too much of her children
Gonna have a heart attack this is so cool
Gods, i wanna repeat what everyone has been gushing about already (for good reason), but there's this one moment everyone looks over:
Right at the end, when boa mouths "never again". That is SO MEANINGFUL. She has seen these atrocities commited firsthand, she has been victim to them. She _knows_ the horrors that come with being an animus. Shes seen it over and over and over, and it's left her PARALYZED with fear. We see this throughout the THOUSANDS of years shes lived. She watches life after life get taken because of this magic, and she's scared, terrified to do anything against it. Yet, the one thing she musters up the courage to do. She can make sure it never happens again.
"Never again."
I genuinely love this (and the subsequent updates!) so much. I come back to it whenever i remember it, especially for that last line.
i lovvvvvve the way you draw your wings!! ♡
Absolutely beautiful! You translate the Sandwing design so well! And the poses ARE AWESOME! Immediate sub!
FINALLY! something on poor jerboa ||!
This is so epic!
I HAVE ALOT to say about this pmv, even when no finished. First of all, i love the artstyle! I like that designs are relatively simple, but also have rlly nice expressions. Just aaaghr, the shapes. And music choice! Tally Hall is always good music choice, and it very much fits with the character. I also love the little detail with Jerboa iii/boa, having first simple black pupils, but after Jerboa I touches her, they have white stuff in them. Both symbolizing how much Jerboa I has control over her daughter, and also how she experiments with her, changing her to her will. Too boring? Change. Too nice? Change. Make her do dirty work, and when sometimes goes back just go to square one, make her little again. Erase everything from memory. Like ough, Boa had like. So many dragons that did care for her, but no memory of them, of friends she made. Square one, little dragonet again, not knowing bout joys she had. Just her mother, who she feels like she loves, but something rotten is in her heart. It feels wrong, but she cant question it yet. But she finds the scroll. And OH. shit. Even with memory erased, her instincts were screaming, and they were right. Something was wrong, deeply.
And once she is out of Jerboas I control, her pupils, they are full black again. It might not be the best, but she is free, and now sees the damage that animus magic had done, not just to her. But to so many others, innocent or not. She sees clear again. And she knows what she has to do.
"And never again"
And while i dont like the choice to erase animus magic from writing perspective, Tui kinda shoved herself into a corner where she needed to delete the overpowered power (yes water is wet yada yada). Characterwhise however? I love it. Boa, seeing the damage, rotten bodies and hearts, and dying dragons and terrible things happening, she shatters the tablet, or whatever it was in the book. No more suffering from that power, no matter how many dragons it upsets. Risks are simply too large.
Very good, i am going to be thinking bout it alot. AAAAAAGHRGHRHGRGKHJ WGW EWGEWTG GREW
Bruh like this is so underrated. I can imagine how long this took. You need more than just 37 subs and 46 likes
thank you! that's still far more than i ever expected haha
AAAAAAH QIBLI AND MOON ARE SO CUTE AT THE END
good job at the pmv! This actually fits her so well! I love your artstyle, it makes all if it just come together!
Is that underrated I smell?
I literally just finished reading one hour of book 14 with jerboa and now I open my iPad and what do I see? Jerboa :)
I love the way you draw SandWings! I think they’re probably my favorite tribe.
This is actually perfect omg you’ve earned yourself a sub
I cannot express how much I love this!! I've watched it at least 20 times now!!
i keep seeing this in my recommended and never got time to watch this and now i have and i am mad at myself for not watching it earlier. This is so amazing!!! I LOVE your art style!
This looks amazing! The anatomy, the expressions and oh wow, the art style! You’re an amazing artist, keep up the good work! You’re very underrated. One thing I recommend is totally my opinion, but maybe make the Sand Wing horns shorter and a tiny curve on the end, it adds to elegancy with Jerboa |.
Coming back to this a month after I first watched it, and I feel the need to share this story. This animation opened me up to all the music of Tally Hall, and then after listening to that Spotify recommended Cosmo Sheldrake to me. These are now some of my favourite music artists, and I've started to explore new genres of music. (What genre would you call S&AS?) Anyway, thanks for reading if you read this whole comment. I just wanted to share how much this animation caused me to change and grow.
aw i’m so glad to hear you’ve found new music through tally hall!!! they’re one of my favorite artists and s&as was super personal to me, which was part of the reason i used it. i’m honestly not sure what genre it would be
This is amazing, the expressions are awesome and the art is glorious!
Omg yessssssss YOUR SO UNDERRATED! Keep it up
tally hall & wof? perfection
I have committed a crime for not seeing this sooner.
Bruh, HOW DO YOU HAVE THE MOTIVATION FOR THIS?
I can barely even get through a map part!
Congrats on a new subscriber!
thank you! boa was just an incredibly meaningful character for me, though to be fair i got a bit burnt out and have paused working on it to pursue more personal projects. i'll get back to work soon!
Yo
YOUR UNDERRATED I can litterly re watch this a million times
This is absolutely incredible!
Underrated much?
That gave me chills dude 0-0 keep up the great work
i love you for using this song and i also love this art
This is amazing! You deserve WAY more subscribers, and I’m glad to be your 50th!
UNDERRATED
I love it all, but when Boa goes underwater 👌
Woah, you’re so underrated!
THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!! 😊😊😊 The song fits her so well and your animation is perfect! 🤩
one of the best pmvs i'v seen in a while, got my subscribe
i personally will never forgive her for doing what she did she could have stopped animus dragons from casting spells with bad intentions or like something else but permanently destroying animus magic i feel like it was too far imo but great job! you did amazing!
i love this pmv, new subscriber!
WOW I LOVE THIS! I love all of the details you included from the book! WOW!
I feel jerboa needs an apology more than any dragon.
Man.... I love your art style, and it makes me feel like as If I were Jerboa. And I love the song, It matches very well. You are underrated!
This is gorgeous! I was absolutely captivated by every second, incredible work!
The 0 disliked shows how amazing this is
The storytelling is crazy good nice job!
OMG THIS IS AMAZING. The poses, the facial expressions and the talons AHHH I LOVE IT
I watched this last night and all I can say is this is amazing the characters are expressed really well and the atomny is on key this is stunning 😤👌
This deserves more views- I can see the effort and the story vision you had for this pmv- you got some gold here!
Omg this is beautiful
This is incredible! I love your style and the way you told the story!
Thats amazing so far!
Oh my gosh, THIS IS AMAZING!!! It’s so detailed and it goes perfectly for this song!
You're so underrated! I'm so surprised! Your art is amazing, I couldn't do anything as good! The storyline is outstanding as well! new sub :D
Dont let views or subs de-motivate you! do what you love
i wish youtube showed me this before! this is insane! you are SO underrated!!!
Tally hall and wof and good art?! Incredible!
You're so underrated it's honestly criminal, incredible work!!!!!
This is the greatest thing I’ve seen all day. It’s fabulous and I love it sm :)))))))
Oh wow this is amazing! I don’t really know what to say, just that I love this a lot. I can tell you put a lot of work into this, and it looks amazing.
And oh my clearsight how does anyone do talons and how are you so good?
your art is beautiful
AWAA THIS IS INCREDIBLE
Oh my goodness this is amazing!
I Know This is Still a WIP, But still this is AMAZING
god this was beautiful
THIS IS AMAZING
Sigghhhh I’m upset how underrated this is. Anyways, I love how u portrayed jerboa (the second,) I feel so bad for her….
THIS IS AN AMAZING MASTERPIECE IM SUBBING OMGG 💖💖💖💖
Hey man this is absolutely amazing! I do recommend that you just tweak the colors of jerboa and jerboa II abit like making the original jerboa a bit darker. I cant tell which jerboa is on screen a few times
thank you for the suggestion! jerboa III will have the shell necklace for most parts to distinguish them, i just hadn’t added it at the time i posted this 😅
Beautiful!
jerboa wasn’t a very good mother, erasing her own daughters personality and memories again and again. which makes me like the jerboa 2 more.
I'm very confusing as to what's happening, but this looks amazing!
I feel bad for boa but not fully, her mother jerboa made her out of magic cause she was lonely but I think it just corrupted her from that big of a spell that she went insane and imagined a perfect daughter that was not social and never argued and always had to agree with her. It’s sad that she knows that she’s basicly not real and went through 2k+ years of her mother resetting her and being crule but in secret
Spectacular. Especially considering how much of a mess the song is, you made the animations fit with it and Jerboa's story really well. You should feel proud of this.
thank you :)
This is incredible!! I LOVE all of it and I aaaa- The ending is so- HHHHH I CAN'T EVEN WAIT FOR THE FINISHED PRODUCT- Unless it's out aleady? * Checks with extreme haste *
not yet, but thank you!! i'll have more time to work on it after finals :)
@@tyqtyii2441 Np! It really deserves it!! This is so inspiring!
Awesome!
You may be a smaller yt but you made this amazing
I subscribed!
hey, could i re-animate the "Create until nothing is left to create-" to the "Never again..." part? I just, i love it so much, i gotta animate it, I will of course credit you! The emotion in the tone, and all the atoricites of other animus, and then just, "Never again..." just, wow. Its just, beautiful. I love the part so much i really do. You can say no! I totally understand!
of course, go ahead!!! my plan for the empty scene behind jerboa after the “over….again, and then” lyrics was to have the previous scenes from the pmv play, but you’re welcome to change, edit, interpret, etc however you’d like! i’d love to see it when it’s finished!
i just realized i’m a huge fan of your content, i’ve seen a ton of your videos!! your work is amazing!
Thank you so much!
Топово
glacier never used the secret gifts like how snowfall did in the beginning bc she felt disdain for animus magic ever since she met boa right?
😚👌