I read this story in 2008 on a transgender web site along with all the sequels. I stayed up for 3 days calling in sick to work just so I could read without interruption. I also down loaded all the stories to a backup drive.
Having listened to several of your story series, as well as those from other channels, I would say that this is by far one of the most interesting stories I've heard. There are problems throughout with clumsy editing, mispronounced words, and an unsatisfactory ending, but I was really invested in the plot of this story from beginning to end enough to not let those drawbacks lessen my overall enjoyment.
On the site, there are good yarns that remain unfinished. There are technical errors that would be classified as misinformation if it were not that, while many stories are entertaining, many are not very plausible. Misinformation is something I can live with but unfinished stories are extremely irritating. Yeah, we all know that the stories are fiction, but not finishing stories is just lazy. Try harder. It's not as though the world isn't full of people who know all the details. There are stories such as this one that have chapter after chapter. I came across another that was nearly five hours long. So, it can be done. Time to clean up the editing and proofing a bit? Yes?
Stupid ending, their MUST be other parts like Michael going back to janes or a twist that Beth told Karen about Micheal and that's y Karen wanted Micheal to be female and named Michelle, u just can't leave it where it ended
I found enjoyment in this story and the conclusion was satisfying to me an evidently Michael enjoyed it also . Karen calling him Michell at the end was a surprise since she was not supposed to know this name . She must have talked to some unknown person at some point . I can live with that as no doubt Michael will ask about that after this night of young lust and passion . I feel fulfilled that this was a completed story series . That being said ,I'm still very let down where you left Sarah/James story , stopping it short of the promised in fem weekend . I would hope you will address bringing a couple more chapters out so Sarah/James can become comfortable and ultimately date her crush .
Saw that coming really, but what about Jane? What will she make of these developments? Will she deem Michael's attitude sufficiently changed or will she go off like Vesuvius?
Incomplete story ending really leaves one frustrated. That's a horrible thing to do. It's like watching some sporting event with all the build up, playing the first half of it with no score and all the players going home at half time. Game Over! This isn't the first story this has happened to.
Please continue with the rest of the story you can’t leave us with a cliff hanger kind of ending
I read this story in 2008 on a transgender web site along with all the sequels. I stayed up for 3 days calling in sick to work just so I could read without interruption. I also down loaded all the stories to a backup drive.
Having listened to several of your story series, as well as those from other channels, I would say that this is by far one of the most interesting stories I've heard. There are problems throughout with clumsy editing, mispronounced words, and an unsatisfactory ending, but I was really invested in the plot of this story from beginning to end enough to not let those drawbacks lessen my overall enjoyment.
On the site, there are good yarns that remain unfinished. There are technical errors that would be classified as misinformation if it were not that, while many stories are entertaining, many are not very plausible. Misinformation is something I can live with but unfinished stories are extremely irritating. Yeah, we all know that the stories are fiction, but not finishing stories is just lazy. Try harder. It's not as though the world isn't full of people who know all the details. There are stories such as this one that have chapter after chapter. I came across another that was nearly five hours long. So, it can be done. Time to clean up the editing and proofing a bit? Yes?
I agree with the last post. There has to be at least another part.
Stupid ending, their MUST be other parts like Michael going back to janes or a twist that Beth told Karen about Micheal and that's y Karen wanted Micheal to be female and named Michelle, u just can't leave it where it ended
@@marthalong3355wow that is long story u wrote
There should be a ending where michael turns the tables on all of them.
I found enjoyment in this story and the conclusion was satisfying to me an evidently Michael enjoyed it also . Karen calling him Michell at the end was a surprise since she was not supposed to know this name . She must have talked to some unknown person at some point . I can live with that as no doubt Michael will ask about that after this night of young lust and passion .
I feel fulfilled that this was a completed story series .
That being said ,I'm still very let down where you left Sarah/James story , stopping it short of the promised in fem weekend . I would hope you will address bringing a couple more chapters out so Sarah/James can become comfortable and ultimately date her crush .
Saw that coming really, but what about Jane? What will she make of these developments? Will she deem Michael's attitude sufficiently changed or will she go off like Vesuvius?
Incomplete story ending really leaves one frustrated. That's a horrible thing to do. It's like watching some sporting event with all the build up, playing the first half of it with no score and all the players going home at half time. Game Over! This isn't the first story this has happened to.
Ok I’m glad I’m not the only one who was like this can’t be how it ends
There are sequels to this story, I read them online in 2008-2010
The AI generated text just isnt as good as a human written story that encompasses real emotions and situations.