This was refreshingly classic. It was a familiar tale we've heard from before. Those coming of age stories where a person, place, or thing is connected to the protagonist through foreshadowing and the story unweaves through the years to show us the hows and whys. These types of stories never get old if done right. And this did not disappoint.
The other day, I fell asleep while listening to one of his stories. By god, I fell from my bed when I heard the weird noise of Jordan trying to emulate the voice of a child. I was so scared, it took me two ciggerates to calm down.. 😂😂😂😂
Sigh... this is a huge thing I hate about most "urban explorers", there are beautifully preserved homes with everything intact just missing it's people, or beautiful liminal spaces just missing the life that existed in it, but humans like Bill, and the hundreds of thousands more of humans who just enjoy destroying things.
Wow! How exciting! I remember when I first discovered Jordan's channel. I was immediately hooked. I second the suggestion that you check out the Hollow's End series. Some other incredible series are: "I inherited a shifty bar from my Uncle", "I work as a professional monster hunter", "I'm a monster hitman", and "I'm an elevator repairman". There are more, but that will keep you busy for a while. Enjoy!!!
Yep! I'm 10th on his list of patreons. 😊 I discovered Jordan when he narrated "I Inherited a Haunted House." If you haven't listed to that one, YOU GOTTA! 👍
👍👍fabulously unrivaled, this story told an epic story of kids that just couldn't get pass their curiosity even after they grew up.I loved and enjoyed this great story. Thanks Jordan. 😇💖
Stephen and his mother are the thing that stuck with me the most. The author has some guilt from their past. Congratulations on milestone! I'm eager for the next 500
I'm not a fan of making assumptions about the author based on the stories they write. As an author, I can assure you that we are quite capable of creating characters and stories without any connection to our own mental health or life experiences. 💚
Did you know that H.H. Homes built a murder castle in Chicago? A post office is there now. What a great setting for a rules story. Ya know?😉 I don't have time or the skill to write such a story , I'm busy growing hamburger seeds. But sure love to read what creative mind can imagine up.
You know what I've listened to you for a while just never got around to subbing. Appreciate the content, voices, and the aura my dude hell yeah liked a subbed 👌
Bro called Hubert a disgusting old man for sacrificing a few to save the many. What's more fucked is not sacrificing people and having those things spread
Thank you so much Jordan your daily uploads give me something to look forward to and take my mind off everything horrible in the world today but hope to be able to donate money to your hard work and I dream of my name living forever in the words of hollows end there some of my favorite stories of all time I'd love to own hard copies of your amazing creations every installation to the awesome 🤘🏻world of Hollows end ight thanks again for making such amazing audio stories available on RUclips keep up with the wicked imagination and I can't wait for the next Hollows end installation update I hope you have an amazing night take easy everyone 🤘🏻🤜🏻💥🤛🏻🤙🏻
liked that tale ,the ending reminded me of a old horror film i saw years ago, called the SENTINEL ,a old priest guards the gates of hell,and a younger one takes over after his passing,yes im old as well lol.
This main character is selfish and ungrateful, he got on my nerves. Those last few deaths were kinda his fault. I’m glad he has to take up the caretaker job. Nice job narrating Jordan📻🥃
SAME!! ZERO personal responsibility for all the deaths; 1st hand + all related, are, on HIM! At least his 1/3 of 3 who begat this stupid plan. His "remorse" only comes forth when he HAS TO say it. Is he a cop from due diligence or still enamored with that dumbass childhood plan?! Yeah. Not a fan.of him but LOVED the story!! 😅
This is Steven’s villain origin story 😂poor little guy didn’t even know. He was loaded with black coffee that’s what we drink at work to stay up. Poor guy was ready to partay 😂15 years later he realized how they used him. Poor kid should’ve stayed home they should’ve made him. Poor baby thought he was gonna get treasure. And that junkie brother is no good and that’s not because I’m a mom. He’s just crap. Should’ve left those kids alone. I hope he finds his way out of that monster house and gets sweet revenge.
If I was Steven, I would have stayed home and played video games until they returned. It doesn't pay to be a follower 🤷🏽♀️I learned that by the time I was 9 🙄
I'm SO happy to see that my nomenclature stuck! 😅 I'm 10th on the list of patreons so I caught Jordan relatively new. When I asked if we were his 10 "Groupies" he replied "OMG! I've NEVER thought about that!" I can't believe he hadn't because it's kinda right there! 😂 I've not been able to be as present for awhile but I do pop in and seeing how much it's grown really warms my cockles! 😜
Already thumb's up'd, cos i know it's gonna be stupendous. But can i just say, the little questionnaire "Are you going to watch ......." Pretty, erm, stoopid😂
And I like this story it's really nice story it had the element of morality confusion Duty how many people would you know it's actually stay in the town that actually you lost your own wife and child to those creatures our life is precious and all its worth something I'm just glad I don't have to make that choice
@JordanGrupe hmm. I noticed a lot of longer than usual pauses around commas and periods that usually indicate ai. Sorry for the accusation if I'm wrong. Edit: Listening again, I thing the effect is an editing side effect, Probablly when two clips get stitched together or something. Ill delete my initial comment if you want me to.
I hate this whole dangerous bully brother trope going on in this story. Kind of makes the whole thing suck for me. An older brother that picks on you? Yeah. But one that literally physically abuses? That's a nope for me. Just weird. I don't think it was at all necessary to even introduce him as a character. Totally had a Goonies/Stand By Me vibe up until the brother.
Yikes! ! 1. Fiction. 2. Some kids get terrorized every day, some place, by someone(s) 2. a.sadly, NOT fiction. All I can say is; you should probably refrain from any and all daily international news sources. Js..🤷♀️
The author must have just learned the word "vehement" lol This story is so frustrating, because it WANTS to be friggin amazing, but keeps juuuust missing the mark
Dude I know it’s probably tiring to do, but I love the long form stories! After all you’re my favorite narrator. The longer the better. 👍
I second that!!
Agreed
Agreed!
mini book
Absolutely agree! Series as well, because it is easy to make them a playlist.
Great story. I love the longer stories. I'm a trucker and it makes the trips ALOT better.
Reefer or dry van? I’m otr dry van in Peterbilt 379 10 speed
I second that, I'm a trucker and do the same thing. Lol
This was refreshingly classic. It was a familiar tale we've heard from before. Those coming of age stories where a person, place, or thing is connected to the protagonist through foreshadowing and the story unweaves through the years to show us the hows and whys. These types of stories never get old if done right. And this did not disappoint.
The other day, I fell asleep while listening to one of his stories.
By god, I fell from my bed when I heard the weird noise of Jordan trying to emulate the voice of a child. I was so scared, it took me two ciggerates to calm down..
😂😂😂😂
Sigh... this is a huge thing I hate about most "urban explorers", there are beautifully preserved homes with everything intact just missing it's people, or beautiful liminal spaces just missing the life that existed in it, but humans like Bill, and the hundreds of thousands more of humans who just enjoy destroying things.
I love how the Deputy williams aka Randy acts just like Randy - the drinking lol great story
Is this in hallows end? Or just similar cops 😅
Three plus hour story we are not worthy.thank you Jordan for keeping me entertained for hours.
I just recently discovered this channel. A++.... I'm hooked!
Welcome, one of the best creepypasta channels. Check out his Hollows End series.
He's an incredible narrator, and the stories are great!
Welcome! Thanks for watching! 🎉
Wow! How exciting! I remember when I first discovered Jordan's channel. I was immediately hooked.
I second the suggestion that you check out the Hollow's End series. Some other incredible series are: "I inherited a shifty bar from my Uncle", "I work as a professional monster hunter", "I'm a monster hitman", and "I'm an elevator repairman".
There are more, but that will keep you busy for a while. Enjoy!!!
Yep! I'm 10th on his list of patreons. 😊 I discovered Jordan when he narrated "I Inherited a Haunted House." If you haven't listed to that one, YOU GOTTA! 👍
👍👍fabulously unrivaled, this story told an epic story of kids that just couldn't get pass their curiosity even after they grew up.I loved and enjoyed this great story. Thanks Jordan. 😇💖
Stephen and his mother are the thing that stuck with me the most. The author has some guilt from their past.
Congratulations on milestone! I'm eager for the next 500
I'm not a fan of making assumptions about the author based on the stories they write. As an author, I can assure you that we are quite capable of creating characters and stories without any connection to our own mental health or life experiences. 💚
I agree I've seen plenty of fucked up families I could write about no need to get personal we've all gone to school, we know dynamics
I love all your stories. I just wish for more that's longer
3 1/2hrs? WoW! What a great night💕
"They are always hungry......."
Being some kind of Hell spawn creature of death and mayhem must burn a lot of calories.
Not to mention carbs.
It's all the digging.
Well, if those damned invasive living things would stop making trouble....@@Bluesit32
Spectacular as always Mr. Grupe.
Rene Rehn is an INSANELY GIFTED author!!! I can spot their little gems off the bat! 😁
Love your longer length stories. Great narration as always!👌👍
Did you know that H.H. Homes built a murder castle in Chicago? A post office is there now. What a great setting for a rules story. Ya know?😉
I don't have time or the skill to write such a story , I'm busy growing hamburger seeds. But sure love to read what creative mind can imagine up.
So thankful for your hard work in narration! Thanks!!
I truly love your voices and pace! Just finished this goodie and it was 🔥!
I got genuinely scared by parts of this. Thank you, Sir. You are very talented.
Great story, I love the longer stories that can get you through the day
You know what I've listened to you for a while just never got around to subbing. Appreciate the content, voices, and the aura my dude hell yeah liked a subbed 👌
Thank you! It means a lot!
Love the longer videos!! What a great way to celebrate 500 vids!
Hey man congrats on your 500th video, one day you'll hit 1000!!!
Man, 3.5hrs of JG is great. I wish he'd pick up the " I inherited a mortuary" series's
This is one of the best stories I've ever heard. It gave me chills. Thank you!!!
I began listening to stories when I worked as a housekeeper. Love, love, love the long stories....
Cheers for the great story and Narration my guy. Blessings from Scotland. 🙏 ⚔️🏴⚔️🌹
this is such an intense story. I listened to it all at once and stayed up way past my bedtime. thanks you so much for tis mind grabbing tale.
AWESOME STORY! Thank you for the long one ❤
A fool as a kid , a fool as an adult as they say
That’s was awesome! Thank you
Bro called Hubert a disgusting old man for sacrificing a few to save the many. What's more fucked is not sacrificing people and having those things spread
Thank you so much Jordan your daily uploads give me something to look forward to and take my mind off everything horrible in the world today but hope to be able to donate money to your hard work and I dream of my name living forever in the words of hollows end there some of my favorite stories of all time I'd love to own hard copies of your amazing creations every installation to the awesome 🤘🏻world of Hollows end ight thanks again for making such amazing audio stories available on RUclips keep up with the wicked imagination and I can't wait for the next Hollows end installation update I hope you have an amazing night take easy everyone 🤘🏻🤜🏻💥🤛🏻🤙🏻
I hope and pray things get better for you. The world can definitely depress you if you let it.
I love these kinds of stories
Dang this is a long one and that makes me happy. Gonna grab some snacks and sit back and enjoy
Work was mad so didn’t get a chance to listen last night. Absolutely loved this story, your narration is amazing.
Thankyou Jordan that was a really good story! ❤
Great story great reading
Really great job More
Love the stories that are a hour or longer
So excited this will help my work day
Rene borrowed our hometown deputy! "RAAAAANDY!!!! Ahem...I mean; Deputy Williams, Sir!"
Epic, was engrossed to the end, !
Two dinners worth of a nail biting story👏👏👍👍. Life is good😁
It did solve a mystery though, now we know what Trolls do when they aren't on line.😅
liked that tale ,the ending reminded me of a old horror film i saw years ago, called the SENTINEL ,a old priest guards the gates of hell,and a younger one takes over after his passing,yes im old as well lol.
This is my favorite so far. Would make a great movie!!
So is this a part of hallows' end with the centipede cult? Or a neighboring town? Very good story.
THAT. WAS. AWESOME!!!
Easily one of my top favorites stories
This story could totally be a movie
This main character is selfish and ungrateful, he got on my nerves. Those last few deaths were kinda his fault. I’m glad he has to take up the caretaker job. Nice job narrating Jordan📻🥃
Yeah. He was an annoying kid that grew into an annoying adult.
SAME!! ZERO personal responsibility for all the deaths; 1st hand + all related, are, on HIM! At least his 1/3 of 3 who begat this stupid plan. His "remorse" only comes forth when he HAS TO say it. Is he a cop from due diligence or still enamored with that dumbass childhood plan?! Yeah. Not a fan.of him but LOVED the story!! 😅
This is Steven’s villain origin story 😂poor little guy didn’t even know. He was loaded with black coffee that’s what we drink at work to stay up. Poor guy was ready to partay 😂15 years later he realized how they used him. Poor kid should’ve stayed home they should’ve made him. Poor baby thought he was gonna get treasure. And that junkie brother is no good and that’s not because I’m a mom. He’s just crap. Should’ve left those kids alone. I hope he finds his way out of that monster house and gets sweet revenge.
I mean he did blackmail them.They told him to stay but he didn’t listen. So it’s kinda on him too.😂 But yeah the older brother sucks.
Great story!
Whew that was an amazing one.
Ooohh.... I wonder if this is the one where there's a chest in the Attic that eats people.. lol
That's cool! 😎
Damn mimics
One would have to be TARNISHED to ask such a question😂
Prrrrobablyyy
I hope not. I've heard it's both dark and scary in those.
One word - FIRE 🔥!
Also does this town seem familiar to anyone else??
If I was Steven, I would have stayed home and played video games until they returned. It doesn't pay to be a follower 🤷🏽♀️I learned that by the time I was 9 🙄
Cant wait!!
Ghost stories are best
Great story
Good work
Am cooking and listening ❤❤❤❤ my heart
Howdy Grupies!
Grupies! Perfect! (Although we could be gropers!😅)
@@margaretmarr1lol
I'm SO happy to see that my nomenclature stuck! 😅 I'm 10th on the list of patreons so I caught Jordan relatively new. When I asked if we were his 10 "Groupies" he replied "OMG! I've NEVER thought about that!" I can't believe he hadn't because it's kinda right there! 😂 I've not been able to be as present for awhile but I do pop in and seeing how much it's grown really warms my cockles! 😜
Excellent
Already thumb's up'd, cos i know it's gonna be stupendous. But can i just say, the little questionnaire "Are you going to watch ......."
Pretty, erm, stoopid😂
It's a video. It's natural to say "watch" instead of "listen". Makes sense to me 💁♂️
Didn't mean it like that. What i actually meant was......
OF COURSE IM GOING TO WATCH/LISTEN. That goes without saying.
Bill and Jerry😮
And I like this story it's really nice story it had the element of morality confusion Duty how many people would you know it's actually stay in the town that actually you lost your own wife and child to those creatures our life is precious and all its worth something I'm just glad I don't have to make that choice
More
Time to get comfy
I might have to set this one aside for a bit. I'm half afraid its going to turn into boresca
HERE we go!!!!
Ty
I seldom get hearts so I don't comment much just a
Ty😊❤
Hey everyone!
The best scary stories are from a kids perspective
Why do i keep getting recommended ai horror channels?
AI horror channels?
This isn't AI, never has been. You kidding? He doesn't mispronounce words, read the 'dot dot dot', drone on with no inflection....
I DO NOT use AI or TTS voices for my narrations, just to clarify.
@JordanGrupe hmm. I noticed a lot of longer than usual pauses around commas and periods that usually indicate ai. Sorry for the accusation if I'm wrong.
Edit: Listening again, I thing the effect is an editing side effect, Probablly when two clips get stitched together or something.
Ill delete my initial comment if you want me to.
Love the videos, but why are so many of the main characters always so dense. Didn't realize the old man knew until after he was fired.
Demon worm God
❤️
😅
I hate this whole dangerous bully brother trope going on in this story. Kind of makes the whole thing suck for me. An older brother that picks on you? Yeah. But one that literally physically abuses? That's a nope for me. Just weird. I don't think it was at all necessary to even introduce him as a character. Totally had a Goonies/Stand By Me vibe up until the brother.
Yikes!
!
1. Fiction.
2. Some kids get terrorized every day, some place, by someone(s)
2. a.sadly, NOT fiction.
All I can say is; you should probably refrain from any and all daily international news sources. Js..🤷♀️
Steven sounds like the garbage pail cousin
The author must have just learned the word "vehement" lol
This story is so frustrating, because it WANTS to be friggin amazing, but keeps juuuust missing the mark
Too long
HERE we go!!!!
Great story!!!