psychology project-major depression

ITS NOT FINISHED YET! im doing this video for my psychology class, and letting my friend see it so she can give me advice, watch if u like, please give advice, but please, no bad comments, cuz IT AINT FINISHED YET! ^_^ thank u!

[@SaKuYaLoVeR]

^_^ thanks for the advice! ill have to see wat i can do since i have to be done with it this weekend, lol

[@DeFFicationISgolD]

well i have a few suggestions......
1) you should edit out the current narating (if you're not already going to) and over dub a new one with a more stable voice.
2) better camera person (sorry) they move a bit too much.
3) and if you're gonna have the little montage thingies, turn down the music a bit so it won't be like quiet when people talk and then like blaring when the music comes on lol
and the last one
4) I WANNA SEE BLOOPERS!!!!!!! LMFAO =P