When you write a love note to your arranged fiancé against your father's norm but- | one shot |

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  • Опубликовано: 10 ноя 2024

Комментарии • 79

  • @marsfics
    @marsfics  9 месяцев назад +66

    This one shot and the one I wrote before: ruclips.net/video/BV_vu1uea4U/видео.htmlsi=6RYDgSqBuOwZFz2O
    These revolve around the same theme and I would like to write more such one shots but I was wondering if I should write one with Jungkook’s POV?

  • @WonderlandtomyALICE
    @WonderlandtomyALICE 9 месяцев назад +108

    I was so fucking done with those cheating, ex dramas and cold anaconda shit!! Then i saw this, my heart screamed. This is exactly what i needed on a mournful period day❤ i have a confession, sorry to even think that you can only ace those dark theme plots. Hellono girl, your soft love plots are more rocking, I'm bowing!! I have been here since the time you wrote your first story ever, i don't read ffs anymore, but for you I'll be doing that till i turn old and grey jaz. Please know this, i have been a reader since more than 10 years now, i have read it to the max- the bestselling books to the flop ones and those that exists in the wattpad world, there's no one like you, you are magic, never ever stop writting!! Can i have this promise please? (I hardly tune in to comments, but for you i can have a debt to shower you with words, hope you smiled reading these words from my overhyped emotional heart) ❣️- lots of love and Take care🧿🦋

    • @slayianaa
      @slayianaa 9 месяцев назад +16

      Bro Anaconda §hit got me lol well it's actually true these days idk why there's so much nonsense and even everyone's trying to justify their point when there's exactly nothing in it except toxicity. Now imma watch this ff after reading your comment because I am satisfied:)

    • @jk_122
      @jk_122 9 месяцев назад +1

      10yrs!!! Seriously dude?

    • @WonderlandtomyALICE
      @WonderlandtomyALICE 9 месяцев назад +5

      @@jk_122 I'm 23 years old darling, and have been a vivid reader since the age of 12 ...so yes, 10 it is🤭

    • @lisalee3617
      @lisalee3617 9 месяцев назад +5

      ​@@WonderlandtomyALICE as you said u are an old reader like me (im not 23 but 19 and I have been reading since so long) now the things is no one write storylines like this anymore and the vibe ff used to hold before it's hard to find those nowadays ,ffs are getting dirtier with no storyline unlike this one agree or not?

    • @WonderlandtomyALICE
      @WonderlandtomyALICE 9 месяцев назад +3

      @@lisalee3617 absolutely!! A strong plot story and characteral chemistry is a must, that's one of the reasons I'm more into long one shots and series, and jazz has a way of delivering that in the most amazing way❤️

  • @bonobonoyaa1284
    @bonobonoyaa1284 9 месяцев назад +34

    31:02 when you smiled at me. I feel in love with you ". The same she wrote on the letter written on his chest . This just hit hard ❤

  • @jagrutidash
    @jagrutidash 9 месяцев назад +17

    The most unique ff ever I believe.. These kind of love is so rare in real 😢

  • @ishikagupta7466
    @ishikagupta7466 9 месяцев назад +14

    First time ever I was really giggling the entire time.....that I even questioned myself....like why am I smiling? ❤️...........

  • @purvamahajan5531
    @purvamahajan5531 9 месяцев назад +4

    Jaz I am just.....speechless for your writing😭...I've read and seen so many Jungkook ff's/stories but the way YOU CREATES JUNGKOOK CHARACTER is something out of the world like i don't have enough words for your writing...it is justtt top of everything just too goodd to describe in words😭💗...
    On my knees for your writing🛐🧎‍♀️...Take a bow 🙇‍♀️💗🦋😩👍...

  • @kosmos7-7
    @kosmos7-7 9 месяцев назад +11

    Jaz😭 I worship you

  • @palakjain3015
    @palakjain3015 9 месяцев назад +9

    I loved it . This made me felt breathlessness. I loved the game they played. It was intense
    ❤❤

  • @tausifatanzim9524
    @tausifatanzim9524 9 месяцев назад +3

    This storyline us just mesmerizing...wish it had more parts 😌😌💖💖💖

  • @ifyoujiminyoucantjimout6605
    @ifyoujiminyoucantjimout6605 9 месяцев назад +26

    GURL IF YOU DIDNT MADE MORE FF LIKE THIS THEN I AM GONNA SUE YOU FOR WASTING YOUR TALENT YOU ARE LITREALLY SOMETHING LIKE GURLY POP YOU HAVE MAGIC LAY BENEATH YOUR WORDS PLEASE MAKE MORE LIKE THESE THIS IS LOVE I CANT COMPAIR THSU WITH NOTHING THAN LOVE BC IT JUST SO BEAUTIFUL I AM LOVING YOU AND YOUR CHANNEL ALREADY PLEASE MAKE MORE LIKE THESE

  • @pragatiparyani774
    @pragatiparyani774 8 месяцев назад

    Why is this not the most liked ff ever?!!!

  • @any_thing2988
    @any_thing2988 9 месяцев назад +9

    You are just perfect from writing dark themes to this one I love every bit of it❤️

  • @_.diahhh
    @_.diahhh 5 месяцев назад +1

    Whats the point of marriage if it aint like this AAAHHHHHHHH OMYGGAAAHHDDD I WATCHED THIS TWICE 😭😭😭

  • @jooniesminnie167
    @jooniesminnie167 3 месяца назад

    GURL WHAT DO U AHVE ON UR FINGER TIPS?!
    MAGIC?! OMGGG IM CRYING WELP

  • @chhavi_0803
    @chhavi_0803 9 месяцев назад +3

    Oh dear!! This hopelessly romantic y/n💘and detective jungkook
    Such a soft and lovely story💕
    You know what Jazz I would really love if you'll write soft romance someday:)...they are so freaking good✨
    I always smile like an idiot whenever you upload these kind of oneshots😊
    Kudos to you dear
    Love you❤

  • @sainachandra_999
    @sainachandra_999 7 месяцев назад

    could u make a bonus part for this one shot? its really good and i was looking forward to scenes in continuation to this one

  • @nisha3161
    @nisha3161 9 месяцев назад +3

    Mind-blowing and flawless. Love and enjoyed it a lot. Amazing story ever . I love the way they wait for each other although I don't like y/n's dad rules ( I know you represent the old time but still it is awkward for me). Thanks for this ff of yours.
    💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @shajikp5017
    @shajikp5017 9 месяцев назад +2

    Why the hell i imagined ❤Enola and Tewkesbury ❤

  • @NaveedBhinder
    @NaveedBhinder 9 месяцев назад +3

    Dear author plz continue . Trapped. I am waiting for from long time btw I was telling this story to my czns and whenever they arrive at my house they all asked me about this story plz end this misery of mine and their also 😅 btw it was mind blowing love it as always❤

  • @goldenhour613
    @goldenhour613 9 месяцев назад +2

    After reading this, I thanked my stars for availing this to download as well. Even if it wasn't, I was about to screen record the whole thing again and keep it with me till the very end. You are such an inspiration dear! Keep growing💜💜

  • @Lisasbob
    @Lisasbob 9 месяцев назад +8

    I am blushing smiling and kicking my feet this is wholesome 😭😭

    • @Lisasbob
      @Lisasbob 9 месяцев назад +1

      Now time to cry myself to sleep because i will never get a man like him

  • @sarangsarang3174
    @sarangsarang3174 9 месяцев назад +2

    Your ffs are so my type its so good ❤️❤️

  • @kookies7368
    @kookies7368 9 месяцев назад

    This FF was so perfectly perfect 🤌👏

  • @trisha7480
    @trisha7480 8 месяцев назад

    This is just so amazing mesmerizing beautiful so beautifully written expressed. It can just make you fall in love with the characters and story💗

  • @SaachiChauhan-c1j
    @SaachiChauhan-c1j 9 месяцев назад

    just perfectly wrote best. just love it

  • @jennetsdiaries1881
    @jennetsdiaries1881 9 месяцев назад

    I am absolutely in love with this~~~~

  • @hussnainzulfiqar927
    @hussnainzulfiqar927 9 месяцев назад +2

    I really love ❤ all of your fanfictions. I believe that you're a great writer and your writing skills are awesome 💜.
    But I've a request can you please make some hyung line ff. You're a great writer ❤ and I really want to read ff of hyung line written by you. I hope you'll consider my request.
    And I love you ❤.

  • @jeonfairykookie
    @jeonfairykookie 8 месяцев назад

    Yes please do make FFs like these .. even with JK POV .. i would love to watch it ❤️☺️

  • @soheliritu
    @soheliritu 9 месяцев назад +1

    Awwww🥺 that's confession ❤

  • @riaoswalj
    @riaoswalj 9 месяцев назад

    This is so beautiful that I'm crying my eyes out 💘

  • @sanchitasajjon9597
    @sanchitasajjon9597 8 месяцев назад

    You know what you just raised my expectations in sky level 🙂 now it's your responsibly to find me this man ☺️😂 I don't wanna be single anymore 😭😭

  • @tahadewan9
    @tahadewan9 8 месяцев назад

    This is a true masterpiece 🤌

  • @nourhenamri6821
    @nourhenamri6821 9 месяцев назад

    Oh my dear god , jasmine

  • @jivanvaishnav6842
    @jivanvaishnav6842 9 месяцев назад

    I really really really love reading soft love and happy ending story more than dark and cheating,sad ending story i know that all the types of story is like a kinda example of our real life but still soft story make my heart feels light ❤❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊😊😊i love it this story please make this kind of story and can you please also add jk pov

  • @ravneetkaur2200
    @ravneetkaur2200 9 месяцев назад +1

    what is the background music on 14:21? pls tell

  • @toshi_eve
    @toshi_eve 8 месяцев назад

    You're perfect, your storyline is Perfect, everything seems perfect till the moment I was engrossed in this and the reality befalled when it ended.
    Hoping for a another good one, so keep making these type of sceñarios for ppl like me to forget the reality even for some moments.

  • @_tannupriya_
    @_tannupriya_ 9 месяцев назад +2

    omg this is so beautiful, u r just an amazing writer ♥ ♥

  • @JagdishkumarSrivastava
    @JagdishkumarSrivastava 8 месяцев назад

    Ahh!!!i really love this i was really like you know tired of reading other ffs like that cold brutal cruel type of ff but but but but i really loved it like i really wanted to read this type of gl ff it was type of ancient when lovers used to write letter to each other it was literally good no no amajin i am really speechless i would wait for more of your fanfiction love youu❤

  • @jeonfairykookie
    @jeonfairykookie 8 месяцев назад

    U making my dreams n STDs so high in a good way 💕 .. im out of words rn " like this is so dreamyyy I've ever read like truely so magical so Çaptivating.. I can feel my heart beats loud n clear in my ears. Just wow... So fantastically Hypnotic 💕. I love it so much ♥️... Thank u so much love for making such a magnificent FF for us. I love you ❤️.

  • @sabanizam7755
    @sabanizam7755 8 месяцев назад

    Ita so beautifully written❤ i was literally imagining myself... Haaaaaaaaaaaa what a story

  • @jiyaali9259
    @jiyaali9259 8 месяцев назад

    Yaahhhhh this is the most beautiful story I've ever read❤

  • @zakiyashaikh656
    @zakiyashaikh656 9 месяцев назад +2

    I love it❤and i appreciate your choice of words❤

  • @Neverletgo7270
    @Neverletgo7270 8 месяцев назад

    Make more parts of this ff plz .. i love this ❤❤❤❤

  • @Priyankayadav-nt5ep
    @Priyankayadav-nt5ep 9 месяцев назад +2

    Ah my hearteuu 🫠❤️❤️❤️

  • @Sayejm.
    @Sayejm. 9 месяцев назад

    ITS would be so much better if it’s was with music just a tipp

  • @theinnerself344
    @theinnerself344 9 месяцев назад +3

    Plz just update us Jaz...it's already been 2 months ...are u still gonna take more months to continue trapped?

    • @marsfics
      @marsfics  9 месяцев назад +8

      I have updated quite a few times that I will continue trapped in summers I’m not in that space to write it currently, you can check the highlighted update on my Instagram for clear explanation and even on my RUclips live I updated regarding the same, at that I have written in my main channel’s community post too that I’ll continue it when I can be consistent writing it. :)

  • @thisisnevergonnabee
    @thisisnevergonnabee 9 месяцев назад

    Nahh broo if I'm having an arranged marriage I want it like this if not I ain't want that shi

  • @muskan667
    @muskan667 9 месяцев назад +2

    Masterpiece 💜💜

  • @ibrahimkhjatu2597
    @ibrahimkhjatu2597 9 месяцев назад +2

    Author u are AMAZING ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @riddhamfreefire5501
    @riddhamfreefire5501 9 месяцев назад +2

    this is amazing 😍

  • @abdullahirfan9391
    @abdullahirfan9391 8 месяцев назад

    Jaz when are j going to continue trapped jkff???

  • @Myraavya2922
    @Myraavya2922 8 месяцев назад

    2:37 bro my nick name is Myra

  • @lovelysharma1026
    @lovelysharma1026 9 месяцев назад

    Really loved it

  • @jeonsneha_
    @jeonsneha_ 9 месяцев назад

    Beautiful ❤

  • @Ri_a289
    @Ri_a289 9 месяцев назад

    You're so good vrooo

  • @universe-i3e
    @universe-i3e 9 месяцев назад

    Wow......... Amazing❤❤❤

  • @dikshakamble3352
    @dikshakamble3352 8 месяцев назад

    It was so nice your imagination and writing skills🤌🏼
    It's make curious how will be their first meeting
    💜💜