The story is very good but I would like to suggest one thing try to reduce Hindi sentences it's fine if u want to add but ppl like me who doesn't know Hindi, it's makes it difficult to understand the story line and lose interest in reading 😊
I got no words to describe... Its amazing 🤩 But can u not use hindi cause i don't get it or u can use hindi but give the meaning for it but overall i love it ❤
The story is very good but I would like to suggest one thing try to reduce Hindi sentences it's fine if u want to add but ppl like me who doesn't know Hindi, it's makes it difficult to understand the story line and lose interest in reading 😊
Plz stop using hindi in Between... Its hard to read the video is ongoing....
I got no words to describe... Its amazing 🤩
But can u not use hindi cause i don't get it or u can use hindi but give the meaning for it but overall i love it ❤
Teasing is ok...but this was too much Teasing.
This is really amazing story and hindi lines are awesome ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Story was good but somethings I didn't understand ❤❤
I can't read hindi and i don't understand hindi
need a bonas partt
Unbelievable perfect
to be honest the story was very good and when hindi speech came it was really giving feeling as if i was there myself .😍🥰
So cute I love it. ❤❤