I love how this implies that Steven's human half is corrupted and the gem half isn't. Human Steven is surrounded by butterflies and Pink Steven is just very worried without anything on him. EDIT: This also implies his mental state as a human is what corrupted him, his gem half is fine. Also, thank you for hearting Kiwi!
I love it when people go in-depth about the symbolism and stuff in my animatics/animations, it makes me feel like you paid attention lol. Thank you! ^^
@@whatintarnation426 Four months late, but it’s from In The Heights. Lin, the person who wrote Hamilton & played Hamilton, was in In The Heights. Maybe that’s why you thought it was from Hamilton.
0:20 Onion is just having the time of his life. 0:25 Ronaldo! There's a giant monster destroying your city, and you decide to stand in place to take pictures?!
*Maybe if I stand really still, they won’t realize that I drew the text messages from Connie on the wrong side of the phone* Explanation for what’s going on in the storyboard: This is based around the rewritten climax of Steven Universe Future. I am rewriting the end of it into a more satisfying conclusion than what we got, because I care too much about this cartoon series to let it go :) I tried to put in everything that’s going to happen in the climax - I’m going to be writing the characters conflicts about what happened to Steven, bring Bluebird, Holly, and ‘Mean Lapis’ back as a rebellion (since they kinda just forgot about them in cannon??), have Stevonnie be corrupted rather than just Steven in a turn of events similar to my ‘Meant to be Yours’ animatic, and make it draw on for almost a week as they try and fail so many times to get both Steven and Connie back :) This is sort of a continuation on my ‘Meant to be Yours’ animatic, but I changed it up a bit for the Rewritten part and recycled my ideas from Meant to be Yours. Still, the ending result with Connie dying and Steven Fusing with her corpse in an attempt to save her, only to become corrupted Stevonnie, still ends up playing out :) I am almost finished with SU Future Rewritten, and will post the first few episodes soon, just after I finish so I have everything done before getting pressured to squeeze in all the work in between school and other things. (Also, I changed a few lyrics to make them fit better. You might have to watch it twice, one for the lyrics, one for the visuals, sorry lol) Thank you all for watching, it took FOREVER to make this!
Hey at 1:11 did anyone else notice the pair of eyes that glowed change from bottom to top and continue to glow afterwards? Think that shows who's in charge? Like the bottom ones are Connie confused, scared, and trying to avoid everyone while the top ones are Steven who becomes enraged by the steven rebellion fir hurtling them and causing him trouble.
Wow! This was nothing short of spectacular, and it was just an overview animatic! I'd subscribed the moment I'd heard you'd be rewriting SU:F's ending and boy are you delivering! Also, In The Heights is great and everyone should watch it.
OMG THIS IS SO GOOD BUT I LAUGHED SO BADD XDXD, THIS SONG ALWAYS MAKES ME DO THAT! BUT THEN YOUR DRAWINGS, THE STORY OMG MY FEELINGSS I ENDED UP CRYING THIS SO GOOD :''''CCCC
I'm watching this after listening to the Rewrite and This is SO amazing. And as a huge fan of In The Heights, it just adds another awesome bonus to this whole thing. This song fits SO perfectly to the climax- I was especially amazed by the fireworks! And how perfectly that part of the story fit into the song. Also, making Abuela and Usnavi's conversation in the song into the Bispearl moment and Amethyst moment is juST SO HEART-WRENCHING. oh my goodness. I WAS hoping for the climax of the song after Benny and Nina's/ Gem Steven and Steven's conversation, but I do like how this animatic ended nonetheless. This whole thing is amazing. Great job on this, Kiwi.
Omg this is awesome! I love how you bring everything that the Crewniverse couldn’t put into the finale into one AMAZING story line! I love this idea so much!!
(Other than the corruption) This doesn’t actually happen in Future. I’m re-writing the ending, since the cannon ending was a little unfulfilling because they were running low on time, and will release it soon. But thank you anyway :)
As the singular person who thought future’s ending was satisfying, dude this is amazing wtf. Give me your skill right THIS SECOND OR I AM GOING TO CRY :gun:
You know, when you later have to get to the part in the rewritten part for his corruption, you don’t have to do it anymore! P.S. love your work and the rewritten SU future stuff you do! I watch it all night, even on school nights!
Yeah, for everyone said how unrealistic it is in the official ending it also basically uses the “True Loves Kiss” cliche when that all it takes for the monster to turn back to normal.
Omg, omg, omg, OMG ♡ It's awesome! ✨ I-I just don't know what to say, I'm spechless. Woah, you did great work! And I just need to hear SU:F Rewritten ❤ I'm going to do it this weekend. I just love it!
And Lars is here too 🥺💙 he's my favorite character after Steven and I was really sad that he didn't saw his corrupted friend and couldn't help him. I wanted to see his reaction, u know? So now I'm like super excited when I see him in animations or fanfictions.
No se que acabo de ver (bueno si sé jaj), pero estuvo geniaaaaal!!! Si este hubiera sido el final, quedaría impactada :0 También amo In the Heights, así que todo el pánico de la canción le quedó perfectamente 👌 (pidoperdón, que pereza escribirlo en inglés jaja)
Was that Steven's gem surrounded by Connie's glow stick at the beginning? It was corrupting, then the glow stick seemed like it was protecting it, but then the whole thing got corrupted anyways. Ginius way to show Stevennie(?) corrupting and how Steven insisted Connie could help him but she couldn't cause yeah
Okay, this is the one thing I'm genuinely going to get upset about if it really happens in Rewritten. Like,,, I've been okay with what was done so far because I thought it would have been better like this but poor Connie does *not* deserve to be killed. Otherwise, amazing animatic, still loving the heck out of those facial expressions.
And what happens next? :v I feel like more Steven dies? Connie dies? They both die? Or steven's still corrupt for getting connie out of this. ShahhahahhahahahahhhhhhYou left me wanting to know what happened next.
![Steven Universe Future - War [ANIMATION]](/img/1.gif)
I love how this implies that Steven's human half is corrupted and the gem half isn't. Human Steven is surrounded by butterflies and Pink Steven is just very worried without anything on him.
EDIT: This also implies his mental state as a human is what corrupted him, his gem half is fine. Also, thank you for hearting Kiwi!
I love it when people go in-depth about the symbolism and stuff in my animatics/animations, it makes me feel like you paid attention lol. Thank you! ^^
Nice!
This is how it should’ve ended
Sure but there should be another season
okay but like did anyone else laugh when saphire said "YO I CANT SEE"
YEAH
@christianadams295she meant she can’t see the future
ACK MY FAVORITE SONG AND FAVORITE SHOWWWWW
wait were is the song from?
@@valentinaschultz2173 I’ve never heard this song before, but it sounds like a Hamilton song.
@@whatintarnation426
Four months late, but it’s from In The Heights.
Lin, the person who wrote Hamilton & played Hamilton, was in In The Heights.
Maybe that’s why you thought it was from Hamilton.
0:20 Onion is just having the time of his life.
0:25 Ronaldo! There's a giant monster destroying your city, and you decide to stand in place to take pictures?!
What else would Ronaldo do? He must keep beach city weird!
"Gozilla attacks beach city and I'll be the one to save it" *starts making fake gun effects*
Onion be like:oh awesome a giant monster
0:42 is me during the first half of Future.
Same lol
LMAOOOO
I FELT THAT LMAO
Everyone: *AHHHHH*
That one sensible person: What the hell are you all doing?
Edit: OMG, so many likes.
*Maybe if I stand really still, they won’t realize that I drew the text messages from Connie on the wrong side of the phone*
Explanation for what’s going on in the storyboard:
This is based around the rewritten climax of Steven Universe Future. I am rewriting the end of it into a more satisfying conclusion than what we got, because I care too much about this cartoon series to let it go :)
I tried to put in everything that’s going to happen in the climax - I’m going to be writing the characters conflicts about what happened to Steven, bring Bluebird, Holly, and ‘Mean Lapis’ back as a rebellion (since they kinda just forgot about them in cannon??), have Stevonnie be corrupted rather than just Steven in a turn of events similar to my ‘Meant to be Yours’ animatic, and make it draw on for almost a week as they try and fail so many times to get both Steven and Connie back :)
This is sort of a continuation on my ‘Meant to be Yours’ animatic, but I changed it up a bit for the Rewritten part and recycled my ideas from Meant to be Yours. Still, the ending result with Connie dying and Steven Fusing with her corpse in an attempt to save her, only to become corrupted Stevonnie, still ends up playing out :)
I am almost finished with SU Future Rewritten, and will post the first few episodes soon, just after I finish so I have everything done before getting pressured to squeeze in all the work in between school and other things.
(Also, I changed a few lyrics to make them fit better. You might have to watch it twice, one for the lyrics, one for the visuals, sorry lol)
Thank you all for watching, it took FOREVER to make this!
Why not in the desc?
BURATINO TANK
Not many people look in the description, I just wanted to make it more convenient to see :)
CONNIE DIED?????
Edit: Don't answer that, I was in shock so I forgot this was like a part 2 from the MTBY animatic xd
__ wait but your profile is Connie, OH NO
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I never Thought I could clearly seE Sapphire saying:
*Y O*
Hey at 1:11 did anyone else notice the pair of eyes that glowed change from bottom to top and continue to glow afterwards? Think that shows who's in charge? Like the bottom ones are Connie confused, scared, and trying to avoid everyone while the top ones are Steven who becomes enraged by the steven rebellion fir hurtling them and causing him trouble.
That Is A Great Observation, I Didn't Notice That But It Really Makes Sense.
3:23 CREEPILY DISTURBING
Wow! This was nothing short of spectacular, and it was just an overview animatic! I'd subscribed the moment I'd heard you'd be rewriting SU:F's ending and boy are you delivering! Also, In The Heights is great and everyone should watch it.
OMG THIS IS SO GOOD BUT I LAUGHED SO BADD XDXD, THIS SONG ALWAYS MAKES ME DO THAT! BUT THEN YOUR DRAWINGS, THE STORY OMG MY FEELINGSS I ENDED UP CRYING THIS SO GOOD :''''CCCC
I freaked out so much when Steven turned into that thing.
But everyone gave him a hug in the end and he went back to normal. *Cries*
Steven and pink Steven: confused mental breakdown arguing
Connie: ayo wtf am I doin here
This is amazing! The song, everything fit so well!
Everyone: panicked
Onion: :)
*Onion: "Silly creature thinks he can harm me. We'll see..."*
@@aliasofgray2854 nothing is more powerful than onion he is basically god
I'm watching this after listening to the Rewrite and This is SO amazing. And as a huge fan of In The Heights, it just adds another awesome bonus to this whole thing. This song fits SO perfectly to the climax- I was especially amazed by the fireworks! And how perfectly that part of the story fit into the song.
Also, making Abuela and Usnavi's conversation in the song into the Bispearl moment and Amethyst moment is juST SO HEART-WRENCHING. oh my goodness. I WAS hoping for the climax of the song after Benny and Nina's/ Gem Steven and Steven's conversation, but I do like how this animatic ended nonetheless.
This whole thing is amazing.
Great job on this, Kiwi.
This really should’ve been the ending to suf
Omg this is awesome! I love how you bring everything that the Crewniverse couldn’t put into the finale into one AMAZING story line! I love this idea so much!!
Seeing this after chapter 21 has it make a lot more sense but I know I will love chapter 22 coming out today!
Man I need to watch Steven Universe Future
(Other than the corruption) This doesn’t actually happen in Future. I’m re-writing the ending, since the cannon ending was a little unfulfilling because they were running low on time, and will release it soon. But thank you anyway :)
WHERES THE HELLA DIAMONDS- I would say that
This is just, AAAH! SO GOOD! I can't put it into words but i love this!
this was so fun to watching, amazing artwork! i cant let go either
As the singular person who thought future’s ending was satisfying, dude this is amazing wtf. Give me your skill right THIS SECOND OR I AM GOING TO CRY :gun:
You know, when you later have to get to the part in the rewritten part for his corruption, you don’t have to do it anymore!
P.S. love your work and the rewritten SU future stuff you do! I watch it all night, even on school nights!
I don’t think you know how many times I’ve watched this 🥹
*[Amazing]*
CORRUPTED STEVONNIE? WHOA THATS ACTUALLY COOL
OML,AFTER I SAW CHAPTER 21,I NOW KNOW WHY CONNIE’S NOT HERE!!(SPOILERS FOR NEW PEOPLE)
I dont know what is going on or watched the series long ago but Its amazing with the work you did.
Yeah, for everyone said how unrealistic it is in the official ending it also basically uses the “True Loves Kiss” cliche when that all it takes for the monster to turn back to normal.
I like how onion is just chillin in that one frame
Ok i just saw onion SMILING?!
This was FIRE!!! Iwish we would have gotten something like this instead
How this only got 1k likes? Come on, guys we can do better GIVE KIWI THE APPRECIATION THEY DESERVE AAAAAAAA
Corrupted Steven be like 👀👃👀
👄
I love this story 🎉🎉🎉 it’s amazing 🤩
This is so much more satisfying than just a bunch of giant drama queens ugly crying.
I love this and i love all the angst in it. *i live for angst now.*
worm’s eye go *squish*
Yo!!!! I love that song so much!!! Great job on this animatic!!
0:22 why the heck are u smiling in such a hard time onion I know I like weird stuff but it's not probably best time to smile
This fits so well, holy crap-
How in the world did you find a song that fits this perfectly???!!?!??!!
ONIONS JUST VIBING LIKE- this is fine
Omg, omg, omg, OMG ♡ It's awesome! ✨
I-I just don't know what to say, I'm spechless. Woah, you did great work! And I just need to hear SU:F Rewritten ❤ I'm going to do it this weekend.
I just love it!
And the fact that you did this animation to this song just makes it more incredible 💛
And Lars is here too 🥺💙 he's my favorite character after Steven and I was really sad that he didn't saw his corrupted friend and couldn't help him. I wanted to see his reaction, u know?
So now I'm like super excited when I see him in animations or fanfictions.
This is amazing
Love Corrupted Steven's Design!
Aaaaaaaaaa your so good! *Never watched SU and yet u do a very good job at explaining
This is so underrated
No se que acabo de ver (bueno si sé jaj), pero estuvo geniaaaaal!!! Si este hubiera sido el final, quedaría impactada :0
También amo In the Heights, así que todo el pánico de la canción le quedó perfectamente 👌
(pidoperdón, que pereza escribirlo en inglés jaja)
NOW THIS IS SO AMAZING I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
Quick question of curiosity. If everyone left corrupted Steven alone what would have happened. Like if they didn’t aggravate him first.
Onion looked happy 😢
Omg look sapphires like WERE SOOOOOOOOOO DEAD!!! WE ARE POWERLESS! 2:18
This is awesome!
Was that Steven's gem surrounded by Connie's glow stick at the beginning? It was corrupting, then the glow stick seemed like it was protecting it, but then the whole thing got corrupted anyways. Ginius way to show Stevennie(?) corrupting and how Steven insisted Connie could help him but she couldn't cause yeah
Actually it was interrupting it not protecting it but yeah
Okay, this is the one thing I'm genuinely going to get upset about if it really happens in Rewritten. Like,,, I've been okay with what was done so far because I thought it would have been better like this but poor Connie does *not* deserve to be killed.
Otherwise, amazing animatic, still loving the heck out of those facial expressions.
I KNOW.
This is so awesome!
Can you make a part three
Coming here after suf rewritten chapter 21 is even more heartbreaking
Is this in the same AU as the “meant to be yours” animatic? Cuz if so that is really cool and really fucking dark….
Yep, this is like part 2
DANG THIS IS SAD (alexa play despacito)
This is really cool!!^^
Damn this is good
Onion: why y'all running?
WOAHH THIS IS SO COOLLLL
sPaniSh? 👀✨✨✨
oH yEs pLeaSe 🤠🌸
This is amazing holy-
What does it mean what does it all mean!
I.... He seems so scared....
This sounds different than I remember from the movie.
This is great.
perfecta continúacion
This is absolutely amazing I love this AU, do you think you could finish this omg 🥺💖💖💖💖
Hhhhh that was so goood!!! Ahhhhhhhhh! I love it!!!
0:20 WHatcha lookin at onion?
BISPEARL MOMENT YES
Is this song from that movie in the Heights?
"yo i cant see" lmao
im a little late but how did connie fuse with steven/how did connie die?
Please part 2
How did you edit the audio so seamlessly like that?!?
there will be continuation? I just wanted to know, because bro is tense 😶
And what happens next? :v I feel like more Steven dies? Connie dies? They both die? Or steven's still corrupt for getting connie out of this. ShahhahahhahahahahhhhhhYou left me wanting to know what happened next.
Ok, im really curious, what program do you use?
Some just screamed in the heights I check the description it’s in the heights (I didn’t watch In the Heights)
I hear Lin Manuel Miranda-
cool
SPINEL SPINEL SPINEL WHERE IS SHE BEAN
Kiwi pls make spinel a animation
Not the shadow 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Yes
I agree with you
This would be better if you played the FNAF song A CHILD LIKE YOU
ts!underswap XD
Wow
wow
Just image this will pictures
Song?
Forgot it was literally in the title
Onion tho 😂