To sushi to you; to glass shards to me

Hey you! Yeah, I'm talking to the viewer directly now. Please flame me as much as possible. This is the first song I'll ever make and I don't know if I'll create more but I just had to because it was kinda bugging me for a while. I've always listened to a mass amount of music and know so much about it but I've never really created music before (I do not count garage band as music) but nothing that I really thought out and didn't just slap some stuff together. So with all due respect please flame me as much as possible as I know I'll be wearing this as a badge of progress but with me wearing it as my best ( and only piece at the current moment). With all of the heat on me and the constant barrage I think it'll push me to improve if I want to keep on making more music so a weird twisted logic but yeah!
Dear Diary
How do I feel? - Amazingly Destroyed
I met someone a couple days ago that I haven't seen in a long long time maybe around 4-5 years at a park while biking back home from a hangout. I was cruising on my bike and spacing out until from the corner of my eye I saw someone who I shouldn't ever meet again ( granted they lived in the area) but for the amount of times I go over there is fewer than 30 out of the 365 x 4-5 I didn't think I'll ever see them again. Both of our gazes met and at that point, I couldn't keep on biking so I stopped and stared. My initial reaction was pure terror but shortly afterward I had to put on a faint smile to ease the tension. Their faces said millions of words though. Their face started with a face of dread to a smile then a face of shame then a forced smile. I closed the distance and we talked for a bit and then they asked if they could exchange phone numbers since they got a new phone and lost contact. I reluctantly agreed despite most of my heart saying no. I know they are better people now than before and it shows how much they changed and how they felt bad for what they have done but I won't ever change the way I feel towards them and I don't know what to do. I want to straight up block them but I've also changed. I'm at a stand still, should I try to work it despite my gut feelings saying it's wrong or should I just talk it out with my brain and try to forgive them. I do forgive them to the extent they were just immature but it doesn't change my outlook on them. Maybe I need to spend more time with them but I don't want to.

[@chris08c72]

Some things that I noticed when listening to the song a couple of times. 1:12 saying orchestra with a sudden tone change killed the tone set at the start of the song, not sure if that was intentional. At 1:15 -1:16 you ran out of breath from what sounded like trying to finish the lyrics which led to you getting off by a bit. It sounded like you were just talking but after that segment you got back on beat. 1:53-1:55 you sound quiet so just improving on projecting your voice. Overall decently solid for a first time! Just make sure to breath in the right places and keep a steady tempo. Good job.

[@luegi9386]

Sounds like Sweet William

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