5 tips to improve your writing 1) Don't use Contractions such as; don't, can't, shouldn't use; do not cannot should not 2) Avoid there is/ there are There are many issues that students face at university Students face many issues at university 3) Don't use common words such as; really, very, a lot, so 4) Use active voice instead of passive 5)Use strong verbs
definitely some people do, for example, English learners like me. These tips will be helpful for my writing proficiency test, which I am about to take.
I’ll help you out if you’re taking notes. 0:29 Do not use contractions 1:40 Avoid using there is/there are 3:05 Avoid using really/very/a lot 6:06 Use active voice instead of passive voice 9:00 Use strong verbs
1.do not use contractions ex.don't can't shouldn't 2.avoid there is &there are 3.don't use really ,a lot ,so &very 4.use active voice 5.use strong verbs
Oh my god! I just realized that I might have been making these mistakes all my life. And, all it took was a few minutes of conscious effort and practice. Thanks, this is super useful.
So HELPFUL OMG Tips for writing: 1. Avoid contractions 2. Avoid there is/there are (sentence become stronger to the point) 3.Avoid really, very, a lot, so (weakens writing) Use “many” or “much” ex:Much of the time is wasted 4. Have subject, verb, object 5.Use strong verbs When you see verb and noun (try to use verb) Example 1 : he gave assistance -> He assisted Ex 2: made an objection -> He objected (Does the noun have verb form?)
sebastian cuello I bet money you did not even read the 91$ book, yet you complain how useless the book is. Take the easy route and watch videos, that would help you more than reading a book, you mundane fool.
Whether you prefer watching videos or reading books, continue to practice you writing skills. Finding books your are interested in reading will help your writing improve as well.
Thank you for helping me because when I checked my grades today, I saw that I had an F in ELA and started crying so I decided to look for videos to help me and this helped me a lot
my teacher gave me an extension to submit my assessment and im so happy cause she is so nice and i would be sad if i put no effort into something that she gave me extra time to do
Emma, this is great! I am recommending it to my students and have sent the video to colleagues. I've even embedded it in a blog post I wrote on academic or formal writing. Really well done and very enjoyable. Brava!
Great tips! I also say avoid using phrasal verbs. For example: give up = forfeit; go down = decrease; do over = repeat. This usually improves formality. It also helps shorten sentences, like your tips #2, #4 and #5. Simplicity is key :)
apparently you DID NOT pay attention that much. She CLEARLY said do not use "THERE ARE". But then again i do not agree with the instructor in alot of things like at 2:11 she should have wrote, Students face many issues at the University or Universities if She didnt want to use "THE" in the sentence. Unless the University is the name of the university but i doubt that, hopefully.
1. Avoid using *contractions* 2. Avoid using *there is/there are* 3. Avoid using *alot, really, very, so* 4. Instead of using *passive voice* use *action voice* ➡️subject, verb then the object 5. Use *strong verbs* Just for easier reference for u guys and myself Don’t need thank me😜 I’m like alr over the age of learning grammar but I’m learning cuz I just got a borderline pass of 50+ for English but I need to get 70+ to graduate my school and get into the school that I want
I just wanted to thank you for all that you’re doing. Your teachings helped me big time and I scored 7 bands in Writing. Keep up the good work and wish you all the very best!!
This video really helped me a lot!! Thank you so much! I feel more confident in my essay writing! Can u make videos on how to write different type of middle/high school essays?
What she means is that some words or terms we commonly use at home or with friends, are used as colloquialism. And that makes your writing poor and non-professional.
In my experience teachers are sadist f*cks that don't get along with students (even if you think you do, they experts in faking a smile). None of them is consistent so you need to learn each one as like a new cat. Always listen to others who had a previous teacher and their warnings. Teachers don't change, YOU change.
I want to say that word count is a very high/middle school thing. Professional writing and college writing concentrates more on length, like how many pages something needs to be, letter font and size. The only writing that might focus on word count is journalism.
Thank you. This makes sense. I want to share my writing skill. Someone reply to me any mistakes and give me a rating. Don't use emotion. Use logic. Mark's about to be attacked by a great white. Jack tries throw a rock at the great whites nose to avoid Mark, but failed. Jack tries it second time and hits the great whites nose, but there's a strange difference. The great white does not quit. "Jack!" Mark shouted. "Grab the harpoon! It's right behind you!" Jack takes the harpoon with a grunt. "Throw it to the great white!" He shouted. "I can't!" Jack replied. "Why not?"Mark asked. "It's too heavy!" Jack replied. "Just throw it Jack!" Mark screamed. "This great white is about to shred my life!" Jack throws the harpoon with all of his power. The harpoon did not hit the great whites nose, but it's eye. The great white swam away with blood trails in the sea. Mark swam to the shore safely. "Are you ok Mark? Ow," Jack asked in pain. "Yeah I'm ok," Mark replied. "My arm is sore," said Jack. "Well. It was worth to save a friends life," said Mark. "Yeah,"Jack replied.
There are some quibbles: First of all, your sentences are a teeny bit jittery, they don't have a a constant flow. Try writing sentences of various lengths with a greater use of punctuation ( a coma, dash, semicolon, a pause etc.) "Jack tries throw a rock at the great whites nose to avoid Mark, but failed" Okay..um, what do you mean by "avoid"? Also, since you are narrating the incident in real-time, use present tense Rephrasing the sentence, a better way to write this would be: "Jack hurls a rock at the Great White's nose to free Mark from it's clutches, but fails in the process" Always shift the paragraph when you use a new line of dialogue, I can almost see my English teacher pulling her hair out in agony xD And keep in mind that rich words are essential to a good writing. Instead of using "Throw", use "Hurled" Likewise, use "Moaned" instead of "Asked" and so on. (Though this might depend on the context) ------ All in all, it's good, you'll get there. You have the potential 3.5/5
I may not be the best at writing, but I'll give you my opinion on your writing skill: I like it, but it's a bit on the choppy side. It is nice, but not the best. Please don't get upset if I'm being too blunt. Afterall, you did ask for criticism.
Wow. I couldnt agree more. Great tips! I am in school for engineering, however, I wanted to make sure that my communication skills were "clean" and powerful. This helped immensely, you are a fantastic teacher.
I have been learning English for one year and I always love your videos on RUclips. I’ve learned many things and today I learn to be a good writer. Thank you for always sharing.
EMMA'S PRESENTATION ARE ATTRACTIVE, EASY TO UNDERSTAND AND RELIABLE OF CONTENT!! Being used at International Business College, English Comp 1301 and 1302. Thank's again.. Jeri Hallberg Harmon Griffin, M Ed
Thanks I really like your videos, Everything is so helpful, I've been watched your video a few months ago and I think that my knowledge is getting better. Thanks again for everything you have done for all of us around the world.
Thank you so much for making video. I’m currently taking an English first year college reading and writing course I’m having a hard time constructing my sentence. English is not native language, I’m glad I can watch your videos and learn. Thank you. - By the way I love your teaching styles, clear and easy to understand plus your voice is comforting.
I'm talking my HiSet testing next week and I have to write a Essay. I've learned a lot from your videos and I hope that it will works in my favor. I'll update you later.
Passed math with a 13, passed social studies with a 15... waiting for my essay and language writing scores. I only have science and language reading left to do next qeek.. Going good so far..
Following up on my prior comment: I passed all of the exams and now in college pursuing my dream of having an Associate's Degree. All is well so far. Those three months of taking the HiSet course was the start of an unlimited amount of positive opportunities for me and my family. If there is anyone who's considering going back to school, my advice is, do it. It's not impossible. My highest grade was 6, I dropped out during the 7th. 20 years later, I graduated on the very first attempt and i have to say, I regret not doing it 10 years ago. Thanks for the wonderful tips.
Thank you for your wonderful teaching. I have been learning English for more than an year. My speaking skills got improved. However, I have to improve my writing skills. When I started learning, I came across your videos. When I am looking into your videos, it's becoming more easy for me to correct the mistakes on writing part.
great tips. really great tips. i tried and used a couple of times this testing and training in writing and my texts began look very different, it looked like some govr statement :) and that was the goal i wanted. thanks for explaination. And guys - just make yourself to train more and more, train writing speaking listenin and reading with your great efforts - its hard and not a lovely doing but do it untill exam and know that after this you will relax as never before :) motivate yourself and know one single main thing - everything will be ALRIGHT !!! Cheers
At 5:40 you use 'many' instead of 'a lot' but neither sounds very academic to me as they do not involve any actual quantities. If one was to write an essay wouldn't it be better to at least narrow it down to an estimate? For example: 'More than half of all students live on campus', supported by some sort of source? Same with words like 'some', 'few', 'plenty', their meaning is up for interpretation.
Thank you very much for these tips! I've been delving into the translation business, and your tips have been of great assistance. I'm especially guilty of (over)using "there is/are ...", so now I look specifically for these two once my drafts are done.
@@thegammaduskit3704 Yes it is the Florida standardized Assessment test. I also will be taking this test in just a couple hours. (Im practicing the use of a more formal voice).
GREAT video for kids to understand. Pardon my use of ebonics but you funny as hell for that Snipes reference. Almost spit out my adult beverage. To every teacher reading, I wish you restful Sundays.
5 tips to improve your writing
1) Don't use Contractions
such as; don't, can't, shouldn't
use; do not cannot should not
2) Avoid there is/ there are
There are many issues that students face at university
Students face many issues at university
3) Don't use common words such as;
really, very, a lot, so
4) Use active voice instead of passive
5)Use strong verbs
Tarkan Gürpınar Thnks for summarizing.
Safir Semon crap
how in the world would you use that in an essay wtf :D:DD:D
definitely some people do, for example, English learners like me. These tips will be helpful for my writing proficiency test, which I am about to take.
Tarkan Gürpınar s
I’ll help you out if you’re taking notes.
0:29 Do not use contractions
1:40 Avoid using there is/there are
3:05 Avoid using really/very/a lot
6:06 Use active voice instead of passive voice
9:00 Use strong verbs
Thank you so much
Thank you so much
Tyvm
best
She did this
It's ironic that in spoken English we use long sentences to sound smart, but in written English we achieve that result with short sentences.
CM Randall and.
Why is that ironic?
because people prefer listening more than reading
CM Randall My sentences are always too long whenever I'm writing
Cause a reader will be bored if the sentence is too long
Writing is such a skill to have. It’s like forming a puzzle. I’ve always envied people that could tell stories n write.
1.do not use contractions ex.don't can't shouldn't
2.avoid there is &there are
3.don't use really ,a lot ,so &very
4.use active voice
5.use strong verbs
I attend university online, at Ashford University. Your videos have helped me, so much in my writing. Thank you, and keep up the good work.
Good
I'm already a better writer than I was 15 minutes ago, thank you.
😂good keep it up😂
Oh my god! I just realized that I might have been making these mistakes all my life.
And, all it took was a few minutes of conscious effort and practice.
Thanks, this is super useful.
Just watching this video has raised my grade up from a 75 to a 95 😍 thank you.
Awesome bro you maded this video work in your exams
How!? I had a 78% and I got 5 A’s in a row, and I still don’t even have a 85% yet
You saying that gives me hope
You guys even get 75?
@@sayanidhar7476 hahaha happy to see someone had the same reaction as me
This is useful because I was surprised why my teacher circled “so” and other words in a red pen in most of my essays
Really shows you teacher sucked because all she did was grade and not teach
@Rebecca Beverly hello, please can I send you an email too?
I need help but I have no one to help me.
I’m using these tips for my selective exams tommorrow, pray for me
IceyShot hey 👋🏼 how was your exam?
Yeah how was it
What happened to your exam?
@@Supot176 Press F to pay respect
Howd it go
So HELPFUL OMG
Tips for writing:
1. Avoid contractions
2. Avoid there is/there are (sentence become stronger to the point)
3.Avoid really, very, a lot, so (weakens writing)
Use “many” or “much”
ex:Much of the time is wasted
4. Have subject, verb, object
5.Use strong verbs
When you see verb and noun (try to use verb)
Example 1 : he gave assistance -> He assisted
Ex 2: made an objection -> He objected
(Does the noun have verb form?)
I got 86 (overall) and 22 on the speaking section and 21 in writing. Thanks for all your amazing videos. Without them, I could not make it.
Juliana Bassetti yes
I think you can learn from this free video than from the $91 book I had to buy for my English class.
Your sentence seems incomplete?
sebastian cuello I bet money you did not even read the 91$ book, yet you complain how useless the book is. Take the easy route and watch videos, that would help you more than reading a book, you mundane fool.
sebastian cuello o
Whether you prefer watching videos or reading books, continue to practice you writing skills. Finding books your are interested in reading will help your writing improve as well.
exactly
Thank you for helping me because when I checked my grades today, I saw that I had an F in ELA and started crying so I decided to look for videos to help me and this helped me a lot
same
wow i was never taught this kind of stuff at my highschool, surprised i got the grades i did in English
For the past year or two my teachers haven’t taught me anything new
Exotic Cats so did mine
Exotic Cats all they did was do the whole thing again. Notthing new
Dont tell me they never taught abt contractions
sorry,the passive voice
Thank you, Emma. You increased my english knowledge.
Sirad Hanad where is task 2 video
+Sirad Hanad "enrich" is used better on "knowledge"
+RedstoneGate lol
even I play minecraft
You mean enrich rather than increased.
I always tought Passive voice was more formal than active voice. Thanks!!
my teacher gave me an extension to submit my assessment and im so happy cause she is so nice and i would be sad if i put no effort into something that she gave me extra time to do
aw that’s sweet
Great
Uhhh
@@CrystalFaith294 I can help with assignments and essays
Emma, this is great! I am recommending it to my students and have sent the video to colleagues. I've even embedded it in a blog post I wrote on academic or formal writing. Really well done and very enjoyable. Brava!
The most important is I have learned even a little bit of knowledge the proper use [WORDs] in academic writing, Thank you, Emma, for this video
Great tips! I also say avoid using phrasal verbs. For example: give up = forfeit; go down = decrease; do over = repeat.
This usually improves formality. It also helps shorten sentences, like your tips #2, #4 and #5. Simplicity is key :)
Ironic actually, short sentences are powerful, to the points, thanks Emma, you are something else.😊
Same here
@@armyalwaystogether7406 lol
I wasn't taught like this ever in my whole life, I understood everything what you taught, thank you mam, this was very useful ❤
There are a lot of tips in your video that really helps me :)
avoid using really:PP
Emine aygün (There are) & (a lot of) too :P
And just "help" no s
Hahaha
apparently you DID NOT pay attention that much. She CLEARLY said do not use "THERE ARE". But then again i do not agree with the instructor in alot of things like at 2:11 she should have wrote, Students face many issues at the University or Universities if She didnt want to use "THE" in the sentence. Unless the University is the name of the university but i doubt that, hopefully.
This video really helped me.
I thought it's more formal and smart to write something in longer sentences 😂
Me too😂😂
Me too lmao I swore "conducted an investigation" sounded formal and smart sajdasd
Watching it in 2024
Real 😢
Me😂
Same
Me
Same here
1. Avoid using *contractions*
2. Avoid using *there is/there are*
3. Avoid using *alot, really, very, so*
4. Instead of using *passive voice* use *action voice*
➡️subject, verb then the object
5. Use *strong verbs*
Just for easier reference for u guys and myself
Don’t need thank me😜
I’m like alr over the age of learning grammar but I’m learning cuz I just got a borderline pass of 50+ for English but I need to get 70+ to graduate my school and get into the school that I want
*a lot
Alot is a meme animal from the early internet days.
7:04 Can you teach my how to draw a straight line like that?
it's straighter than me using a ruler 0_o
That straight line :O
xX zebyrocks456 Xx LMAO!
xX zebyrocks456 Xx did you buy the ruler "swerver 5000"?
lol
I just wanted to thank you for all that you’re doing. Your teachings helped me big time and I scored 7 bands in Writing. Keep up the good work and wish you all the very best!!
Thank you for assisting me in the improvement of writing. God bless you.
Mam i am Indian girl and i am fan of your teaching methods
I struggle so much about n writing essays just nothing comes to mind
Brian D me toooo i can’t even write a good essay in my mother tongue
Brian D I LITERALLY HAVE THIS PROBLEM TOO! I’ve been searching online for what I can do about it but can’t find any... 💀
Read books and novels, that might help
@@lucifer7458 any book suggestions
@@RukhShariq harry potter series, percy jackson, but if you want to start off big then you can read lord of the rings as well
Thank you. It just made my day and how ever i was making exactly these 5 mistakes in my essays.
This video really helped me a lot!! Thank you so much! I feel more confident in my essay writing! Can u make videos on how to write different type of middle/high school essays?
Singaporean siol... U taking o levels this year?
gg tmr start liao
I am very grateful for this type of support to those of us who need it. Much appreciated!
I agree
I'm confused.. I can't shorten my sentences because there is a number of word to target. And some say to use complex sentences..
What she means is that some words or terms we commonly use at home or with friends, are used as colloquialism. And that makes your writing poor and non-professional.
Rick Santiago hi
When you use a good mix of short and long sentences, it makes your writing interesting
In my experience teachers are sadist f*cks that don't get along with students (even if you think you do, they experts in faking a smile).
None of them is consistent so you need to learn each one as like a new cat.
Always listen to others who had a previous teacher and their warnings. Teachers don't change, YOU change.
I want to say that word count is a very high/middle school thing. Professional writing and college writing concentrates more on length, like how many pages something needs to be, letter font and size. The only writing that might focus on word count is journalism.
I hate English but that is why I am here. I will make it my strength.
Alejandro Morales well said
I don’t feel so good.
Alejandro Morales Yes because It always decrease our overall percentage.
Alejandro Morales all the best
Shut up fuck up get up here
This is great. Doing the quiz immediately after watching this video really helped me solidify this new found knowledge.
Thank you, Emma.
Thank you so much for sharing this! This lesson can't get at anywhere ! May your day bleesed and happy!
Good teaching better than my English teacher
LOL
What if you teacher reads this!😯
Who else watch this the day before the exam
I literally am/:
Yall pray for me bros😭😭😭
@@sov_eleanor9542 Even me. ATB
my english exam is in 3 days 🤷🏻
MEEE
Definitely need this! I’m taking this written exam for transfer students in a hour! Wish me luck
Thank you Emma for your teachings I passed IELTS academic with Band 7 last month.
Very useful tips! Thanks!
Che que buen video el de hoy
Thank you. This makes sense. I want to share my writing skill. Someone reply to me any mistakes and give me a rating. Don't use emotion. Use logic.
Mark's about to be attacked by a great white. Jack tries throw a rock at the great whites nose to avoid Mark, but failed. Jack tries it second time and hits the great whites nose, but there's a strange difference. The great white does not quit. "Jack!" Mark shouted. "Grab the harpoon! It's right behind you!" Jack takes the harpoon with a grunt. "Throw it to the great white!" He shouted. "I can't!" Jack replied. "Why not?"Mark asked. "It's too heavy!" Jack replied. "Just throw it Jack!" Mark screamed. "This great white is about to shred my life!" Jack throws the harpoon with all of his power. The harpoon did not hit the great whites nose, but it's eye. The great white swam away with blood trails in the sea. Mark swam to the shore safely. "Are you ok Mark? Ow," Jack asked in pain. "Yeah I'm ok," Mark replied. "My arm is sore," said Jack. "Well. It was worth to save a friends life," said Mark. "Yeah,"Jack replied.
There are some quibbles:
First of all, your sentences are a teeny bit jittery, they don't have a a constant flow. Try writing sentences of various lengths with a greater use of punctuation ( a coma, dash, semicolon, a pause etc.)
"Jack tries throw a rock at the great whites nose to avoid Mark, but failed"
Okay..um, what do you mean by "avoid"? Also, since you are narrating the incident in real-time, use present tense
Rephrasing the sentence, a better way to write this would be: "Jack hurls a rock at the Great White's nose to free Mark from it's clutches, but fails in the process"
Always shift the paragraph when you use a new line of dialogue, I can almost see my English teacher pulling her hair out in agony xD
And keep in mind that rich words are essential to a good writing. Instead of using "Throw", use "Hurled"
Likewise, use "Moaned" instead of "Asked" and so on. (Though this might depend on the context)
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All in all, it's good, you'll get there. You have the potential
3.5/5
Umer Usman Thank you for rating, using logic, and helping me out something rich and new. I'll try my best
ƬψƬΩiiXinnex Don't mention it :)
I may not be the best at writing, but I'll give you my opinion on your writing skill:
I like it, but it's a bit on the choppy side. It is nice, but not the best. Please don't get upset if I'm being too blunt. Afterall, you did ask for criticism.
ƬψƬΩiiXinnex How can i write if i am creative?
The logic part of my brain struggles. Do have any advice?
Let me guess, you searched this and it didn't get recommended.
Thanks for 1 like!
56 likes now XD
99 likes now lol
I have the power of being the 100th like🌚
@@bob1244 lucky 😭
Wow. I couldnt agree more. Great tips! I am in school for engineering, however, I wanted to make sure that my communication skills were "clean" and powerful. This helped immensely, you are a fantastic teacher.
WHO ELSE IS WATCHING THIS IN 2022 AND BEYOND
me
Maybė...
Me
@@mofenyimudabuka7034 ö
Me too
This helped me out for my grade five writing! I'm 9, I do grade six by the way
Keep up the good work Miss. Emma!
Thanks for saving my money
money money money
Thank you very much! I got 96 marks on my writing!! Thank youx999999999
Thank you so much. I can use these tips for my students and my own essay. These tips apply to writing in other languages too.
Thank you teacher Emma! i will follow your suggestions now i am going to write a different way to express my ideas
What is the way can you explain
very helpful , very simple , thank u
Avoid use very, plz. haha
Aaron Shi Dead Poets Society taught us well!
I have been learning English for one year and I always love your videos on RUclips. I’ve learned many things and today I learn to be a good writer. Thank you for always sharing.
This lesson was "really" "very" useful, "so" thank you!
AMAZING!! :) i speak spanish but i KNOW that i can use this tips for essays as well.. thx.
I want to friendship with you.
knowledge is fun 😊
Lender Sneaks you're such a Ravenclaw xD.
Are you serious?! Knowledge is useless for gamers!
*_Watching this video and says Knowledge is the best_*
*Edit: You must be a gamer to read this.*
Knowledge is fun
But I’m to lazy to gain such a magnificent thing
That depends on the way you interact with it.
Really Impressive of your videos and way of learning system. It is greatly helpful for learning English. Love it
Awesome tips, very useful for GCSE English.
This video was so helpful for my students.
Good Job☝👍👌✌
*b_e_a_n_i_e *b_o_o *b_r_o *c_u_t_i_e she is my teacher. Lol
So you're a teacher and you need another teacher to help you?
i agree
Refer to rule no 3 do not use so in sentences.
Simple and straight to the point. Excellent teacher.
This is one of the most useful videos on writings I found on RUclips
Mam, I know, i got late, but its very interesting to follow your lectures on English grammar, and i really like your way of teaching, Thanks mam
this video is helping us to improve our english skills and its a great platform to enhance our english writing skills Thanks Emma
thaingk you for teaching us😌😌
EMMA'S PRESENTATION ARE ATTRACTIVE, EASY TO UNDERSTAND AND RELIABLE OF CONTENT!! Being used at International Business College, English Comp 1301 and 1302. Thank's again.. Jeri Hallberg Harmon Griffin, M Ed
realize how this video has 8 million views...that's how good our english teachers are
is she actually your english teacher
ZainGone lmao no like our actual English teachers failed us so we need to turn to RUclips
English teachers are given a curriculum to teach from; they can't each what they want, so don't go blaming teachers.
@@callixvision6481 Oh just shut it. You're ridiculous.
thank you Emma for helping us improve our English
You should marry her
I want marry her .lf she say OK
get lost😂
please tells how we make better English
ahmed madrid why not dear
Thanks I really like your videos, Everything is so helpful, I've been watched your video a few months ago and I think that my knowledge is getting better. Thanks again for everything you have done for all of us around the world.
The video helped my writing improve. Thank you Emma.
Chandi Tome haha !
Thank you so much for making video. I’m currently taking an English first year college reading and writing course I’m having a hard time constructing my sentence. English is not native language, I’m glad I can watch your videos and learn. Thank you.
- By the way I love your teaching styles, clear and easy to understand plus your voice is comforting.
Thank you (from Thailand student.)
I'm 9 and this helped me
Yeah I know u are weird if u reply
cool :D
+JACKIE Chan how rude
U a perverted sick weirdo
cool ! .. where you from ?
Sad I don't remember some of this from High School. I almost want to say we need updates depending on the type of job you have!
aaaawwwwwwww
I'm talking my HiSet testing next week and I have to write a Essay. I've learned a lot from your videos and I hope that it will works in my favor. I'll update you later.
Passed math with a 13, passed social studies with a 15... waiting for my essay and language writing scores. I only have science and language reading left to do next qeek.. Going good so far..
@@leewilliis8533 Good job, keep up the great work!
Following up on my prior comment: I passed all of the exams and now in college pursuing my dream of having an Associate's Degree. All is well so far. Those three months of taking the HiSet course was the start of an unlimited amount of positive opportunities for me and my family. If there is anyone who's considering going back to school, my advice is, do it. It's not impossible. My highest grade was 6, I dropped out during the 7th. 20 years later, I graduated on the very first attempt and i have to say, I regret not doing it 10 years ago.
Thanks for the wonderful tips.
@@leewilliis8533 That's awsome. It inspired me thanks💕
You want to be a better writer?
A
B
W
ALWAYS BE WRITING
To add onto that you will improve faster with someone correcting your work.
What should I write? Idk where to start
@@nooriman5944 just free write - and some thing will come out. Or choose a topic of interest
What the hell is "YABWA"?
Syed Fazlur Rahman lol I was wondering if I had missed something orrr...
That's perfect , Thank you very much my teacher 😊❤
Thank u so much ,it's so helpful
Thank you, it is helpful.
totally agreee....
hhh ikhwana l3areb hadhirin bi 9ouwa masha'allah 😉
Didn’t you watch the video?
She said not to use the word,”so.”
Thank you for your wonderful teaching. I have been learning English for more than an year. My speaking skills got improved. However, I have to improve my writing skills. When I started learning, I came across your videos. When I am looking into your videos, it's becoming more easy for me to correct the mistakes on writing part.
great tips. really great tips. i tried and used a couple of times this testing and training in writing and my texts began look very different, it looked like some govr statement :) and that was the goal i wanted. thanks for explaination.
And guys - just make yourself to train more and more, train writing speaking listenin and reading with your great efforts - its hard and not a lovely doing but do it untill exam and know that after this you will relax as never before :) motivate yourself and know one single main thing - everything will be ALRIGHT !!! Cheers
This is so helpful! Thank you so much, now i realize why i always get B For My English 😂
Blink!!! 😄
really helpful, thanx a lot
I am from another part of the globe. Endless thanks for your tips. Some slight mistake makes your video more realistic and relatable.
Yeah there is very good value in it
I’m using this method for my exams tmrw...hope and pray for me that I’ll get A!
NELVIN RAJ me too I also have exams tomorrow
how'd it go
its been a year, did you get the A???
At 5:40 you use 'many' instead of 'a lot' but neither sounds very academic to me as they do not involve any actual quantities. If one was to write an essay wouldn't it be better to at least narrow it down to an estimate? For example: 'More than half of all students live on campus', supported by some sort of source? Same with words like 'some', 'few', 'plenty', their meaning is up for interpretation.
exactly.....i was gonna say somethinh about that and you saved my time.....😂😂
This is my 3rd videos from you and I would say, I am impressed. Thank you for this free tutorial. You're a great help to us non-native speakers. :)
I really enjoyed this video it was both informative and entertaining. Thanks for taking the time for these instructions.
why i could i not had you as my english teacher back in 1-12 haha love how you teach and show us!! thanks !
Thank you very much for these tips!
I've been delving into the translation business, and your tips have been of great assistance.
I'm especially guilty of (over)using "there is/are ...", so now I look specifically for these two once my drafts are done.
you just failed her lesson by saying very
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you're awesome really good teacher... :>
I watched this video because I want to improve my writing. English is not my first language. I appreciate the uploader 😀
I’m using this for my fsa tomorrow I’m in 4th grade doing my writing fsa writing
State Exam?
@@thegammaduskit3704 Yes it is the Florida standardized Assessment test. I also will be taking this test in just a couple hours. (Im practicing the use of a more formal voice).
@@emptydreams225 I finished my 5th grade yesterday and Tuesday. It was easier then ny Intern Assessment.
Thank you! I am from Germany and I have a classtest tomorow 😂
how was your classtest？
Thanks! Here's a tip: Don't forget to cover your dry erase marker :)
hey friend, you are still using contractions even after the lecture?
it is mazing to have a dexterous teacher like you , you are providing immense knowledge to learners. truly hats off to your effort.
I am looking at this video because, I have a writing STAAR test tomorrow
yo same, EOC tmrw 🙄
Same
HeyI'mSam EOC’s Are the worst I have my algebra one next week and I am flipping out
@@baileymadison9019 same
I just wanted to ask u how many hours ur given in a test?? if u don't mind me asking
3:08 is the most helpful tip
This would have helped when I was in high school!! Ugh!
Hi Bethany,
we are writing a letter to a person. We have to write about our pastime. Could you please check it for wrong words ect. ? :)
this is not for u. this video for us (international students)
GREAT video for kids to understand. Pardon my use of ebonics but you funny as hell for that Snipes reference. Almost spit out my adult beverage. To every teacher reading, I wish you restful Sundays.