I've listened to a bunch of your stories. And I do enjoy them. But I have to laugh at one line I hear over and over by multiple writers. Not just you. In this story's case Amelia says "Marcus please, I've made a mistake. Lucian isn't the man I thought he was." Then I think, Is that supposed to be any better? If Lucian was the man she thought he was, would she have come back saying it was a mistake? I think about this and I'm saying, if this happened to me. I would palm slap my forehead so hard, I'd give myself a concussion, because of the stupidity of it. Not saying it's a bad line. I actually take it as the funny line in a drama. Like Bruce Willis line "Yippy Ki Yay MFer" in die hard.
So sad a story, but it's beautiful
Lucian DuBois……. Sounds like a Paris Pimp’s name!
I thought the same thing!
She honestly forgot an infidelity clause??? WOW!
What happened to good old-fashioned Revenge?
This doesn’t happy in the real world
But did he take the 50k euros?
I've listened to a bunch of your stories. And I do enjoy them. But I have to laugh at one line I hear over and over by multiple writers. Not just you. In this story's case Amelia says "Marcus please, I've made a mistake. Lucian isn't the man I thought he was." Then I think, Is that supposed to be any better? If Lucian was the man she thought he was, would she have come back saying it was a mistake? I think about this and I'm saying, if this happened to me. I would palm slap my forehead so hard, I'd give myself a concussion, because of the stupidity of it. Not saying it's a bad line. I actually take it as the funny line in a drama. Like Bruce Willis line "Yippy Ki Yay MFer" in die hard.
Thank you your listen my stories ☺️
The lines are repeated by NPC's- AKA WOMEN. Like NPC's they repeat the same pointless lines over again- cuz that's all they have.
Enough with the art dealer shit.