You definitely have a vision when it comes to video editing! And that's the most important thing to have when you work with screen storytelling. I enjoyed cinematic of yours, you did a great work here! You've put together some very nice shots and ideas. Further in this comment I will talk about few technical moments you could improve on. I will leave these tips here in hope that it will inspire you to make even cooler stuff in the future. It's not critique, I just know by myself that it's very helpful to see different tips from time to time. It helps to learn new stuff and it's exciting! So, in this cinematic you had some very cool ideas for your shots, but they weren't at their full potential due to focal lenght settings of the lens. Experiment more with focal lenght of the virtual lens to create juicier and prettier angles and compositions! Focal lenght is basically just a "Zoom" setting. This setting can make your shot look wide (zoom out) or narrow and flat (zoom in). Flat ones could help to make rich shots with lots of details that are easy to read. For example, that shot you took at 0:34. It looks a bit too "gameplay-ish", but if you would focus your lens on fallen player with blue skin and wings, stuff behind him would look more flat and cinematic! It would add dramatic and epic look, since Dr. Doom at the background would look more like a flat silhouette. This would also eliminate "gameplay-ish" feel that this shot currently has. But yes, as I already said before, you definitely have some very cool vision and ideas for your shots, and it's the most important thing to have when you want to tell a story with sequence of videos. Keep up with great work! Experiment and practice as much as you can and want! And remember: main goal is to have fun while you edit! Do not pay attention to views and likes, though always appreciate feedback and just have as lot fun as you can! Best of luck, mate!
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You definitely have a vision when it comes to video editing! And that's the most important thing to have when you work with screen storytelling. I enjoyed cinematic of yours, you did a great work here! You've put together some very nice shots and ideas.
Further in this comment I will talk about few technical moments you could improve on. I will leave these tips here in hope that it will inspire you to make even cooler stuff in the future. It's not critique, I just know by myself that it's very helpful to see different tips from time to time. It helps to learn new stuff and it's exciting!
So, in this cinematic you had some very cool ideas for your shots, but they weren't at their full potential due to focal lenght settings of the lens. Experiment more with focal lenght of the virtual lens to create juicier and prettier angles and compositions! Focal lenght is basically just a "Zoom" setting. This setting can make your shot look wide (zoom out) or narrow and flat (zoom in). Flat ones could help to make rich shots with lots of details that are easy to read. For example, that shot you took at 0:34. It looks a bit too "gameplay-ish", but if you would focus your lens on fallen player with blue skin and wings, stuff behind him would look more flat and cinematic! It would add dramatic and epic look, since Dr. Doom at the background would look more like a flat silhouette. This would also eliminate "gameplay-ish" feel that this shot currently has.
But yes, as I already said before, you definitely have some very cool vision and ideas for your shots, and it's the most important thing to have when you want to tell a story with sequence of videos. Keep up with great work! Experiment and practice as much as you can and want! And remember: main goal is to have fun while you edit! Do not pay attention to views and likes, though always appreciate feedback and just have as lot fun as you can! Best of luck, mate!
Underrated AF, Keep up the good work, dawg. Reminds me of old school machinimas, good times. Love the work.
Victor Von Doom my beloved
YOU GLAZER
This is awesome great work.
This is good 👍🏼
It reminds me of the"ONE" video clip
ALL HAIL DOOM!
DOOM