Repetitively describing (every minute) how the clever humans combined tech from three different species is not necessary. Say it once, twice, and then move on with the story. This could be a compact 20 minute short story and still get the same thing done. The idea is interesting, just learn to trim your ideas down.
I love how they carry enough firepower to crack a planet, but it just won’t go through those dang shields!😂
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Repetitively describing (every minute) how the clever humans combined tech from three different species is not necessary.
Say it once, twice, and then move on with the story. This could be a compact 20 minute short story and still get the same thing done.
The idea is interesting, just learn to trim your ideas down.