I really like this one except for 1 thing, the unnecessary aging them.People not get that.This story is supposed to be about child soldiers not teenage soldiers, child soldiers. I know a lot of people want to shield children to me. That just makes them easily manipulated. That's the problem we're having with teenagers and older people that have been under a lot of manipulation. They think things that don't exist. They make up stories that in a swallow. Stories that are just quite false but the whole point even the original author of Naruto said he wanted to draw attention to child soldiers cause they exist today. Any rider stores specifically for child soldiers? The stuff that works in the books for 12 years old does not work for 14 it up. You just don't and and unless it enhances the story. Aging them up. It just makes it feel like people who wrote the fan fiction. Don't have a clue to why the fan fiction existed in the first place. And even in this one aging them up did not enhance the story. It really didn't so so I'm wondering why the author felt. He needed to page them app by dragging out Naruto's time away from his family having him leave or get thrown in the river because if you go by the 8 years, he's been away for him to be twelve-year-old graduate from the Academy he would have had to been 4 years old. I don't think he got thrown in the river when he was 4 years old. But yeah, other than that, it's a good story but to me. When you rip out one of the main pillars of the cannon to write a fan fiction, you kind of missed the point of the original Canon. I don't mind changing Canon. But that was one of the anchors of the Naruto stories that they graduate. What's essentially a military school at age 12. They're not even teenage yet that is a specific point in the story and most people don't realize Naruto started the Academy early, he is actually. The youngest of the cast everybody's lucky failed 3 times it's because he started 3 years early because I because I didn't know what to do with the little orphan boy that was pranking the ambu ninjas.
Lmao instead of saying neglecting just say they hate him and never wanted him cause let’s be honest they never cared about him if they did they would’ve made sure he was looked after and safe💀🤣🤣🤣 they can act asf they care about him but they don’t😂😂 you can’t say other wise
Part 2 🖤🖤🖤🖤 please
Next parts asap please
I really like this one except for 1 thing, the unnecessary aging them.People not get that.This story is supposed to be about child soldiers not teenage soldiers, child soldiers. I know a lot of people want to shield children to me. That just makes them easily manipulated. That's the problem we're having with teenagers and older people that have been under a lot of manipulation. They think things that don't exist. They make up stories that in a swallow. Stories that are just quite false but the whole point even the original author of Naruto said he wanted to draw attention to child soldiers cause they exist today. Any rider stores specifically for child soldiers? The stuff that works in the books for 12 years old does not work for 14 it up. You just don't and and unless it enhances the story. Aging them up. It just makes it feel like people who wrote the fan fiction. Don't have a clue to why the fan fiction existed in the first place. And even in this one aging them up did not enhance the story. It really didn't so so I'm wondering why the author felt. He needed to page them app by dragging out Naruto's time away from his family having him leave or get thrown in the river because if you go by the 8 years, he's been away for him to be twelve-year-old graduate from the Academy he would have had to been 4 years old. I don't think he got thrown in the river when he was 4 years old.
But yeah, other than that, it's a good story but to me. When you rip out one of the main pillars of the cannon to write a fan fiction, you kind of missed the point of the original Canon. I don't mind changing Canon. But that was one of the anchors of the Naruto stories that they graduate. What's essentially a military school at age 12. They're not even teenage yet that is a specific point in the story and most people don't realize Naruto started the Academy early, he is actually. The youngest of the cast everybody's lucky failed 3 times it's because he started 3 years early because I because I didn't know what to do with the little orphan boy that was pranking the ambu ninjas.
Lmao instead of saying neglecting just say they hate him and never wanted him cause let’s be honest they never cared about him if they did they would’ve made sure he was looked after and safe💀🤣🤣🤣 they can act asf they care about him but they don’t😂😂 you can’t say other wise