What a pathetic story 🙄 in this storyline there's no name of the word 'self respect' only 'desperation' yn and her parents are so desperate and pathetic and him he's really cruel and shameless person that's all in this immature story 😏 i'm sorry for my words but i don't like the ending!!
Author atleast have a little shame while writing such disgusting ffs . How shamelessly have you written the ff that how the victim falls for the abuser like seriously just for the sake of writing you write anything atleast write something which can make sense can't even do that ??? Like seriously so disgusting that y/n who was abused so badly fell in love with the one who abused her .
It seems like a child wrote it, the conversation and plot were childish. Author Have concept for the story but don't know how to explain the story the conversation are so childish
Hey man, before you pass judgment, take a moment to consider that English isn’t the author’s first language. Writing in detail can be especially challenging under those circumstances. It’s important to recognize the effort involved in communicating across a language barrier. Rather than focusing on flaws, maybe offer feedback that helps her build confidence and improve over time. A little empathy can go a long way in helping her refine her skills and reach her ultimate potential. Also, commenting like that feels a bit childish. I understand it's your opinion, but the way it was brought up could have been more constructive. There's a better way to share feedback without sounding dismissive. 😁
I don't know why people are reacting like this.. it's Just a fictional story.. anything can happen in stories.. illogical things are also happens.. however this story is good❤keep going on ❤️
first unnie pin me💜
Done!
Hlo
He is really cruel...no matter what happens or who he is, he has no right to hit a girl like that without knowing properly about her...
What a pathetic story 🙄 in this storyline there's no name of the word 'self respect' only 'desperation' yn and her parents are so desperate and pathetic and him he's really cruel and shameless person that's all in this immature story 😏 i'm sorry for my words but i don't like the ending!!
Yn and her parents are the incarnation of word ' desperate '.
The "my phone"killed me😂😂😂😂😂
Mafia degree😂😂😂😂😂
IKR??? I'm literally rollin on the floor rn 😂😂
1:24 YoU R cWeet🎀 cOmSi guRRl 💅💅
Author atleast have a little shame while writing such disgusting ffs . How shamelessly have you written the ff that how the victim falls for the abuser like seriously just for the sake of writing you write anything atleast write something which can make sense can't even do that ??? Like seriously so disgusting that y/n who was abused so badly fell in love with the one who abused her .
You know I am really 22 rn😅😅😅
Bonus bonus😅
It seems like a child wrote it, the conversation and plot were childish. Author Have concept for the story but don't know how to explain the story the conversation are so childish
Hey man, before you pass judgment, take a moment to consider that English isn’t the author’s first language. Writing in detail can be especially challenging under those circumstances. It’s important to recognize the effort involved in communicating across a language barrier. Rather than focusing on flaws, maybe offer feedback that helps her build confidence and improve over time. A little empathy can go a long way in helping her refine her skills and reach her ultimate potential.
Also, commenting like that feels a bit childish. I understand it's your opinion, but the way it was brought up could have been more constructive. There's a better way to share feedback without sounding dismissive. 😁
Caught you after 1 hour 😌
You really should improve your writings
CAUGHT IN 7HRS
Caught in 7 hours gurll
It doesn't matter if he kidnaps you he is still handsome
Caught you in 7 hours gurhhhhlllll 🫰
Caught you in 50 mins
Not again I am 20th 😢
This is really insensitive!!! 😒😒😒😒 Are u a sadist author???
Such a red flag character
Bonus i want bonus please ( cute pout 😙)
I don't know why people are reacting like this.. it's Just a fictional story.. anything can happen in stories.. illogical things are also happens.. however this story is good❤keep going on ❤️
Hiii Unnie, can I get a heart and reply from you please 😉
Of course!!
@@melodyfics Thank you soo much Unnie and also I love your ffs 💜💜
Caught you after 2 hours
2235th can i get pin please
😅❤ Unnie
I already pinned someone but in next video sure 💫
Sooo....third😅
Hii
Hi
1233rd🎉🎉😅
I am fifth
Fourth😅
3rd🎀
2nd ❤🎉