Me when Dark Shadow said we can see invisible people:"So? What does that have to do with Izuku being nervous?" Also me, remembers Hagakure's hero "costume":"OH!"
You seriously did this without planning?! I honestly couldn't tell since the story flowed so well. If you hadn't said anything at the end I wouldn't have know. It was brilliantly crafted and I appreciate how you can turn simply phrases into gold for dialog. Seriously, the yin yang line had me doing a full belly laugh and I haven't had one of those in a while. I would love to see a part 2 for this, but if it is fated to be a one shot then I will accept it while thinking of all the shenanigans that could have been. But seriously well done with this.
I wrote it on the car haha Thank you for the compliment XD I'll create a pool later about it, if enough people want it, it can become a series, who knows
Hero name: Compliman Age:???? Quirk: Compliment. Can compliment people to his heart's content that it's so wholesome that people below the IQ of 100 die.
Always good to see Aragami getting some love. I mean, classic mode missions can burn in hell, but still one of my favorite games. My only small issue with the story is the implications of Izuku removing his mask seeing as they are how the aragami give themselves personality and the only time they are removed is when they die.
@@ShadowInkling very epik games, played the first, beat it, watched the second on yt, loved it, waiting on part two of this, u should make it bro, this could be BIG!
Dark Shadow's that one aunt that will blind you with her aura but instead get chills in this case from her matching you with every girl she sees you get 3 meters close with.
If you do make a pt2, I’ve always said Toru could have a suit made with fibers created from her hair. The same mechanism allows Mirio’s suit to permeate with him. It would keep her invisible and she wouldn’t be naked
Is it just me, or is this one of the only villain rehab program stories, that they don't hurt the villains...cause this is the only one I've seen so far
Thanks! Bruh, tell me about it...I really hope it's something like she's being controlled or coerced or whatever. Ojiro and Mina will go into depression
There will be a part 2, but I think that's it. I can make another Izuku x Hagakure ship in the future if people want it, but this story is pretty much settled to turn into a series I think
After almost 2 years, and so much development, it's nice to come back and remines on the stories that started all this That being said. . .Universe crossover between this and Izuku Uraraka?
You did great as always nicely done and especially since you didn't even plan it out! Like you really got some great skill when comes to story writing I just hope that you can keep up with how much attention you're gonna get (Me included because I WANT A PART 2!). It rare to see such great story telling on the fly with no prep work or plans. And I love how Dark Shadow actually turned out to be a girl that's just so damn funny to think about. If this was a series I definitely wouldn't be disappointed it really got me excited to see your next awesome and glorious series! Because if this is what you can do with no planning whatsoever I would be speechless when you have a fully planned out story. Though that's already true as your 2 current stories are someone I look forward to! I wish I could get more but I digress anyways keep up the astounding work you do and I look forward to the next episode!🤲👑🛐😎😁
@@ShadowInkling sounds like a good idea but I think personally it should just get a second part as like a wrap up of the story. Where he beats another strong opponent then goes on to see how Izuku and Toru love grows and what it becomes.
@@ShadowInkling Oh then if that's the case that's fine! It's just that Izuku back ground and past is already established. We already have are main couple together and to top it off Izuku has experience in real world battles. So there no mental growth needed really just regular body training. that's why I believe what you're doing if it is a series is okay. It needs to be short I say in total like 5 episodes if the polls come out series and not a 2nd part.
I think this was based of of a good game called aragami 2 i play it alot 7th playthrough different difficultys each time its inly on xbox/pc sadly i want it on my ps4 but oh well yeah i this was a good episode to watch if you guys consider check out the game its called aragimi 2 on the xbox/pc if you skiped over that part
The fact that I played this game and you make a simple little touch of fire knock him out says you probably did this for plot or you barely played to get him with a fireball
It's based on the first game where if just one light slash from those samurais touches you, it kills you. I know it doesn't happen like that on the second one. So it's based on the first game and for the plot...haven't you seen Endeavor's flames? They are not weak
Poor Fumi (My nickname for our Lord of Darkness himself) Kageka (Dark Shadow's real name) is just talking casually with Izuku & Fumi has no control over it lmao
This was very well done, you should be proud of this work. As a critique, I would ask that you speed up the time or the chat bubbles to appear. I was constantly having to fast forward throughout the video, and it was already on 2x speed. Other than that, your plot and ideas were very well done. The dialogue was pretty good, but there were still some rough edges to work out. All In all, a very good story and I can't wait to see the next one.
Thank you :) I can see if I can do anything about the speed because it was already at x2 speed on the app. Unfortunately that's the down side of text stories, we have to wait for the app to "write" the text
Finally something with Hagakure thats good and it's a oneshot? GOD DAMN IT! though it was good I kinda wanna see more of Hagakure but no one uses her.. sadness
I feel it too haha Hagakure is underappreciated. I'll make a pool about it later, and depending on the votes this might become a series too, so maybe you get to "see" more of it :)
@@ShadowInkling shadow you realize this can be part of a story now cause that picture heres a hint watch bleach lol tokoyami can be the kinpachi of the series cause his little sidekick was his actual zonpakuto
@@ShadowInkling plus i played the games like the ds version they also have the same battle technique of releasing thier energy all at once as a aura around them plus when you first listen to kenpachi’s story he talks about how one day she just appeared and was not scared of him or anything and the scene shows her patting at the sword
You mean the video or the story? it's 1h30' long, are you watching it on x2 speed? I don't remember if the pacing is slightly fast or not since it's been some time, I wrote it in the car :P
Me when Dark Shadow said we can see invisible people:"So? What does that have to do with Izuku being nervous?"
Also me, remembers Hagakure's hero "costume":"OH!"
lmao hahaha
I love how Mina phrased it as “making some yin and yang” lol
ahaha
She didn't said that.. oh she better not🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I could legit hear mina smile through the phone. LOL
Good content
@@DreamDemonGacha Me to lmao poor todoroki
"i can't even wish to be invisible!" that cracked me up xD
hahah poor Toru
RIP Toru
I love how Aizawa says " Ask me do I care?" And Ilda says Ah d.- do you ca- and gets cut off by no
A shadow user and light user "they are making some ying yang" you broke me here how did you Come up with it
hahaha thanks :D just had to think of an easy analogy for the light x dark stuff XD
Omg this game thank you for making this part 2 please
Edit: just looked at the title me now: sad :(
@@couch8387 he Ask if we wanted to have it a one shot / two shot or a small serie and last i check serie was winning so dont be sad
@@couch8387 hahaha I created a pool yesterday about it having more parts or not, you can vote it there if you want :)
That got me lmao and it is hard to make me laugh
You seriously did this without planning?! I honestly couldn't tell since the story flowed so well. If you hadn't said anything at the end I wouldn't have know. It was brilliantly crafted and I appreciate how you can turn simply phrases into gold for dialog. Seriously, the yin yang line had me doing a full belly laugh and I haven't had one of those in a while. I would love to see a part 2 for this, but if it is fated to be a one shot then I will accept it while thinking of all the shenanigans that could have been. But seriously well done with this.
I wrote it on the car haha Thank you for the compliment XD I'll create a pool later about it, if enough people want it, it can become a series, who knows
Hero name: Compliman
Age:????
Quirk: Compliment.
Can compliment people to his heart's content that it's so wholesome that people below the IQ of 100 die.
@@mr.hammer859 hahaha lmao
lol
*dies
Always good to see Aragami getting some love. I mean, classic mode missions can burn in hell, but still one of my favorite games. My only small issue with the story is the implications of Izuku removing his mask seeing as they are how the aragami give themselves personality and the only time they are removed is when they die.
Well yeah, but also plot hahaha can't kissy kissy with a mask on
Aragami ?!! Base on one of the best stealth games in my opinion wohoo 🥳
I love the games too haha I'm currently playing the second one :D
@@ShadowInkling bro the aragami games are awesome
@@bluephantom412 As someone who is a ninjutsu teacher I absolutely love them. They are so simple and yet so fun hahah
@@ShadowInkling very epik games, played the first, beat it, watched the second on yt, loved it, waiting on part two of this, u should make it bro, this could be BIG!
@@ShadowInkling THERES A SEQUEL?!
Minetas voice dies out as a cold metal of a sword gently KISSES HIS NECK AYOOOOOOO
hahaha
Match maker Dark Shadow: he needs body heat
🤨😏
I can imagine Tokoyami just saying save me
hahah Tokoyami lost control of his life XD
"Making some yin yang"
BEST quote ever had me dying in laughter for a whole day🤣🤣🤣⬛❤️⬜
Dark Shadow: Your going to just go and rub off thinking about the frog gi-
Tokoyami: ShUt Up!!
I Imagine When Izukus Exiting A Shadow He’s Just Creepily Crawling Up
I hope this gets a part 2. It was really well written and the storie was nice too
I'll create a pool later. If enough people want it, it can become a series as well
@@ShadowInkling YES A SERIES PLEASE
@@ShadowInkling Ik I can’t hold it but I will delete your channel if you don’t I can’t hold the threat or make it true probaly
@@thegodofthecontrollers122 hahah chill
@@ShadowInkling plz make it a series, I don't see much hagakure ships with deku.
Dark Shadow's that one aunt that will blind you with her aura but instead get chills in this case from her matching you with every girl she sees you get 3 meters close with.
hahhahaha
Izuku and Hagakure are making some Yin Yang…
This was way funnier than it should’ve been
hahaha
Toru: I think aizawa would be mad that you were carrying a knife with you
Me: oh that's not a knife😏😏
"Making some yin and yang." that was very clever and amazing way to put it
Thanks haha
If you do make a pt2, I’ve always said Toru could have a suit made with fibers created from her hair. The same mechanism allows Mirio’s suit to permeate with him. It would keep her invisible and she wouldn’t be naked
That's a good idea :)
"Your just gonna rub one off, while thinking about the front gir-
SHUUUUTTTT UUUUUUPPP"
🤣🤣
Tokoyami's life is over at this point 🤣🤣
FINALLY AFTER MONTHS I FINALLY FOUND A STORY WHERE THIS ACTUALLY CAME TRUE OF ARAGAMI DEKUUU
hahaha
lmao poor tokoyami
getting drag along like a sack of potatoes and i love the added part of darkshadow is actually a girl
hahaha thanks! I just follow the BNHA Smash where it appears as a girl, and as far as I know the author said it's canon :)
Is it just me, or is this one of the only villain rehab program stories, that they don't hurt the villains...cause this is the only one I've seen so far
My favorite moments
Fumikage: SHUUUUUUUUT UUUUUUUUUUUUP
Izuku: Well, it has come to my knowledge that I'm in love with you
hahaha fumikage has zero privacy
Making some Yin Yang I'm dead😂
hahaha I still think Shoto didn't get it 😂😂
Tokoyamis just fucking done with everyone's shit
He lost control of his life hahah
That should have a part 2 just finished and Im wanting more
hahaha thanks! I'll open a pool later, and if enough people want it I can give it a sequel :)
Bro both Dark shadow and Mina are a menace, it’s hilarious 😂
Yeah ahhaha
Yall I felt the second hand embarrassment when toru thought it was a knife.
hahaha
"They making some yin, yang" haha I died.
This twoshot is all I need to see every video on your channel Shadow!
as soon as you said a festival of shadows and lights I knew exactly what was happening
hahaha
this hits different knowing that hagakure's the UA traitor but the story itself is nice and well written
Thanks! Bruh, tell me about it...I really hope it's something like she's being controlled or coerced or whatever. Ojiro and Mina will go into depression
If you make a part two you got a subscription this was amazing
There will be a part 2, but I think that's it. I can make another Izuku x Hagakure ship in the future if people want it, but this story is pretty much settled to turn into a series I think
@@ShadowInkling Ok you should definitely do more
The beginning death was super detailed I like it
Thank you :) If you like that style you should watch my series, there are a lot of episodes at the moment :)
@@ShadowInkling I definitely will
Wow aragami fun game haven’t watched yet but guessing it’s gonna be a banger
It is, I'm playing the second one at the moment
“When did I lose control of my quirk” when you found out it was a girl
After almost 2 years, and so much development, it's nice to come back and remines on the stories that started all this
That being said. . .Universe crossover between this and Izuku Uraraka?
You should make another… I mean I know it was a one shot but this is too good
I probably make just another part :)
I thought slidengo was slide canceling like in call of duty and i just started dying of laughter
The pro hero SlidingGo? Bro I always hated his face I don't know why hahaha
You did great as always nicely done and especially since you didn't even plan it out! Like you really got some great skill when comes to story writing I just hope that you can keep up with how much attention you're gonna get (Me included because I WANT A PART 2!). It rare to see such great story telling on the fly with no prep work or plans. And I love how Dark Shadow actually turned out to be a girl that's just so damn funny to think about. If this was a series I definitely wouldn't be disappointed it really got me excited to see your next awesome and glorious series! Because if this is what you can do with no planning whatsoever I would be speechless when you have a fully planned out story. Though that's already true as your 2 current stories are someone I look forward to! I wish I could get more but I digress anyways keep up the astounding work you do and I look forward to the next episode!🤲👑🛐😎😁
Thank you :D I'll create a pool later to see if people want more parts or turn this into a series :)
@@ShadowInkling sounds like a good idea but I think personally it should just get a second part as like a wrap up of the story. Where he beats another strong opponent then goes on to see how Izuku and Toru love grows and what it becomes.
@@YamiTori0130 That's also true haha but if it happens to be a series it will be a small one, like 5 or 6 eps
@@ShadowInkling Oh then if that's the case that's fine! It's just that Izuku back ground and past is already established. We already have are main couple together and to top it off Izuku has experience in real world battles. So there no mental growth needed really just regular body training. that's why I believe what you're doing if it is a series is okay. It needs to be short I say in total like 5 episodes if the polls come out series and not a 2nd part.
@@YamiTori0130 yeah, I feel you
Yup Childhood friends are always teasing. I used to do that as well.
hahaha
The "taste the rainbow mother f*cker" got me
xD
omg YES I BEEN SEARCHIng FOR ONE OF THESE AND YOU MADE IT!
my man izuku is growin up
Lmfao the "they're make some Yin Yang" killed me
hahaha
Ahhh...Yes...Yin yang seems acceptable as a cover up for somethin'....
I played the game before so imminterested to see how this works
"Izuku and Toru are just making some Yin Yang" 🤣🤣🤣
Oohhh~ yeah. This is some good shit
**quack**
yooo quack! Thanks haha
this plot is ~exquisit~
haha thanks
I really enjoyed this I hope you make it part 2 my favorite part was 'yin and yang'
Thank you :)
Mina did not just say izu and haga are making ying yang😂🤣😂🤣
Hahaha
I love this It's really good keep up the good work
Thank you :)
@@ShadowInkling your welcome 🤗
They’re just making some yin-yang 🤣🤣🤣
🤣🤣
I think this was based of of a good game called aragami 2 i play it alot 7th playthrough different difficultys each time its inly on xbox/pc sadly i want it on my ps4 but oh well yeah i this was a good episode to watch if you guys consider check out the game its called aragimi 2 on the xbox/pc if you skiped over that part
Usually the user controls the stand today the stand controls the user
hahahah
1:00:55 just imagine him unhumanly spider crawling in that and you'll get it.
Im gonna hope i dont need to play the games to understand ...... LETS GO IN
I don't think you need to play it haha but they are a lot of fun
The fact that I played this game and you make a simple little touch of fire knock him out says you probably did this for plot or you barely played to get him with a fireball
It's based on the first game where if just one light slash from those samurais touches you, it kills you. I know it doesn't happen like that on the second one. So it's based on the first game and for the plot...haven't you seen Endeavor's flames? They are not weak
The "They are making ying-yang" part fucking killed me
Hahah I'm glad
Dark shadow is sooo blood good and how tokoyami reacts I'm dying
Poor Fumi (My nickname for our Lord of Darkness himself) Kageka (Dark Shadow's real name) is just talking casually with Izuku & Fumi has no control over it lmao
I bet jit tripped on this one
This was very well done, you should be proud of this work. As a critique, I would ask that you speed up the time or the chat bubbles to appear. I was constantly having to fast forward throughout the video, and it was already on 2x speed. Other than that, your plot and ideas were very well done. The dialogue was pretty good, but there were still some rough edges to work out. All In all, a very good story and I can't wait to see the next one.
Thank you :) I can see if I can do anything about the speed because it was already at x2 speed on the app. Unfortunately that's the down side of text stories, we have to wait for the app to "write" the text
The games were good so good choice mate👌
Thanks, yeah I'm playing the second one :D
@@ShadowInkling nice bro :D
You and no face are my favorites. 🙂
Thank you :D
God damn it, the last things Mina said just caught me off guard.🤣
hahah 🤣
Part 2 please this too good
Thanks ahah I'll make a pool about it. If enough people want it I can make it a series
Finally something with Hagakure thats good and it's a oneshot? GOD DAMN IT! though it was good I kinda wanna see more of Hagakure but no one uses her.. sadness
I feel it too haha Hagakure is underappreciated. I'll make a pool about it later, and depending on the votes this might become a series too, so maybe you get to "see" more of it :)
@@ShadowInkling she always gets low ass votes but you know who I'm voting for! also you earned my sub with this vid
@@curseofinsanity3073 Thanks man, and welcome to my channel! I have to ongoing series with quite a number of episodes, if you want to check it out :D
good story different approach from what i took lol
haha thanks
I just love dark shadow just love to tease them
This was amazing 👀🍵
Thanks :D
@@ShadowInkling NP
Hey shadow guess what we are early
Damn, you're almost earlier than me ahaha
Tokoyami: fml
Me: may your soul be dpared
hahaha
Your thumbnail be like. People who cant see invisible girls😑😑😑... The people who can😳😳😳. Loved the story tho. 😁😁😁
hahaha thanks
I want to laugh and smile so much but i can't be if i do my mother will cought
And i want to shouth because my ribs is broken ☹️😭
hahaha damn, hope you get better
Tokoyami getting abuse bye dark shadow XD
XD
Who else laughed, when Mina said "making some ying yang".
I LOVE THE SHIP, DO MORE OF THIS SHIP!
I feel Hagakure ship is underated #loveforhagakure
That was fire though
Thanks :D
hold on! An Izukure?!
That's right!
in the thumbnail i thought deku was spiderman
The Ying and Yang 💀
This is amazing nice story line and every thing thank you
thank you :)
Can tell this shit gon be fire
Omg making darkshadow a female made this funnier
Acording to BNHA Smash she is haha. here: img.ifunny.co/images/ead8d889f78aa70692f72de5a54f496289c8e5c8fbf67003738236dc657e8f5a_1.webp
@@ShadowInkling shadow you realize this can be part of a story now cause that picture heres a hint watch bleach lol tokoyami can be the kinpachi of the series cause his little sidekick was his actual zonpakuto
@@Seigfried_sigil wait, what? I never finished Bleach, Yachiru is his zampakuto?
@@ShadowInkling well it eas figured out before its big reveal due to the masamune arc she just up and vanished and no one could find her
@@ShadowInkling plus i played the games like the ds version they also have the same battle technique of releasing thier energy all at once as a aura around them plus when you first listen to kenpachi’s story he talks about how one day she just appeared and was not scared of him or anything and the scene shows her patting at the sword
Im fucking lonely lol but the story is great
Thanks xD
Can you maybe make this a series I love it
I'm glad you liked it haha if enough people want it, sure, I'll make a pool for it :)
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😭Yin Yang Omg thats genius
🤣🤣
You made that go by a little fast don’t you think
You mean the video or the story? it's 1h30' long, are you watching it on x2 speed? I don't remember if the pacing is slightly fast or not since it's been some time, I wrote it in the car :P
AS IF TOKOYAMI WASNT BEST BOI ALREADY
xD
Onto the next series which will ne dome quick since its a two shot
i loved it part 2 pls but if not i understand
I think it will be a twoshot :)
1:10:05 IZUKU WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY
YOU HAD TO DO THAT AT THAT MOMENT
hahaha we can't control it, my man's innocent
@@ShadowInkling true that
PLEASE MAKE MORE 🙏
dude u gotta make wattpad stories man
Maybe in the future if I have the time =]
Yin and yang yoooo 😂
😂😂
izuku can do the 1 thing we can't double jump
59:43 i cant get over that face
hahaha tha gif cracks me up everytime
I loved the aragami game 1 and 2
Same :)