Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I'm sorry the story felt disjointed for you. I'll keep this in mind to improve future content and make it more engaging and easy to follow. Your feedback means a lot!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I'm truly sorry the story felt all over the place. I appreciate your feedback and will work on making future stories clearer and more enjoyable. Your input is invaluable!
This story has so much potential. It starts off fairly decent, but then it is like major parts are missing. The further along the story progresses the more it starts jumping around in the time line. This makes it very hard to follow.
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! I’m glad you see potential in the story. I apologize for the missing parts and timeline jumps that made it hard to follow. I’ll work on ensuring the story flows smoothly in the future.
This writer wrote this story for herself because only she can understand what the heck she intends to convey. As much as I want to finish this, I can't.
Found this 13 days from her publish. I don't think I'll follow this author until she gets at least a years worth of experience. The concept was good but made my brain hurt... I didn't finish either.
Thank you for your honest thoughts! I appreciate your feedback on the concept and understand your perspective. It’s a learning journey for the author, and your input will help guide improvements in the future.
Author: the story would be very good if we didnt have skips, gaps, and mis-pronouciation in the story line. Please fix this as soon as possible. Very dissapointing.
Thank you for your honest feedback! I truly appreciate you pointing out the skips, gaps, and mispronunciations. I'll work on addressing these issues immediately to improve the storyline and make it more enjoyable.
@KrystalGuerrero-x9l right? I kept going back and replaying because I thought missed something to be honest I was getting headache trying to figure this book out. It's a shame. This book had potential.
Thank you for your honest feedback! I'm sorry the story felt disjointed. I'll work on improving the flow in future videos to make the experience smoother. I truly appreciate your input!
Thank you for pointing that out! I apologize if the chapters felt out of order. I'll review the structure and ensure future stories are more cohesive. Your feedback helps me improve!
Thank you for your feedback! I understand there’s room for improvement, and I’ll take your comment into account to refine the story. I truly appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts!
História confusa, ela volta pra mãe foi uma lembrança? A parte com as " amigas " também está confusa , gostam dela são odiosas? Era muda agora fala. As cenas não acabam e já começa outra exemplo ele está no quarto com ela passando uma situação difícil e a seguir está conversando com alguém, oi como acabou? De onde veio essa pessoa, da tantos detalhes desnecessários mas os importantes pula! Estavam sozinhos depois estavam próximos a uma fogueira depois ela volta pra casa, ela machucou alguém, alguém a leva pra um quarto os sogros aparecem do nada rola uma briga o cara brota do chão já tacando o pau.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! It sounds like the book might feel incomplete or disjointed. If you’d like, I’d be happy to help discuss specific parts or clarify anything!
This would have been an awesome story but it's so chopped up that I can't make heads or tails to follow the story.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I'm sorry the story felt disjointed for you. I'll keep this in mind to improve future content and make it more engaging and easy to follow. Your feedback means a lot!
This book jumps all over the place.
What a pity this could have been a beautiful story. Its all over the place can't make head or tails of it.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I'm truly sorry the story felt all over the place. I appreciate your feedback and will work on making future stories clearer and more enjoyable. Your input is invaluable!
This story has so much potential. It starts off fairly decent, but then it is like major parts are missing. The further along the story progresses the more it starts jumping around in the time line. This makes it very hard to follow.
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! I’m glad you see potential in the story. I apologize for the missing parts and timeline jumps that made it hard to follow. I’ll work on ensuring the story flows smoothly in the future.
I couldn’t keep up with this story it was all over the place.
It ends so dramatically. Is there going to be another chapter or book?😮
This writer wrote this story for herself because only she can understand what the heck she intends to convey.
As much as I want to finish this, I can't.
Found this 13 days from her publish. I don't think I'll follow this author until she gets at least a years worth of experience. The concept was good but made my brain hurt... I didn't finish either.
Thank you for your honest thoughts! I appreciate your feedback on the concept and understand your perspective. It’s a learning journey for the author, and your input will help guide improvements in the future.
I really think it would be a great story. But I've been listening for about an hour now and I've completely lost the storyline unfortunately
I agree . Some one needs to edit this book
Author: the story would be very good if we didnt have skips, gaps, and mis-pronouciation in the story line. Please fix this as soon as possible. Very dissapointing.
Thank you for your honest feedback! I truly appreciate you pointing out the skips, gaps, and mispronunciations. I'll work on addressing these issues immediately to improve the storyline and make it more enjoyable.
I thought it was just me not being able to follow along. I lovw the story but I lost interest when all the skips and gaps came along
@KrystalGuerrero-x9l right? I kept going back and replaying because I thought missed something to be honest I was getting headache trying to figure this book out. It's a shame. This book had potential.
I am confused the story skips around
Thank you for the hard work but it was disjointed and hard to follow. Second, this book ends in the middle of a doctors appointment. No ending. Steve
It sounds like a conversation we just need to know is speaking for the chapter
This is so terribly disjointed.
Thank you for your honest feedback! I'm sorry the story felt disjointed. I'll work on improving the flow in future videos to make the experience smoother. I truly appreciate your input!
The chapter seen like they are out of order
Thank you for pointing that out! I apologize if the chapters felt out of order. I'll review the structure and ensure future stories are more cohesive. Your feedback helps me improve!
Is this an actual book???
This book need a lot of work.
Thank you for your feedback! I understand there’s room for improvement, and I’ll take your comment into account to refine the story. I truly appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts!
Start off good but jumps so much, it makes a schizophrenic seem sane
It jumped. What happened to her mother Jade? It jumped to something else???
Hey what happened to her foot?
História confusa, ela volta pra mãe foi uma lembrança? A parte com as " amigas " também está confusa , gostam dela são odiosas? Era muda agora fala. As cenas não acabam e já começa outra exemplo ele está no quarto com ela passando uma situação difícil e a seguir está conversando com alguém, oi como acabou? De onde veio essa pessoa, da tantos detalhes desnecessários mas os importantes pula! Estavam sozinhos depois estavam próximos a uma fogueira depois ela volta pra casa, ela machucou alguém, alguém a leva pra um quarto os sogros aparecem do nada rola uma briga o cara brota do chão já tacando o pau.
Book doesn't make sense. It's like large parts are missing
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! It sounds like the book might feel incomplete or disjointed. If you’d like, I’d be happy to help discuss specific parts or clarify anything!