Alien scouts attack school, but a trained 17-year-old girl saves the day SCI-FI Story BEST HFY

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  • @kyleyamaguchi7676
    @kyleyamaguchi7676 25 дней назад +3

    Did I miss how she got above the aliens? She came up from the basement and saw them on second floor. Narrator says she jumped down causing the distraction. Sounded like he inferred she jumped from the third floor.
    How do you get sparks from the clashing of her blade and flesh? If I remember correctly, sparks are from a clashing of metal against metal.

  • @michaellinnet6095
    @michaellinnet6095 25 дней назад +4

    Dumb ending. Just because she found out the truth doesn't mean mean spectra is finished. The only way to do that is to take the information public. She can't just walk away. And what about her mother? Do you honestly think a seventeen year old girl is going to just "walk away" knowing that her own mother was instrumental in setting her up? Get real.

    • @FictionalReimagined
      @FictionalReimagined  24 дня назад +2

      ok

    • @michaellinnet6095
      @michaellinnet6095 23 дня назад

      @@FictionalReimagined Sorry if that sounded "hypercritical". But you write this great story and then, poof! Just because she finds out she was used you end it.