I'd just assume the aunt was abundantly pissed not to receive anything from the inheritance. just like "mom" and the twin brothers... wasn't spelled out though.
Why are they talking about the boyfriend you met after you had cut them off? How did you join the family chat with the gift cars if you had blocked them ? Have you heard of editors? They are the folks that read through your stories and check the continuity of your stories. There isn’t an app to do it yet, so you’ll have to pay them, but people will down vote you less.
Some writers read their work aloud to someone who will have fresh esrs because they haven't been immersed in the story and have the person give feedback, then they do edits.
She completely cuts her family off less than 25 % of the way into the story , yet she turns around and there right there hurting her again so which is it ... Are they cut off or are they still 🤔 in communication and allowing them to hurt her ... ? ? ?
I liked the story Most others are packed of worthless details that turn them boring after a while This one was simple, without boring details I liked it ❤ Keep it up with the simple nice stories
What a bovine excrement story. People who work in art restoration are not displaying their art in exhibitions and galleries, they get hired by people with a lot of money to repair their really, really valuable art. It needs a lot of skill, but also knowledge, about the techniques, which colours were used, and if you cannot get those pigments anymore (like lead-white and arsenic green - which, afaik are now forbidden, but I am not a specialist, I may be wrong) how to come nearest in the colour to restore the artwork, with a minimalist approach (only just enough to cover up blattant missing areas and preferably removable - or to repair a tiny little bit of the cracked paint). An artist who exhibits does not show the restored artwork of others.
Actually you're quite wrong Many dead artists end up just becoming known after restorers restore their paintings and show them on a exhibition of their hard work to revive those artists skill and soul It's common in Europe this type of exhibitions Not all restorers work for rich people Maybe if you research a bit you wouldn't show you ignorance over a profession you clearly know little about
@@DCD762it does happen, but only if the person they work for request it, be others may asl them to the same for them. Also, they may be doing their own
Wait a minute didn't you already cut them off? Howed they know about Elliott? To many contradictions. Wait a minute how did the brother go from high school or college to being a surgeon. You need to keep your story at least a tiny bit believable.
Not sure abt the high school; i'll just appoint the brother to college. But after college (mandatory 4y's bachelor's degree), there's still med school, i.e. 4 years, plus, to become a surgeon, 5 years surgical residency; in other words, ATLEAST 9 years after college is done. edit: skimmed through the story; while it was (the blocked) brother who called her, it wasn't necessarily about him. And given he sort of invited her, she thought about "another family festivity she wasn't invited to", it "should" probably be the "dad" who was promoted.
🤔 She was frustrating me. How many times is she gonna cut her family off/out?! Why did she ever go to her parents home?! That last family meeting... She should have known what to expect and never gone, there was no point.
The main character is upset with the family. Maybe your brother’s football game was the last straw. It wasn’t like he or the family scheduled the game the same night of the art show. The storytelling is starting off wrong for me.
Felix is Jasper’s twin. At least I got that much. A lot of the rest doesn’t make sense. Like how she blocks everybody but gets text messages from them. Like how Jasper goes from scoring touchdowns to chief surgeon in a short little bit.
Needy. Cuts off family. When family doesn’t pursue her, seeks them out to tell them how much she disapproves of their behavior toward her (which does seem problematic).
Validation craving is a well known tool for control. In fact it's the best one. Can hold whole societies together through massive hardships. This type of indoctrination starts at the earliest stages of childhood and throughout school.
I don’t understand why she needed to rebuild a relationship with her aunt. After all, it was her aunt who helped her with her wedding.
I'd just assume the aunt was abundantly pissed not to receive anything from the inheritance. just like "mom" and the twin brothers... wasn't spelled out though.
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Why are they talking about the boyfriend you met after you had cut them off? How did you join the family chat with the gift cars if you had blocked them ? Have you heard of editors? They are the folks that read through your stories and check the continuity of your stories. There isn’t an app to do it yet, so you’ll have to pay them, but people will down vote you less.
Some writers read their work aloud to someone who will have fresh esrs because they haven't been immersed in the story and have the person give feedback, then they do edits.
How can OP think any of those family members to contact her on the phone, like girl! You just blocked their phone numbers!
You know a video is gonna be bad, when everyone in the comments are just confused as to what’s going on. 🤦♂️
She completely cuts her family off less than 25 % of the way into the story , yet she turns around and there right there hurting her again so which is it ... Are they cut off or are they still 🤔 in communication and allowing them to hurt her ... ? ? ?
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I liked the story
Most others are packed of worthless details that turn them boring after a while
This one was simple, without boring details
I liked it ❤
Keep it up with the simple nice stories
Didn't her aunt support them? Her parents and brothers are fairly awful, no big loss.
One thing all these stories need is serious followed story board (outline)
I think the brother has a point you cut them off but then you ask the parents for money to help you out which one is it?
Unthinkable that parents are having favoritism and unfair to their children.they are their own flesh snd blood.ouyrageous brjavior from such parents.
Another party I wasn’t invited to???
She just got the invitation!
Nice story.
Why depend on her parents?
Elliott was a freeloader
What a bovine excrement story. People who work in art restoration are not displaying their art in exhibitions and galleries, they get hired by people with a lot of money to repair their really, really valuable art. It needs a lot of skill, but also knowledge, about the techniques, which colours were used, and if you cannot get those pigments anymore (like lead-white and arsenic green - which, afaik are now forbidden, but I am not a specialist, I may be wrong) how to come nearest in the colour to restore the artwork, with a minimalist approach (only just enough to cover up blattant missing areas and preferably removable - or to repair a tiny little bit of the cracked paint).
An artist who exhibits does not show the restored artwork of others.
Sadly, the authors of these stories write pure fiction not based on any reality.
Actually you're quite wrong
Many dead artists end up just becoming known after restorers restore their paintings and show them on a exhibition of their hard work to revive those artists skill and soul
It's common in Europe this type of exhibitions
Not all restorers work for rich people
Maybe if you research a bit you wouldn't show you ignorance over a profession you clearly know little about
@@DCD762 A friend of mine restores paintings. They do not exhibit. They work either freelance or for museums. They do not exhibit.
@@DCD762it does happen, but only if the person they work for request it, be others may asl them to the same for them. Also, they may be doing their own
Unless you've been in a family like this you won't understand❤ You should treat all kids the same
Not the same as they are different people with different needs. But you should treat them equally and fairly.
Wait a minute didn't you already cut them off? Howed they know about Elliott? To many contradictions. Wait a minute how did the brother go from high school or college to being a surgeon. You need to keep your story at least a tiny bit believable.
Not sure abt the high school; i'll just appoint the brother to college. But after college (mandatory 4y's bachelor's degree), there's still med school, i.e. 4 years, plus, to become a surgeon, 5 years surgical residency; in other words, ATLEAST 9 years after college is done.
edit: skimmed through the story; while it was (the blocked) brother who called her, it wasn't necessarily about him. And given he sort of invited her, she thought about "another family festivity she wasn't invited to", it "should" probably be the "dad" who was promoted.
Are you sure?
🤔 She was frustrating me. How many times is she gonna cut her family off/out?! Why did she ever go to her parents home?! That last family meeting... She should have known what to expect and never gone, there was no point.
@thecoolgrandma7208 I know, right.
And now, I'm not gonna bother listening.
The main character is upset with the family. Maybe your brother’s football game was the last straw. It wasn’t like he or the family scheduled the game the same night of the art show. The storytelling is starting off wrong for me.
Wishful film and dreams… None of it real
Who is Felix? Love the tigers. Lots of tigers!
There's that tension, going all palpy again.
Felix is Jasper’s twin. At least I got that much. A lot of the rest doesn’t make sense. Like how she blocks everybody but gets text messages from them. Like how Jasper goes from scoring touchdowns to chief surgeon in a short little bit.
Good Good
A lot of big family’s are one eyed
Needy. Cuts off family. When family doesn’t pursue her, seeks them out to tell them how much she disapproves of their behavior toward her (which does seem problematic).
What a needy OP. I don't understand people that are junkies for validation.
Validation craving is a well known tool for control. In fact it's the best one. Can hold whole societies together through massive hardships.
This type of indoctrination starts at the earliest stages of childhood and throughout school.
Her family is behind this..
Like the background of animal life
Op is an ijit
Oh, this is just, bad...like really bad
This story contradicts itself!
She was jealous of her brother
This doesn't make sense, she cut them off what a load of rubbish
Too many inconsistencies.
Asinine AI story