Picture Story Writing in ISSB - Live Practice 2 - 3 Stories

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  • Опубликовано: 20 янв 2025

Комментарии • 36

  • @fantastictechnology7560
    @fantastictechnology7560 3 года назад +4

    Extreme level curiosity 😅 about these type of stories and such a meaningful video...

  • @hasnainraza3875
    @hasnainraza3875 3 года назад +1

    💞Great work SIR 😍
    KEEP IT UP SIR 👍👍

  • @asimijaz1352
    @asimijaz1352 Год назад +1

    Picture 3
    There is a group of friends who were going to their village for enjoining their vacations.while they were passing through railway track,they saw that it was a little bit damaged so they all at once agreed to repair it as the train was about to pass through this track.They all cooperated with each other and repaired the track...and left for their journey.

  • @uzairahmad8690
    @uzairahmad8690 2 года назад +1

    Sir I have one question. In issb pic story, I will write story in which tense. Means present , past, future.

  • @oyehamii3323
    @oyehamii3323 6 дней назад

    Pic story 1:Two brother sister names Tariq and Batool enjoying dinner at the hotel as tonight is the success party of Tariq. Tariq is an overambitious man who achieved his goal after determination and commiting himself for his success. He have passed CSS exam and have been selected for the SP in Police. Ups and downs were the part of his life but he never gave up and continued struggling towards his goal.

  • @cuteprincess4374
    @cuteprincess4374 2 года назад

    Assalam o alaikum sir I have a question please guide me.
    Mane matric regular school sy kiya but principle ny admission private bheja or ab matric pravite consider hoga mera mane graduation kr le h regular tu kia main army ma apply kr skte hon.kindly answer me

  • @muhammadmuddasir1296
    @muhammadmuddasir1296 3 года назад +1

    Story 2.
    Ali,amjad and Asim are good friends.they are very hard worker.They are disabled,but don't loose courage.they thinks that everything is possible in this world.they used to play football every day.when they pass fsc ,three of them were talented.they also graduated and open academy which was the source of their income and they are living happy life.

    • @WalnutBloom
      @WalnutBloom  3 года назад +1

      - Its short story, don't use such sentence , 'they were very hard working' - three of them were talented - prove it in story... Its not clear k academy if they opened academy of issb or football. Story does not show any real challenge.

    • @dangertasks1556
      @dangertasks1556 3 года назад +1

      Bro if you look at them they are not disabled. They have just tied their legs.

  • @ZeeshanAli-km7ut
    @ZeeshanAli-km7ut 2 года назад +2

    Aslam o alikum Sir g
    I hope you are fine.
    What kind of story should we write ?
    Is we write about thing or happening which seems in the picture or any other thing

    • @WalnutBloom
      @WalnutBloom  2 года назад +1

      Picture story is related to given picture, not a description of the picture

  • @adilnawazkhan609
    @adilnawazkhan609 3 года назад +1

    Asalam o alikum dear sir
    Sir if a person is twice not recommended from issb can he apply for the short service commission after graduation in International relations please guide me?

    • @WalnutBloom
      @WalnutBloom  3 года назад

      twice failure can apply third time in short service commission subject to other condition. Check official website of army , navy and paf

  • @mehranianwar4883
    @mehranianwar4883 3 года назад +1

    Aoa..Kya political science student after graduation PMA lady cadet course k liye eligible hai??
    Kindly guide kr dy please....

    • @WalnutBloom
      @WalnutBloom  3 года назад

      Apparently no, you can check at official website www.joinpakarmy.gov.pk/Induction_Criteria/ad_LCC.php

  • @ibnezafar918
    @ibnezafar918 3 года назад +2

    Alhumdulilah sir I’ve cleared my initial test &medical...
    Thank uh sooo much for your efforts...
    Sir i want to know I’m doing my Bachelors degree and it’s my last year...
    What if they ask me why did you apply for long course... why don’t you apply direct to be a captain after your graduation.... sir iska kya jawab dy skta ma....
    Looking forward for your guidance...
    JzakAllah

  • @oyehamii3323
    @oyehamii3323 6 дней назад

    Pic story 2:
    3 friends, Hamza, Umair and Kashif who are also classmates playing football. Hamza is childhood disabled. Kashif and Umair are his close friends and showing their sympathy and love for their friends. Hamza is poor but determined for his bright career. His other classmates often make jokes on him. But he nevers got angry but answers them with his unparalleled success. He is the most intelligent and creative student in his school. His friends are also intelligent. Trio are playing football after getting school and they do it every. Football is the favorite sport of Hamza where's Kashif and Umair are interested in another games that are cricket favorite sport if Umair and Badminton is the favorite sport of Kashif. But they play football with Hamza to encourage him as their parents have grown up with good manners.

  • @wardaraees4887
    @wardaraees4887 3 года назад

    Sir if i write from negative perspective then create a lesson from it is it wrong or right?
    Like if i mention suicide or dishonesty something.
    Kindly guide me i am having issues in writing story

    • @WalnutBloom
      @WalnutBloom  3 года назад

      Your explanation and text is pretty confusing to give a clear reply. Write what you think you should be writing.

    • @wardaraees4887
      @wardaraees4887 3 года назад

      @@WalnutBloom if i am creating a story by using words like dishonesty, depression and suicide and then creating lesson fron it, is it right ir not?
      Because people in the group are commenting on post that it is s negative story you should not write with the negative perspective, it shows you are a negative person etc.
      So i am confused.
      It would be clear to you when you read those stories.

    • @WalnutBloom
      @WalnutBloom  3 года назад

      @@wardaraees4887 the theme, the characters and tones a writer selects, represents the mood, style and environments of the writer.

    • @wardaraees4887
      @wardaraees4887 3 года назад

      @@WalnutBloom sir i am not getting should i do it or not?
      like if the picture is showing fight or suicide scene then i have to write what is happening in the picture , so i am using suicide and depression negative words but then i am creating lesson from it. So is it right or is it showing my personality as negative?

    • @wardaraees4887
      @wardaraees4887 3 года назад

      @@WalnutBloom sir kindly check my few stories if possible or post 2 3 stories on different themes written by you for guidance.

  • @mumermalik3253
    @mumermalik3253 3 года назад +1

    Sir Is there a way i can join Defence forces as a civilian after doing graduation in Cyber security??
    I got coeliac disease too . thats why i just want to fulfill my dream idk how.

    • @WalnutBloom
      @WalnutBloom  3 года назад +1

      Lots of vacancies for civilian officials are floated by navy, army and PAF, you can follow advertisement

  • @uzairahmad8690
    @uzairahmad8690 2 года назад

    .Asma and Asim are siblings. Asim is an army officer and Asma is a doctor. The government gives to Asim vacations. He is saying to Asma if you want to go for a picnic, then I am ready. She says to him I am ready for a picnic. After discussion there picnic done and went to marree with brother to enjoy the weather.

  • @itshamza2001
    @itshamza2001 Год назад

    The railway track was damage and group of people came to build the damage part of the railtrack

  • @haroonkhan-yy8fi
    @haroonkhan-yy8fi 3 года назад +1

    ASLAM ALIKUMA SIR YA 1 PIC EXPALIANTION ANY REMARKS PLZZ
    the picture clarify the image of two oppositr gender arif and alia both of them ae good friend and both of them is the student of the university and studying the bs education arif and alia is the hard worker both of them want to sperad the education to the villages wher the childern can get free education fo that purpose both of them c;; up for the fund and ger desirable fund to the school after few years they are able to open 7 school in different villages and their are thousnad of studnets getting knowldege now both of them enjoying their first scusses and promise that they will get more scusses.

    • @WalnutBloom
      @WalnutBloom  3 года назад

      Seems a flat narration, no challenge or difficulty, no twist in story.

  • @ch.zaryabhumayun2589
    @ch.zaryabhumayun2589 3 года назад

    Sir Mera issb ha PAF 29-3 Dec
    Kia ap ka koi janay vala ha Jo first batch de Kar Aya ho ya abhi vala batch me ho to please mujy us ka contact number de dena