IELTS Writing এর Weak vs Better Sentence

[@RaianAhmed-e6c]

Assalamualikum sirr.....ai rokom writing task 2 kota sentence making Kori deinjani plz....jata amra maje diea dukaite pari some topic a

[@travelersvlogbd]

Sir idea generate nia akta full video den.

[@dqueenratri]

Assalamu alaikum....amer 28 trikh xm....amer writing structure jana ase but sentence practice kora hoi nai.......ami writing 6.5/ 7 chai.....ami 25 intake er jonno apply koresi akhon result submit korte hobe.... I need help...
Apner ki 2 week er batch ase.... please reply diben sir

[@FATEMAAKTHER-l1h]

Assalamualaikum sir ❤❤

[@sufmissionimpossible3177]

Sir amr likhta e vohi hoy.mone hoy hobe na.ki korbo pls bolben.