As usual, you nailed this one. I've never used the "double-dash" bus technique, but I'll be looking at my script for possibilities during my rewrite. Thanks!
Hi Bob, great! Yes, it can really make a difference in pacing, but like Scott said, it has to be in the right moment, particularly geared toward action. Happy writing!
I spend hours playing with action/description format. Specifically in regards to general scene description versus characters versus interactions with objects from the description, what order to introduce and how to space it all…. It’s driving me insane
Good tips, but it took you almost two-and-a-half minutes to get to the first example. That's 20% of the entire video devoted to introduction and setup. You can do better than that. Less YOU and more content, please.
I really like this guy... wish he would put out more stuff
As usual, you nailed this one. I've never used the "double-dash" bus technique, but I'll be looking at my script for possibilities during my rewrite. Thanks!
Hi Bob, great! Yes, it can really make a difference in pacing, but like Scott said, it has to be in the right moment, particularly geared toward action. Happy writing!
Interesting : I am working on my action lines : working on description : the thank you : I found this inspiring
I do like what you're doing - thanks!
Scott's room is filled with action figures! I guess he's a fan. As always the vid was awesome and it helped me a lot.
We love Scott's setup! Great to hear the tips resonated with you Oneth.
Thank you. You did an amazing job. I wish I found your channel sooner.
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Once again, a fantastic analysis and it's inspiring the hell out of me. thank you.
Love it. Run with that passion!
Thanks a lot
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Thanks Oscar!
So helpful. Thank you very much.
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I spend hours playing with action/description format. Specifically in regards to general scene description versus characters versus interactions with objects from the description, what order to introduce and how to space it all…. It’s driving me insane
Hey Lisa - do you read many screenplays? That's a great way to get a handle on this.
Am I the only person who is currently developing a series?
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Good tips, but it took you almost two-and-a-half minutes to get to the first example. That's 20% of the entire video devoted to introduction and setup. You can do better than that. Less YOU and more content, please.