IF I DO ANOTHER SLEEPING SUN EDIT IT WONT SOUND THE SAME CUZ OF COPYRIGHT edit: I dont want to get anymore copyright claims because otehrwise i get a copyright strike
The sinking of grey rock: chapter 1, the rock. Max: mom! Mom: yes? Max: let’s go on the ship! Mom: lemme get my ticket real quick. Max: okay. Mom: gets ticket* Mom: let’s go. Max: okay. AT THE SHIP. Mom: let’s find our cabin, hurry let’s go. Max okay mom! Like for chapter 2, or either comment that you want part 2 Part 2 ! (EVEN THE OWNER WHATS PART 2 LMAO- ) Max: who’s that kid? Mom: I don’t know, go make some friends! Max: okay ill say hi.. Antonio: hello. Max: hi. Antonio: how’s your day going- **HUGE BOOM** Like or comment if you want part 3 SOMEBODY DO NOT CRY ON THIS PART GOT IT?!! Antonio: the halls are filled with water! Max: oh no! Run up the stairway! Antonio: okay! Mom: Max get on the lifeboat! Max: okay! Cmon Antonio! Crew memeber: woman and children only! Max: he’s 12!! Part 4, is the final plunge. Do NOT actually cry on this part. *THE BOW IS SINKING* Antonio: Please! I’m 12! Crew memeber: NO!! *BRIDGE TOTALLY EXPLODES WITH WATER MOVING UP THE SHIP AS FAST AS A PLANE* Antonio: oh my god… *PEOPLE SCREAMING RUNNING AROUND JUMPING OF THE SHIP SLIPPING IN THE WATER JUST GETTING DEMOLISHED EVERY 1 SEC* Max: mom!!! He’s gonna be okay right? Mom: Don’t worry he will- *HUGE BLAST HAPPENS AS ELECTRICITY BLASTS SPARKS AND GOES OUT* Mom: oh dear… Antonio: *CRYING* Max: Bye! *jumps in water swimming to save Antonio* Mom: he’s saving him… *ship starts to crack and crash everywhere with water and flashes everywhere with more and more people running to the stern while the water is consuming tons of others* Max: *swims on deck* Antonio: *runs and hugs max* Antonio: your here! Max: yep, now let’s go! *CHOAS* AFTER THE SINKING max: I found something, we can get on, we don’t want to die from hypothermia. Antonio: *face covered in blood* Antonio: I-I a-m so t-t-tired… Max: it’s okay, here! *gives blanket* Antonio: t-thanks. *lifeboat swims by* Crew memeber: Survivors! Max: Antonio! W-wake up… Antonio: *passed out (not injured kind he is exhausted and bloody while suffering so..) Max: I’ll carry him in the lifeboat. *antonio wakes up in a blanket while he was warm and cozy, his blood became numb so he couldn’t feel it* Antonio: W-what happened? Max: we were saved. Hello! I am the creator of the story and I really enjoyed making this, now there is a warning that it contains blood. And just skip lines if it gets messy. Thank you and I made this longer since it’s the grand ending! :D
Wanna hear a made up story? NO!? Oh well ika say ir anyways:) [warning:i made this story along tiem ago so... don't judge meh The SS Putri laut was an oceanliner that sailed the route from ayr to Brodick, being brought from an Indonesian company. being larger than what was the demand for and eerily looking like the titanic withoutone of its deck and its dummy funnel, in early August, 1918 when it was carrying 1,983 and 276 crew when a submarine launched a torpedo straight to the engine, BOOM! It hit and the passengers were thrown around and shaken awake from their beds in the middle of the night, the ship listed to starboard heavily when it stopped. The ship couldn't move but it couldn't sink so it was towed back to Ayr shortly after (this is part 1) (Part 2) in 1925, cruises were becoming more and more popular so the company that owned SS putri laut has to redesign the ship, now with an indoor nature area and a 2 deck ballroom with lounges and a promenade. The ship now changed its routes with it going through the whole island of Great Britain, down to western france and down to northern Spain. It was a huge success, but that would all change one night...when the Queen Mary was made (I'm this timeliness the queen Mary was up against the SS Putri Laut. When the SS Putri Laut was doing its weekly route at around Brittany. When in late April 1938 an unknown ship was rapidly approaching the vessel. "HARD TO PORT" screamed one of the officers as the queen marry came out of nowhere and was heading straight towards the SS Putri Laut. (Part 3) with exactly 2,000 passengers and 391 crew and attendants on-board, the SS Putri Laut trys to communicate with the Queen Mary but with no avail as the Queen Mary smashes her bow into the ship making the ship do a 85 degree list to port *the opposite side of what the Queen Mary smashed into* the passengers fell down decks and stairwells as the lights flicker. The SS Putri finally gets ballance back with surprisingly only 3 out of her 20 watertight compartments opened. The SS Purti Laut would look almost fine if you looked at it without any context. But then disaster struck when a humongous BANG! was sent rippling through the ship as the Queen Mary sailed by with its passengers on the Queen Mary clueless as what had just happened. as a bright light appears in the lounge,smells of burnt furniture went through the decks with no ventilation as the ship goes into complete darkness... drifting through the Atlantic ocean..... (Part 4) when the lights turned off, the ship was doused into chaos with passengers tripping over and for once In a ships perspective... light = danger for all those on board the rapidly-burning vessel,if you were below deck you would be burning and screaming in pain as others budge pass you to get out. And it was worse for the people on deck as the list was increasing from the fire (and that they had to place all the coal on one side from a coal fire) so people were falling down into the freezing ocean and dying in impacts. People who weren't panicking realised the lifeboats were either crushed or thrown off from the Queen Mary's bow. And also with the impact the device they used to send SOS messages were also broken from the impact. Meaning that all they could do was hang on got dear life and pray that they wouldn't die like the un-lucky ones... (Part 5) the bow was now completely under water with the fire spreading to the top deck, every passenger on the top deck began to scramble down to the stern to wait there when another large BANG! was heard and most people on the top deck tripped off into the ocean, never to be seen again, the bang was coming from the bridge, 2 people were try to connect wire to the communicator when the put the wrong wires together, causing another fire, now most people has died and the few still alive scrambled to the stern and clung on for dear-life well only some of them as remember, it was pitch black and was listing heavily, people still alive assumed the final plunge was abo to begin when the first funnel collapsed because the water, there was surprisingly still people inside,seeking refugee in the great ballroom. With its watertight door locked and about 75 people inside the room, there was windows that were cracking away people clung on to remaining furniture inside the fire and water free room with the dome ontop of the ballroom showing nothing but water, with all of them knowing the room would implode eventually... (Part 6) in the ballroom, people were staring to notice the ship listing and get steeper and steeper. One person noticed a crack in the sky dome that was underwater (remember the ballroom was surrounded by water from all sides but wasn't flooded yet because of the watertight doors it had on its entrances) "THE SKY DOME!" Shouted a crew member, a couple noticed tiny droplets of water spewing out the cracks in the sky dome and the windows "I guess its our time" The wife said to her husband *SHATTER* *SPLASH* the whole entire ballroom was flooded in a matter of seconds on all sides as they remaining people on the stern hung on for dear life as the ship entered a 90 degree angle, a grandson and his grandma climbed onto the Hull of the stern, just half and hour ago they were playing chess inside the lounge. "LOOK GRAMMY NORMA! LOOK!" The grandson spotted an unknown ship heading their way, it looked familiar. It was bringing back bad memories.... (Part 7) the mysterious ship was coming closer...and closer....and closer, looming in the hard fog of the pitch black night until the bow appeared out of the black void...it was the Queen Mary,the grandson and grandmother had noticed the ship with the others and began shouting for help and making as much noise as possible for the rescue. "HELP!" "GRAMMY! THEY'VE SAVED US!" The Queen Mary spotted the rapidly sinking vessel and dropped 1 of her lifeboats down with her crew to save the remaining passengers on the nearly-under ship of what was the SS Putri Laut.... (part 8) as the final plunge Began, the lifeboat finally reached the SS Putri Laut, the people on the stern and the lifeboat waited until the waves were calm and the ship had gone under. *CREAK* *CRACKLE* as the SS Putri Laut finally gone down in 32 minutes and 7 seconds. "GET ON THE LIFEBOAT! QUICKLY!" Screamed the crew as the all the survivors got on the lifeboat, shaken and terrified that their family and friends had died on what once was the *old fashionable* "MUMMY!" Screamed Max (the grandson) and ran to his mum like it had a life or death situation...which was true. As the lifeboat was getting up and over the decks of the Queen Marry. The passengers on the Queen Mary surrounded the upper decks. Confused of what had just happened that they had to change course. "What's going on?" "Why did we change course Mister?" Gossiped the crowd of people. They realised what had happened when crying and soaked people wearing clothes that looked burnt collapsed onto the ships upper deck from exhaustion and shock. With every survivor safe on-board and treated. The Queen Mary continued the journey the SS Putri Laut was on and refunded the passengers that were originally on the Queen Mary before the accident had happened. It was finally over with 2,758 people dead from the disaster. Making her the worst in the history of the Atlantic ocean..... Tahdah! Now its done, hope u liked it and how i fantasise about a a super liner sinking with more people dying thsn there is people in the VATICAN CITY!
I Also Survived This Disaster There Was a Rock Right Ahead So I Said: HARD A STARBOARD! I Tried To Turn The Ship But She Turns Slow It Hit The Ships Bow She Was Sinking In The Bow And The Funnel Fall And I Forgot It was A long Time Ago.
Creo que este barco 🚢 ni existe porque cuando voy al Google y busco ( El hundimiento del SS Greyrock ) no me sale nada no hay nada de información y todo está en inglés 😡
bueno, primero soy inglés, por eso está en inglés y, en segundo lugar, es un juego de roblox, así que no es un barco ficticio, pero supongo que diré que el barco es ficticio.
IF I DO ANOTHER SLEEPING SUN EDIT IT WONT SOUND THE SAME CUZ OF COPYRIGHT
edit: I dont want to get anymore copyright claims because otehrwise i get a copyright strike
how do i change screen to cinematic
@@lagomite_is_stupid shift p
@@Cynth72 on mobile?
@@lagomite_is_stupid i dont know how on mobile, but you can crop out the guis if you dont have cinematic camera.
@@Cynth72 how do i get cinematic screen i got it before
This is awesome👍 and this is my favorite game
The sinking of grey rock: chapter 1, the rock.
Max: mom!
Mom: yes?
Max: let’s go on the ship!
Mom: lemme get my ticket real quick.
Max: okay.
Mom: gets ticket*
Mom: let’s go.
Max: okay.
AT THE SHIP.
Mom: let’s find our cabin, hurry let’s go.
Max okay mom!
Like for chapter 2, or either comment that you want part 2
Part 2 ! (EVEN THE OWNER WHATS PART 2 LMAO- )
Max: who’s that kid?
Mom: I don’t know, go make some friends!
Max: okay ill say hi..
Antonio: hello.
Max: hi.
Antonio: how’s your day going-
**HUGE BOOM**
Like or comment if you want part 3
SOMEBODY DO NOT CRY ON THIS PART GOT IT?!!
Antonio: the halls are filled with water!
Max: oh no! Run up the stairway!
Antonio: okay!
Mom: Max get on the lifeboat!
Max: okay! Cmon Antonio!
Crew memeber: woman and children only!
Max: he’s 12!!
Part 4, is the final plunge. Do NOT actually cry on this part.
*THE BOW IS SINKING*
Antonio: Please! I’m 12!
Crew memeber: NO!!
*BRIDGE TOTALLY EXPLODES WITH WATER MOVING UP THE SHIP AS FAST AS A PLANE*
Antonio: oh my god…
*PEOPLE SCREAMING RUNNING AROUND JUMPING OF THE SHIP SLIPPING IN THE WATER JUST GETTING DEMOLISHED EVERY 1 SEC*
Max: mom!!! He’s gonna be okay right?
Mom: Don’t worry he will-
*HUGE BLAST HAPPENS AS ELECTRICITY BLASTS SPARKS AND GOES OUT*
Mom: oh dear…
Antonio: *CRYING*
Max: Bye! *jumps in water swimming to save Antonio*
Mom: he’s saving him…
*ship starts to crack and crash everywhere with water and flashes everywhere with more and more people running to the stern while the water is consuming tons of others*
Max: *swims on deck*
Antonio: *runs and hugs max*
Antonio: your here!
Max: yep, now let’s go!
*CHOAS*
AFTER THE SINKING
max: I found something, we can get on, we don’t want to die from hypothermia.
Antonio: *face covered in blood*
Antonio: I-I a-m so t-t-tired…
Max: it’s okay, here! *gives blanket*
Antonio: t-thanks.
*lifeboat swims by*
Crew memeber: Survivors!
Max: Antonio! W-wake up…
Antonio: *passed out (not injured kind he is exhausted and bloody while suffering so..)
Max: I’ll carry him in the lifeboat.
*antonio wakes up in a blanket while he was warm and cozy, his blood became numb so he couldn’t feel it*
Antonio: W-what happened?
Max: we were saved.
Hello! I am the creator of the story and I really enjoyed making this, now there is a warning that it contains blood. And just skip lines if it gets messy. Thank you and I made this longer since it’s the grand ending! :D
Yes do chapter 2 lol
@@Cynth72 yessire
Chapter 3 plz-
Part three plss
@@Cynth72 oki
Finally somebody made this
love it
Congrats on 20 subs!, and if you are wondering who i am i am rishav who is not bothered to switch back to his main account lol
It is your main account now lol
@@Cynth72 lol kinda
Wanna hear a made up story? NO!? Oh well ika say ir anyways:) [warning:i made this story along tiem ago so... don't judge meh
The SS Putri laut was an oceanliner that sailed the route from ayr to Brodick, being brought from an Indonesian company. being larger than what was the demand for and eerily looking like the titanic withoutone of its deck and its dummy funnel, in early August, 1918 when it was carrying 1,983 and 276 crew when a submarine launched a torpedo straight to the engine, BOOM! It hit and the passengers were thrown around and shaken awake from their beds in the middle of the night, the ship listed to starboard heavily when it stopped. The ship couldn't move but it couldn't sink so it was towed back to Ayr shortly after (this is part 1) (Part 2) in 1925, cruises were becoming more and more popular so the company that owned SS putri laut has to redesign the ship, now with an indoor nature area and a 2 deck ballroom with lounges and a promenade. The ship now changed its routes with it going through the whole island of Great Britain, down to western france and down to northern Spain. It was a huge success, but that would all change one night...when the Queen Mary was made (I'm this timeliness the queen Mary was up against the SS Putri Laut. When the SS Putri Laut was doing its weekly route at around Brittany. When in late April 1938 an unknown ship was rapidly approaching the vessel. "HARD TO PORT" screamed one of the officers as the queen marry came out of nowhere and was heading straight towards the SS Putri Laut. (Part 3) with exactly 2,000 passengers and 391 crew and attendants on-board, the SS Putri Laut trys to communicate with the Queen Mary but with no avail as the Queen Mary smashes her bow into the ship making the ship do a 85 degree list to port *the opposite side of what the Queen Mary smashed into* the passengers fell down decks and stairwells as the lights flicker. The SS Putri finally gets ballance back with surprisingly only 3 out of her 20 watertight compartments opened. The SS Purti Laut would look almost fine if you looked at it without any context. But then disaster struck when a humongous BANG! was sent rippling through the ship as the Queen Mary sailed by with its passengers on the Queen Mary clueless as what had just happened. as a bright light appears in the lounge,smells of burnt furniture went through the decks with no ventilation as the ship goes into complete darkness... drifting through the Atlantic ocean.....
(Part 4) when the lights turned off, the ship was doused into chaos with passengers tripping over and for once In a ships perspective... light = danger for all those on board the rapidly-burning vessel,if you were below deck you would be burning and screaming in pain as others budge pass you to get out. And it was worse for the people on deck as the list was increasing from the fire (and that they had to place all the coal on one side from a coal fire) so people were falling down into the freezing ocean and dying in impacts. People who weren't panicking realised the lifeboats were either crushed or thrown off from the Queen Mary's bow. And also with the impact the device they used to send SOS messages were also broken from the impact. Meaning that all they could do was hang on got dear life and pray that they wouldn't die like the un-lucky ones...
(Part 5) the bow was now completely under water with the fire spreading to the top deck, every passenger on the top deck began to scramble down to the stern to wait there when another large BANG! was heard and most people on the top deck tripped off into the ocean, never to be seen again, the bang was coming from the bridge, 2 people were try to connect wire to the communicator when the put the wrong wires together, causing another fire, now most people has died and the few still alive scrambled to the stern and clung on for dear-life well only some of them as remember, it was pitch black and was listing heavily, people still alive assumed the final plunge was abo to begin when the first funnel collapsed because the water, there was surprisingly still people inside,seeking refugee in the great ballroom. With its watertight door locked and about 75 people inside the room, there was windows that were cracking away people clung on to remaining furniture inside the fire and water free room with the dome ontop of the ballroom showing nothing but water, with all of them knowing the room would implode eventually...
(Part 6) in the ballroom, people were staring to notice the ship listing and get steeper and steeper. One person noticed a crack in the sky dome that was underwater (remember the ballroom was surrounded by water from all sides but wasn't flooded yet because of the watertight doors it had on its entrances) "THE SKY DOME!" Shouted a crew member, a couple noticed tiny droplets of water spewing out the cracks in the sky dome and the windows "I guess its our time" The wife said to her husband *SHATTER* *SPLASH* the whole entire ballroom was flooded in a matter of seconds on all sides as they remaining people on the stern hung on for dear life as the ship entered a 90 degree angle, a grandson and his grandma climbed onto the Hull of the stern, just half and hour ago they were playing chess inside the lounge. "LOOK GRAMMY NORMA! LOOK!" The grandson spotted an unknown ship heading their way, it looked familiar. It was bringing back bad memories....
(Part 7) the mysterious ship was coming closer...and closer....and closer, looming in the hard fog of the pitch black night until the bow appeared out of the black void...it was the Queen Mary,the grandson and grandmother had noticed the ship with the others and began shouting for help and making as much noise as possible for the rescue. "HELP!" "GRAMMY! THEY'VE SAVED US!" The Queen Mary spotted the rapidly sinking vessel and dropped 1 of her lifeboats down with her crew to save the remaining passengers on the nearly-under ship of what was the SS Putri Laut....
(part 8) as the final plunge Began, the lifeboat finally reached the SS Putri Laut, the people on the stern and the lifeboat waited until the waves were calm and the ship had gone under. *CREAK* *CRACKLE* as the SS Putri Laut finally gone down in 32 minutes and 7 seconds. "GET ON THE LIFEBOAT! QUICKLY!" Screamed the crew as the all the survivors got on the lifeboat, shaken and terrified that their family and friends had died on what once was the *old fashionable* "MUMMY!" Screamed Max (the grandson) and ran to his mum like it had a life or death situation...which was true. As the lifeboat was getting up and over the decks of the Queen Marry. The passengers on the Queen Mary surrounded the upper decks. Confused of what had just happened that they had to change course. "What's going on?" "Why did we change course Mister?" Gossiped the crowd of people. They realised what had happened when crying and soaked people wearing clothes that looked burnt collapsed onto the ships upper deck from exhaustion and shock. With every survivor safe on-board and treated. The Queen Mary continued the journey the SS Putri Laut was on and refunded the passengers that were originally on the Queen Mary before the accident had happened. It was finally over with 2,758 people dead from the disaster. Making her the worst in the history of the Atlantic ocean.....
Tahdah! Now its done, hope u liked it and how i fantasise about a a super liner sinking with more people dying thsn there is people in the VATICAN CITY!
shift+p to free cam btw
Yeah i realised that right after i made the vid
I Also Survived This Disaster There Was a Rock Right Ahead So I Said: HARD A STARBOARD! I Tried To Turn The Ship But She Turns Slow It Hit The Ships Bow She Was Sinking In The Bow And The Funnel Fall And I Forgot It was A long Time Ago.
Cool man
It would be alot easier to read this is you used punctuation
I don’t believe a word
@@HudBoiLmao77 do you even know what a fictional story is?
@@1stofficer_sonicexe I DIDNT KNIW IT WAS FAKE SRY
Ss greyrock is a mv doña paz
cant hear the music very well but good work on these vids
Honestly i really need to make a improved version but i just need better editing software
I love roblox
So do I
Want to hear a joke what sank the Greyrock a Grey rock
Sure ig
It is roblox
Yes.
I speel roblox
Creo que este barco 🚢 ni existe porque cuando voy al Google y busco ( El hundimiento del SS Greyrock ) no me sale nada no hay nada de información y todo está en inglés 😡
bueno, primero soy inglés, por eso está en inglés y, en segundo lugar, es un juego de roblox, así que no es un barco ficticio, pero supongo que diré que el barco es ficticio.
@@Cynth72 si por eso el barco no existe
Yeah no shit Sherlock