What if Luke Stayed on Dagobah? - FAN FICTION

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  • Опубликовано: 9 ноя 2024

Комментарии • 59

  • @gibbnasta
    @gibbnasta Месяц назад +19

    Damn man, this was good. Yoda knighting Luke made me teary.

  • @jaieregilmore971
    @jaieregilmore971 Месяц назад +39

    Always love the son surpassing the father trope in stories like this with Luke surpassing Anakin as a Jedi.

    • @KyleWallPuncher
      @KyleWallPuncher Месяц назад +5

      Don’t really care for the movie but the quote from Yoda in TLJ is actually pretty good.
      “Luke… we are, what they grow beyond…”

    • @ykd818
      @ykd818 Месяц назад

      Luke would have lost to Anikan

    • @DanCohen-ov7on
      @DanCohen-ov7on 5 дней назад

      In my book,he did.

  • @dianesinger9729
    @dianesinger9729 Месяц назад +10

    I liked that Luke completed his training and fought Sidious

  • @tainoman7905
    @tainoman7905 Месяц назад +12

    Luke has become weave nation certified in this story

  • @JustLikeTheSimulations
    @JustLikeTheSimulations Месяц назад +20

    Great video! The only thing I see going WRONG if Luke didn’t go to Bespin, would be the possibility of Vader taking Leia & discovering she’s his daughter early on. That could have been bad.

    • @oliverwillcox2189
      @oliverwillcox2189 Месяц назад

      I agree, if Luke did not go to Bespin, then Vader could have paid more attention to Leia and Chewbacca being transported to his shuttle, so Lando would not have been able to betray and free them from the Empire.

    • @RonnieG
      @RonnieG 26 дней назад

      Vader didn't know about his daughter until luke was on his ship.

  • @gunforce5559
    @gunforce5559 Месяц назад +19

    If Luke stayed with Yoda. Then Artoo would not have been there to fix the falcons hyperdrive.

    • @RetneysHolocron
      @RetneysHolocron  Месяц назад +5

      Yeah in my story Leia and Chewie were taken prisoner by the empire on Cloud City

    • @bildo1977
      @bildo1977 Месяц назад +3

      Good point, but Darth Vader didn’t alter the deal with Lando for the second time until after there was confirmation that Luke was in the vicinity.

  • @margaret4196
    @margaret4196 Месяц назад +27

    This was so awesome! I loved Luke in ROTJ but I think this would have been a much better story. Luke was able to control his emotions unlike poor Anakin. Luke had all of the love and devotion of his father but also the strength and patience of his mother in your version. I love your video as always! May the Force be with You!

  • @chrisa84
    @chrisa84 Месяц назад +21

    If he had, he would've been much stronger sooner, but without the compassion to save his friends he'd be the wrong kind of person to save Vader. So I think he'd have killed Vader and fallen to the dark side, since he was already on the knife edge of doing so.

  • @ancientking224
    @ancientking224 Месяц назад +7

    Honestly it makes sense that Luke would take Sidious down so easily. I forgot the book but I recall that Palpatine learned of Luke through a vision where he had trained Luke to his full potential in the darkside and Luke killed Palpatine with ease.

  • @HR2007-o3f
    @HR2007-o3f Месяц назад +5

    Keep it up! It'd be good to do Star Wars versus fights!

  • @AirbenderHawk
    @AirbenderHawk Месяц назад

    LFG!!!!
    Loved your content on IG, and you did a perfect job of capturing Luke's psychology. He almost went to Anakin's path by impatiently almost leaving, but decide to complete it in this alternate timeline.

  • @mcasmcas6208
    @mcasmcas6208 Месяц назад +7

    Bro, you have a gift. You've elicited goosebumps in this story, and tears in the 'What If Darth Vader Survived ROTJ' story from last week. If Disney wants to get this beloved, but embattered, IP back on track, they should delve deep into the excellence of Fan Fiction written by TRUE Star Wars fans on YT. Like my guy Retney's Holocron. Have an open competition, and take the top three stories to film/TV production. Then watch the fans come back in DROVES...it's not rocket science. There's far more talent here than what's under roof at Disney. They need to bite the bullet and just admit it. Keep up the great work. I absolutely LOVED this.

    • @alexkoronec4326
      @alexkoronec4326 Месяц назад +2

      @@mcasmcas6208 remember that this would be a great combination and strong story , however Kathleen Kennedy is still there and would do everything in her position to scuttle this

  • @sergiotg81
    @sergiotg81 Месяц назад +5

    Cool video i love these what if

  • @Skyl1ghtx23
    @Skyl1ghtx23 Месяц назад +7

    This was awesome. Just wanted to say that I’ve been getting into voice over work and was curious if you would ever want to add some voices to your videos like this? :) amazing story, wish this was a “tales” episode lol

  • @zombiepuppies7706
    @zombiepuppies7706 Месяц назад +3

    Damn, if only that was in the movies!

  • @bry4christ2nda25
    @bry4christ2nda25 Месяц назад +2

    Excellent video sir

  • @darmhok
    @darmhok Месяц назад +3

    Awesome story!!!!!

  • @devonmoreau
    @devonmoreau Месяц назад +3

    Wonderful! ❤

  • @cameronshaffer8301
    @cameronshaffer8301 Месяц назад

    Well written. Bravo

  • @ascensiongenesis_sigma
    @ascensiongenesis_sigma Месяц назад

    This was so well done

  • @WorgenGrrl
    @WorgenGrrl Месяц назад +4

    I think that if Luke had stayed and trained with Yoda, once he was more connected to the Force, he would have discovered Vader was his Father on his own.

  • @ralphdavis3640
    @ralphdavis3640 Месяц назад +12

    I am really enjoying your fan fiction. Please keep the stories coming. It’s a shame that fans can develop better audio dramas, stories and short films than Disney.

  • @Hei_Darkfire
    @Hei_Darkfire Месяц назад

    Not bad. The ending felt a bit rushed though. I know we can assume Luke rescued Han, Chewie and Leia, but it felt like there should be more to the story at the end. Like how Luke would take his father's death. Or how he would help dismantle the empire, or start a new Jedi Order.

  • @zachg6805
    @zachg6805 Месяц назад +3

    If he did stay a good chance we would see a dark side Leia vs luke in return of the jedi

  • @PorkChopxSammich
    @PorkChopxSammich Месяц назад +2

    Luke should have always stayed on Dagobah. But he needed to leave. His Father I think had a stake in that.

  • @georgepapatheofilou6118
    @georgepapatheofilou6118 Месяц назад +3

    What say you Grogu Yes Yes Yes 👍

  • @shadowfast541
    @shadowfast541 Месяц назад +3

    What if ahsoka was the one who betrays the clones on umbara?

  • @aztn19
    @aztn19 Месяц назад

    🤔: Why did Luke fly into such an obvious trap?
    🤓: So the movie can happen.
    🙃: That works!

  • @samcarter4163
    @samcarter4163 Месяц назад +2

    Perfect

  • @whoswoodsy
    @whoswoodsy Месяц назад +2

    What is the name of the song in the first story?

  • @lorenzlfk2524
    @lorenzlfk2524 Месяц назад

    After 3 years he wasn't a Jedi? Should be plenty. I thought he was there 3 weeks or 3 months.

  • @MrColinWarde
    @MrColinWarde Месяц назад

    Like no 700. I love this.

  • @BobbyMoore2-mp8wb
    @BobbyMoore2-mp8wb Месяц назад +2

    I’m glad that he left

  • @Elias-ye1wz
    @Elias-ye1wz Месяц назад

    I like the what if

  • @vortega472
    @vortega472 Месяц назад +1

    Okay, but what about Han, Leia, Chewie, and the state of the rebellion.
    You started this...can you finish it good sir?

    • @RetneysHolocron
      @RetneysHolocron  Месяц назад +2

      All of that is covered in the story! 👍

    • @vortega472
      @vortega472 Месяц назад +1

      @@RetneysHolocron Sorry I mean - after Palpatine and Vader - him going out to save his friends and what happens from there - we know the Empire has the second Death Star - I would like a detailed telling of those adventure.
      BTW you're a good writer and storyteller so throw us a bone.

  • @mrcjc9298
    @mrcjc9298 Месяц назад

    Leia and Chewie would have escaped anyway. Remember it was all Lando’s plan.

  • @imnotyourfather9375
    @imnotyourfather9375 Месяц назад

    What's this background music?

  • @sydneysmith1521
    @sydneysmith1521 Месяц назад +3

    Your interpretation of the events would have caused Lucas to second guess himself had you been around in 1978.

  • @timm1328
    @timm1328 Месяц назад +3

    If Luke had remained on Dagobah, wouldn’t Yoda have died shortly anyway? Would the force ghosts have carried on the training?

    • @RetneysHolocron
      @RetneysHolocron  Месяц назад +2

      Probably! But I just kept Yoda alive in this scenario lol

    • @czyprodigy
      @czyprodigy Месяц назад +1

      I think that Yoda only surrendered his spirit to the force because, as he told Luke, "No more training do you require". I imagine he would've held on until Luke was knighted

  • @Iceflkn
    @Iceflkn 20 дней назад

    Jedi Force ghosts make no sense. As if the Light Side would tolerate a user demanding to keep themselves instead of rejoining the Force. It's the Sith trying to dictate and control things.

  • @LamarJennings-eo8ps
    @LamarJennings-eo8ps Месяц назад

    Dude I have no idea where you're getting this story from story is done remember George Lucas

  • @marcusisgod2592
    @marcusisgod2592 Месяц назад +1

    No offence but i dont think luke will reach his full potential that quickly. Although like the progression:
    Luke farmboy to jedi master
    Vader broken slave to redeemed man and i think anakin if the ahsoka series is anything is a force god

    • @clarkkent8286
      @clarkkent8286 Месяц назад +1

      3 years is a long time to make great progress

    • @rizzardbro
      @rizzardbro Месяц назад +3

      @@clarkkent8286 true. Luke Skywalker is pretty op in both Canon and Legends with little training. In canon, Luke faces against beings in the Cosmic Force, lifts hundreds of kill droids like nothing, and (possibly) brings down Star Destroyers through the Force in the Battle of Jakku.
      In Legends, Luke Skywalker was able to reach insurmountable levels of power five years after. He was able to crush AT-AT walkers, deflect blasters from it, defeated a Reborn Palpatine (with the help of Force harmony from Leia), and began a New Jedi Order soon after.
      Though I do agree Luke wouldn’t reach his full potential so soon, he would be very close given proper guidance and lessons, which he didn’t have in the three to five years during the events of the OG trilogy and after it.